Recently, the frequency of updates is almost the same as that of broken roots······

Well, heavy schoolwork is the best excuse to be a student writer, and that's where I've been lately. It's not that there is no free time, but sometimes even if you complete your homework, after a week of flipping through the school database, you finally finish an article, the last thing you want to do in this world is to continue to code words...

In short, thank you to those students who refresh first thing every day, and those who silently wait for each update.

I said it two years ago.,Writing the same people is not about money.,It's just a hobby.。 If somebody sees it, thank goodness, if there's feedback, it's great. I never thought that I could have 5600+, and now the collection can still rise under the flat rate of the two weeks and Mondays. It's been off for half a year, and the collection hasn't been lost.

I can only conclude about this———— strength!

Ahem, in short, what I want to say is that slow is slow, but eunuchs are unlikely, and students who have doubts in this regard can dispel them.

The overall progress has grown to 70%, and I will not forgive myself if I go in at this time.

But there's a downside to the new slow———— it's two weeks without a yard, it's easy for you to forget the rhythm of the previous chapter, it's easy to feel cold, and the first line of words is typed out to look awkward, and you can't pick up the play. So it's code.,Delete.,Yard again.,Bite your finger.,Delete it again.,Flip through the first few of yourself.,It took two hours to find the context of the previous chapter (during which I found about 20 typos.,Suddenly the whole person didn't want to be good.。 ), gradually returning to the state before the undertaking······

Sometimes I really think that those who can code 100,000 words a day are some kind of monsters!? Millions of words of fiction will be coded in a month.,Regardless of the quality.,Why don't you press my face on the keyboard and rub it irregularly, and you can't type 100,000 garbled characters!! There's definitely a ghostwriter for that, right?!

Off topic,Chrysanthemum hasn't read an online novel for too long.,Two years ago, when I was still doing business.,I was bored and wanted to pass the time.,So I put an estimated twenty of the hottest online articles on the Internet and put them in my mobile phone.,I hope to get back to my high school days and use mp4 to hide in the quilt and read novels.。 (Older people should understand!) The result is ———— root (special)! Ben (Mo)! Look at (what)! No! Enter (play)! Go (Meaning)!!

On the one hand, the reason is that I have grown.

I am no longer the handsome 16-year-old immature daisy that was ready to be let go and still rested, with vigor and ignorance in his youth, and only showed his sharp corners when he understood the little lotus.

Now this chrysanthemum exudes masculine beauty, has a girlfriend, has good memories, and there are unbearable memories of the past; I've smoked, quit, broke up, started smoking again, and now I'm meeting my girlfriend to quit smoking (my sister is also a smoker... ）。 I've dealt with social people, good, bad, weird. Some are like "living" people, who make people want to make friends with him, and some are rotten people who want to erase this memory with a hammer after a few days of getting along. Chrysanthemum gradually learned the skills of dealing with all kinds of people, (in the process of the chrysanthemum's diameter gradually expanded...) The more I understand others, and the less I understand what people are.

The most important reason why Chrysanthemum can't stand the online article ———— the characters in it don't look like "people" at all.

Some of them are due to the lack of pen power, and the author is not to blame.

But some, or most, (and then a little desperate) the author doesn't even try to describe a "person." It's all those... How so······

Women are not what they write about, what iceberg beauty is the widow next door, the rich lady is a small jasper, and the female characters in these articles are just inflatable dolls of different models. The middle is hollow, and the slightly more advanced ones have a pre-set, voice system that can be emitted when necessary. "Senior brother." "Hmm." "Stop." "Don't." and so on. The personality is adjustable, the tone is optional, and the product is made sincerely.

This is not the case with women (girls).

Women will check their skin in the mirror in the morning, and the mood will be the same for two days, and when the day is not right for you but you want, you will not "blush and tell you that people are here today in a thin voice". It's going to get mad, it's going to hurt, it's going to avoid you, and you're going to blow up if you don't know anyone.

Forget it, I won't go into detail about this kind of topic, anyway, everyone understands what I mean. I don't know how many students have watched "Paradise Lost", from beginning to end, just one man and one woman, enough. (That's a good one!) When I was a child, I didn't know the goods, so I secretly came out of the old bean bookshelf and read it all as a ******. Later, I found that the small huang disc was more interesting, so I randomly discarded it. At the age of sixteen or seventeen, it is the age to pretend to be B. So I forced myself to read it again, it was boring, slightly better than Dream of Red Mansions. At this age, the blooming chrysanthemums can finally read something from this book. This old pervert is so well written. Anyway, after waiting another thirty years, I should be able to understand a hundred years of loneliness······ ）

Junichi Watanabe is the author of two other popular science books, "This Thing for Men" and "This Thing for Women". "I see!" And the rest of the mouth. I think it's good and funny, men are cowardly and bad, women are fine and bad, in short, they are not good things, but they are all cute.

Thinking about it at this point, maybe I'm asking too much?

If any "great god" in the online article can show the wonderful "cuteness" of the opposite sex, Mr. Mo Yan is afraid that he will not be able to go to Sweden for a spin when he dies.

But at least let's not give up!!

Can you watch the girls in the online article now?! Yes?! Yes?! Yes?! Yes?!

Are they still human?!!

Bai Jie's character development must be stronger than 100,000 streets! (Anyway, why is the writing of the writer so good?!) And why is the quality of the quality of the product on the cao durian so high that I don't know where it goes?!! It's really weird!! ———— master of sexology, Chrysanthemum dried up her tears, was speechless, and asked the sky with her back on her back. ）

Straight to the point.

Due to the irreversible blooming of chrysanthemums themselves, the experience is becoming richer and richer, resulting in the online articles that I read very high when I was a child, and now I read the same taste as chewing wax. This is one of them.

Second, the gradual maturity of online writers.

As mentioned many times before, just like the declining anime industry in Japan, the online literature industry has gradually found a "mature" model, the most "efficient" story framework, and the most "popular" character model.

100,000 words a day is not a dream, as long as you dare to irrigate, as long as you dare to watch three times a day, even a piece of can rush to the top of the list.

This is an era of vigorous development of online literature, combined with online games, mobile games, and web games.

This is an era of punching and killing the old master.

It's the best of times, it's the worst of times.

Chrysanthemum was suddenly stunned when I wrote this, because I had digressed for 100,000 light years, and I wanted to moan again.

So, the reason why I wrote this essay is because I was ready to pick up the context of the previous chapter after a two-week break, and it happened to be a vacation, so I started to review it from the essay.

In the end, I came to the amazing conclusion that this book is really good————

Ahem... Forget it, you can't be poorer anymore, let's get to the point.

I found out in the essay that I had made a promise to talk to you about Da Ming and Xiao Ming in my eyes, and it has been more than a year now······

Okay, today's theme is Attack on Titan!

(After a year, there may be omissions in my memory, please bear with me.) ）

(ps. Anyway, doesn't anyone think "Attack on Titan" is grammatically wrong?) ）

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I used to compare giants to greatswords, because the first image of giants gave me was very similar to greatswords. Man-eating monsters, human beings who are powerless to resist, the protagonist's tragic past, hatred for the sky, etc., etc., etc. (And the super high mortality rate of supporting characters.) The difference is that the main character here is a hot-blooded teenager.

But now my perspective has changed, and the film is more like Tokyo Ghoul

(Anyway, please skip this paragraph.) ）

The giant's first words had a very good impression on me, and there was a kind of "Damn, I met Lao Tzu again once in ten years!" "Feelings. The structure is very rigorous, and the conflict is explained very well, leaving all kinds of clues and mysteries that hang the audience's appetite. The opening five seconds is the climax, don't talk nonsense with you, after the climax, it's the op of 10,000 young people with machetes flying in the sky. Then he tells the audience about the importance of this wall, on which everyone's lives are sacrificed, and tells you how strong this thing is, how many years it has resisted the giant, but then it is kicked by the giant. Then, the most exciting, the protagonist's wife was chewed by a giant with a perverted smile in front of him, Hiroyuki Sawano's signature goosebump-making BGM sounded, the protagonist was completely furious, and in the last scene, he gritted his teeth and tears in front of the audience and friends in front of the TV, and vowed to kill all the giants. ed。

Perfect.

There are so many twists and conflicts in just 20 minutes, pushing the protagonist into a desperate situation of "do it or die".

A. has enough impact to make the characters move at once, triggering, motivating, breaking the tranquility, and breaking the normal.

B. Be able to arouse the attention and expectation of the audience.

C. can cause a series of chain reactions, like dogunoes.

E. It stimulates the imagination of the audience.

This is the definition of "important event" in the script.

(Nonsense, students who plan to start writing can go online to see the elements of the story, the structure of the script, and the arrangement of the transition.) Even if you don't write it, it's interesting to look at it. Some people may think beyond this era, thinking that these rules and regulations are only suitable for eight-strand texts, ideas, and "ideas" are enough. But these are the summaries of the art of storytelling that have been done by humans for thousands of years. In this framework, show your idea, if it is still not good-looking, it can only mean that the author's pen power is still at the level of the first grade of primary school. But... Seemingly... Many authors are completely unaware of these ······ ）

The giant did it, and it was almost perfect in the first word, so much so that it really gave me too high expectations.

But as the saying goes, the extreme must be opposed, and the shortcomings it shows later are as unbearable as ink droplets on white paper and a bright flashlight in the dark.

From the third episode, it shows a 26-episode anime that shouldn't have a sluggish rhythm at all, and it has intensified since then, and the plot is even monotonous to an incredible degree at times. Whenever there is always a chief or something with a black face, with an expression like a dead wife, he roars to boost his momentum. The recruits were so fooled that they were all frightened and blackened, and their lives seemed to be short.

Everyone, except Mikasa, is special, and they all look like they're going to die!

Whenever they met a giant, everyone either stood there trembling and posed as if they were going to die, or knelt down and looked like they were going to die with tears in their eyes, or they flew over with a scream and at the same time put on a look like Lao Tzu was about to die.

I know it's a problem with the style of the original.

But the author himself really can't do it in terms of painting, which is also obvious to all.,This can be completely made up for in animation? It's really hurtful to have a black line on your face every now and then! It's a lot of drama! Whether it's expressing shock, fear, despair, sadness, embarrassment, in short, as long as it's a negative emotion, it's so dark that it looks like it's going to die, and it doesn't make people take the role seriously at all! Am I the only one who cares?!

Whew········

The second point is that as the protagonist, Alan is really unlikeable.

It's not really a big deal, many of the protagonists are actually used as observation dots, using his perspective to explain the world to the audience, the events around them, and a number of charismatic supporting characters, and it doesn't matter if they have a sense of weakness, as long as they don't hate it.

Pity.

Allen's sense of existence is super strong, and he looks like he is going to die every minute, so he almost writes the word bitter master on the door of his head.

And... This bear child sometimes... Really... It's disgusting.

Mikasa's sister is also blind and follows him with all her heart.

Finally, as the last of the three protagonists, the blonde chick.

I forgot the name, it's that and that... The girl who landed on his knees as his ultimate answer to the world, ah no, it looks like a man?

The giants came, kneeling.

The giant walked and knelt down.

Danger, get on your knees.

Saved, get on your knees.

My best friend since childhood, was held in the mouth by the giant in front of his eyes and was about to be swallowed, and his hand was already stretched out in front of his eyes, whether he could pull it out or not, we had to try, right? Ay! Not really! He chose to kneel, looked at his man with teary eyes, and used all his strength!

Pose like you're going to die!

All of the film's characters (except Mikasa) are in a state of madness all the time, and they react to any event in such a drastic way that every shot is as dramatic as possible, expressing emotions through hoarse howls and dead faces. It's hard to still like any of them.

Mikasa isn't a brilliant character, and neither is the commander. If you want to say why these two people are popular, it is simply because Liao Hua, the general of Shuzhong, is a pioneer.

The problem then escalated, eventually leading to the question ———— I enjoyed the giants eating people in a variety of strange ways than humans working together to kill them.

It's not me that's wrong, it's the world.

One last point.

Transfiguration.

It's a matter of personal taste.

What I appreciate and enjoy the most is "asymmetric warfare".

The protagonist defeats a powerful opponent in the face of absolute adversity, underdogstory, ** silk counterattack. Okay, you've transformed, Ultraman has fought monsters, and the biggest attraction of this film (for me) is completely gone.

Above.

Finally, why did I mention Tokyo Ghouls?

Because the quality of the story of the giant is like a cliff-like landslide after just a few words, it has almost been reduced to a gimmick.

Tokyo ghouls are also very fierce.

Let's take a look at what is at the heart of its story———— Teenagers, Adventures, Cannibalism, Superpowers, Fighting, Meeting Mates, Level Up, Keep Fighting.

Wait, what does it mean to eat people?

That is, the protagonist becomes a ghoul.

What does this have to do with escalating fights, superpower battles?

It doesn't matter, just to make the film look cool, and nay, that mask looks cool, doesn't it?

The story can take place in any setting, cannibalism is nothing more than a gimmick, it doesn't matter.

Attack on Titan didn't fall to this point, at least so far this story can't go on without the giants, but if the story in the future is completely reduced to transformation battles, then this story is over.

The above is my physical and mental journey of the giant from a fan to a passerby.

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Quibal.

Chrysanthemum has only seen the first one, in the cinema.

Since it is a domestic work of sincerity, you can feel that the attitude of the team is absolutely in place. I hope that there will be more and more teams like this in China, the competition will become more and more fierce, and the market will become bigger and bigger... So... However, I have to be honest.

The first part of the movie, from the character design to the story, from the painting to the dubbing, from the music to the battle, there are no bright spots.

Decent way.

Tender.

This may be the limit of what the production team can do with limited funds.

The total investment of the three films is over 100 million, and the box office income is only 60 million, which can be said to be a loss, and even the latter have retreated, and Kuiba Si has been postponed indefinitely.

It's not anyone's fault, for the simple reason that it's not good enough to make people pay to go to the cinema.

(There is no publicity in place, those who watch animation in China don't need publicity to know that it is released, and if they don't watch it, even if they charter a news network to advertise, they won't buy tickets to watch cartoons.) ）

There is no shortage of animation audiences in China, just look at 100,000 bad jokes, the level of painting is almost equal to the third-rate in Japan, and the story is all nonsense, but people have earned 150 million. (Of course, that's another story.) ）

Kuiba didn't scratch the audience's itch, didn't poke into the audience's heart. So I watched it, and there would be no word of mouth, and there would be no recommendation for hovering 360 degrees without clothes in the ice and snow.

Well, 100,000 bad jokes, I don't want to judge anything about it.

It's fun, but it's not a movie, and fans like where dad is going to make works, anyway, I don't think I lost money when I bought the ticket.

Its existence is more like a statement, an impulse to speak, a protest that has been accumulated for a long time and the demands of the audience have not been met———— we want to watch cartoons on the big screen!

Domestic animation··· There is no hope in sight at the moment.

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Since we are talking about movies, I would like to give you a friendly reminder here.

"Chappie" will be released in China in a few days.

Who looks at who is stupid X!!

The screenwriter's IQ fluctuates, generally hovering between 20 and 60, but I assure you that the whole story never broke 70 from beginning to end. Even at the smartest, you can only touch the passing mark for the mildly mentally retarded. It's not a sci-fi movie, it's not a robot movie, it's a simple, pure, devoid of any impurities,.

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Chrysanthemums have recently developed a new hobby.

This is probably the most interesting and effective way to learn English that I've found so far———— reading English fanfiction.

The website address is www. The literal translation is "fan fantasy" and "fan novel", and students with a basic knowledge of high school English should be enough to have fun on it.

At first glance, you may be discouraged by the tadpoles on the screen, but as I said, the high school level is enough to deal with. To be honest, the level of college entrance examination essays is much better than some of the above essays, the vocabulary is not profound, they are all daily conversations, and they are very practical. Most importantly, you guys like to watch doujin, don't you?

Based on my current experience, the fanfics above are generally not long, and few exceed 100,000 words, but they are all interesting. Although foreign authors invented the Mary Sue, they were generally very restrained. Rather than dominating in a fantasy world, they like to contact and communicate with the characters in their works.

There's an EVA fanfic that seems to be called "Rei,Is,Drunk" (Limbo is drunk), and Limbo, who usually doesn't like to talk, accidentally gets drunk and is carried back to her apartment by the protagonist, and the two sit on the couch and talk all night. Question and answer, Ling Bo went from word to phrase, to sentence, and later even began to ask the other party questions, had his own opinions, argued with the protagonist, and just chatted all night. At dawn, the protagonist thinks it's time to go, but is pulled by Limbo at the door.

End of the full text.

This is the best fanfic I've ever seen in my life!

Not one of them!

Funny, heartwarming, relaxing, chuckling from time to time.

After reading it, people are satisfied.

That's really two "people" communicating.

In short, I want to say that students who are strong in English and want to practice English are your gospel, and Chrysanthemum recommends a painless treatment.

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And finally, uh...

My Novel ······

Another of my novels, the original urban romance detective suspense thriller ethics family campus idol novel that I once mentioned.

If you have the chance, I'd like you to read the first chapter for me, and then tell me honestly if you want to continue reading it after ten minutes of reading.