Wonderful Book Review: [Constructive Comments]

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Qingyi chasing the wind: I don't know what kind of future the author intends to design for the protagonist, but there are almost two directions, one is the brainless YY stream that is now all over the street, write two books and earn an annual salary of one million, college can't be idle, pretending to be a slap in the face Needless to say, and then it is to adapt a novel to make a movie as a director, invest in online real estate, and have a net worth of more than 10 million easily, and after a hundred chapters, it is only 20 years old that the net worth is over 100 million, at this time the author's brain hole may have gone to heaven, and these ridiculous brains can no longer stop, The second generation of brain-dead officials should be on the field, the speed of making money is faster than the money printing machine, and when the book is finished, there is no net worth of tens of billions and no friends is the second generation of red, it is simply unscientific, many book friends I said above are very familiar with it, now more than 9 percent of online urban novels are such a routine, and the other direction is the life and career of the reasonable yy protagonist, the author may not know the details of Ma Yun's thoughts, life and career, but the fate of a writer's career and a divine book should be clear, The brain-dead yy protagonist writes a book and is worth millions, and it is real estate and invests in Baidu Taobao, and it is ridiculous to think about it, on the contrary, when the protagonist works hard to accumulate a chapter and a book, readers, and strive from nothing to an annual salary of 200,000 and an annual salary of 500,000 and an annual salary of one million, from nothing to having his own bookstore, an Internet café, a coffee shop, a restaurant, from having to work hard to make money to support his parents to having enough money to enjoy life, enjoy the sunshine, enjoy coffee, steak, presidential suite, Isn't that a life successful enough? With such a little effort, a little bit of fame, money and career, are you still afraid that your readers will feel dissatisfied and unhappy? When your readers just want to pass the time, but because the book follows the protagonist to enjoy life, love, and success in life, will they still leave you? I wonder what are those people who rack their brains to make the protagonist desperately earn tens of billions for? What exactly do those who read these novels get from it? The meaning of a web novel is to make his readers feel happy and happy in a simple reading! There are a lot of rebirth novels now, but almost none of those novels satisfy me, why? You can think about why you want to be reborn, when I was 5 years old I wish I could have countless ice cream to eat, then I went to dig up and sell money to buy ice cream, when I was 10 years old, I hoped that I was strong and strong not to be bullied by others, so I went to work hard to find martial arts cheats all over the world, when I was 18 years old, I hoped to be in the best school, find the most beautiful and cute school flower to go to a café to drink coffee, go to a five-star hotel to open a presidential suite to sleep, So before that, I will work hard to make money and try to make myself handsome, when you see the protagonist working hard for a small goal and the goal is achieved, will you feel happy and happy, or will you see the protagonist intrigue with people and make millions more, and then in order to earn another tens of millions, you will be happy to play with people! It seems to me that there are only those that are known for! Refreshing! Based on, to! Reasonable YY! As the backbone, the goal is to make readers feel happy and happy, and it is the real online literature! If you are unhappy, it is not enough for readers to stay, if it is unreasonable, it is not enough to move people's hearts, and if you can't make readers feel happy in fast reading, it is not worthy of being called online literature. I just don't want this book with a fresh smell that seems to me to be not much in a million novels to be obscure.

Mud White Buddha: The second one, it's amazing!

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