About yesterday's shameful play。。。。。。。。
There are always a few days a month, chrysanthemums will fall into intermittent hysterical paranoid obsessive-compulsive disorder, unable to extricate themselves, all kinds of hitting the wall, rolling all over the ground, life is worse than death (exaggerated technique)・・・・・
There is a section of the broken shoe black cat getting into the tip of the horns, I can't figure it out, I want to jump off the building, I am pulled by the male protagonist, and all kinds of struggles just want to die - why don't you let go of the old lady quickly!
That's how Chrysanthemum felt in those days・・・・・・
It's good to be in the past.
No, it should be that every time she tosses like this, Chrysanthemum will feel that her skills have improved a little more.
After struggling for a day of research on the recovery of his classmates・・・・・・
Chrysanthemum probably figured out what the problem was.
The sense of substitution of the little white hair as the protagonist is too weak.
Chrysanthemum likes the protagonist who appears at the full level.,Just like Kenshin.,Combat effectiveness is basically not improving.。 Therefore, Bai Mao is also a full-level appearance, strong, reliable, calm, and makes people feel at ease, and they don't have to worry about him making trouble, and they don't have to worry about him playing smash.
But the result of this setting is to dehumanize the white hair.
The literary quality is polite and ruthless, and this attribute should be owned by the supporting role or the villain, so it is a bit too much for the protagonist.
This makes it difficult for White Fur to have emotional interactions with other characters.
So there is no high point in the original plot.
This is not due to the pursuit of rationality, the root cause is in the character setting.
I can do it reasonably and high!
Chrysanthemum figured it out!
Then the next work is clear.
Change!
Chrysanthemum's manuscript is in danger of annihilation・・・・・・・
But this is actually an opportunity, and it can even become the driving force of the next plot -- the mental journey of white hair from a monster to a human!
Of course, this transformation cannot be achieved overnight, otherwise it will be disconnected from the previous character image.
You'll have to arrange some events for him.
Chrysanthemum already has several versions in her heart, and after thinking about it carefully, it is really more high than the original arrangement!
But the changes seem to be quite large・・・・・・
Give chrysanthemum a week, let me change the plot to a smooth one, okay?