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After washing, Liu Daofei lay on the bed and looked at the script in his hand.

The script has not changed much, and the feelings of the three people in the story have not changed much, but between the two male protagonists, they have not had much conflict, and the original scene where the three people are almost equally divided has been slightly tilted, and Liu Daofei is more like the first protagonist.

However, after Liu Daofei finished reading it, his brows frowned slightly.

He didn't know that this was actually the final script of "Daisy" in his previous life, although the plot was no problem and more reasonable, but he always felt that the story was too bland, and there was a feeling of warmth; When I turned it over two or three times in a row, my eyes suddenly lit up on a plot.

Hurriedly picked up the phone and called Zhou Hong next door.

"Sister Hong, have you read the script I gave you?"

There was a sobbing sound.

"What's wrong? Sister Hong! Liu Daofei hurriedly asked.

It was half a sound before there was a voice, "Touching!" ”

"Touching?" Liu Daofei smiled dumbly, "Hehe, dare you cry when you read the script?" Okay, Sister Hong, I want you to help me refer to the plot and see if there are any different opinions, but you are crying there, I know this story is very lethal to women, but it doesn't have to be like this. ”

"What's wrong with me like this, I don't know any script, I just like the story in it, am I ashamed to cry?"

"Well, you're not ashamed, you're also a woman, count me wrong. So you've read the script, how do you feel about the actor in the script? I'm talking about character! Liu Daofei hurriedly raised his own questions.

"Good guys!"

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"Good people! You say that you feel good about Pu Yi! Zhuang Wenqiang and the two frowned slightly when they heard Liu Daofei's first words.

"That's right, that's how I feel, and that's how my assistant feels after reading the script."

Good people, hehe, good people are unprincipled people in the eyes of ordinary people, and Liu Daofei's subtext is obviously this.

Zhou Hong's words made him wake up.

Guo Zairong was still a little puzzled: "There's nothing wrong with this, Pu Yi's character, although he is a killer in front of outsiders, he is a good person in front of Hui Ying." In fact, when I set him up, I didn't set him up as a heinous guy. ”

Liu Daofei laughed and said, "Director Guo, you misunderstood what I meant, the good person I am talking about is not what kind of person he is, but his character!" ”

Zhuang Wenqiang suddenly came to his senses and said, "Sage, you said that Pu Yi is too characterless? ”

"Well, Mr. Zhuang thinks I'm right? I think so. Liu Daofei nodded, and then opened the script and said.

Although the other changes in this script are perfect, it does not involve the personality aspect of the person, well, it should be said that the personality aspect of the protagonist is very weak.

Although Park Yi played by Yoo Do-fei in the script is deeply in love with Hye-young, Park Yi did not show a lot of anger when the plot pushed to the point that Hye-young was injured because of Jeong-woo, even if Jeong-woo returned to Amsterdam to meet Hye-young again, he did not express any expression.

This is a bit unreasonable for Park Yi, who is deeply in love with Hye-young.

From a man's point of view, although he knew that he couldn't be with Hye-young, Hye-young was seriously injured because of Jeongwoo's cross-knife love or her own misunderstanding, and she became completely mute; This is absolutely intolerable for a normal man to see the woman he loves like this.

And Pu Yi at this moment in the script not only does not have much anger, but is secretly painful when he sees the heroine crying, which not only has no character, but also makes people look weak.

And after here, the two male protagonists, a policeman and a killer, coexist peacefully for no reason, although one party does not know the identity of the other party, but the two are rivals in love after all, and it is impossible to start giving up the woman they love as soon as they come into contact.

But the relationship between the two men in the script does not feel a trace of tension.

And the public view of the script, all the plots, although Park Yi is a killer, except for taking the task to kill people, he is like a good man at other times, hiding behind, the beloved woman does not dare to love, she did not break out after she was injured, and then chose to back down when she was about to kill the police.

When facing the killer group, it is even more difficult to resist, although in the end there is a complete counterattack after the heroine's death.

But in fact, everything seems to be back down and forbearing.

"Mr. Zhuang, a protagonist without a character is not brilliant, although I don't understand the writing of the script, and it is not to increase Pu Yi's role, but as a killer, his character cannot be like this." After Liu Daofei finished speaking, he picked up a glass of water on the table and drank it.

Zhuang Wenqiang looked at Liu Daofei in a daze, and it was not until he finally finished speaking that he was overjoyed, and laughed at Guo Zairong and said: "Old Guo, it seems that we really found the right one this time, we all say that one person is short, and three people are long, although we all have some names, but sometimes we do have to listen to the opinions of others." ”

"This is not just an opinion, it is simply a high opinion! We've always felt that the story is too bland, but we can't find the reason, it turns out that it's here, okay, great. Park Yi's character is determined by his conflict with Jeongwoo, and if we erase Park Yi's personality, we will flatten all the conflicts, no wonder, no wonder...... Now it's a one-size-fits-all approach. Guo Zairong was also very excited.

Saying that, he stood up and gave a hug to Liu Daofei, "Sage Xi, thank you, thank you, thanks to you this time, we finally found the root cause!" ”

Liu Daofei also smiled: "Director Guo, you are too polite, you will see the outside world when you say this." ”

"Yes, yes, don't say it, don't say it, let's not talk about it between us, next time I'll invite you to dinner, hahaha." Guo Zairong's small eyes also narrowed into a slit, and said to Zhuang Wenqiang: "Screenwriter Zhuang, we really met Fuxing this time, if we really shoot according to a script like ours, and no matter what the result is, but if someone turns it out in the future, our face will be lost." ”

Zhuang Wenqiang also nodded and smiled: "That's right, how can we say this time it is also a Sino-Korean co-production, and the bluff has been released, if you can't make some achievements, then you will really be underestimated; Treat, I have a treat, sage, I owe you a meal. ”

The two big screenwriters owe themselves favors.

Liu Daofei also said excitedly: "So, I now get two favors because of such a thing, hahaha, did I earn it." ”

"Of course it's earned." Zhuang Wenqiang went up and grabbed his shoulder, and said with a smile: "However, these two favors are not taken for nothing, you also have to be positive, since it is your opinion, then don't leave today, and revise the script with us."

By the way, we are good people to the end, it's a big deal that we'll add a name to you at the back of the screenwriter. ”