Chapter 6 From Microfiction to Web Shorts
This is an A4 piece of paper, there are not many words on the paper, it is more than 1,000 words, and there is a big title on it, not the "Female Trick" that He Mu expected, but a very long text: First of all, what I want to talk about below is my personal experience, there is absolutely no falsehood, I am not a professional writer, the writing is not good, I hope you can help me after reading this article......
Very engaging long title, He Mu's desire to read it is very strong, and the next is the main part.
It all started when I broke up with my ex-girlfriend half a year ago. To tell you the truth, she was indeed a very attractive woman, beautiful, with a good figure, and very sensible, and very good to my parents, but when we met for a year and four months, I still decided to break up with her, because there were really too many things in her that I couldn't see through, and it was very weird.
Let me first tell you what makes her different from others: 1: She never mentions her family situation, her friends, her social interactions, and she has never seen her have other friends, and she doesn't have a number in her phone book except mine, let alone someone calling her. For a year and four months, I never heard her cell phone ring.
2: She would be missing for one day every other month until she called me promptly at 8 a.m. the next morning.
3: She eats very little, to be precise, she barely eats, we have never eaten together for so long, if we are together until dinner, I say let's eat, she says she is not hungry. We weren't together, and when I called her to dinner, she would say that she had already eaten, and unless I bought a small snack and took it to her rented place, I could symbolically see her eat a little.
4: Her skin is very good, her whole body is fair and translucent, and there are no markings on her face, but she has never done skin care. I remember one time, I accidentally broke a bottle of beer, and the broken glass splashed on her leg, and she bled a lot at that time, but she insisted on not going to the hospital, and said that it didn't matter, it was just a bruise, and it would be fine in a few days, but later she didn't have any scars on her legs.
5: She doesn't work, doesn't surf the Internet, doesn't entertain, rarely walks around the street, stays at home every day, I don't know what to do, one night I went to look for her, when I went to her door, I found that there was no light in the house, I thought she was not at home, so I called her mobile phone, but she was in the house, I asked why she didn't turn on the light, she said she was asleep, but I didn't find her sleepy at all.
There's more, much more about her weirdness, and I won't say much about it here, but I'm writing this post today to ask for help, not to be scary.
Anyway, because of her weirdness, I finally broke up with her in the end, she didn't want to, but I made up my mind.
I just remember that she said something after the last word, and you will regret it.
After this......
Although there are only more than 1,000 words, He Mu read it very seriously, not a word, and while reading it, he thought about how to adapt this little story and how to turn it from words into images. In his mind, it was supposed to be a scary and funny short film, which would definitely attract people's attention if it was shot properly.
"Not bad!" He Mu gave such an evaluation after reading it.
Tao Quduo listened to He Mu's evaluation and showed a subtle look of pride, "This is a micro-novel I wrote in my junior year, which has never been published, and then I turned it back up, and suddenly I had a flash of inspiration, so I changed it to a script." ”
But after all, this is just a micro-novel, He Mu hopes to see the complete script, Tao Quduo said that he was in a hurry and did not bring it, but he briefly introduced the outline of the script, and He Mu said that he was very satisfied.
The main axis is that the hero Wang Ke is in a dark small room, sitting in front of the computer typing, and the content he writes is this micro-novel in the format of an online post, and each sentence will be interspersed with a piece of the protagonist's experience with his girlfriend, using this method to completely tell some unbelievable story fragments that occur in the process of getting along with the hero and heroine. When the protagonist Wang Ke finished knocking on the last word and was about to click "publish" on the Internet, there was a slow knock on the door, and Wang Ke's scalp instantly became numb, and the whole person tensed......
After Tao Quduo's simple explanation, He Mu had a general understanding of the direction of the entire script, which was more perfect than he thought, He Mu shook hands with Tao Quduo again, expressing his hope that they could cooperate happily.
According to Tao Quduo, the short film is expected to be 15 to 30 minutes long, and the completed part, that is, the part performed by the director himself, is mainly all the plot of the protagonist typing in the room and part of the exterior scenes. If He Mu takes over the actor, he needs to re-interpret this part, Tao Quduo said that he could show him the clips of his previous performances, He Mu said thank you, but he didn't accept it.
"I want to show my own style, not to imitate your performance style, maybe we can compare it after the shooting." He Mu said this, Tao Quduo smiled and seemed to appreciate this guy more.
The intention has been determined, He Mu Taoquduo is very satisfied with each other, agreed on the time and place of meeting tomorrow, signed the contract, handed over the money, and "Girlfriend's Trickery" can be restarted in the evening.
The drinks were almost drunk, and the three parties went back to their respective homes.
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On the way, Tao Quduo frowned and said to his girlfriend, "I feel like I've forgotten something." ”
Zhang Jiani pouted: "Acting! You haven't even seen how her acting skills are! ”
Tao Qu patted his forehead more, "How did you forget this, that kid sat there steadily, no matter how he talked or even smiled, he had a kind of star style who felt good about himself, so much so that I really regarded him as an actor who has been famous for a long time." ”
"Actually, he's just playing tricks in Hengdian." Zhang Jiani continued to say Tao Quduo.
"But it doesn't matter," Tao Quduo said confidently, "A good director should have the strength to turn decay into magic and turn tricks into actors, believe me, dear." ”
The corners of Zhang Jiani's mouth twitched, and she said jokingly: "You are the best, why haven't I become a movie queen now?" ”
"Otherwise, I'll study how to turn you into a movie queen tonight." Tao Quduo said with a wicked smile.
"Nasty!"
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"Boss, what do you want?" Bei Sihan patted Zuo Jun on the shoulder and asked, but Zuo Jun didn't say anything along the way.
"I'm thinking about a lot of interesting microfiction." Zuo Jun once secretly glanced at the piece of paper that Tao Quduo brought, the novel genre and fascinating plot inspired him, as the best student in the communication department, and he felt that he seemed to be able to operate the micro-novel to achieve the purpose of hyping the short film.
He told his rough thoughts to the filmmaker Wang Mingfei, Mingfei is an honest child, and frowned when he heard the word "hype", but after listening to all Zuo Jun's thoughts, he was a little moved, "This, if you want to ask Director Tao what he means, I think he may like your proposal very much." ”
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