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Thank you for the guidance of the god Fengling, it is a huge help! I know that the writer's time is tight, and being able to teach me step by step can be more attentive and memorized.
Thanks to the encouragement of the great god of the knife, I saw it yesterday, and the encouragement of the great god is nothing comparable to that of newcomers.
I would also like to thank all the book friends who have given tips and said something in the book review area in these controversial days.
Whether it's right or wrong, it's not sprayed indiscriminately, thanks! Especially the book. Lewd. Crazy book friend, you must have found out that he is the villain leader, but what you didn't find out is that he gave me all the recommendation votes.
The last two gossips. The book I want to write is the one you see the characters in it.
He was angry, why was he angry. Instead of simply saying I'm angry, I'm angry.
He was happy, why was he happy. Instead of laughing happily, it was happy.
He loves, why loves. It's not that we met today, you're so beautiful, I seem to be in love with you.
He hates, why is the hatred not you scolding me, I am very you, I hate you for a lifetime, I have to destroy your family.
In short, no matter what the text is, whether it is an urban text, an entertainment article, or a soldier king text, it is ultimately a story, so that everyone in the story has flesh and blood, there are antecedents and consequences, of course, I don't dare to guarantee that there are no flaws, and write and read! But that's what I'm after.
There is no one who can't read any article, I firmly believe this, and after reading the book review area, I am even more convinced that everyone is looking for the flaws in the military plot of these chapters I wrote, and not everyone is angry because of the military article.
I also write a few points of my opinion below, I think the explanation makes sense, so I laugh it off, and if I think the explanation doesn't make sense, I should look at it without a brain and laugh it off.
The first tangle is why he has to be. In fact, the book does not say that he alone can deal with the whole country. Rather, it is said that he is the most suitable.
So the question is, why is he the most suitable, he is mentally ill and discharged from the army, no matter how you look at it, it's not suitable.
Because he had fought with Lao B, met again, and had strong abilities, he was the most suitable, as for mental illness, they had examined it, there was no problem, it could be executed, and as for being discharged, he was a guardian.
So here's the problem, nine out of ten guardians died, and one of them went crazy and didn't let him go, and there was no one in the country, which was trying to harm him.
There is only one guardian, that is, Yunyi, and the other nine are not, please read the book carefully, standing in the disciplined forces with the completion of the task as the standard, humanization is a beautiful ideal, they want to protect the interests of the majority of people, since you are a guardian, you have responsibility, and it is your duty to obey orders.
And obedience to orders is a vocation that is inherently inhumane, but can you say that this sentence is a black army?
It's like the boss of your company because you have a relationship with someone in a certain company, you are sick and ask for leave, but this list is too urgent, and you are the most suitable, he asked you to go, from his point of view, you have completed and given you a bonus, and he does not owe you. From your point of view, you are sick like this, and what you need most is rest. Whether you go or not, most people will choose to go for work.
But here's a problem, if you suddenly win five million, you don't want to go, you don't even want this job, your pursuit is no longer this, but you sign a contract with this company, and you don't go and even have to compensate five million and one thousand, what do you do?
Don't consider the reasonableness of the compensation of 5010,000 yuan, what I am talking about is that the army is a disciplined force, they have hard and fast rules, they let you go on a mission, you can't go, they won't kill you if you don't go, but they will punish you, lock you up, and even deprive you of your status as a soldier, but the protagonist in the book can't be stripped of his identity, and the faith and comradeship of the soldier Yunyi can't suffer this shame.
Someone here is going to say again, what if the task is unreasonable? What do you say? All I can think of is obedience. Could it be that the one who disobeys is the Black Army? Because the tasks of the army are unreasonable, so it is the black army? If everyone questions the legitimacy of the mission, does the army still need to be a disciplined force?
There are too many helplessness in life, which cannot be defined by simple right and wrong, and I am very satisfied that I can write such a big controversy.
The second entanglement, Director Wei tore up the photos, and many book friends left messages in the book review area saying that they were tearing up the photos of the martyrs, how could it be a radical general? Here is a misunderstanding, he tore up Yun Yi's photo.
Here we only say a simple truth, Yun Yi has no ambition, but what he cares about most is his comrades-in-arms, he put the photo on the table, just to say goodbye to the past, Director Wei tore up the photo to tell him, you have no ambition, you don't deserve to be with them, you say goodbye to the past, you are not a soldier anymore, why do you put yourself here. If you want to be here, you have to be a hero like them and avenge them.
Some book friends said that he had made so many contributions before, why wasn't he a hero? This is contempt for heroes, this is villains, but the plot here is that Director Wei wants him to take a gun again, he sees that Yun Yi is still alive and not dead, if he dies, his merits are enough to be placed there, but he is still alive, so he discarded his faith, this is no longer a soldier, why is he with a hero who will not swerve to the death......
It seems that my opponent as the author as the protagonist is not good at washing the floor, right, this will hurt your sense of substitution, I'm not afraid, my plot is clear, the two parties have their own positions, each has its own decision, which side the book friend supports, I don't care.
Because most book lovers still have to look at the problem from the perspective of human nature, first of all, our supervisor will think about finding a reason for the protagonist, because he is more familiar with us, isn't it?
Let's just say two words, stand!
No matter what industry it is, from different angles, different views, I think I'm tired today and don't want to write, but you won't read the books I write because I have a bad attitude. But there is a problem in the middle, I am tired, and this problem is the most serious problem.
How can this be explained? I feel tired, who do you think is not tired, I spend money to read your books, you should continue to be more. You can not change it, I will not watch it, so we are opposed.
Or in the book review section, you write negative reviews and threaten to take them down. I think I'm so tired, racking my brains to write the plot, and it hasn't been put on the shelves yet, most of the negative comments haven't even voted for me, you can go out and turn left, but you leave a screen full of negative comments, new book friends don't dare to read the book at all, the book review is all poisonous, but who dares to guarantee that they won't like these plots? You have already harmed my interests by scaring them away!
But you think that there is a book review area for reading books, that is, comments, why don't you let me speak. No comments, no reading, here's the complaining, and I'm not spraying, I want to correct your shortcomings, write the plot I like, and I will subscribe to your books to pay you in the future. We're all here to see the best books, and we're willing to spend money, but we're willing to spend money on what you're going to write.
Who do you say is right?
There are even some book friends who give me positive comments and negative book friends who argue, so which of you is right, there is a key here, one likes it, and the other does not like it.
There is also a key point, whether you like it more or don't like it more.
There is also a key, I write for those who like it, or those who don't like it.
It's hard to say this, the book review area has been dominated, but the number of tips has skyrocketed.
Seventy people are rewarded in three days, which is definitely a good result for newcomers.
You say I should listen to the book reviews, or do you give me so much encouragement from reading them?
You will also say, you write what we like, our crowd is powerful, and you will be on the shelves in the future, and so many of us will subscribe to you, which is what you should pursue. Instead of just a few people's tips right now.
But the person who rewarded me said, we support you so much, and now spend money to read your book, how can you live up to us? How can you trust someone who doesn't even vote for you right now.
But there's a problem here, they don't vote, they don't spend money because they don't like the plot I wrote, I changed it, and they voted for a tip, what do you say?
I can't say this, just as you say that I am helpless in the black army, I am really not black, maybe I wrote it too well, so that both sides have opinions.
There are even book reviews saying that I didn't bring in one side, I should be in the black army, and let the protagonist be wronged in order to have more sense of involvement, I can't say what he said was wrong. But he's right, then I'm right. Whose point of view is correct?
Anyway, having said so much, in the end it is a matter of position, those who refute are those who don't like it, and those who support it are those who like it, and there is no right or wrong.
I'm not right or wrong, not all of my writings are soldiers, and I will reward more in the future. It's not that I'm writing all about routine entertainment, so you won't object to it in the book review area.
Everything is from the heart, the final sentence can be summarized, and the update is slow.
Let you have too much time to think, just as how many people complained about the "Spring" I wrote, but as a result, the new book friends seemed to ignore it, and now it is the same, after this plot has passed, the new book friends, if you keep reading it, there will definitely not be so much dissatisfaction.
But the problem of updating is here again, I've written almost 400,000 words, and the first is on the shelves, I can't write until 500,000 and then put it on the shelves, and the editor is not satisfied, you may have a total of more than a million words, you actually wrote half of the free chapters, I give you so many recommendations, and you treat me like this.
It's just a different perspective, and the perspective is different.
Let's talk about it casually, don't spray this point of view, I know there are still many questions, I didn't say it, but I wrote it wherever I thought.