Drag, water, abuse the Lord

The state is very poor, for the time being, it's only 2,300 words, I'm sorry everyone! In the evening, I continue to work overtime!

Actually, I haven't read book reviews for a long time, because of my poor psychological quality, and when I read it, I was hit and lost my spirit! There are a lot of ps in front.,I'm a little bit wrong.,I believe careful friends have found out.。 Drifting Astronomy

How to say it, most of the opinions are to shout water, shout drag, and shout abuse of the master! After reading it again, I was bored for another afternoon, I didn't write a word, and I only rushed out such 2,000 words at night, which can be regarded as keeping my full attendance.

Now, I will talk about these three opinions one by one.

Water, under what circumstances will the author say, it's almost the end of the plot, and the subscription is good, and the situation of being reluctant to finish the book will be water! But this article, how long is it, I feel chills when I think about it, such a long story, I doubt that I can finish it, there are countless big things, countless jokes, I really can't deliberately go to the water! If you really let everyone read the water, it can only be described in too detail, and it seems that the priority is not clear, and in addition, a chapter is only 3,000 words, and it is likely that there will be no substance if you can't see it, which is a matter of level, and I have been working hard. Attentive readers can find that the once large-scale environmental descriptions have almost disappeared in the later period, and this is all because I am trying to control and seek innovation and change!

Drag,This and water is about the same meaning.,It's estimated that the level is not enough.,Often a plot.,Written and written.,It's long.,Many small characters also take up too much space.,This,I'll improve it later!

Abused the master, I really didn't find this, but the response in the book review area was the most intense, and one said, can abuse the protagonist of all kinds of hanging to this extent, which is almost a model text of the abuser!

I'm really speechless, isn't Xue Laosan in the article arrogant enough, isn't he domineering enough, when was he really hurt and aggrieved, isn't every time he suppressed to pave the way for a counterattack? If you go all the way up, abuse continues, there are no ups and downs, no loops, this is still cool, is it abuse, I don't know how many frustrations my friends should have suffered in reality, so fragile!

Of course, spending money on reading books is to be cool, to be happy, I can really understand this, improve it later!

In short, this is my first book, skills, writing, and ability to control the overall situation, all of which are very poor, and I have written it until now, subscribing to something, it is very bad, which also truly reflects my level.

I'm like a cook, you are diners, and if you don't eat well, it is naturally my responsibility to be in charge, which is understandable! The key is that there are thousands of diners, and so are the tastes, and I really can't take care of them!

I can only say that I work hard, hone slowly, and improve slowly, and strive to make more people satisfied!

Finally, comrades who have paid for subscriptions, if you are not satisfied, I can only sincerely apologize!

Comrades who read the article for free, if you are not satisfied, I only ask for a new book, new people, don't be too harsh!

I'm here to bow and thank you! (To be continued.) If you like this work, you are welcome to recommend this work as a registered member of 138 Reading Literature, your support is my biggest motivation. )