Ni Kuang helped Jin Yong write "Tianlong Babu" during his exchange abroad, ensuring that the serialization in Ming Pao was not interrupted, although he blinded Ah Zi's eyes by his own initiative, but he was later rescued by Jin Daxia's hand of Guò Xuzhu, this behind-the-scenes story is also passed on as a good story in the literary world, but Tomato is dissatisfied, "Why do you compare yourself to Jin Yong, but I have become Ni Kuang, damaging me!" ”

"Brother Eggplant, of course I didn't mean that, what I want to say is, mine, can continue to write, you have this ability in this world, this is a great compliment!"

"Are you really relieved to let me write it?" Tomato said uncertainly, this kind of thing has hardly happened in the online literature circle, especially among the gods.

"You can write without worry, I won't read it after writing, you can just upload it directly," Tong Yan expressed his absolute trust, "Of course, you have to write according to my outline, and you can't deviate." ”

"That, that's it, I'll try it, you continue to be sentimental."

Tong Yan turned on the computer, opened the monstrous text folder, and let Tomato study how to write by himself, "I'll sleep first, you're busy, I'll treat you to a big dinner tomorrow." ”

With the current value of tomatoes, a thousand words must be more than 1,000 yuan, and helping Tong Yan write a chapter of 3,000 words is a few thousand yuan, and this lover Tong Yan can only pay it back by inviting guests to dinner.

At first, there may be diǎn resistance, but now Tomato is also eager to try, this is the first time in his creative career, there is a small expectation of diǎn, looking forward to writing a chapter, immediately a childlike reader came out to applaud, saying that this chapter is better than before, and it feels cool to think about it.

In order to write as little as stiff as possible, Tomato read the first ten chapters of the monstrous world again, and then he started to do it.

Now that the plot is developing, Jian Liushuang has obtained a body from her original world and returned to the main speaker Nie Tian. And the little princess Yi Shuilan also completely regained the body that had been occupied by Jian Liushuang, and also was by Nie Tian's side, although Nie Tian loved Jian Liushuang's soul, but it was indeed Yi Shuilan's body that had a relationship with him at the beginning, and Yi Shuilan's body was still used by Jian Liushuang at that time, and Yi Shuilan gradually felt for Nie Tian.

Tong Yan Wuji has identified that there are two heroines in this book. This is his first time, because she has used too much pen and ink for the two heroines, and no one can give it up, and the reader is even more for the two (5) dǐng (5) diǎn (5) small (5) said, .2∨3.o↗s_ (); The heroine is split into two evenly matched camps, and if you give up one of them, I'm afraid half of the readers will rebel, anyway, this is not reality, and it is not illegal to marry two wives, and in these two heroines. Tong Yan poured his love for An Luwei and Jing Yan, although in reality it has been separated, but he hopes to be fulfilling, he used to watch movies and TV series, he hated the kind of drama that was not a happy ending, and he didn't want to become the person he once hated.

However, in order to win with the plot, and in order to avoid the attacks of the Pure Love Guardian Daoists, Tong Yan did not until near the end. The pattern of two heroines was determined, in order to allow the two heroines to be accepted by each other's fan groups. In addition to promoting the plot during this time, Tong Yan spent most of his pen and ink on the emotional interaction between the two heroines and the male protagonist, so as to enhance the favorability of the two heroines.

And one of the great characteristics of Tomato's works is that the emotional drama is simple, he basically takes the upgrading of the male protagonist and fights the monster as the main line, and the emotional drama is just a condiment that cannot be less, and its weight is even inferior to brotherhood. This is the characteristic of tomatoes, and it is also the result of helplessness, in fact, he really wants to write emotional dramas, but every time he writes emotional dramas, he always receives countless complaints and readers' protests. Compared with the upgraded plot, the emotional dramas he wrote are too scummy, so in Tomato's follow-up works, there will be fewer and fewer emotional dramas.

This diǎn is different from Tong Yan Wuji's works, "Emperor Immortal" can actually be seen as the emperor and the immortal falling in love, although "Monstrous" is set in the vast Xuantian Nine Seas, but the two heroines are also very scene-stealing, especially at this stage, there are many emotional dramas, Tomato read the first ten chapters, and I think it is impossible to portray the two heroines as vividly as Wuji, and it does not affect the promotion of the plot.

Tomato doesn't think it's because his skills are not as good as Wuji, he attributes this to the fact that Tong Yan Wuji talks a lot about love, and has an in-depth understanding of all kinds of girls, and he only has Xiao Jiu, and it's basically an online dating, so it's reasonable to think about it, he shouldn't use his shortcomings to compare with Wuji's strengths.

So Tomato spent a lot of money on a battle against the male protagonist Nie Tian, so that he played a full chapter, in this chapter, the two heroines didn't even have a chance to appear in the amazement of passers-by, and they were completely marginalized, because of this treatment, Wuji's style of online text immediately showed the style of Tomato.

Tomato attaches great importance to the chapter he wrote for Wuji, he read this chapter together with the previous one, and found that the use of text in this chapter is not as exquisite as the previous one, the frequency of the same word is relatively high, unlike Tongyan Wuji, even if it is the same meaning, he will use different words to distinguish small differences, which is not really necessary for the Internet, readers will not read so carefully, but if it is a physical publication, there is no doubt that Mowgli has more reading and collection value.

In the past, although Tomato also read Tong Yan Wuji, he had always read it roughly, and watched wonderful stories, but today, he studied Tong Yan Wuji almost paragraph by paragraph, and saw the gap between him and Tong Yan from a simple vocabulary, after some truths were understood, he began to be dissatisfied with the chapters he wrote, so he revised them over and over again, and each word was polished, and three hours later, this 3000-word chapter was uploaded to Tong Yan's author background by Tomato, And at this time, it was almost twelve diǎn in the evening.

Tomato is not sleepy, he continued the plot just now, and began to write again, this time he didn't stop the two heroines again, and finally let them appear, according to Tong Yan's outline, the two heroines are going to break their wrists again, women's struggle, this is not what Tomato is good at, but he still insists on writing, he doesn't believe in this evil, why is every heroine of Mowgli remembered by readers, and his even male protagonists will soon be forgotten by readers.

When Tong Yan woke up the next day, Tomato had already finished writing two more chapters, he wrote more carefully and seriously than his own, and he also had more experience in character building and emotional portrayal, Tong Yan didn't expect his buddy to be so powerful, "I still don't read these two chapters, you can publish them directly today, by the way, did the readers of that chapter yesterday have any reaction?" Tong Yan asked curiously.

(To be continued.) )