Chapter 030: Literary Reprocessing
Lin Wan'er made lunch, and then called the three of Dabao to have a meal together in the front hall. Although Chen Xiaoxiao listened to Zhao Gan's explanation and felt that there was still a chance for things to turn around, he didn't come up with any good way to think about it, and he didn't know what it was like to eat a meal.
Lin Wan'er's appetite is very good, and it seems to be three points better than usual.
After dinner, Lin Wan'er washed the dishes and chopsticks, and did not let the three of Dabao go to sleep, but called them all to the front hall, and everyone sat around.
Lin Wan'er saw that everyone had arrived, exhaled a long breath, and first said to the three of Dabao: "The eldest sister was bullied today, and she was bullied very badly. ”
Hearing this, Dabao was a little dazed, could it be that there are people in this world who are better than the eldest sister and can bully the eldest sister? Baoyu and Yubao were excited, and they rolled up their sleeves to settle accounts with the person who bullied the eldest sister.
Lin Wan'er waved her hand, let the three of Dabao be quiet, and said, "Don't get excited. The purpose of our Lin family is that people don't offend me, I don't offend people, if people offend me, I will offend people. So the eldest sister's revenge must be avenged, but the three of you are young and can't help much, but at present, the eldest sister has something to ask you. ”
As soon as the three of Dabao heard that they could help, they were eager to try.
Lin Wan'er continued: "Eldest sister may have to go out these days, so I can't accompany you at home." The thing that the eldest sister begs you is that the three of you should be obedient at home and not cry. Wait for the eldest sister to come back, and buy a rock sugar gourd by herself, okay? ”
The three people who were ready to help just now were gloomy when they heard that the eldest sister was not at home for a few days, and finally Baoyu stood up and said, "Eldest sister, don't worry." We promise not to cry, and I will help take care of Brother Dabao and Yubao. ”
Lin Wan'er touched Baoyu's head and said, "Baoyu is really sensible. ”
The stubborn Baoyu actually took Dabao and Yubao's hands and walked to the back room, which is usually napping time at this time. Baoyu immediately enters the role and takes care of Dabao and Yubao.
Lin Wan'er couldn't help but smile when she looked at the backs of the three of them, then turned her head to Chen Xiaoxiao and said, "Sister, I may borrow your painting boat in the next few days, I don't know if it's possible?" ”
Chen Xiaoxiao was puzzled, but she still fully supported it, and said, "Of course you can, but I don't know what my sister is going to do?" ”
Lin Wan'er said in a resolute tone: "I'm going to rewrite? ”
"Rewrite?!" Chen Xiaoxiao exclaimed, his hands couldn't help waving, as if he had heard the funniest joke in the world, and kept shaking his head, "How is this possible?!" It's been eternal, the poetry is outstanding, the plot twists and turns don't go first, even if the emotions are sincere, the words are exquisite, how can it be rewritten?! ”
Lin Wan'er took Chen Xiaoxiao's hands down and said with a smile: "Sister, don't be so surprised, as long as the writing is better than the original, isn't it?" ”
Chen Xiaoxiao asked uncertainly, "Is it possible?" ”
Zhao Qian opened his mouth at this time: "Maybe, as long as it is Wan'er, it will be fine." ”
Chen Xiaoxiao thought about it, there seems to be nothing in this world that Lin Wan'er can't do, needless to say, these poems seem to be second to none even if they use force.
Chen Xiaoxiao held Lin Wan'er's hands, nodded, and made up her mind: "Sister Wan'er, let's go to the painting boat now, sail the painting boat out of the river, you say, I'll write it." ”
Lin Wan'er also nodded, and then turned around to ask Zhao Gan a few words.
Zhao Gan was the first to speak: "Don't worry, I have the affairs of the family, the third and the fourth, I will pick and choose something to say, Dabao and the three, I will also take care of it." I'll take care of everything else, and I'll take someone to the boat in three days. ”
Lin Wan'er tilted her head and thought about it, and then looked at Zhao Qian from beginning to end, it seemed that there was something she hadn't explained yet, but she couldn't remember anything, and finally led Chen Xiaoxiao to leave the Lin family's courtyard and go to rewrite the boat.
Zhao Qian sat on the seat, looking at the Lin family's courtyard without Lin Wan'er, he always felt that something was missing, he couldn't help but sigh, and was about to clean the Lin family's courtyard like Lin Wan'er, but saw Lin Wan'er rush back in a hurry.
Zhao Qian couldn't help but speak: "What? Reluctant to me, come back and see. ”
Lin Wan'er raised her little foot and kicked at Zhao Gan, but was easily dodged by Zhao Gan.
Lin Wan'er opened her mouth and said, "I said that there was something I didn't tell me, and I remembered it when I walked on the road." ”
Zhao Qian asked confusedly, "What's the matter?" ”
Lin Wan'er stretched out a finger, pointed at Zhao Gan and said viciously: "You are not allowed to talk about ghosts and ghosts to the three of Dabao, you must talk about something healthy and happy, otherwise you will look good." Then he left without looking back.
Lin Wan'er and Chen Xiaoxiao came to the painting boat, and the two lifted the curtain and went in.
Chen Xiaoxiao released the reins of the painting boat, and the entire painting boat left the painting boat street and sailed towards the mouth of the river, and then left a gap on the painting boat street, but no other painting boat seized it, because this is the rule, only if no one comes back after this gap for a month, can other painting boats occupy it. The woman on this painting street is duckweed, and if she doesn't respect each other, then her life is really thinner than paper.
Chen Xiaoxiao's painting boat has a large amount of food and fresh water in stock, so there is no need to worry about the supply of food and fresh water.
Chen Xiaoxiao made up her mind to sail the painting boat out of the river, directly like the sea, now it is winter, the sea breeze is gentle, blowing from the sea to the land, there is no need to worry about the painting boat being blown away by the sea breeze, and it can also create a quiet writing environment for Sister Wan'er. In addition, Chen Xiaoxiao lives on the painting boat and has some ability to steer the boat, and has the confidence to sail the painting boat back to its original position.
This is Lin Wan'er's first time to go to sea, the first time she has been in close contact with the sea, the waves are numerous, the sky is blue, and the white clouds are a little, swaying back and forth in the sky, the place where the sky and the sea are connected is like a long line, and a qiē shows the magnificence.
Lin Wan'er's heart was also shocked, her spirit instantly rose a lot, a smile welled up on the corner of her mouth, and she returned to the cabin.
Chen Xiaoxiao sat in the cabin and had already laid out the paper, the ink had been ground, and the teapot was full of tea, which was not a precious tea but could awaken the mind. Chen Xiaoxiao also burned some spices, and the entire cabin was filled with a faint fragrance.
When Lin Wan'er saw this situation, she couldn't help but laugh, and opened her mouth to ease the atmosphere and said, "Sister, is that so?" ”
Chen Xiaoxiao held the brush in one hand, the tip of the pen was half an inch away from the paper, raised her head and glanced at Lin Wan'er, and replied seriously: "As for, very much." ”
In Lin Wan'er's heart, she has always wanted to reprocess it, not from the writing side, but from the storyline. It shows the concept of goodness like water, the beauty of simplicity, and the pursuit of freedom, and the lyrics are gorgeous and beautiful, and the artistic conception is far-reaching. But before the crossing, Lin Waner felt that the storyline was not twisty and bizarre enough, lacking a legendary romance, focusing more on the feelings contained in some plots, without some coherent emotions from beginning to end, and the freedom of love was ultimately attached to feudal social life. Lin Wan'er will strengthen the twists and turns of the story and end with a tragic comedy, so the story in Lin Wan'er's heart should be like this:
Cui Xiangguo's wife Zheng returned to her hometown with her husband's coffin, but was blocked halfway and was forced to live in the Pufu Temple. The rebel general Sun Feihu heard that Yingying had a world-class appearance, and led an army of 5,000 to kill the Pufu Temple, wanting to rob Yingying as the wife of the village. Zhang Sheng used a strategy to delay the army and wrote a letter to Du Qu for help, and Du Qu's rescue troops arrived in time to repel Sun Feihu.
At the reward banquet, Mrs. Cui asked Zhang Sheng and Cui Yingying to marry Zheng Heng on the grounds that Yingying had promised to marry Zheng Heng, and gave Zhang Sheng a generous gift of gold and silk, so that Zhang Sheng could choose another good mate. The maid and matchmaker knew the intentions of the two and secretly matched, so that Yingying and Zhang Sheng could have a secret tryst. The raw rice was cooked and cooked, and the old lady was helpless, and told Zhang Sheng that if he wanted to marry Miss Yingying, he must go to Beijing to take the exam to gain fame. The two of them said goodbye to the ten-mile long pavilion, and they both cried into tears.
The original version ended here, but Ouyang Tuo gave the ending: Zhang Sheng was in high school, married Yingying, and finally ended with a comedy, which made people sigh. But Lin Wan'er's story has just begun.
Zhang Sheng went to the top of the capital high school and prepared to marry Yingying, but Zheng Heng came to the Pufu Temple again and fabricated a lie that Zhang Sheng had been recruited by Wei Shangshu as the best son-in-law of the East Bed. Yingying was heartbroken and bent on death, in order to influence Yingying, the host of the Pufu Temple took out a medicine that made people fake their death, which can make people fake their death for a period of time, and asked the matchmaker to send a letter to Zhang Sheng. But Yingying was an hour late for taking the medicine, and the matchmaker reported the wrong time again. Zhang Sheng rushed to Yingying's side, Yingying didn't wake up, Zhang Sheng thought Yingying was dead, he was in pain, and committed suicide by neck.
Later, Yingying woke up and saw Zhang Sheng, who was dead, and wanted to die. But he was rescued by the matchmaker who rushed over, and dragged Yingying on the grounds that the young lady was pregnant. Recruited Lang Zhong to check the pulse, and Yingying was really pregnant. Yingying no longer seeks death, but gives birth to Xiao Zhang, but she washes her face with tears all day long. Old Mrs. Cui couldn't bear it when she saw Yingying's haggard expression, but she was afraid that Yingying would be more painful when she saw Zhang Sheng's grave, so she didn't allow Yingying to go out.
One night, Yingying put little Zhang Sheng to sleep, and when she looked up, she saw Zhang Sheng standing in front of her vividly, and unconsciously followed out, and the whole person rose into the air, and her dress fluttered into the distance. Mrs. Cui and the next person rushed out together, only to see the warbler fly to Zhang Sheng's grave, at this time the sky collapsed, the wind and rain were combined, the figure of the warbler was drowned in the wind and rain, the weather was getting clearer on the second day, Zhang Sheng's grave was gone, but there were two butterflies from the original grave to break out of the cocoon, leaning on each other, dancing.
Mrs. Cui handed over Xiao Zhang Sheng to the custody of the matchmaker, and she chanted and worshiped Buddha for Zhang Sheng and Yingying in the ancestral hall every day. The matchmaker often sees a pair of butterflies surrounding Xiao Zhangsheng and refuses to leave for a long time.
The above is Lin Wan'er's, in fact, Lin Wan'er understands in her heart that her book of the West Chamber is just a combination, and in fact it is still plagiarized from the story of her previous life, but now she no longer only writes about love, but also gathers friendship and family affection, the story is more extensible, and the mythology is strong, and turning into a butterfly and flying has become real freedom, no longer bound by any external objects, which is the ultimate dream of every couple.
Of course, Lin Wan'er also made a small number of changes, and after obtaining Chen Xiaoxiao's consent, Cui Yingying was renamed Xiaoxiao, and the matchmaker was changed to the protagonist of a book that Lin Wan'er had read in her previous life: Red Clothes, and the final name of the current book has also become.
Lin Wan'er and Chen Xiaoxiao are on the painting boat, the painting boat is floating on the sea, and there is the sound of the sea breeze around it, but it is the closest to nature and more quiet. In this environment, Lin Wan'er suddenly became cheerful about several things that she hadn't figured out yet, and the whole book was completed quickly, and a lot of processing was done in the promotion and turning points of the storyline.
Lin Wan'er said that Chen Xiaoxiao wrote it for three days.
Every time they write about their feelings, the two of them inevitably shed some tears, and Chen Xiaoxiao is even worse, often crying and laughing while writing. When she heard that Lin Wan'er was going to change the protagonist's name to her own, she couldn't help but be ecstatic; When he wrote about Zhang Sheng's suicide, tears couldn't help but swell upward, wetting his clothes and paper; When writing about the part where the butterfly flies, Chen Xiaoxiao cried and laughed. Especially when writing the last sentence of the full text, Chen Xiaoxiao had mixed feelings, and couldn't help it, and put the pen down three times before writing that sentence: "May there be ** in the world and eventually become a family."
Lin Wan'er is relatively better, she doesn't have to work hard to write, and when Chen Xiaoxiao is resting, she often stands on the head of the cabin of the painting boat, looking far away, there is a blue sea in front of her, and the other side of the sea is still the sea, it seems that she can see through the past life and the present life, and see through the red world, so she must keep looking and work hard to see.
On the last night, when the book was written, both of them breathed a sigh of relief, just waiting for tomorrow to sort out and correct it, and they could go back tomorrow night.
After three busy days, both of them were very tired, but they were so excited that they couldn't sleep peacefully, and the three or four pieces of soothing incense didn't work. So the two of them came out hand in hand, sat side by side on the top of the cabin, and looked up at the stars. There is also starlight in the city, but it is polluted by the hustle and bustle of the world, and is troubled by the shortcomings of parents, which is not as bright as the stars on the sea.
Chen Xiaoxiao had never felt so calm, and said, "Sister Wan'er, what are you thinking?" ”
Lin Wan'er smiled slightly, lay on her back on the cabin, pillowed her head on her arm and said, "I didn't think about anything, what about you?" ”
Chen Xiaoxiao pointed to the stars in the sky and said with emotion: "I didn't think about anything, just looked at the stars, in my eyes, the stars symbolize freedom, love, and purity, like the love between Yingying and Zhang Sheng." Sister Wan'er, what does this star symbolize in your eyes? ”
Lin Wan'er said very sadly: "It's like silver, twinkle and shiny, and the sky is full of small stars." ”
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