Not only Han Leng, Zhao Youyue also noticed the explosion of "The Strongest King" in the book review area at night, after all, the evening is the peak period for many readers to read books, after everyone reads it, if you read it well, some people will praise the author in the book review area, and even directly reward the author, and if you are not happy to see it, or if you encounter a poisonous point, of course you will complain about the author. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info

Zhao Youyue saw that in the latest chapter of "This Chapter Said", the description of "Yu Shengfan" has more than 100 complaints, including words such as "embarrassing", "highly toxic", "vomiting blood", "spicy eyes", "can't bear to look directly" and other words emerge in endlessly, and in the book review area, some complaints with a lot of words have also appeared-

"What the hell is this female character 'Yu Shengfan'? Could it be that Rosemary wants to appoint her as the heroine? If that's the case, I'll definitely give up the book, it's too poisonous! ”

"It seems that I have seen the description of the vase lady in the ancient online text, rosemary is big, I advise you to save it, really don't write female characters anymore, it's really embarrassing to see that cancer is committed......"

"Yu Shengfan get out of "The Strongest King", otherwise the book will definitely be abandoned!"

"E-sports don't need a girlfriend, kneel and beg Lin Feng to be lonely all his life!"

"As an old reader of Rosemary, this scene is so familiar, you still recognize it, don't write female characters anymore!"

"Seeing that everyone feels the same way as me, I was immediately relieved, Rosemary is really deep in terms of plot and game description, but the portrayal of this female character is really spicy......"

……

Zhao Youyue couldn't help but stroke her forehead when she saw the exploding book review area, only hoping that Rosemary could have a stronger psychological capacity, and waited for her to enter "The Strongest King" when she went to bed tonight to save "Yu Shengfan".

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At the same time, Ye Hai was complained about by his beloved wife Li Mengyao, because Li Mengyao is also his reader and likes to read her husband's books very much.

Li Mengyao usually uses a tablet computer to read books, she pointed to the description of "Yu Shengfan", and said to Ye Haishu: "I said why did you write female characters on a whim, you can't write female characters at all, why don't you admit it......"

Ye Hai looked embarrassed and said with a smile: "Actually, I don't blame me, it's just a trick asked by a local tyrant reader, you see, she has already rewarded me with 2,000 yuan for this book, and she is the first fan of this book!" ”

Li Mengyao took a look at the fan list, and the first one was indeed an alliance leader with a nickname [Youyue], the other party not only rewarded the book, but also subscribed to it all, but she said: "Do you think you have succeeded in currying favor with local tyrant readers?" It's clearly to offend people, write other people's tricks like this, I'm afraid that there will be no reward in the future! ”

Li Mengyao said this, and couldn't help but think of the image of a heroine portrayed by Ye Hai with her as the prototype, although the appearance was not as exaggerated, Mary Sue, and embarrassing as "Yu Shengfan", but the follow-up description really made her want to kick her husband to death, it was definitely a high-level black bar, portraying the heroine so stupid and sweet, and the virgin was sick, she knew that her husband should want to focus on portraying the kindness and innocence of the heroine, but when she wrote it, the heroine gave people a feeling that it was particularly pretentious and annoying, anyway, it was best to be out of sight.

So when Li Mengyao said that her husband wanted to write more about the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist and show the beauty of love, she decisively stopped her husband's behavior, and she was almost forced to die!

Well, that's just an exaggeration......

What makes Li Mengyao very helpless is that Ye Hai doesn't seem to realize how bad he is at portraying the female character, and he likes to show her credit - wife, wife, do you see how I write this paragraph, do you portray you very pleasing to readers?

Like? Love a ghost!

It's good if you don't hate it, and if you like it, don't dream about it!

Wake up, my great writer!

In the end, under Li Mengyao's strong intervention, the heroine with her as the prototype finally disappeared, and she could finally happily chase books.

For Ye Hai's new work "The Strongest King", Li Mengyao has always been very satisfied, because there is no female character, and the plot is also very hot, very powerful, passionate (base), the setting of "Eternal War" is also quite novel, after adding online game elements, it makes the work more plump and attractive, and at the same time, it also makes her look forward to the later drama e-sports part, just waiting for the protagonist to lead his own "all-Chinese class", and the Goryeo e-sports team led by the tough "Great Demon King".

As a result, at this time, he actually blocked her by portraying a female character!

Li Mengyao saw the embarrassed look on Ye Hai's face, and couldn't help laughing: "Haha, is this what I said?" ”

Ye Hai took out his mobile phone, opened the chat box between himself and Zhao Youyue, and directly showed the chat record to his wife, and said: "My temper as a local tyrant reader is still quite good, but it is much better than you were at that time." ”

After reading the chat records, Li Mengyao couldn't help but sigh slightly: "This Miss Youyue is really rich, and if she didn't agree with her, she rewarded you with 100,000 starting coins, but as a result, you ruined other people's tricks like this, and I was also drunk!" Have you treated the alliance leader so badly? Also, what is called much better than I was at the time, people don't know that you are using her as the prototype to portray this 'Yu Shengfan', and what do I have to do with you, of course, I can complain directly to you, people just became QQ friends with you, so I gave you euphemistic advice, and I guess I can't help it. ”

Ye Hai smiled awkwardly, then looked at his exploded book review area, and couldn't help but say weakly: "Then should I hide this female character directly, do you have any suggestions?" ”

said so, but he had actually decided in his heart that he would try to use the advice given to him by the leader of the [Dark Moon] Alliance, which could be regarded as his last struggle, and if it still couldn't satisfy the reader, then he would completely accept his fate and never portray a female character again.

"Give it a try! I'll always support you anyway, no way, I'm a wife, in addition to playing games with you, doing housework for you, cooking and taking care of the children, I don't know how to write books or anything, but I feel that the advice given by the other party seems to be a bit useful, if you can make up for your shortcomings in portraying female characters, maybe you can take a bigger step on the road of writing! Li Mengyao smiled, in fact, she had already seen the decision in her husband's heart, and of course she chose to support it.

Sure enough, Ye Hai breathed a sigh of relief, just holding his wife's hand, and everything was silent.

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This night, when Zhao Youyue was sleeping, she skillfully pushed open the "dimensional door" in her mind and entered it.

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