Chapter 215: "Rainy Day"
The feeling of being ready to move came out for a lifetime, and it immediately made Lin Zaishan feel a little bad - after his old heart was re-stimulated and rejuvenated, it seemed to be becoming more and more flowery? That's not going to work!
Trying to restrain himself and not let himself think blindly, he gently patted Liu Mengmeng's leg and motioned her to take it down, Lin Zaishan hated her: "You eat well." ”
"My stockings are really thick. Uncle, if you don't like me wearing stockings and short skirts, I'll wear pants in the future. "It's like promising something to your boyfriend. Liu Mengmeng could feel that Lin Zaishan was becoming more and more intimate to her. This has to be put on hold before, and Lin Zaishan may immediately keep his distance from her. But now, the uncle seems to be more and more willing to get closer to her.
"I don't dislike you wearing it, I'm afraid that you will catch a cold and be frozen, and now the weather is getting colder and colder, if you keep wearing it like this, your legs will have problems in the future."
"Uncle, I listen to you. I'll be wearing pants from tomorrow. ”
"Don't be influenced by me, you can wear whatever you like, why do you listen to me?"
"I'm your assistant, of course I'll listen to you. I'll wear whatever you like me wearing. Liu Mengmeng is sweet and close to Lin Zaishan. She can have a hunch that the recent time for Lin Zaishan as an assistant may be the best time for her and Lin Zaishan to get closer. If she misses it, the distance between her and Lin Zaishan may never be closer.
For such a talented, promising and responsible single uncle, Liu Mengmeng doesn't want to miss it. In particular, when she was in Chang'an, Bai Ge also revealed to her that she was willing to be with Lin Zaishan, which made her even more motivated to get close to Lin Zaishan.
Lin Zaishan ate and smiled helplessly: "You are my assistant, what I need is your work ability, not your ability to wear." If you put the time and effort you spend on getting dressed every day and you can put it into music, you will improve faster. ”
Liu Mengmeng was secretly embarrassed in her heart, Lin Zaishan was deliberately keeping a distance from her again.
This uncle is really difficult to overcome.
Feeling the change in Lin Zaishan's attitude, Liu Mengmeng didn't dare to get close to Lin Zaishan easily. So as not to be the opposite.
The two ate and chatted about work for a while.
Lin Zaishan reminded Liu Mengmeng: "If Caidie takes the initiative to contact you to ask about cooperation, you ask them to wait, and then give them a reply when I think about everything." ”
"Okay, if there is any news from their side, I will inform you as soon as possible."
"Also, you must carefully sort out the arrangement of the tail teeth, don't make sloppy diseases, this is our most important work in the future. Other work can be put away first, and you must pay attention to the tail teeth. Don't make any mistakes. ”
"Uncle. You can rest assured, I will definitely prepare for this tail tooth work with great care. Liu Mengmeng paused for a moment and said, "I may have to go back to Xiacheng this afternoon, our old classmates in Xiacheng have a party tonight." There are a few people in Xia Cheng who are doing well, and they have all become business owners, as well as the children of business owners. I'll go see if there's a chance for them to perform at the end of the year. ”
"That's hard work for you. You're going back to Summer City, don't rush back at night, go back to see your parents. Stay at home for one night. I'll come back tomorrow when I'm refreshed. ”
"Thank you, uncle, for giving me a holiday."
"What kind of vacation are you, it's just a matter of work. After this period, around the Spring Festival next year, I will give you a big holiday. Let you rest for a while. ”
"Thank you, uncle."
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After dinner that day, Lin Zaishan stayed in the company until four o'clock in the afternoon, until Lu Dong came back, and explained to Lu Dong about communicating with the previous record company. He left the company and went back to find Bai Ge and Tang Yaxuan.
Liu Mengmeng had already driven to Xia Cheng at this time, before leaving. Lin Zaishan specially instructed her to pay attention to safety when opening an intercity expressway.
It rained lightly again in the afternoon in the East China Sea, the road became slippery, and the weather became cooler. Open the intercity expressway, if Liu Mengmeng gets leg cramps while driving, it will be too dangerous, so Lin Zaishan suggested that she buy a bus ticket and take the intercity bus to Xiacheng.
Liu Mengmeng is used to driving, and insists on driving away, so that when she arrives in Xia City, it is convenient for her to go anywhere.
Lin Zaishan can care about her so much, which makes Liu Mengmeng's heart very warm.
She really wants to be with this uncle and enjoy the beauty of being loved by this uncle.
Along the way, Liu Mengmeng has been listening to a few songs that Lin Zaishan asked her to practice.
The "Radio Love Song", she feels very good when she listens to it now, and she has been singing along with Lin Zaishan's sample-
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We've been forgetting to build one~
Take a look at each other's hearts~
Experience what each other needs most~
Don't hug lonely anymore~
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Liu Mengmeng felt that now she and Lin Zaishan were very close, but there was a bridge between their hearts.
If there is a bridge that connects their hearts, allowing them to go to each other's hearts and see what each other needs most, they may not have such lonely hugs anymore.
When Liu Mengmeng went to hug Lin Zaishan for different reasons in the past few days, what she conveyed to Lin Zaishan was a watery tenderness, and it was also a sour loneliness. She really wants a man who can give her such a loving hug every day.
And when she hugged Lin Zaishan, she could also feel that Lin Zaishan was always drifting away, and there was also a sense of helplessness and loneliness.
What the hell is this uncle thinking in his heart, Liu Mengmeng really doesn't understand.
She really wants to build a bridge in the heart of Lin Zaishan like the one sung in this song, and really go to see if this uncle has her in his heart.
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Lin Zaishan drove a wild horse home that afternoon.
Bai Ge called him before, asking him to come to a small apartment and give Tang Yaxuan counseling if he was free. The two girls held back their songs all afternoon in the afternoon, and they didn't hold back any good works. To prepare for the creation of 50 propositions, this is really an impossible task for Tang Yaxuan.
In fact, a newcomer singer-songwriter like Tang Yaxuan has no company support behind her, her own creative ability is limited, and her singing strength is not very strong, it is already a miracle that she can reach the top six in the team group. Her previous works were polished and strengthened a lot with the help of Caidie, otherwise she wouldn't have been able to pass the last round of the competition.
And the next round of 50 propositions. With Tang Yaxuan's ability, let alone doing it all, it is very difficult for her to do 5 propositions well.
Not to mention Tang Yaxuan, it is very difficult for all the contestants, including Lin Zaishan, to prepare 50 propositions in such a short time.
The other three major record companies have huge teams working together to prepare, which is a bit better, and the players who don't have team support will have to advance in the next round. It's very difficult.
However, if you can break through the problems of the next round, and wait for the next round of team scuffles, the requirements for singer-songwriters will be much easier.
The first round of the four-team melee is a competition of the players' own repertoire, regardless of style and genre, and the team players only need to come up with their strongest killer features to face it.
But now, the players can't care about the next round of the competition, they have to overcome the difficulties of the next round of 50 propositions first.
At half past four in the afternoon of this day, Lin Zaishan went to the small apartment to find Bai Ge and Tang Yaxuan.
The white dove opened the door to Lin Zaishan. hurriedly pulled Lin Zaishan into the house: "Dad, hurry up and help Xiao Xuan come up with ideas, these propositions are too difficult to prepare." ”
Tang Yaxuan took the initiative to get up and greet Lin Zaishan: "Uncle Lin is good." ”
"Sit, don't get up."
Lin Zaishan asked Tang Yaxuan and Bai Ge to sit on the sofa. He pulled up a chair and sat across from them.
I don't know if I've made more friends lately, and I've interacted more with boys, and the white pigeon is not as casual as it used to be. She used to wear clothes she bought at the stalls. And it's the style of a junior high school girl's clothes.
This time I went to Chang'an to earn 1,000 yuan in performance fees, and Bai Ge specially rewarded himself and spent 200 yuan. Bought a pair of branded black jeans.
She was now wearing the most expensive jeans she'd ever bought in her life, a black T-shirt of a believer, and she looked pretty cool, a bit like a female guitarist. It's a pity that she's too thin, if she's a little fatter and can hold up the sexy arc of her jeans, her image will be better.
Like the white pigeon, Tang Yaxuan is also a very thin girl, she is ten centimeters shorter than the white pigeon, but her body proportion is much better than the white pigeon.
It's not like a white dove, it's completely bamboo-shaped body. Although the sparrow is small, Tang Yaxuan's "five organs" are complete, and his small chest and small buttocks look quite meaty.
This Bay Area girl who looks like Xu Ruoxuan can dress up more than the white pigeon, and she has more of the taste of an innocent little girl, rather than the cool taste that is becoming more and more on the white pigeon today.
Tang Yaxuan was wearing a thin red sweater that afternoon, and the green Christmas tree decoration on his chest, obviously preparing for Christmas.
Underneath is a pleated skirt with red and black checkered, a very short style, and under the skirt is a pair of black thin cotton leggings, like thick stockings, which modify her thin legs to be particularly slim.
Compared with Liu Mengmeng's long legs, Tang Yaxuan's small long legs have a mini cute winter girl flavor, if the average boy sees it, he will definitely take a few more looks.
Lin Zaishan focused on a fragment of a song that the two girls had written together that afternoon, which the white pigeon brought her.
It rained in the East China Sea that afternoon, and the two girls prepared this proposition about rain, and what they wanted to describe was the kind of longing for the person they liked on a rainy day.
I haven't filled in many words, just a few lines. The melody has been done for a long time. Obviously, this is a work with a melody of rain first, and then a story with lyrics.
"You can simply play and sing, and I'll listen to it."
Lin Zaishan took Tang Yaxuan's stave book and listened to the two girls play and sing with his heart-
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Rainy day~I miss you so much~
But I didn't dare to call you~I can't find a reason~
So ~ only the company of the rain is left ~ My lonely heart~
More and more lonely~
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The words they wrote were very short, but they had a feeling first, and they didn't fill in the words seriously.
After Tang Yaxuan sang, Bai Ge immediately asked, "Dad, what do you think of our melody?" We haven't filled in the lyrics yet, so we'll fill in the lyrics carefully when the tune is all done. ”
Bai Ge's attitude towards helping Tang Yaxuan was very positive, as if she was also going to participate in this competition, and Tang Yaxuan was the embodiment of her competition.
Lin Zaishan could feel the active participation of the white pigeon, but he had to strike at the two of them: "Your chord is too peaceful. Loneliness and rainy days are associated, it is indeed a very lonely feeling with only the sound of raindrops, but in this loneliness, you must add some emotional tension to it, otherwise the light gives people a kind of loneliness and loneliness of raindrops. It can't infect others. You have to make others feel that you are lonely and lonely, and there is a strong emotional power to release, so that you can move others with your works. ”
Bai Ge and Tang Yaxuan both nodded instructively, and when Lin Zaishan said this, they felt that the melody they had stayed up for an afternoon seemed to be too dull.
"Daddy, what do you think our song should be changed?"
"To put it simply, it's about strengthening the melody and making the song more intense."
Lin Zaishan encouraged Tang Yaxuan: "Little Tang." Your voice is actually quite explosive, and in the last round of the competition, the song "Nobody Eats Biscuits" you sang was very tense. That's the song that the producer of Butterfly helped you polish, right? They add an extra half-octave of vocal range to you, and the tension in your voice bursts out at once. The songs you usually sing are all relatively soft campus folk songs, and the vocal range is very flat, which will make your singing voice appear sweet, but lack tension and explosiveness. I personally recommend. Don't always write songs in a particularly soft folk style, you can try to write songs with a wider vocal range to play for yourself. Your voice has explosive power to dig into, and if you dig well, all your channels will open. Your voice should be more charismatic than it is now. ”
The white pigeon also said: "Yes, Xiao Xuan, the "Biscuits Nobody Eats" you sang last round was very infectious, if you can sing such a song this round." The chances of making the cut are great. ”
Tang Yaxuan said embarrassedly: "In the last round of elimination, I was out of the way, and I didn't expect that I would sing like that." ”
"People don't usually know where the limits of their voices are. Only when you take on the challenge can you slowly find out. ”
Lin Zaishan asked for a pen and said: "I'll change this song for you a little, make it a simple lyrical rock style, and open the vocal range, in this way, the mood and tension in the melody will be revealed, you can feel it." ”
Lin Zaishan quickly picked up "Rainy Day" by another Nanquan mother, and this song was written and sung by Lara Liang Xinyi.
The vocal range of this song is very open, and when it comes to the climax of the chorus, it needs to burst out with explosive high notes, which will sound very enjoyable, and the person who sings it will be even more enjoyable.
Tang Yaxuan's voice is slightly like Lara, her voice in the treble area is sharper, and her voice in the middle range is sweeter.
But the strength in Tang Yaxuan's singing has not yet been excavated, and her singing voice is soft, far less explosive than Lara's singing.
But through "Biscuits Nobody Eats", Lin Zaishan can feel that Tang Yaxuan's voice has a certain toughness and explosiveness to dig into.
If it is excavated well, Tang Yaxuan has the potential to be a singer, and it is estimated that it will be difficult for her voice to become popular, but as a professional singer, as long as she works hard, she can still achieve it.
Lin Zaishan soon wrote this song "Rainy Day" for the two girls.
When the two girls saw Lin Zaishan's work, they didn't need to listen to it at first, just looking at the series of complex notes drawn by Lin Zaishan on the staff, and the carefully marked chord arrangement, they immediately felt the gap.
If the melody written by Lin Zaishan is compared to the melody of wearing a mink coat, then the melody they held back for an afternoon is the melody of wearing only a small vest in the cold wind, so shabby that it can't be shabby anymore, the gap is too big!
Tang Yaxuan's ability to read music is limited, and after writing it, Lin Zaishan played the piano and sang it for the two of them, so that they could feel the emotional ups and downs and tension in this song.
"I'm going to tell you some deep creative techniques that you don't understand, so you can listen to the song first and feel the melody and mood interaction from the song. Xiao Tang, you study this song carefully, I think singing this kind of song with a relatively open vocal range will make you more aware of what type of voice you have. ”
Tang Yaxuan was humbly taught, and came to Lin Zaishan's old workbench with the white pigeon, listening to Lin Zaishan play the piano and sing-
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What should I do if it's raining~I miss you so much~
I don't dare to call you~I can't find the reason~
Why the sound of insomnia ~ has become so familiar ~
Silent scene ~ be your substitute ~ listen to the raindrops with me ~
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Lin Zaishan's voice is very low, and he doesn't add too many skills to his singing, mainly singing a feeling and pitch, so that Tang Yaxuan can learn-
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What kind of rain ~ what kind of night ~
How can I make you miss it more~
How heavy the rain should be ~ how dark the sky should be ~
to be able to have your thoughtfulness~
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Actually~Without me, you can't tell the difference~
How obvious the ending can be~
Don't say you'll be sad~
Don't say you want to change~
The loved one doesn't need to apologize~
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He sang it in one breath and broke out moderately at the climax of the chorus, like a lonely rain that fell on the hearts of the two girls, making them feel deeply. This is the feeling of being lonely and missing in the rain that they wanted all afternoon. But let them write it themselves, they can't write it. Is this the gap between geniuses and ordinary people? Or is it the gap between professional and non-professional?
As soon as Lin Zaishan finished singing, the white pigeon immediately sighed: "Dad, you are too strong!" How can you do it casually, you are so much better than us! ”
Tang Yaxuan was also a little discouraged, she really admired Lin Zaishan's talent so much, and at the same time, she became more and more inferior to her limited creative ability.
Seeing the frustrated expression on Tang Yaxuan's face, Lin Zaishan comforted the two: "You guys are still just getting started, and it's already very good to be able to write such a melody." It's really unrealistic for you to prepare so many complete works, so you don't have to be in a hurry, and you can write as much as you can. I can't finish writing, don't you still have me standing behind you? (To be continued.) )