In the past two days, there have been many readers who have opinions about the plot.

All kinds of questions!

Today, I encountered such a problem, and a book friend named "Shu Chong" raised the following question.

"The only thing I'm dissatisfied with is that the author writes that the female protagonist is in love with the male protagonist, but I don't see it from the details in the text, it's more like our fathers and grandparents who have arranged marriages, don't understand the so-called love, and can live together for a lifetime. There are details in the text that depict the female protagonist loving the male protagonist? At most, the author keeps emphasizing. ”

This is a very typical problem.

A few points can be seen from it!

First, the author pays attention to the book review area!

Second, the author doesn't even know how to type the ton, he can only use a comma!

Third, many readers are very irritable about the author's feelings, the reason is very simple, everyone wants to read a cool article, and you have to make everyone unhappy.

Fourth, many readers do not understand the feelings described by the author.

Fifth, this question gave the author a certain amount of confidence, he was very polite and did not ask too many questions, only this dissatisfaction, the author is very grateful.

Answer: "Don't say too much, you can't remember the previous description, such as knowing that the male protagonist kicked Wang Dongdong for her, crashed the car for her, cooked for her, and stood in front of her during the signing meeting to resist danger for her...... Okay.,It's all said.,You can't remember if you say too much.,Just say the latest chapter.,The male protagonist still wants to take care of her in his sleep.,Integrated into the love in the bones.,This is something that a person will also be touched.,If your other half takes care of you like this.,You're not the love of love.。 I'm speechless. ”

"It's not right, it's half written. I suddenly realized that I was reading the wrong topic.,What do you mean to say that the female protagonist is in love with the male protagonist.。 These are the practices of the male protagonist. proves the love of the male protagonist, what if she just doesn't move? She just doesn't love it? What to do? ”

"Okay, let me think about it, I write about feelings that come with the trend, I think about it...... Well, there it is, it was written before that she was hungry at night, and the male protagonist bought seafood, and she couldn't eat it. As a result, the male protagonist went out again, and a smile appeared on the corner of her mouth. Kindness? Is this a depiction? ”

"In the midst of Mu Lin's turmoil, knowing that there might be a huge risk, well, it should be said that it could be a certain disaster, and she accepted it!"

"Going to check alone, for the sake of the child, is she greedy for glory and wealth and enjoy the life of a wealthy family?"

"Zhou Ting's birthday party. She's jealous, why is that? The author does not understand! The male protagonist took out the ring as a gift, why would she be happy? ”

"When the male protagonist cooks, she always likes to watch from the sidelines. I still want to help, but I always make mistakes, and I can't do my best to learn soup. Isn't there anyone she wants to make soup for? It's not that there is no money? ”

All right!

I admit I was wrong. Please add the sentence "That's because she loves Yunyi!" after the explanation above! ”。

The following sentences can be regarded as a summary of recent problems.

Urban. Entertainment essays, soldier king essays, business essays, and all kinds of essays converge, but they all write one thing less, a slap in the face!

Slapping the face is a cool point that must exist in so many articles, no matter which one of them, but there are very few in it, I can't say that there is no, there are still some.

When I first started writing about Wang Dongdong, because I just started writing books, I was still a little immature, and the slap in the face was too obvious, pursuing coolness and pretending to be forced.

Actually, I'm not satisfied with that paragraph, it's not subtle enough. But then I found that this paragraph became an important section to attract readers, and they found it very refreshing to read.

As the writing goes deeper and deeper, to this paragraph in Hong Kong, it can be said that many readers are not satisfied, the protagonist is so strong, after the past, it is not enough to solve it by dividing three by five, water, water, water so much, it is difficult to watch.

I know if what I write is,

In Hong Kong, Wang Jing was bullied.

Cloud easy to pass.

Society Attack!

Yun Yi knocked over hundreds of people with his fists, and one person stood in the middle of all the people who fell to the ground, took out a cigarette, lit it, took two puffs, the fire flickered, and looked up at the sky.

The people around him all held their hands on the ground and slowly crawled backwards, and they didn't even dare to make a loud sound, it was terrifying!

It's amazing!

It's so exciting!

It's so awesome!

Hong Kong was shocked, the country was shocked, and Yunyi became the king of Hong Kong from then on.

Or, Yun Yi threw out a document and said to the police that I took over the case!

The police officers were shocked, the officers were shocked, the sheriffs were shocked!

The case was broken, Dafeng fell, Hong Kong was shocked, and the country was shocked! Since then, Yunyi has become the king of Hong Kong.

How many chapters are you, why do you write so much?

But do you remember how many people said that the protagonist only relied on his fists to solve problems? Wang Dongdong is like this, the Radio and Television Bureau is like this, and the car accident is like this......

Many times, online writers want to read book reviews, and I want to stick to my writing style and my outline, but can I really ignore the dissatisfaction of readers? After changing the result, a large part of them are not satisfied.

The above is not responded to in the early stage, now let's talk about the last few chapters.

Various theories.

Forcibly open a copy?

Writing romance?

Water?

Can't read what you're writing?

Open a harem? Sentimental? Who is the heroine? Cool text, cool text?

That's basically the point of view.

Someone once commented, ugly, what you write has to have your own characteristics, and what you are good at is delicate descriptions of feelings......

Well, I was wrong, this book friend who evaluated, you are also wrong, I am because I have read too many novels, there is always a shortage of books, and when I open it, I will slap my face, a quick slap in the face, a slap in the face without concealment.

On the way, I met a celebrity who was robbed, I met the president's secretary in the elevator but was despised by the president's fiancé, I went to the bank and robbed the bank, I encountered a hijacking on the plane, I met a waiter when I bought clothes, and the rich second generation despised it!

When you meet your classmates at dinner and are despised, the classmate leaders come to toast.

Class reunion, despised but left in a Lamborghini!

The ubiquitous slap in the face, high force!

I'm sorry, I don't have any opinions on other books, everyone is aimed at different readers, the audience is different, and it is not easy to write these plots, and I used to love reading these books.

It's just that as I get older, the books I read have changed, and since I can't read anymore, I naturally avoid these when I write books.

But the readership is those ones, they are not very old, their ideas are different from mine, and naturally the taste of reading books is also different, and it is normal for you to be dissatisfied.

I've found out I'm wrong, because what I'm writing is too adult-oriented, and the problems between husband and wife seem to many people who haven't thought about it as innocent**. We don't need to understand this, we don't agree with this, we want to be able to be more comfortable after a day of work or study.

It's more that he can't understand it at all, just like the book friend "Shu X" above, he didn't understand it, which can't blame him.

Many book friends have the same problem as him, because the pace of online articles is too fast now, and they generally don't think about it after reading it.

He couldn't see why there was love and what was there to love.

If I write about Mu Lin's experience of all these things, I add the sentence "It's so good to me, there are too few men like this, I seem to be in love with him." ”

If this is the case, maybe he will be able to understand it better, but I really can't do it, everyone's style and thoughts are different, plus this sentence, the romance is too strong, and it is too straightforward.

I have always thought that the relationship between husband and wife is plain and bland, and there are some ups and downs, but after all, it is normal to have a long-lasting love.

Love is so impetuous in this era, it's hard to believe, but in urban literature, love is an unavoidable topic, how to write, how to write well, relying on the accumulation of small things, fast-paced is difficult to resonate.

Each chapter can make people see a living person, can make you better understand the character, the direction of the story, this is what I pictured, I know that the book is not as good as others, but I really want to write what I want.

Many times, I know what I write, but what if the reader can't understand it for the time being?

Let me explain every question, I can't explain it, one explanation is a spoiler, such as the sister-in-law's paragraph is lost like this?

All book friends know that they haven't lost it yet, but after writing it, they don't care about it for the time being, what's the use of that? Do you want to open a copy of officialdom again?

But there may be book friends who can think of something when they see Mu Lin going to check that paragraph, of course, it is too vague, you may not think of it, it is good to think of it, after all, it is a spoiler to think of me.

However, with the fast pace of online articles, many readers pursue that every story must be slapped in the face, and they don't need the connection between stories.

Just like Wang Yanshan, he hasn't been down by the protagonist until now, which is not happy at all. But as soon as the online article is written, it will be a year or two, and in the end, how many previous characters do you remember?

Maybe a lot of people say, what to remember to do? With a new character, wouldn't it be okay to be fucked down again?

That's it, most of the book friends who can read it, I believe that it is similar to my experience and my thoughts, thank you for your support.

Everyone has their own thoughts, and we can't force everyone to think the same.

I just want to portray each character as full-bodied as possible, and there is something to say.

They may be exaggerating, but they are mortal all along.

Whether it's urban literature, romance literature, entertainment literature or whatever, many book lovers' requirements can be found in other books.

There are a lot of entertainment texts now, a lot, and your request is basically the way those books are written. I admire them too, but since I've decided that the style of this book is more restrained, I have to go ahead.

Thank!

Cool girl! Huanning, it's not cold in summer, Agent 571, Liu Jiawen, Emperor Ares, Amin A.

Suegi, Silly, Maitreya, Lewd, Paris, Alliance, Milky Way Splendid.

Lin Digital, I remember you, even if I haven't talked for almost a month, but the ten coins per day tip let me know that you are still there, don't say much, thank you!

A lot of monthly passes, recommended tickets, tips, and supporters, I see your ID every day, without naming names, I can still remember a lot, just remember.

Just like many book friends who silently support but never show up, thank you! (To be continued.) )