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If you are willing to peel off my heart layer by layer~

You'll have a sour nose ~ you'll cry ~

As long as you can hear me~see my whole heart~

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Accompanied by the heavy melody of the piano, Lin Zaishan's singing voice is like a knife, peeling off the skin of onions one by one, and peeling everyone's heart a little bit.

The more Li Xiaoni listens to it, the more she feels that Lin Zaishan's song is a song full of affection, even if she can only enjoy it under the bass quality of her mobile phone, she can feel that Lin Zaishan secretly hides herself in this song and watches over her sweetheart's sincere emotions like air.

Isn't she the most depressed and deepest secret in Lin Zaishan's heart?

Although she has now peeled off Lin Zaishan's heart, feeling the onion-like secret of Lin Zaishan, Li Xiaoni still has a sad and uncomfortable feeling.

And this feeling also reflects how outstanding Lin Zaishan's musical talent is.

How can he write a song so apt and delicate and emotional, even the action of peeling off contains a knife that is better than a knife, this is really a natural musician! -- Lee Hyo-ni thought with emotion and adoration.

In the piano room, these musicians who listened quietly, although they did not have such a sense of substitution as Li Xiaoni, but from the nearest distance, they most intuitively appreciated Lin Zaishan's affectionate singing and creation, and they were gradually stripped of the mentality of simply analyzing Lin Zaishan's creative skills by this singing, and were sucked into this story about onions.

They seem to be listening to Lin Zaishan singing, but it is more like watching an affectionate man tell a poignant and touching love story-

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Listen to you talk about you and yours of them~ ambiguous. Ambiguous air~

Me and my desperation ~ pretended to be funny ~

I'm like an onion ~ always a supporting role ~ I hope to have an exclusive plot with you ~ for a second ~

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Hearing this second paragraph of Lin Zaishan's heartfelt outpouring, Li Xiaoni's nose became sour. When Lin Zaishan wrote such lyrics, was she fantasizing about the scandalous stories she had been hyped up by the media?

She really wanted to talk to Lin Zaishan on the phone, but those were all fake. He doesn't have to despair, and he's not an onion-like supporting role. In the future, every second of her life will be his exclusive plot.

Guan Yaling was also very heartbroken when she heard this. Although Lin Zaishan sings "casually". But this natural singer, as long as he mixes a little emotion in his singing, he will be amplified many times by his extremely weight-bearing vicissitudes of voice. This is the most lethal song for a woman, especially when the heart-touching climax rises.

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If you are willing to peel off my heart layer by layer~

You'll find out~you'll be amazed~

You are my most depressed ~ deepest secret ~ ……

Listening to this chorus again, many people in the room imagined a kind of touching by onion-smoked noodles, and the layered emotions that Lin exuded in the sound of the mountain song did not cry, but with a heartbreaking pain of peeling.

Usually in pop songs, the melody of the chorus is the most important part of a song, and the most gripping line in the chorus. The jargon is called "Hook", which literally translates to "hook" in English, and the literal translation is "golden sentence".

In almost all pop songs, "Hook" is the most touching song, and it is also the one with the most beating melody line and the most impactful lyrics.

The "hook" in "The Onion" is exactly "if you are willing to peel off my heart layer by layer", whether it is from paragraphs, melodies, pitches, including text wording. are at the apex of the song.

If you want to dig deeper, the "hook in the hook" in this sentence is the peeling off of the three layers of "layer by layer". Lin Zaishan (the original creator Mayday Ashin) has a layer of pain, a layer of frustration, and a layer of misunderstanding in the design of this song. Peeling three knives in a row, the sadness in love flows wantonly.

Such a heart-to-heart quatrain, with Lin Zaishan's stripping singing voice in one go, the strong and weak handling of the true voice and false voice are excellent. The two-bar jumping melody is not breathless, and it is full of breath. This golden sentence was accomplished overnight, which made top ears like Guan Yaling listen to it and be addicted!

Listen to it again, and there is a tendency to be hooked away by Lin Zaishan's singing-

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If you are willing to peel off my heart layer by layer~

You'll have a sour nose ~ you'll cry ~

As long as you can hear me~see my whole heart~

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You'll have a sour nose ~ you'll cry ~

As long as you can hear me~see my whole heart~

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Lin Zaishan did not present the complete structure of the song, and when it came to the second wave of chorus, he ended it directly, but the end of the song was still heartwarming.

After all, this song was sung by Lin Zaishan, thinking of this uncle's experience of being despised and neglected by the world and abandoned by the public in the past few years, as long as you think a little more, you can feel that he is full of emotions in this song, not only for love, but also for music dreams.

It's a song he says to himself.

Outsiders look at him as if they are looking at a large purple-skinned onion with a rough and even rotten skin, as if it is about to spoil.

But peel off his exterior and look directly into his heart, and you will definitely be so spicy by his affection that you will cry.

When Tang Yaxuan heard the end, he felt a little like crying.

Before coming into contact with Lin Zaishan, she also thought that Lin Zaishan was a big onion that had long since rotted.

But as long as you take off the colored glasses and peel off the epidermis a little to look at him, you can see the warm and crystalline heart of this uncle.

This uncle's talent and affection are so charming!

The closer he got to Lin Zaishan, the more Tang Yaxuan had a kind of worship mentality.

After Wu Yifan and others heard this "Onion", they all sighed deeply: talented people are different! Such an inconspicuous thing can be written into such an affectionate song, which is really heartbreaking, and I have to accept it!

"Bang Bang Bang-"

When the last piano note fell, Wu Yifan took the lead in applauding Lin Zaishan, and the sullenness on his face turned into a smile of admiration.

"Lao Lin, you have a demon talent in you!"

Wu Yifan unabashedly praised Lin Zaishan Dasheng!

Everyone also secretly sighed that Lin Zaishan was powerful enough!

Li Xiaoni, who was on the other end of the phone, heard Wu Yifan's voice, and felt disgusted in her heart: This Wu boss will not praise people? What kind of demon? This is called Dacai!

Lin Zaishan turned around with a smile and said to everyone: "As long as you put in a little effort, spread these propositions and think about them." You can make good music too. ”

Tang Yaxuan subconsciously shook his head, thinking that he didn't have the ability, this kind of thing was easy to say, but it was not easy to really do it.

Zhou Dongliao praised: "Mr. Lin, your song is really good, it perfectly presents the characteristics of onions, and the melody is bold enough." If I'm not mistaken, your song has nearly 30 keys. ”

Zhou Yunying reflexively said: "It's 29." "She teaches piano and has a superb grasp of pitch and pitch.

Guan Yaling nodded. She also unconsciously counted it just now, it is 29 Keys, such a large span, Lin Zaishan sings so stable and harmonious, people have to be convinced! This uncle's creative talent and outstanding, and his singing skills are even more admirable, this is really a god-level singer-songwriter!

Shi Feng was a little stunned and said: "Mr. Lin, your song "Onion" is really emotional, but I have to say it. This also has something to do with the characteristics of the onion itself. Listening to you sing like this, I found that this onion is really good at writing songs. ”

Duan Yuenan and the others were speechless, and looked at Shi Feng with white eyes, saying that onions are good at writing songs? Have the ability to write a song like this out! This big guy is really straight. Don't think about it before you speak!

The personality is indeed very straight, and Shi Feng will say whatever he thinks: "Teacher Lin, listening to your little bit, I found that many things in this proposition can be dug deeply." But some of them really can't be excavated. Look at this celery -- this thing has no characteristics at all, how do you dig it? ”

When Shi Feng said this, the big guy thought about it carefully. I really think that this celery is many times more difficult to create than onions.

Wu Yifan picked up the proposition and looked at it again, and finally became less angry, he found that many propositions do have the feasibility of divergence, such as red beans, which have more meaning to make love songs. He was so angry just now that he only thought of this thing as a bean, and he didn't think much about it.

But now looking at celery, like everyone else, Wu Yifan doesn't know how to diverge his thinking, this thing doesn't seem to have any characteristics at all.

Everyone looked at Lin Zaishan in understanding, wanting to hear what the demon uncle in Wu Yifan's mouth had to say.

When celery was mentioned, Lin Zaishan immediately remembered the song "Celery" written by Wu Yukang, composed by Chen Zihong, and sung by Lin Zhiying.

This song is quite distinctive, with celery as the center of the whole song, revealing a little free and easy temperament in playfulness, singing the lovelorn song in a very cheerful style, which is very suitable for the kind of sunny young man to sing, but not for him to sing.

In other songs, there doesn't seem to be a celery theme.

He took this song and explained it to everyone.

"Celery - at first glance it has no character, but we can create character for it. Just like Zhenhai, you young people must have been in love and lost love, right? If you are out of love, you wake up alone in the morning, your mood is down to the bottom, you want to have some breakfast, you go to the kitchen and open the refrigerator door, and you find that there is nothing in it, just a celery, how would you feel? ”

Qiu Zhenhai frowned and smiled bitterly, thinking that he had never been in love, how do you know what kind of mood this is, it should be very low, right?

Shi Feng replied positively: "I must be very irritable!" My girlfriend is gone, the refrigerator is empty, is there anything more depressing in this world? ”

Guan Yaling was closest to Lin Zaishan, subconsciously raised her hand holding the mobile phone, and smiled with her mouth covered.

Tang Yaxuan and several other girls also laughed.

Li Xiaoni on the other end of the phone, listening to this stunned answer, couldn't help but laugh "poof". I thought to myself, who is this male voice? What a white eye!

I almost lost track of time, and listened to the conversation on the other end of the phone with relish after this day. With her IQ, she could tell from a simple listen that these people were asking Lin Zaishan about the new proposition of the competition. She is looking forward to Lin Zaishan being able to display his talents and shock all these young people.

Zhou Dongliao was interested in discussing with Lin Zaishan: "There is only one celery left in the refrigerator, it is really depressing, and the taste of celery seems to be a little astringent, Mr. Lin, are you going to write a song from this direction?" ”

"It's okay to diverge in this direction, but the songs written like this may be boring. We can try to think more and more. ”

Lin Zaishan used Qiu Zhenhai, who was more familiar with him, as an example: "Starting from the world of Zhenhai and you young people, you face the coming and going of love. Personally, I think that we should be more free and easy, and we should know how to let go. Although I fell out of love, my mood went down to a low point. But looking at the celery in the refrigerator, after a moment of daz, you should take a bite of the celery, forget everything you should forget, and throw away what you should throw away. Celery is eaten raw, it doesn't seem to be very tasty, and it tastes bitter. It's astringent, sour, and there's a sweet smell in it, but if you taste it carefully, the taste is not too bad. This is like the love that has passed, take a bite, keep the good memories in your heart, forget all the bad things, you should taste the beautiful things that love brings you. What is the saying? -- Don't ask for eternity. Just want to have it! You young people still have a long life, don't be afraid of a moment of loneliness, tears can flow, but you have vitality and courage. It should be like a sponge, absorb all the tears, and continue to live refreshed. ”

Guan Yaling exclaimed: "Teacher Lin, your thinking is really divergent. Listening to you say this, lovelorn people can feel much better all of a sudden. ”

Duan Yuenan and other girls who have been in love listened to Lin Zaishan's words. They all felt very comfortable, and they looked at the uncle's eyes, and they were more sunny and refreshing, not as heavy as when they listened to the onions just now.

Lin Zaishan said with a smile: "I think young people should have such a mentality anyway. Wouldn't it be a good song for young people to diverge in this direction and add the right melody to celery? ”

Guan Yaling added fuel to the fire: "Can you match it with a melody now?" A short impromptu snippet? Help everyone develop and develop musical thinking. ”

"Okay, then I'll try to do a little bit."

Everyone listened to Lin Zaishan so easily! Looking at Lin Zaishan's appearance, he is really going to add a melody to this song immediately! They were all shocked and excited! I thought that this uncle was too strong! Can you make a song just by saying that?

Li Xiaoni on the other end of the phone was also in good spirits! took a sip of coffee, and waited energetically for Lin Zaishan's improvisation.

Lin Zaishan sat in front of the piano half-sideways, most of his body was facing the musicians around, with a relaxed smile on his face, his left hand was on the keys, but he didn't look at the keys, and his right hand beat his fingers rhythmically, as if he was playing a drum.

"Composers for cheerful and playful melodies, in fact, you can try to use drums to bring out the rhythm as soon as you come up, and you can even do something jazzy."

As he spoke, Lin Zaishan stopped looking at the piano's left hand.

is completely different from the style of "Onion" just now, Lin Zaishan's melody this time, with a little improvised jazz style, makes a person feel particularly happy when he listens to it, as if the morning sun shines into the window.

In response to this joyful melody, Lin Zaishan opened his voice with a soft voice imitating a young man, and directly brought everyone into a very cool scene-

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Sunlight spills in from the window in the early morning~

I woke up from a dream from down to low~

There is only one celery left in the refrigerator and there is no breakfast~

I'm not used to not having you~

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Can love be half and half forever~

So I learned to let go~

When I opened the refrigerator and looked at the celery in a daze~

The mood is still a little helpless~

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All these people in the piano room were shaken! Goosebumps on my body!

It's not that Lin Zaishan did a very moving melody, but Lin Zaishan just casually talked about the divergence of celery, and now he has written this divergence into lyrics, and it is accompanied by a very appropriate melody, what level of talent is this!

After this melody and lyrics are matched, the listening experience it brings to them is exactly the same as the feeling that Lin Zaishan just told them! This is a huge impact on these musicians who have creative experience!

This uncle can express all his feelings with music, and the performance is very appropriate, Wu Yifan describes him as a demon talent, which is really not too much!

A veteran musician like Wu Yifan, who has very mature creative experience, was shocked when he heard it! He has never seen a musician like Lin Zaishan, who can turn what he talks about into musical works with just one talk!

And listen to his ideas and what he has made, they are all very innovative!

This is simply an exit and a finished product model!

This former rock genius is too strong!

It's going to be against the sky!

With the mentality of a young man, Lin Zaishan sang this song very cheerfully, and when it came to the chorus, he "teased" everyone's emotions very quickly-

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Oh~Forget it~Forget it~Throw it away~Smile~Love should be like celery~

Although bitter ~ astringent ~ sweet ~ sour ~ taste is not bad~

Take a bite of memories ~ keep your heart low ~ lose your feelings ~ and be grateful ~

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Oh~Forget it~Forget it~Throw it away~Smile~Love should be like celery~

Although bitter ~ astringent ~ sweet ~ sour ~ love to be healthy and natural ~

Courage is like a sponge~ suck up my tears~ I'm not afraid of loneliness~ because I once loved each other~

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All these feelings are exactly the same as what Lin Zaishan just said!

This is really a celery song with crisp courage to face the lovelorn!

These musicians in the piano room are about to be shaken by Lin Zaishan!

Even the introverted Duan Yuenan wanted to exclaim that this uncle was a demon talent!

Li Xiaoni, who was on the other end of the phone, stood up even more excitedly, eager to jump a few times in place to vent the pleasure that burst out of her heart!

Her man is much stronger than she imagined!

What has this brother experienced over the years! How did it become so powerful!

Sure enough, men rely on years to accumulate charm!

The current Lin Zaishan is simply the pinnacle of his life!

No, it's the beginning of the pinnacle!

When he was young, he seemed to have climbed a big mountain, but it was just a small hill in his life's journey.

In the future, he will climb to the pinnacle that no one can reach!

In this regard, Li Xiaoni firmly believes!

The plump boobs are rising and falling excitedly, and after this day, I am almost stimulated by Lin Zaishan to climax! I can't wait to fly back to the East China Sea to find Lin Zaishan. (To be continued.) )

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