Author's note: Today's three watches. The first update.

-- The place where I can reach this dividing line is my country.

"Because the plot is not good, the comics I drew have been rejected several times." Speaking of which, little Lori actually showed signs of crying.

When Ye Yu saw it, he suddenly screamed in his heart, and hurriedly said: "Don't cry, the eldest brother is very good at making up stories, why don't you make up a story for you?" ”

Little Lori's eyes lit up, but then they dimmed again, and said, "Big brother, the comic stories are very long, and there is a lot of background information, which is different from the stories you usually tell." Even those comics that only have a dozen words, if they want to be clearly described in words, they need a lot of words. ”

Ye Yu smiled and said, "Don't worry, you are satisfied." You have to believe in Big Brother. Big brother, I'm a writer. Well, wait a minute, I'll think about it. ”

Saying this, Ye Yu thought about what comics to tell this little Lori.

The first one to come out is "One Piece", which is Ye Yu's favorite manga in his previous life, but it's not over yet......

Thinking of this, Ye Yu suddenly remembered the second-order permission of the database-could it be that this second-order permission is related to unfinished works?

You know, there are a lot of unfinished classics in the past life!

In the field of manga alone, in the long story, One Piece, Full-Time Hunter, Gintama, Conan, ...... Which one is over?

Even in the short story, Attack on Titan, Sword Art Online, Tokyo Ghoul, etc., aren't they over?

Oh no, the Tokyo Ghoul manga is over. But it has a sequel, Tokyo Ghoul: RE!

But after thinking about it, Ye Yu still excluded "One Piece" - it's too long, when does this have to be talked about?

Moreover, before "One Piece" entered the great voyage, the plot was not compact enough, and there were many dispensable contents, which seemed a little boring.

You know, I don't know how many people in my previous life, and it was because I couldn't stand the previous dozens of words that I gave up the pirates.

Naturally, they can't appreciate the excitement behind the pirates.

This can be said to be a loss for the reader, but why not a loss for pirates?

In this world, Ye Yu would not allow this. Therefore, Ye Yu plans to modify the previous content slightly, remove the dispensable parts, and make the plot more compact.

Now in the past few years, the four words of preemptive voice have been interpreted more and more thoroughly.

Everyone is so busy, if the plot is boring, how can you have the time to read dozens of words?

Even with Ye Yu's fame bonus, it will still lose a large number of readers.

Beginning...... It's so important!

So, Ye Yu ruled out the pirates and planned to launch them after the modification.

Secondly, "Gintama".

For this super funny undisciplined comic, Ye Yu also likes it very much.

But without much consideration, Ye Yu also excluded it - there are too many island country elements!

Now it's in China, and I blurted out a comic story full of various island cultures, what is it called?!

And this comic is too undisciplined.,Tell it to a little Lori who is not familiar with it......

No matter how you look at it, it looks like a strange uncle's style!

Thinking of the island country element, Ye Yu immediately excluded all comics where the characters' names were Japanese names - although the character names and some places with island country characteristics could be modified, it was definitely too late now!

As for those comics that have too many island elements and can't be modified at all, such as "Gintama", Ye Yu plans to simply not change them, and just launch them as they are.

Well, launch it in the island nation.

It also excludes some anime adapted from light novels, such as the scorching Xana, Sword Art Online.

and original animations, such as the rebellious Lelouch, the Gundam series. The manga works of these anime are instead based on anime.

Moreover, it is best to have comics that basically do not contain elements of the island country, thinking of this, Ye Yu suddenly flashed four comics in his mind.

"The Exorcist Boy"

Fullmetal Alchemist

Fairy Tail

"Full-Time Hunter"

These four comics basically do not contain island country elements, the background of the exorcism is set in Europe, and the steel chain, the demon tail and the hunter are the overhead background, if you want to talk about what it looks like, the steel chain looks like Europe, and the demon tail and the hunter are fantasy worlds.

Moreover, the names of the people in these four comics are not standard island country names.

For example, the ゾルディック in the hunter (beating the enemy) is a family name made up by the author Yoshihiro Tomiyatsu, which is purely apocryphal.

And of these four comics, only the steel chain is finished.

Speaking of this, Ye Yu was full of resentment about the eunuch's exorcism.

I think at the beginning, when the exorcism was serialized normally, the popularity was on par with Gintama.

Katsura Hoshino, the author of the helpless exorcism, was in poor health, and he was hospitalized twice in three days.

The exorcism has changed from a weekly to a monthly magazine, and the author has suspended the publication from time to time, and it has not been updated for more than two years until Ye Yu crossed.

Of course, when it comes to the suspension of the publication, no one can compare to Yoshihiro Tomiyatsu, the author of the hunter.

Let's look at the simplest comparison.

The pirates have been serialized since 1997, weekly, and now it's almost 800 chapters.

Hunter has been serialized since 1998, the same weekly, and now ...... Well, chapter 348.

Yoshihiro Tomiyasu, the king of the island country's comic industry, has a variety of reasons for suspension.

The author was suddenly ill, went out to collect materials, got married, went on a honeymoon, his son was born, he concentrated on raising his son, he was unwell, he had something to do temporarily, the reason was unknown, and the most powerful thing was his reason for discontinuing the publication in 2001 - only! Be! Think! Stop! Carry!!!

So, he ceased publication.

Oh, I heard that he once wanted to play the game because of the Final Fantasy 14β version of the open beta, so he found a reason to close the publication......

There are also because they have to play mahjong......

It's okay to often suspend the journal indefinitely.,There's a long time during this period and I still hand in draft paintings!

Ye Yu remembered that the most sloppy words were probably not much better than stickman.

In the entire island comic industry, those who dare to hand in their draft drawings on Jump are probably the only ones who have no other branches.

Fans affectionately call him - "Rich Old Thief".

Helplessly, the hunter was really good-looking, so Ye Yu in his previous life fell into this huge pit and never climbed out again.

After all the thoughts turned in his mind, Ye Yu decided which comic to talk about, then cleared his throat and said, "This story is called "Fullmetal Alchemist". The story takes place in a world where alchemy is quite developed. First of all, what is alchemy? Alchemy is to understand the inner laws of matter, break them down, and then reconstruct them. In this world, alchemy must be carried out according to the law of 'equivalent exchange': in order to obtain something, it needs to be exchanged for the same price, and if the price is not enough, it needs to be taken away with any part of oneself, or body, or memory, or whatever, as a price to be filled......"

With Ye Yu's narration, little Lori's attention was obviously attracted, and the two brothers, Edward and Alphons, in order to resurrect their mother, touched the taboo of alchemy - the human body was refined, but they were tragically counterattacked, and since then they have embarked on a journey in order to regain everything they have lost.

In the previous life on Earth, there were two versions of the Steelcast animation - Steelcast 2003 and Steelcast FA.

The reason for the two versions of the animation is bizarre.

At the beginning, the Bone Society produced steel casting animation, that is, steel refining 2003, but unexpectedly, the progress of the comics was too slow, and the progress of the animation actually kept up with the comics.

In desperation, the Bone Society had to start adding the original plot.

As a result, because there was too much originality, I couldn't get it back, so I had to continue to be original and end up writing a plot by myself.

And the steel forge fa is an animation remade by the bone society after the end of the steel manga. Although some content has been cut, it is basically according to the plot of the comics.

But it can't be said that steelmaking FA is better than steelmaking 2003.

After all, fans have long had their own opinions and debated about which is better, steel 2003 or steel FA.

Of course, because it is a comic, Ye Yu naturally tells Xiao Loli a comic plot.

Episode 1 - Two Alchemists

Episode 2 - The Price of Life

……

Because Ye Yu made the characters more vivid and the plot more full, there were many descriptive sentences interspersed in the narration process, and after more than half an hour, Ye Yu was able to finish the fifth word - the troubles of the alchemist.

Little Lori was teary-eyed when she heard this, and wiped her tears and said, "Big brother, Nina is so pitiful, she was refined into a synthetic beast by her father." ”

"Yes, although it was a relief to die at the hands of Scar, it was still a tragedy overall!"

After wiping her tears for a while, little Lori slowly calmed down, and immediately coquettishly said: "The story told by the big brother is really good." Let's move on! ”

The best little Lori who can be coquettish is invincible, Ye Yu immediately retreated, so he had to continue.

More than three hours later, Ye Yu was dry-mouthed, but before he finished speaking, he took a sip of the juice he had just ordered, and said, "Little sister, look, it's almost 5 o'clock now, and the eldest brother is going home for dinner." I'll tell you about it next time I meet you! ”

Ye Yu was going to slip away.

"Big brother, you lie, there are 50 million people in Xianshui City! How can it be so easy to come across again? Little Lori puffed out her mouth and looked at Ye Yu angrily.

Ye Yu smiled awkwardly and said, "Then the big brother gave you the phone, you are always relieved now, right?" ”

"Alright then, take it!" Little Lori reluctantly took out her phone.

Ye Yu reported her mobile phone number, and after Xiao Lori wrote down the number, she paid and left with her.

In front of the dessert shop.

"Do you need me to send you back?" Ye Yu asked.

"No, my house is not far away, I'll just walk back. Big brother goodbye! Little Lori shook her hand and turned to leave.

Ye Yu looked at it, and was about to turn around and leave, but saw that little Lori took two steps and turned around and ran back, and asked with a hopeful face: "Big brother, can I draw it into a comic?" ”

"Huh...... No problem, this is given to you by the big brother, and of course it's okay if you want to draw it into a comic. ”

"Yay!" Little Lori cheered.

"But don't go to the manuscript after you finish drawing, the big brother has a company, and when the time comes, you come to the big brother, and the big brother will help you publish."

Hearing this, little Lori cheered again: "Okay, good!" I'm finally able to publish a manga! Thank you big brother! ”

After thinking about it, Ye Yu said again: "In terms of character design and some other aspects, the eldest brother can give you some advice, after all, in my mind, I have already set an image for them." ”

"No problem!" Little Lori agreed.

After separating from Little Lori, Ye Yu got into the car and drove home.

This...... Is it considered a Lori cartoonist development plan?