I was devastated to find that when I corrected the text, some of my classmates said that the essay was the main text. When I was talking nonsense, when my brain was swimming in the sea of stars, some classmates said that they wanted to see white hair.

What kind of fuss are you guys······

All right.

Actually, I wanted to write it myself······

There's no way, you must know that to shut up a chatterbox, it's like forcing an exhibitionist to wear alloy stainless steel lock chastity pants, there are obviously two young girls in short skirts in front of them, and they pounce on them urgently, but the key parts of the windbreaker are tightly covered······

It's painful not to show it!!

Chrysanthemum has been influenced by her father for many years,Formed a very outdated pedantic mode of thinking,It's a mobile phone can't go online.,Insist on using mp3 This ancient artifact.,Even if you buy a physical pirated book, you don't want to use PAD to read the text.,qq hasn't been on for a few months and doesn't feel the sharp premature aging youth.。

In addition, I have been away from home recently, and I basically don't have much time to touch the computer, which has piled up a lot of students' posts that have not been replied to.

So, today we don't have a theme.

Let my mind, hair! Scatter! Bar!!!!!

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1. "Ungrounded", in this article, means: disconnected from the masses and the grassroots.

The beautiful scenery of the fluttering wind and snow, the moon and the moon has been said for a long time, but what the people at the bottom really think is: Listen to your nonsense, I want to eat.

2. Me! Absolute! No! Write! Doujin of the Crown of Sin!

I have no regrets about its plot, no grudges against the characters, this work has no loopholes from head to toe, the logic is smooth, the structure is stable, the layout is exquisite, the flow is smooth, and the ingenuity is ingenious, I don't need to add more snakes!

Well! That's it!

3. Leaf Gauge, Leaf Gauge, Leaf Gauge, Leaf

4. Weapons other than the original tech tree will not appear in the work.

First of all, this is the original protagonist, and although the attribute points are full, there are no additional skills.

Secondly, this kind of thing... Once you start, you can't stop it, you must, definitely, you must, and there is no suspense that it will open bigger and bigger. As a result, the plot collapsed and the work was finished. Otherwise, you can only open the reverse cheat to balance the plot and abuse the main game.

In the end, from the fact that I tried my best to stop the white hair from getting the geass, I would never come up with any antimatter weapons for him to play with, and there would be no precision-guided weapons······ If there was an Apache air-to-ground tank killer or something... I also want KMF to play with yarn!

(Classmates who want to see the nuclear bomb shake their faces and wash the ground...) Die for yourselves······ ）

(Ps. I always felt that there should be an oil industry in Lelouch's world, and Sakuraite is just a superconducting material, not an energy source.) Even if there is no internal combustion engine, the whole world uses electricity, so there should be something to generate electricity first, right? ）

5. There are still some students who feel that the white hair is too strong.

Well, please recall, what was the basis for the strategic victory in the original work?

A million miracles, volcanic eruptions, torture and killing of princesses, Lancelot's hijacking of the representative of the Super United States, Goddess of Love, super small wings biubiuibiu, scum 1v100000, Kalian air combination killed a large piece of a large piece.

It's hanging, but it's very illogical.

These victories were completely coincidental and accidental, and had nothing to do with the battle of wits and the layout.

It's not a peak loop, it's "Oh I cǎo!" ”

In the face of a superpower, a war machine that occupies a third of the world's territory, and the protagonist has no superpowers and doesn't know the plot, I don't think it's too much no matter how the protagonist is against the sky.

should be strong enough for his enemies.

Having said that, I thought of Xingke's classmate water pot grain field again, and Lu Luxiu was shocked, "How is this possible!" The scene······

Don't be like this, Soul Fade! The chrysanthemum withered in an instant! It's up and down! This Nima always has the feeling of borrowing arrows from a grass boat! What a fantasy strategy!

Another reason why R2 is not as good as the first season is that the strategic view of Area 11 is really problematic, which can actually be seen from Pearl Harbor back then.

186 race high! I'm your brainless fan!

6. I went, but I didn't expect the second stunned person to be so popular······

7. I didn't expect the monster to be popular!

Since then, I have deeply realized that how a character is portrayed does not depend on the space she occupies, or even whether she does not appear at all.

After thinking about it for a long time, I suddenly felt that I had upgraded again.

8. Revolutionary machine, emerald star, giant.

Revolutionary machine.

The devil's strategic view... It's really ······

I thought the name was a gimmick, but I didn't expect that this film was really related to the revolution. Some classmates want to see my complaint about the fourth episode, well, in fact, I have already vomited, in case some classmates don't see it, I decided to copy myself.

[Are you swollen in Okochi......

Was it because I overestimated Nong's IQ before? Did you eat a brain fragment?

This film has the potential to surpass the crown of sin......

Revolution is not a dinner party, a fuss, a painting and embroidery, it cannot be so elegant, so calm, so "courteous", so "gentle, courteous and frugal". A revolution is an insurrection, a violent action by a class to overthrow a class. ————186

Japan really doesn't understand it at all......

Imagine a group of worker uncles carrying hammers, greasy, wearing hard hats, long beards, muscles, and dark skin, standing in a row under the scorching sun, their eyes resolute to express Lao Tzu's aura of freedom.

Looking at a bunch of kids, "Wow it's fun to be independent!" Let's be independent! ”……】

Nangong Yanyan, the so-called "ungrounded", is used in this kind of place.

(I'm not talking nonsense, really, students who haven't seen it can make up for it, and the group of bear children really said "it seems to be funny.") I was withered, didn't I? ）

As for the Emerald Star.

I bet you that this film will never turn around! I'm so happy to see it so far! Classmates who are frightened by the name of Lao Xu, rest assured to enter the pit!!

Generally speaking, in the Japanese industry, radish slices must have "ambitions" regardless of their quality. This is their national film, and you can always find something wrong from a corner of the radish slice, dissonant, strangely paced, and overforced.

There is a feeling that the overseer is desperately trying to exert force and create an orgasm. But the audience has long been aesthetically fatigued, and there is nothing left to shake our rough soul except for radish seppuku, so there is a kind of viewing experience that is not up or down.

The old pearl dancer, desperately scratching her head and making a pose, but she can't lift my appetite no matter what, but she's a striptease dancer anyway, and I feel sorry for myself if I don't look at it.

That's how it feels······

(That's right, this is the power of chatterbox, "it's a pity to discard the tasteless food" eight words I can expand to fifty words, is there a hanging bomb sky?!) )

But the emerald star didn't give me that feeling, so it's very harmonious, very simple, small and fresh radish slices, I like it.

Giant.

Okay, I still haven't read the manga, so in the fifth episode, I got the pleasure that the classmates who have read the manga can't experience.

Awesome!!

(Spoilers: I'm fighting with you.) ）

But there are also some minor problems, the rhythm of the first few words is too slow and too formatted. In my opinion, even if you explain the plot, there is a way that is not boring.

Let's take Lelouch as an example, at the beginning of the first season, Lelouch and Suzaku explained their respective worldviews with C.C and Yuphimia respectively, camera switching, language contrast, and value collision. And explain the current state of the world, and you can see it very high.

But it can't be helped, the giant caricature is there.

I always unconsciously compare this film with the big sword. The big sword of the year was supposed to be too slow in the early stage, I insisted on five or six words and gave up, and then I was forced by my friends to pick up the film, and Denisha completely fell after her appearance.

In fact, if this film hadn't opened ten seconds and there was the scene of the enthusiastic Yao Ming kicking the door, I would still give up······

I don't like slow-burning films, I think I'm a heavy person, I don't have that patience, I'm vulgar and sincere. In my opinion, whether it is a novel or an anime, it must enter the theme in the shortest and shortest time and give people an impact, otherwise it will be a failure.

(So I don't have some white hair growth history, I think this kind of thing is to drag the rhythm in the early stage, making people laugh, but should be interspersed in the text, with dots to cover the surface of the embellishment.) Whimper, rush up and kill Cullovis and Lancelot, how nice. ）

Even the first chapter of "Adventure in the Barren Mountain" can be ignored, just go up and overturn a small boss, throw down a sentence that is very pretending to be B, and stop abruptly. The second chapter uses flashbacks to tell the story of the protagonist's tragic childhood when he was bullied by his peers.

How sensible?!

I say so... It seems that even "Yinying" has been denied together······

But to be honest, if there wasn't a friend holding this book, solemnly putting it in my hand, and sternly saying to me that this is a fucking masterpiece, you read it to Lao Tzu, otherwise I will kill you... I'm eighty percent, and I'll still turn two chapters and give up.

As a vulgar chrysanthemum, I still like Lelouch's rhythm the most, every word and one high, not for the self-expression of supervision, but completely for the audience's viewing experience, this is conscience, how good.

9. I'm not a member of the starting point, this is my first book at the starting point, I don't know the recommendation votes, and the evaluation votes are not money, looking at the classmates "X votes are given to you today!" ”······

The heart is empty······

10. Penguins

I'm sorry... I gave up······

Monogatari series,Literary girl,Blue literature,If Dura,I've given up... Didn't stick to a word. If it weren't for the Flower of Evil having my old friend Baudelaire, I would have tapped a fork in five seconds just from that image.

ps, I've finished reading "Human Disqualification", Osamu Dazai is schizophrenic. (It's not swearing, it's really a medical psychiatry.) ）

ps2,I've finished reading the joke series.,When I was in high school,Daisy was excited about this mystery novel for a while.,And then the whole class circulated it.,It's quite well received.。 But now it seems that it is a double explosion······

PS3, the West Tail Restoration is the world's second only to Siniang's source of heavy poison.

11. Original Supporting Role.

In fact, by now that I have written this, I have developed a new understanding of original supporting characters.

The original supporting characters are also the product of the author's own compromise with himself.

There are too few chess pieces in the author's pen, and each move has to pay a considerable price, which should be determined for their character personality, positioning, position, and behavior pattern. Bombardment of the partition, like the word Feitian. For secondary creators, this is not an advantage, but a very painful constraint. It's like shutting up a chatterbox, it's like forcing an exhibitionist to wear Chastity Pants with a combination lock and fingerprint authentication. Of course, the author can also grab the chess pieces and put them around, but then the chess game will be over, right?

Sometimes, there are really no children to use under my subordinates, well, I have finally experienced it, a card for several days, all kinds of withering and withering, life is better than death.

At this time, the author will naturally want to be convenient, take a shortcut to create a brand new chess piece that does not belong to this rule circle, and use it at will.

But... In this way, the audience will have less anticipation.

This is not the rhythm of the original work, this is not the tone of Lelouch's film, surprise, adversity reversal, this is the feeling that Lelouch gives people. (Sometimes it falls short for some reason······ ）

Turning the impossible into possible is the highest, and the original character is "everything is possible", Li Ning, you deserve it.

ISN'T THAT HIGH······

If it's a big smash brosis comic in itself, of course it's okay to do so, what we want to see is a variety of characters colliding with sparks, not the plot framework, the plot direction or something.

But if the door is marked with "XXX of XXXX", halfway, or even at the beginning of the addition of an irrelevant character, the work is generally ... It's all going to collapse... Proof of history.

12. Wait!

I suddenly thought of the realm of emptiness, and I finished reading it! I finished reading the book of the Empty Realm in my first year of high school, and Daisy loves this book to death! Now the super alloy chrysanthemum still likes it very much!

Why is that······

Although the second second, but... Is there a setting for the type moon to hang and blow up the day?!

It's like a rotary engine, it's useless, it's not promising, it's not realistic at all, but it's beautiful to look at! It's really beautiful! That's a real idea, surreal and reasonable!

13. I suddenly found that there was an extra [Beauty All Received] in the label······

Anyway... What is the situation, please turn yourself in.

14. Half of the fun of watching the NBA is basketball, and the other half is black and self-sufficient.

15. I know that there is a white-haired version of Lelouch, and I have always had a new force to buy movement when I was in high school, and there happens to be a photo of the first version of Lelouch on it, and it is still in my hands.

But the photo will be reflective, and it looks dark, I can't find the original version of the photo on the Internet, I also want to use it!

If some students can find it, please send the URL.

16.

186 I love you.

17.

Hideaki Anno!

18. After seeing the classmate who felt crooked, I couldn't help but come out, one of my classmates was just holding back, but everyone could actually see it, including his parents.

talked about several girls successively, but they all collapsed.

In the end, the small blade cut the wrist, but due to the lack of medical knowledge, the artery was not cut, and it was finally rescued. This evolved into an explosive coming out, making a storm all over the city, and finally having no choice but to drop out or something······

The more you care about this kind of thing, the more you don't want to bend, the more you will bend.

This kind of is also divided into true and false, and it is the same as myopia. After being away from the screen for a while, maybe you go straight back again, right?

19. RPG is the biggest bug in the world of Lelouch.

I don't even dare to mention this artifact, but it does have zài in the anime, and it has been given several shots.

KMF, this stuff with a thin skin and a big filling······ Look at its fragile ankles, look at its stupid outboard cockpit, look at its outrageous center of gravity, look at its pathetic tonnage, look at its elevation of unpacking hatred······

Consider the depth of armor penetration of modern individual anti-tank weapons······

As long as a terrorist hides under the rubble, then no matter what, he can kill one before he is discovered, right?!

The Empire is really... So fragile······

20. Finally, there is Ben Lulouch and the same people stop changing.

······ There aren't many comrades-in-arms.

I've never said what other people's work is, let alone named a particular work. But now that the update has been stopped, there should be something to be said now······

I read the works of other gods first, and I started writing later. Therefore, just from the perspective of an audience, I think the logic of the protagonist's behavior is really a bit inhuman.

(Well, I actually have this problem too.) After I started writing on my own, I realized how difficult it was to maintain the character of the character... I came up with an idea, which was wonderful and emotional, but the character of the protagonist did not allow him to do it... It's really aggrieved at this time. ）

There are very few works in the world that feature villains.

(I mean the real villain, not some unyielding sociopath with a psychological struggle.) This kind of anti-heroic protagonist always has universal values that can make people resonate psychologically, as the core of the zài. Even the kind of protagonist in "A Clockwork Orange" is still a satire of social machinery at its core. Even the night god classmate was mainly about killing bad guys at the beginning, and it should be impossible for the audience to accept a protagonist who likes to kill good guys. ）

It's not that all directors are idiots, and it's always the villains who can't see the selling point———— so why not just let the villain be the protagonist?

The role of the protagonist is to bring the audience in, so he has to have a personality that the audience can accept, and he has to give the audience his reasons to do so, otherwise there will be a misalignment.

Once the audience doesn't understand, it means that there is really a big problem with the protagonist.

Specific to this fandom itself,The problem is not that the protagonist opens and hangs.,It's the way the protagonist uses it.。 No one should strive to be a bad person just because they want to be a bad person.

Even if it's a clown, this is already the craziest and most unreasonable boss I've ever seen.

Like.A.Dog.Chasing.Cars

Chasing a car like a mad dog, but not knowing what to do when you catch up.

He worships chaos, but he doesn't have any desires, he doesn't have any rules, he doesn't even have any humanity. This is the source of his charm, and he is also strong and invincible because of it.

(I love the Joker, and while the third part is also great, the second part is unsurpassed.) ）

Even he doesn't want to be a bad guy, he just wants to watch the world turn into a sea of fire, which should make him happy. Becoming a boss is not an end, but a process, just a means.

We love bosses, but prefer to be spectators rather than be themselves.

And there are many, many bad guys all at once, like this······ is like a seesaw, the protagonist's role is compressed, not to mention, the disparity in power will completely break the balance of the work.

(As a mechanical engineering man, my quest for balance has reached the point of madness.) ）

An interesting idea is not enough to support an entire work.

Uh, sorry I can't take it anymore, okay, that's it.

In short, the portrayal of the sister-in-law is plump! I like it!

21. Ice fruit

Yan sù apologized, I hadn't seen the ice fruit before, it was out of my hand for a while.

I made up for it a while ago.

Oops, I'm going to be good!

But······

KyoAni, you are suing me, when will the whole gold four come out······ Is it because it shouldn't make money for the whole money? Are you so vulgar? The second middle school disease is about to come out of the second year, are you still unwilling to shoot all the gold? Can I get pregnant if I take a picture?

22. It's really high to play without a theme.

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Yo West Standard Ending Revolution Machine.