Although Ye Hai's wife Li Mengyao supports her husband to try a new way of portraying female characters, that is, portraying them in the same way that her husband originally portrayed male characters, and then insisting that it is a female character, if the original male character is a handsome guy, she insists that she is a big beauty, but in terms of personality, they are not much different. Pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info

can be supported, she still asked her husband to give her what he wrote before updating, so as to save the description of female characters with spicy eyes.

"My writing has been very good lately, especially when portraying the character of 'Yu Shengfan' in the Night Rain, I feel like I'm writing like I've seen her appear in front of me and play that game called 'Eternal War'! I can't write about her as pompous or false anymore, because she's real! She is a very interesting girl, she loves games because she is lonely, and she is even proficient in many Chinese for the sake of games, and she also likes to talk constantly while playing games......" Ye Hai said to his wife very excitedly when he handed over the manuscript to his wife.

Li Mengyao saw that Ye Hai didn't seem to have come out of the world of the pen, she couldn't help but believe it, because Ye Hai was in a state of "inspiration" many times before, whenever he was in that state, the speed and efficiency of code words were very high!

Even the quality of the text has been improved, Ye Hai, who is already longer than the portrayal of male characters and game screens, has a more lifelike character portrayal, and that sense of picture can make the reader immersive!

If the words written by Rosemary in the normal state are at the level of a great god, then the words written by Rosemary in the state of "bursting of inspiration" are at the level of the supreme god, which can easily mobilize the reader's emotions and immerse the reader in the world he outlined!

Ye Hai also handed over the matter of publishing the manuscript to his wife Li Mengyao, and then plunged into writing, he wanted to take advantage of his good state to write a little more.

Li Mengyao also had a huge sense of anticipation, and as a result, she read the manuscript in one go, and then couldn't help but say to her husband who was crackling and typing: "Is there still any, is there still any?" It's not enough to see! I really want to see the plot of Lin Feng and Tang Yongkai discovering that [Night Rain Sounds Annoying] is actually a peerless beauty that they can't take their eyes off it, and I really look forward to their reactions......"

As a result, only Ye Hai's very rhythmic code words responded to her, and when she saw her husband working so hard, a trace of tenderness appeared on her face, and she began to read the manuscript again, and was ready to correct the typo for her husband.

But what surprised her was that there was not a single typo in the manuscript of more than 10,000 words!

That's amazing!

It's really all in one go!

But what made her even more gratified was actually her husband's follow-up portrayal of the female character of "Yu Shengfan", she originally thought that this almost exaggerated Mary Sue character was hopeless and could no longer be liked by readers, but after she read the manuscript, she felt that this character was very interesting!

Originally, the character image of "Yu Shengfan" was extremely empty and pale, it seemed to be perfect, but it was actually very fake, and the act of driving a luxury car to an Internet café could not be found by readers who were more concerned about rationality, and the forced explanation behind it could only barely fool the readers, but when Yu Shengfan's real character characteristics were revealed, this "Internet addict girl" who loves games and is addicted to PK seems to have become intimate, so vivid and vivid......

And her most cute place,Undoubtedly, her mouth that can't stop.,Of course, it's reflected in the game.,It's the text bubble that doesn't disappear almost all the time in her head.,If this kind of person appears in reality.,And when playing the game as an opponent.,It's going to hate this guy who likes to keep bab and keep taunting.,But in the book.,It seems that this "chatter" and "poisonous tongue" have become cute attributes.,Especially after readers see the follow-up plot.,Found that this guy is likely to become the protagonist's teammate.。

Readers who substitute for the protagonist Lin Feng, for the role of the protagonist's camp, the natural favorability will be +20, plus the character of "Yu Shengfan" doesn't look like a pig teammate, her operation skills are so powerful, and she hasn't even exposed her full strength, if she can join forces with Lin Feng, how powerful will the "Glory Team" be in the future?

All in all, in the content of the manuscript, the follow-up portrayal of "Yu Shengfan" suddenly made the sense of expectation of the whole work be further improved, because the follow-up portrayal is so wonderful that everyone even subconsciously forgot the description of the spicy eyes at the beginning, and will only remember her identity as a chaebol lady, as well as the setting that is proficient in multiple Chinese, which is simply convenient for her to spray, ridicule, and make trouble as much as she likes when she faces e-sports teams from other countries in the future!

This Yu Shengfan is just a trouble-making girl, pulling up hatred to be steady, in this way, it can obviously make the plot more exciting and exciting, Yu Shengfan can be responsible for pulling hatred, and Lin Feng, who washes away the lead, has a steady and calm personality, and likes to hide his edge, is specially responsible for output, slapping his face, and occasionally showing his edge and pretending to be a big force, isn't it beautiful?

One is the king with a strong mouth, and the other is the strongest king, the two of them cooperate, the picture is so beautiful, I can't bear to look at it!

In fact, setting "Yu Shengfan" is a lonely girl who doesn't have any friends, which is to imply to the reader that once she becomes a friend she recognizes, she will definitely stick a knife in her friend's ribs, if "Yu Shengfan" is regarded as a man, it is not against the harmony at all, this kind of "lone wolf" character of a man, who can become his friend, who can make "lone wolf" become a "loyal dog", this routine is common in novels, and readers eat this set.

Obviously, Ye Hai has used the way of portraying male characters on "Yu Shengfan", he no longer regards "Yu Shengfan" as a dispensable small supporting role, but an important supporting role, he didn't even realize that the setting of this character was actually not done by him, but he thought that this was the product of his inspiration, he himself was very satisfied with this character anyway, and he was very partial to his first female character who wrote so much, he thought that he had finally portrayed a female character with a soul!

Whether the reader is satisfied or not, he must write it like this!

No one can stop the creators who have already "gone up"!

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