Ma Zhen's creative talent is not very good, his advantage is that he was born in a police family, has been exposed to many criminal cases since he was a child, and he himself is a good case solver, he can point to the essence of the case through the clues of the crime scene, and is well versed in criminal psychology, but this does not mean that he can write a wonderful suspense crime novel.

Fortunately, Ma Zhen knows Tong Yan, and has been very modest to learn from Tong Yan, this time he came to Tong Yan, and also carried a USB flash drive with the manuscript, Ma Zhen told Tong Yan about his novel concept, this book is called "Little Detective", which directly refers to the detective complex of many boys, about a teenager who came out of the juvenile detention center, he once committed a crime, and now he is a crime buster, and then he has solved several cases in a book, and is famous in a high school.

Ma Zhen's conception of this book is very complete, the protagonist's family background and psychology are very rich, the next day Tong Yan spent one day to read the manuscript of "Little Detective", he first objected to the title of the book, the male protagonists are seventeen or eighteen years old, and they are still little detectives, it is easy for readers to mistake them for Conan, and the male protagonist is a growth type, Ma Zhen is expected to write a long story, write a series, the male protagonist will definitely grow up in the future, and then will he change his name, called the Great Detective, the Old Detective.

Tong Yan saw that the male protagonist's surname was Zhu, a hot girl surnamed Ge who was suspected of being a heroine, the two were small, they worked together to solve the case, and they were ridiculed as Zhuge Liang was alive, so Tong Yan wrote later, suggesting that the title of the book be changed to "Zhuge Detective" or "Zhuge Detective" and other titles, he got inspiration from Zhuge Garfei, the surname Zhuge is synonymous with wisdom and intelligence in China, with this kind of title, it is easier to attract readers' desire to buy and read, Tong Yan's advertising and communication is not in vain.

Then Tong Yan put forward his own suggestions from several aspects such as the narrative structure, word style, and character building of the novel. In the end, he had a bit of a headache, did he write a little too much, and criticized other people's names for being bad, this is not equivalent to telling Lao Ma, your book is useless, let's rewrite it again. Not to mention, if it is really changed according to what Tong Yan said, the workload is no less than rewriting.

So Tong Yan told Ma Zhen on the Internet that his book is still very good, several cases are very exciting, and if it is submitted to a publishing house, there is also a chance to publish it, but if you want the novel to sell well, there are still many changes that need to be made. Only then did he propose his own amendments.

Fortunately, Ma Zhen was mentally prepared, he knew that a good novel was not so easy to refine, Tong Yan's suggestions seemed to him to be good words, which could help his works become more perfect, especially Tong Yan said: If you really want to write this story as your "Sherlock Holmes", you must ensure that the protagonist can make a deep impression, stand up the character, and make him a typical. Just like we don't know what cases Holmes has solved, and what outstanding deeds Di Renjie has. But when we think of them, the word detective will pop up in our minds, and after this image is erected, the follow-up series of stories will be better written.

Ma Zhen is still revising the manuscript, Tong Yan is still writing the manuscript, and he also found that the starting point is on the monthly ticket list. The gap between "Monstrous" and "Panlong" is narrowing.

Since the adaptation of the game "Star Change" and the Star Change Homo Contest were held, Tomato and Red Alliance are very bloody, and it is already difficult for "Monstrous" to return to the first place, the gap has been around 2,000 votes, and Tong Yan almost has no hope of winning the Zhou crown in the new book period. But now he found that the gap between the monthly tickets of the two books has narrowed to less than 1,500 votes. Tong Yan thought of this almost immediately, because he had a criminal record, but later he found that the gap between "Monstrous" and "Demon Law" had not been widened, and now the problem is not with him.

Later, Tong Yan learned that it was the tomato that was broken, it had been broken for two days, and it would be broken, and he read his single chapter to know that from the first day of the new year, he will rest for five or six days, and wait for the first day of the next month to re-update, during this time he will accompany his family for the New Year.

It's the New Year, it's time to rest, this is human nature, most of the work is like this, but online novels have their particularities, readers don't rest for a day, they will hope that the author will never rest, so the Tang family Sanshao has always been very satisfied, he didn't break the update when he got married, but the speed of the tomato code word can't catch up with the three less, plus the self-discipline is also slightly inferior, he decisively chose to accompany his family for the New Year, anyway, he is so far ahead, he still has a great chance of winning.

The readers of the Red League have a lot of understanding tomatoes, but more of them are unhappy, "Panlong" is a rhythm and cool text, and it has recently been a wave of high' tide, for readers who like him, this is too tormenting, so readers vent their dissatisfaction in the book review area, and even express their dissatisfaction in other people's book review areas, and the monthly ticket is naturally sharply reduced, which makes "Monstrous" see the hope of surpassing.

But at this time, Tong Yan didn't think about whether to break out more than "Panlong", he wouldn't stop updating, because this was his promise to the readers who supported him, and he had to do it when he said it, what he was thinking at this time was that he didn't go home for the New Year, his parents and sister should miss him very much, compared with the Gu family of tomatoes, he has always been known as the Gu family, and he has not done enough.

"If you want to go back, go back, I've thrown away my crutches now, and I can take care of myself, what else do you have to worry about." Jing Yan has already seen Tong Yan's thoughts, he is a person who can't hide what is in his heart, and his thoughts about home are written on his face.

Tong Yan pinched Jing Yan's calf: "It's really no problem, if you don't let Senior Sister Tianmiao accompany you, she won't have to go to work anyway." ”

"It's okay, I'm okay alone, the food and books at home are enough for me to live for a long time, as long as you come back on time."

"Then I'll go back for two days to pay New Year's greetings to my relatives, and we will spend the Lantern Festival together." Tong Yan kissed Jing Yan gently on the forehead.

Jing Yan felt very happy, but also a little lost, she had already said that her leg was almost better, so she didn't say take me back this time.

Tong Yan went back by plane, and when he arrived in the capital, he didn't visit his friends, so he directly rented a taxi and sent him to Yangping, and at this time even the long-distance bus was not open.

Tong Yan happily went home, but he didn't expect that in the few hours when he was off the Internet, Sanshao and Tomato had already killed the red eye, to be precise, it should be the people of the Red League and the Tang Sect who pinched it, as for whether the two gods had behind-the-scenes control, it is unknown, the raging war burned from the book review area and Tieba of Douluo Panlong's two books to Longkong, and even the monstrous book review area was talking about this matter, the most difficult thing was the Tong League, both sides were comrades-in-arms, who should this help...... (To be continued......)

PS: Third update