I ate tomatoes and didn't expect Tong Yan Wuji to pass his friend application so quickly, do you want to talk to him? The shy ketchup hesitated.

Tong Yan saw that the tomatoes didn't speak, and he was happy to continue to get tired of Song Rao.

Song Rao: Did you miss me?

Tong Yan: Yes.

Song Rao: How much do you want to?

Tong Yan: I really want to.

Song Rao: Count your mouth sweet.

Tong Yan: Where do you surf the Internet, do you know that girls don't go to Internet cafes at night?

Song Rao: I know, I'm at my aunt's house, so where are you? Boys can't go to Internet cafes at night.

Tong Yan: I'm at my cousin's house, and he has a computer here.

The two of them chatted about very unnutritious topics, but they both enjoyed themselves, and these back-and-forth conversations were also part of their love life, and they were an important way to get acquainted with each other and get to know each other better.

Although they were impulsive and determined the relationship, their understanding of each other was actually very limited, and they really began to get acquainted with each other in the past six months, when they were in the first year of high school, Tong Yan's impression of Song Rao was limited to "Lao Song's daughter is really beautiful, but she doesn't study very brightly" This kind of emotion, and Song Rao's perception of Tong Yan is "handsome and good at studying, you still don't let me live, little friend", at that time, Lao Song often used Tong Yan as an example to count Song Rao, so Song Rao was still a little unhappy with Tong Yan's junior brother.

The relationship is really wonderful, neither of them thought that half a year ago they were not very familiar with each other, and there was only one Lao Song as a link between the two people, but now it is an intimate relationship that can directly hold hands, and they no longer need anyone to be their bond.

Thinking of Song Rao's smile, Tong Yan's heart was hot, this is the age of hormones, young men and women without lovers will still have a lot of charming fantasies, not to mention Tong Yan, a person who obviously has a girlfriend like a flower, his fantasy is more real and concrete, sometimes he can't wait to immediately kill back to Yangping and hug Song Rao into his arms.

"Dididi!"

After Song Rao went offline, my avatar of eating tomatoes finally flashed, he played in the Internet café for a while, and finally mustered up the courage to say hello to Tong Yan Wuji before leaving, and sent a "Hello" QQ emoji.

Tong Yan Wuji: Hello tomatoes, why didn't Xingfeng write it?

Tong Yan Wuji asked me straight to the point about eating tomatoes about my work, and the shy tomatoes finally knew what to say, and the topic of the two began.

I eat tomatoes: I'm still writing, and now I'm at home, and it's not convenient to go online, so I go to the Internet café once a week to update, and I'm in the Internet café now.

Tong Yan Wuji: You're a student, right?

I eat tomatoes: Well, just got to college, what about you?

Tong Yan Wuji: I'm also a student, so we're pretty much the same.

Of course, it's a lot worse, a high school student, a college student, but Tong Yan doesn't want to say it, so he doesn't have to make a fuss.

I eat tomatoes: it's too much, you're already famous, and I'm still struggling.

In Tomato's eyes, Tong Yan's novel can rank more than 20 on the monthly ticket list, which is definitely a success.

Tong Yan Wuji: What, don't you want to write?

I eat tomatoes: No, I like to write novels, I don't know what to do after class without writing novels, it's just that the grades of this book are too poor, I may reopen a book, in fact, I am already preparing, Xingfeng is equivalent to a prequel, the story I am conceiving is the text, I think it will be more exciting.

Tong Yan Wuji: Are you willing to tell this story?

Asking this kind of thing, in fact, Tong Yan's position is untenable, because he himself once wrote a novel by a ruthless eunuch, and the results of that book are many times better than the current "Legend of Xingfeng".

I eat tomatoes: The story of "The Legend of Xingfeng" was thought of when I was in my junior year of high school, when I didn't have the time and energy, I recorded it in a notebook, and I had the opportunity to publish it on the Internet when I got to college.

Tong Yan Wuji: Have you ever thought about changing the first-person narrative to the third person, the first-person narrative has too many limitations, especially the grand narrative, and it is difficult to create a cool point from a single perspective.

I eat tomatoes: how to change this, I have already written three volumes.

In fact, I have already received this advice on eating tomatoes, but he didn't listen to it, when he first started creating, he pursued a sense of substitution, thinking that using the first person would give himself and the reader a sense of coolness like the protagonist, but after writing it, I found that the first person was too restrictive, and Yan zhòng limited his play, and later he realized that the reason for the poor performance of the novel was that the first person discouraged many readers, but at this time it was too late to correct it.

Tong Yan Wuji: Don't change the previous one, change it from the fourth volume, and tell the readers, I think they will understand, I guess, your readers must also look at the first person awkward, if you change it, maybe they will feel comfortable.

I eat tomatoes: But after all, I've written so much, and suddenly I changed my name, which is too unusual.

Tong Yan Wuji: In the era of online reading, no one accounts so much, of course, this is just my opinion, I think it may be better to change the name to the third person in time, you can make your own ideas.

I eat tomatoes: Anyway, thank you for these constructions, no other writer has ever told me about this before.

Tong Yan Wuji: Don't you know other fellow writers?

I eat tomatoes: I know you as one.

Tong Yan Wuji: Acquaintance is fate, when your novel is signed, I will give you a chapter push, after all, I have more than 20,000 readers now.

I eat tomatoes: 20,000 ah, that's amazing! However, your novel is really good-looking, especially the design of the upgrade system is great, layered on top of each other, and the cool points are constant.

At this time, there is no such thing as an upgrade stream, and Tong Yan's setting in "Rage Thunder" is just a reference to the concept of cultivation and upgrading in Xiuzhen novels such as "Ethereal Journey", and divides the strength of the characters into levels that are easy for readers to understand, but he really didn't expect that the coolness brought by the upgrade would be so admired by me eating tomatoes.

Tong Yan Wuji: Is it really that cool?

I eat tomatoes: it could actually be more refreshing.

Tong Yan Wuji: Oh? Let's hear it.

Next, I ate tomatoes and briefly expounded his views on the upgrade of strength, at this time his idea was not mature, but he simply felt that the upgrade of strength was the main factor in the promotion of the plot of the novel, and mixed with other love and hatred, would the novel written in this way be good.

Tong Yan doesn't quite agree with this idea: I eat tomatoes.

I eat tomatoes: just call me tomatoes.

Tong Yan Wuji: Tomato, novels are still the art of storytelling after all, and the plot is a digital level of strength appendage, can this be good? Wouldn't it be too boring?

I eat tomatoes in front of Tong Yan Wuji after all, just a small street, Tong Yan Wuji said that he is not optimistic, he will not defend anything, but he is a very creative person, this is very similar to Tong Yan, not someone can change his mind with a few words, he decided to try his own ideas in the future.

After that, Tong Yan Wuji and I ate tomatoes and chatted for a while, in addition to not being optimistic about his so-called upgraded writing, Tong Yan Wuji is not bad, tomatoes have begun to shout out Brother Wuji, in his opinion, Tong Yan Wuji's first novel is so mature and successful, how can he be more age and experience than him, a freshman.

And Tong Yan, a stinky and shameless person, also shamelessly accepted an 87-year-old little fat man to become his tomato brother......

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