[There are still 21 days left before the time for the work to be handed in.] Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 info doesn't have enough time now, otherwise it's not bad to go to the 'starting point' guild's website platform to test the water after it's over. 】

[In the middle, there must be a conspiracy. Maybe the essence of the 'Origin World' is related to the 'Internet Text'. No, no, no...... Wouldn't it be so narrow-minded, I don't know what the universe I live in has to do with 'reality'? 】

[Now the 'starting point' guild has risen, 'a certain k', creation, vertical and horizontal, palm and reading...... Countless organizations in the plane are competing in groups, not only the 'Plane Grandpa Guild' is differentiated, but even the Universe Republican Party, the main god space, and various federations are involved, which is really ...... No matter whether it is a big station or a small station, there is always a breakthrough......]

“…… Chapter transitions

One chapter and one scene, this is the most simple and easy to understand, and it doesn't need to be explained.

Two. Conversation transitions

This is the most frequently used, and many authors prefer to use dialogue at the end of a chapter, and the beginning of the next chapter as well. This is convenient to enter the plot as quickly as possible, and at the same time increase the reader's sense of substitution.

Three. Summarize the transitions.

This kind of transition method cannot be commonly used, it is generally used when there is a time span, if there are too many articles in one article, the article will not be written for a long time.

Four. Scene transitions.

This can actually be understood as a natural switch of the picture, because it is a bit abstract, to give a concrete example.

For example, she was afraid that the flowers and plants in the garden would be destroyed by this sudden rainstorm, so she hurriedly carried a small hoe and an umbrella to go out to serve.

On the other hand, the sun is shining on the other side of XX (referring to the person's name). The shops on East Third Street in Sioux City opened one after another, and XX recently ...... In fact, a more simple understanding is that you put a picture in your own head and put the plot into it, similar to when watching a movie, the pictures are switched one by one.

Five. Inflection transitions.

Continue to the above example: so-and-so was recently urged to die, as long as he saw the phone number of the magic capital, he directly raised the corpse and pretended not to be there, but who would have thought that a certain editor would call with a mobile phone? This is not? was caught on the spot...... "Is the takeaway coming?" "You're really home?!" "...... ahem, all in all, common inflections such as '......but', 'opposite', 'sutra and... 'Contrast', 'however'......

In fact, having said so much, everyone just needs to remember one sentence, the transition is very simple, as long as you are not awkward as the author, the transition will be natural, and sometimes the transition is the highest level of transition without deliberately pursuing it. But before you get overwhelmed, you can refer to the simple methods mentioned above. ”

"From novices to gods, there are several tips that must be paid attention to at each stage to improve your writing ability, and I hope that you can recognize your specific situation in the course of this lecture, and then see which writing skills can improve your writing level according to this situation

I've divided web writers into four tiers

Novice, beginner, master, god

What is a newbie? It's an author who reads some books, has a creative impulse in his heart, and then wants to write something,

Including me, I also have the urge to write for some reasons

Everyone is a novice, and the reasons for writing are different, but they are all the same

The difference between a novice and a beginner writer is

The works of novices generally have the shadow of other works

In other words, the biggest characteristic of novices is to imitate, imitate some of the works they have watched, TV, and even things encountered in reality, and write about it

If you find that there are many passages written by other well-known authors in your work, because you like it very much, or you have a deep memory of this passage, so you write it

Such a writer, no matter how good his grades are, still can't get rid of the hat of a novice

That's what I'm going to say, the beginner stage, the trick to improving your writing skills

To sum it up, everything in the world is an article, and anything can be used as our creative material

Therefore, if a novice wants to improve his creative level and get rid of the novice hat, he must: read more, think more, write more, and ask more

Read more books, think more about why people write like this, write more, one or two books, and the more experience you will accumulate, don't talk about it if you ask more

I once said that the author asked ten questions, in fact, these ten questions are for novices

You take the time to read a few books with a starting point of more than 10 million clicks and a total recommendation of more than 1 million, just look at the beginning, look at the first 500 words, the first 3,000 words, the first 10,000 words, and the first 100,000 words.

1. If you are the author, why do you write like this,

2. What will the reader think after reading this chapter?

3. How much did the foreshadowing author bury,

4. How much garbage is unrelated to the body of the article,

5. How many points do you think you can rate this work?

6. What is the author's most successful part?

7. Where is the author's biggest failure?

8. What do you think needs to be studied seriously at the beginning of the author?

9. What are the reasons for the author's success,

10. Also write an essay on whether you can reach the grade of this author

This basically contains more than four things for the growth of novices.

Entry-level novices, he has gotten rid of the realm of imitating others and copying other people's ideas, through a lot of reading and experience, they know how to write, so as not to collide with others, these things that need to be accumulated are accumulated enough, so they can move from imitation to reference

What is borrowing? Borrowing is actually imitation and plagiarism, but others can't see that you are plagiarizing

Basically, most of you have already passed the novice stage, have a certain foundation, and know that plagiarizing or imitating other people's writing, articles and ideas will not be able to get anything good at all

For entry-level writers, my advice is: reasonable, unexpected, this is also the basic principle of my creation

What is reasonable? It's your article, whether it's from the idea or the plot, or the dialogue, it must be reasonable.

Underworld Master: Fart is reasonable, and taking off your pants and farting is unexpected

In the simplest example of jumping off a building

Normal people jump high, at most half a meter,

However, in martial arts novels, jumping three or five meters is normal

And it makes sense

In Xianxia novels, you can fly a few hundred meters,

As long as your background and setting can support your YY, it is reasonable, and reasonable novels will naturally look good. Imagine, in a novel with a realistic background, a person jumps 50 meters, what is that? Is this kind of book good?

Reasonableness requires us writers to have an understanding of basic common sense, so that there will be no unreasonable plots

And unexpectedly, I used one of the most commonly used bridges to see beautiful women will have nosebleeds

This is a very unconscionable one, even if all the beautiful women strip naked and dance a striptease in front of you, you won't have a nosebleed

However, if the author puts the background in a martial arts or Xianxia work, the protagonist sees a beautiful woman, the Taoist heart is unstable, and the meridians are damaged, which breaks the nasal mucosa through the pulse, causing nose bleeding

In this way, this bridge is rounded, and it can make the reader feel: Oh, it can still be said like this, interesting

This is unexpected

I saw a certain beauty, the spring was dewed, and I had a nosebleed.

However, this nosebleed was made by the bodyguard next to the beauty

The reader originally saw that you had a nosebleed, and they wanted to fork off your book: such a non-rigorous novel, it is not interesting to read, but you have an extra sentence after you: The bodyguard beat it, which is round, and gives the reader an unexpected joy

The problem is that if you want to be reasonable and unexpected, you need a lot of reading and experience to be competent, but with these eight words, I believe that when you create, you will also try to substitute these eight words into your work

In my personal experience, I read 500,000 words of novels every day, not to read, but to broaden my experience, in this way, because I read a lot of books, so I know the direction of several directions of a problem, so I can write works with different endings from others

It's like a knife slashing at the main character, and I could write at least thirty different follow-up episodes, but what about you guys? How many can you write about?

Now let's talk about how the masters and gods improve their writing skills

Masters and gods are basically original, and people who can plagiarize to the level of masters and gods, even if there are one or two, are rare

Therefore, the word original is the difference between a master and a newcomer

Is it easy to be original? Maybe it's easy, we all code words every day, thousands of words a day

The problem is that you will always inadvertently find that your work is very similar to other people's plot plots

When you're creative, you'll be surprised to find that it's as if someone else has written it too.

And the real masters, every idea, every bridge, are selected after reading a large number of works: "reasonable and unexpected" bridges

The difference between a master and a novice, in addition to the word creativity, is that the newcomer will only strive for the reasonableness of his work, while the master is already thinking about how to be unexpected. Isn't that so?

We look at the things written by those great masters, except for some of their plots that we look cool and want to watch, more of their plots make us feel novel

There is another kind of master, who is famous for his adaptation

This kind of master, they eat unexpected meals, such as those historical novels that travel through the Three Kingdoms, which change the original history through the memory and knowledge of the traveler

Also, the most important point

The difference between a master and a novice is that the master creates, with a beginning and an end

Only when a person completes a work, will he know what his real strength is, this is the so-called standing on the peak of the mountain does not know how high he has a position to stand, only when he stands elsewhere and looks, you know what his original position is

All authors will think that their work is so creative, interesting, and awesome that there must be millions of readers who are frantically begging for updates

This is because we writers have too high expectations of our own work, which leads to incomplete thinking

When we finish writing a book, we look back: typos, punctuation, logical errors, similar passages to others, and plots that can't stand scrutiny......

A whole bunch of errors appeared

Here, I would like to ask the author who has finished the book: is there a world of difference between how you feel when you have not finished writing a book and when you read a book after writing: it is a great book if you don't finish it, and after you finish it. Bah! Litter?

I feel so naïve to write before

Therefore, if a novice wants to advance to the master stage, he must finish the book, and only after writing a book, you will know what you really lack

As for the great god, in fact, every author has the potential to become a great god.

Why did the great god become a god

The real reason for this is two words

innovation

In the era of rampant martial arts, Xianxia came out, and those who wrote Xianxia, such as Xiao Qian and Xiao Ding, all became great gods

Write a book in a completely different style from others, and then you become a god

The reason why they became great gods is that they are much more novel than martial arts

However, they have good roots

There is no doubt about that

After Xianxia, urban fantasy, magic fantasy, online games, supernatural, science fiction

One after another new writing themes have been excavated by the great gods

Looking at the success of these great gods, you will find that they are all knowledgeable people, with a wide range of knowledge, and they have unexpectedly eight-character mantras, so they have become gods

However, the price of becoming a god is very large, as big as a hundred masters to attack the path to godhood, and as a result, 99 of them fell

I am one of the Fallen

This is a digression, when all authors write things, they think that his works are very innovative and creative, that is, any author has the opportunity to become a god

Authors with a solid foundation have a higher chance of success, and authors with a weak foundation have a lower success rate

Personally, although I failed to storm the altar, I wrote a random book and signed it on various websites, and it was absolutely fine.

On what basis? Relying on my good foundation, the typo rate is 5 per 10,000, the punctuation marks are not used indiscriminately, the paragraphs are not long, I understand the reader's psychology, I don't write the plot that the reader doesn't like to read, I read enough books, and there are eight-character mantras: reasonable, unexpected

That's all for today's training, to put it bluntly, today is to ask everyone, lay a solid foundation, read more books to increase experience, and the eight-character mantra: reasonable, unexpected

As long as you can do these things, it is basically only a matter of time before you become a great god

Now those who call God are the old authors, and it is difficult for new authors to come out, because everyone who can write has written them. However, it's okay to become a master

Old Tree Vine: I would like to ask, why don't I sometimes like to read my own books so much?

Answer: This is mainly because your sense of substitution is too poor when you are creating, so it is recommended that you read your work silently two or three times when creating

Uncle Yao

I've also summarized some insights

1. Eye-catching, evocative (in a good sense) and stimulating headlines;

2. Story situation (something to be done or decided)

3. The importance of the situation or the things related to it, and the importance of this is expressed through one or several scenes;

4. Arrange something unique in the story situation or main characters;

5. Use original ideas or interpretations to make things that appear ordinary and extraordinary;

6. Contrast or juxtaposition between opposites;

7. Raise suspense about difficulties, conflicts, or disasters, so that the reader's interest moves from the beginning of the novel to the main part.

Be sure to make a wonderful opening to attract the reader's attention, as little nonsense as possible, and make less introductory information such as settings to fill up, readers are not interested in these things, and it is a wonderful opening to make them interested, a plot that can catch their attention. The content of the opening chapter should not be too cumbersome, the language should not be too wordy, and it must be concise and to the point.

Tang Zhu: Teacher. I have a question, if the dialogue of the characters is not handled well, is it okay to use scene descriptions or other negative aspects to set off the main character?

There's no problem with that. In fact, it is a mistake to drive the plot with monotonous dialogues all the time

Speechless and autonomous: Teacher, I want to ask why I don't want to code words

Qin Kai: Oh, I can't solve this problem

Qin Kai: Because I don't want to code words

Mu/Tou: Teacher, if there are many elements and ideas in a book, what will be the ending of the book?

Old Bookworm: The more you have, the more trouble

Underworld Master: Teacher, code words, what input method is the fastest. That's my only doubt. Those great gods have 10,000 words a day, what input method is used.

Old Bookworm:

The gods all use pinyin, and Sogou pinyin is very easy to use

Maizi: Teacher, is it better to write a single line or a double line? There are some things that must be explained, how to deal with the best way?

Old Bookworm: If it's a mainland simplified, it's better to have a double line

If it is an electronic version, it is better to be a single line, because the reader cannot do without the protagonist for a while, and if the protagonist leaves for too long, the reader will be unhappy

Qin Kai: Actually, my writing mentality is: I put myself in the position of the reader, and see why the reader likes my book

The so-called sense of substitution refers to the immersive feeling that the reader or player has replaced the characters in the novel or game in a novel or game.

Immersion can also refer to the emotions that arise as the story develops, whether happy or sad, and so on. For example, looking at Guo Jing, Ling Huchong, etc., even if you don't replace yourself as the protagonist, you can also have various emotions.

In layman's terms, it is to attract the reader's attention, to be fascinating, and to firmly grasp the reader's appetite for reading.

As for how to deal with the protagonist, it depends on the author's imagination, if the author's fantasy happens to be a plot that most readers have also fantasized about or like to see, then when the author describes it, it will be recognized by many readers, of course, the language must be smooth and appropriate.

The plot environment is the same, this is a one-size-fits-all thing, mainly relying on imagination and empathy. Come on, I hope the author will come on!

Q: Many people scolded the works, but the collection has grown rapidly, and I am very confused, how to deal with it?

A: Scolding is very normal, because scolding, you know what the reader needs or does not need

Q: We are now novices, what should we do if we can't get rid of the shadow of famous novels? Bookworms are huge

Answer: Read more books, start with imitation, try not to have the shadow of others, you can't avoid it, but try to avoid it. ”

After class.

Tang Zhu sat alone in the classroom, watching the recent popular talk show on TV, a little melancholy.

“…… Systematic texts start from the starting point, why did you choose to start systematic texts in Genesis?

Reader traffic, after all, the creation is backed by QQ reading, this huge traffic market, plus we are taking the small white market, so we must choose a good place.

Now the market is nothing more than QQ reading and palm reading, in fact, I originally voted for palm reading.

What is the difference between the setting of the system flow exercise method and ordinary fantasy, and whether the world pattern should be big or small?

This is no different from fantasy novels, the only difference is the golden finger, this sense of substitution is different. Fantasy novels: Goldfinger Rebirth, Old Grandfather, Exercises. The sense of substitution of the golden finger is easy for white readers to be familiar with, for example, if you get the old grandfather's golden finger, then you have to practice step by step, but the system is different, he doesn't need any cultivation at all, it's relatively simple, it's like you play a game, and you can directly kill monsters and upgrade.

(Cui An: With the strong crushing of the system, it is more convenient than the old grandfather's domineering) but the systematic text is durable, and many systems in the later stage are not good.

How to master the rhythm of the system, it is easy to be invincible, and it collapses faster?

The rhythm of this thing, in fact, lies in how to defend it, for example, we set the first 1 as the starting point and 10 as the end point, then if you directly raise it to 10, among them, you can add some stepping into the plot, treasure hunting, ruins, and martial arts. These episodes make up for each other, like me now, and I'm fast-paced in front of me. In less than a few dozen chapters, the main character is top-notch, so you add some other face-slapping plots.

The rhythm can be divided into three, a smooth rhythm, a climax of a fast tempo, and a mixed variation.

There are so many updates every day.,Is there a way to improve the speed of codewords and a way to arrange the plot?

This is actually simple to say, and it is also simple. That is, you arrange the plot first, for example, the protagonist is now going to kill a BOSS, then we can arrange it on the way to experience robbing villages and Warcraft. Then you make a list of each one.

Village, you can add the description of the village, and then some people appear in the village, plus some face-slapping plots, so that you are completely in a village with a few chapters of face slapping and hatred, there are always many people who don't write an outline, in fact, this habit is not good. Don't ask you to write an outline of tens of thousands of words, just write a dozen words outline, if you don't write an outline, you can easily enter a dead end, and writing an outline is to tell how to develop next.

Just like if you go to Beijing, you must plan how to go, and the outline is how to lead you forward.

What sustains you to keep writing no matter the circumstances? Love writing or is it really a lot of money?

The first environment in which I write is not as bad as the rumored environment.

Second, how many people love to write novels? Writing novels is to make money, and this must be the case for many people.

How can the author of the creation system grasp the reader's cool point and not let the article collapse?

The cool point is actually in the suspense, after all, I didn't write a traditional system text, collapse, in fact, many people just opened too big, for example, I collapsed once, and I exploded in front of the enemy and pulled the enemy too strongly, resulting in writing a hundred chapters, and I couldn't grasp the trend behind.

(Ann Cui: So how did you save it)

World transformation makes up for it, because I write this system, he is that you can travel through other fiction worlds, fantasy worlds, and whenever you want to collapse, you go to other worlds to develop, so that you can develop in other worlds, and you can completely bring the plot of the collapse there.

(Cui An: After being strong, will you return to the original world and beat these enemies?)

Yes, this will definitely be, for example, I'm in Fengyun now, and I'm being beaten by the fire unicorn in front, this plot has been useless, this is a remedy, I can enter it in the future and hang the fire unicorn.

That's a cool point.

How do you set it up to be likable? Decisive killing? Is there a universal likable setting?

Kill decisively, if in the creation of the world, this kind of is better, after all, the creation of students occupy a lot, if you don't agree with the word, you will step on people, this is very cool for readers, you have to consider the needs of the market when you post an article.

How does the system flow control the escalation of the protagonist?

Actually, I don't know about this.,After all, I don't know what type of system you write.,If it's step by step.,Then upgrade you can reasonably arrange a level of upgrades.,If it's in the direction of invincible crushing.,Then you don't have to pay too much attention to the upgrade.。

Is there a classification of system flows, and can you give an example?

The system flow is actually dressed in the skin of fantasy, and we can see him as a fantasy, but it is to digitize the world, and all the characters are monsters.

Again, the way of system flow is to be quick to substitute, which can make it easy for white readers to understand.

The system collects a few women, how to write an emotional drama?

The question of the heroine,In fact, many people are confused.,After all, if you lose a lot of weight.,The reader says you're a harem.,But if you don't accept it.,The reader says you're not a problem with your sexual orientation.,Then we can consider the first one.,And then you develop to a certain point.,Collect another one.,The heroine we can use it as the main line.,For the heroine, charge more and charge less.,This problem is up to seven.。 Learn from Wei Xiaobao. After all, there are many men who watch fantasy, which one doesn't want to have three wives and four concubines, but you don't just accept it.

Aren't you afraid of being beaten to death in this book?

Actually, I took it casually, don't hit me, I was going to be called Long Aotian, but someone took this name.

Can you tell us why you write system flows......

I actually watched a few big platforms to ask, starting point - invincible upgrade king, creation - undefeated upgrade, palm reading - the strongest upgrade system, after all, I am a system fan, but when I see this, I always feel that something is missing, that is, why it is not awesome to get the system, obviously you don't need to cultivate, but you are still stepped on.

Questions

1. First of all, can you ask Sister Yue to talk about her creative process

Haha, that's a big question. In 2007, I wrote my first book "Fengcheng Feishuai", which won the grand prize in the New Wave Original Competition, with a prize of tens of thousands of yuan, and was published, and I have been writing it ever since; Later, Xiao Bai, the editor of Xinlang, suggested that I put "Turning an Emperor Back to Modern Times" on the shelves to try VIP sales, which was the first original book of Xinlang to be put on the shelves, and I told the editor at the time that I would write down the origin point of 3,000 planes in a month, but there would be more than 10,000 manuscript fees in the first month on the shelves; Soon 60,000 or 70,000 yuan per month. Now it seems that sixty or seventy thousand is nothing, but in 2008 it was still good, and later wrote long articles such as "One Night Bride" and "Six Palaces Without Concubines", and all of them sold film and television copyrights

2. In the process of writing a novel, what should I do if the content is not enough to attract readers? Or, what kind of content will attract readers?

Go and see the top 10 red articles on the list of all websites! See what exactly readers like; Find the right type and prescribe the right medicine

3, Sister Yue, can you know your age now, and whether your age will have an impact on the article

Haha, I'm the oldest among the authors, and the newcomers are all post-95s and post-00s; Age will definitely have an impact on the article, after all, a person's experience, experience, and knowledge determine your vision and knowledge

Let's talk about the impact of age on the article. I once read a presidential article, the author is estimated to be very young, and wrote that the super luxury car driven by the president is a Toyota Camry - I don't mean to laugh at the Camry, but this is definitely not a super luxury car, and it doesn't fit the character setting, right?

I also read a president's article about the richest man in the world giving the female protagonist a super expensive piece of jewelry - Swarovski - which was obviously written by a child. Because she probably doesn't know what really expensive jewelry is.

4, Sister Yue, I want to ask how to portray the plot and make the plot vivid instead of dull.

Reading, reading, reading———— be sure to read more and pay attention to accumulation; If you write funny, you have to laugh naturally; If you write about abuse, you will make people cry; In fact, it is very simple, what you write depends on whether you like it or not, and it can move you. If you find it boring, how can readers like it?

5. The character's characterization of the character determines the character's character, can you explain this a little?

I really don't know how to explain this. Because I didn't say it. However, I can tell you about my own experience with writing. Sometimes in the middle of writing, the character is fixed, and you can't come according to your original idea, he or she will decide their own direction, completely uncontrolled by the author, and the plot and ending will change

6. Sister Yue, when writing novels, it is easy to write dialogue flow, and when writing character actions and environmental descriptions, I write some content but I am not satisfied, I always revise and revise, and I always waste a lot of time, so what should I do?

It is indeed easy to be disliked by readers when writing about the action environment of the characters, because the general author's description skills are not good, and he can't control it, and he can't write very exquisitely. I suggest that the first 100,000 words of each book must quickly enter the plot, and if possible, the first 300,000 words should not be watery. After writing 1 million words, you can do whatever you like, and you can show off your literary skills

7, Sister Yue, your writing is not the kind of popular literature on the bad street, your writing is very connotative and special, may I ask, how did you maintain your style all the way

Hehe, I actually originally wrote a popular article on the bad street. It wasn't until I wrote "Marriage Alipay" later that I deliberately wanted to change what I wanted to express. In short, because I made some money writing in the past few years, I didn't go completely to the money, and now I can try to write something I like.

However, I still recommend that you write genre essays at the beginning to make some money first

Of course, you can observe that every type of popular article is a leader and an innovator in that field. For example, a slight smile is very captivating, and Zhen Huan's biography is the earliest and most innovative in the genre text; It's hard to get ahead by imitating

8. May I ask Sister Yue, some people in the book review area say that their books are not good-looking, and they don't have much confidence in their own writings, should they shorten it or start anew?

Is it a reader who scolds your new book for not being good? This score situation to see if it is really not good-looking; Some people maliciously brush up on book reviews and ignore them; To test whether a book is good, it depends on the recommendation effect, if there is no collection or comment anyway, most readers feel that it is not good-looking, and there is no subscription, then it will end as soon as possible.

I suggest that everyone build a small group, add dozens of loyal fans to it, don't have too many people, just hardcore. Once it's written, you can let them look at it first. If everyone doesn't think it's good-looking, there's definitely something wrong with it

9. For newcomers, there is already a type of text, the next one is still written in the same type or a more popular one, or is it based on inspiration?

Whether it is a newcomer or an old author, I suggest that you write the routines you are most familiar with, write what you want to express the most, you don't have to blindly chase hot spots, you can chase whatever is hot, and you can never write to the extreme. In fact, as long as you are in a field, whether it is crossing, president, or stallion god-level monster fighting, as long as you can write to the extreme, that is when you reach success

Sometimes, if you want to write about a subject in particular, you can write about it, and in general, this kind of writing is better because you are more inspired

For example, someone asked me to write a police and bandit theme, and there are famous real arrests (famous policemen) in China to tell real cases; However, I'm not good at this field, so I haven't written about it

10, may I ask Sister Yue, writing and writing, I found that because the slow heat was not enough to attract readers, I arranged for the characters to appear in advance, but the whole outline was messed up, what should I do?

Slow heating is a big problem. If you write VIP, it's best not to be slow to heat, it's best to be fierce and brilliant at the beginning, the old author is okay, if the newcomer is slow to heat, the probability of being shot to death is as high as 9 percent;

It's better not to write tens of thousands of words, the shadow of the protagonist is still missing

11, Sister Yue, there is a problem, that is, I wrote a fire book in front of me, and my grades are not bad, I am in the top five on the list, and I open a book in the back, but I will always be affected by the previous one, and I feel that I am not as good as the previous book, I am very confused, what should I do

This is not always influenced by the previous book; Rather, there are various comprehensive reasons, such as recommendations, such as mentality, etc.; It is recommended to read more similar red texts to increase inspiration and design more intense, sadistic or funny plots

12, Sister Yue, what should I do if I encounter Kavin's situation?

I'm often carvined, often. Hahaha, sometimes I get up in the morning and sit on the computer, and in the evening, I don't write a word because I can't write it. My personal approach is to read carefully, go out for a walk, or think more about it when you lie down at night, so that it will be better. But there is a drawback, thinking about the plot at night often causes me to lose sleep all night

13. A friend asked Sister Yue if she had any good experience in copyright

Let's ask the question directly, it's too big, I can't answer it, I can only say that which genres are better to sell film and television

I only say that the female frequency does not understand, and the male frequency does not understand. The historical romance of the female frequency, with a bit of suspense to solve the case, and the pure love of youth, are all easier to go

14, Sister Yue, I want to ask what to pay attention to when writing the scene of character dialogue

It should match the age, identity, and real scene of the character; For example, some people write dialogues that are very artificial and unrealistic. When I usually write dialogue, I write it in the same way as I say it in real life

15. How many hours does Sister Yue have on average a day? Aren't you tired?

I used to average 6,000-10,000 words a day; But I haven't written much in the past three years. Haha, I just started writing a new book again this year

16. Sister Yue, I'm a newcomer, I've just started writing novels, I want to ask if it's better to write according to your favorite style, or to look at the popular themes on the website?

The first one is better to write according to yourself. The first book is often the epitome of genius, undisturbed by any outside world, as an expression of the desire of the free heart.

Many writers are the first to write the best books, and the later ones cater to the market, but the standards are not as good as before.

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In front of the TV, more than a dozen presenters were queuing.

1. The creative process of self-described novels:

"I'm an ordinary human from a low-level plane, with an average lifespan of only seventy years. I was a soldier and carried a gun, and after I was discharged from the army, I was assigned to work in the front line of the coal mine, and after three months of work, I threw my job headlong into the online novel, thinking that I could make money, so I did it, and I have been working until now. ”

If you want to say how many hobbies there were at that time, they were all fake, I just thought I could make money.

Black and white cute: I have a question, how do you think newcomers persevere?

When I quit my job and started writing novels, I persevered for 8 months with 2,800 yuan, without any income in between, and I couldn't see any hope, and honestly, I don't know how I managed to make it.

Later, I learned that this was the origin of the plane that could be transposed, so I broke away from the original intermediate universe.

If you really want to say how to persevere, it is a small hope, this small hope for me is the manuscript fee, maybe this can be said to many people, but there are also many people who want to be recognized.

Therefore, I think that newcomers should insist on nothing more than two points: manuscript fee and recognition. Not seeing hope for the time being does not mean that there will be no hope forever.

With this spirit, with this hope, it is natural to persevere.

2. Ask questions:

Full-time BOSS: Now there are many friends who are underage to enter this circle, please tell me how old is the most appropriate, for example, I am 17 this year, no grades, should I persevere, or write after my twenties?

Personally, I think that 17 is not suitable for entering this circle, because there is no social experience, to put it bluntly, online literature is very closely related to life, some things need to rely on imagination, and some things are indeed common sense and experience in life.

For example, people who do not have children can never experience the joy of having children, let alone write about the relationship between father and son.

Full-time BOSS: As a newcomer, if the first book is not well written in the early stage, and there are only 113 books on the shelves, should you stick to it or give up?

I think we should persevere, and in the end, maybe the results are still not optimistic, but the foundation has been laid, and no matter what, the wording will improve a lot. (Black and white cute: Gain experience, right?) Yes, it's a process that has to go through.

Can you briefly talk about the biggest feature that distinguishes Bingwangwen from other categories?

The biggest point is that the strongest person in it has become a soldier, and the essence is not much different.

Fantasy must be upgraded, and the military must also be upgraded, and the difficulty of writing lies in whether it can write the taste of soldiers.

So how to upgrade the military text?

There are so many upgrades in military literature, I will first talk about the upgrade of military literature, and then how to write the taste of military literature.

Upgrades to the military language:

1. Private, private, non-commissioned officer of the first class, non-commissioned officer of the second class...... Ensign, lieutenant, captain. This is an upgrade in rank, very obviously.

2. Ordinary companies, reconnaissance companies, reconnaissance battalions, special forces...... This is an upgrade of the unit.

3. The regimental military competition, the marshal military competition, the devil's battalion, and the special forces selection and training ...... This is an upgrade in strength.

4. Running, shooting, tactics, grappling and fighting, etc., each of which is an upgrade. This is an upgrade of skills, which can be understood as an upgrade of a certain cultivation technique in a fantasy novel.

To use an analogy, the protagonist can accurately snipe targets 200 meters away, then 500 squints, then 1200 meters, and finally snipe enemies 2800 meters away with anti-materiel weapons. In this case, the upgrade is obvious.

The military upgrade system is roughly so much, of course, it can also be interspersed with some things, such as battlefield experience, from small battles, to small battlefields, and then to large battlefields, which is also an upgrade.

The taste of military literature:

The taste of military literature is difficult to write in the eyes of many people, but it is actually not difficult.

1. Weapons. Weapons can be found on Baidu, which is a representative thing for the military.

2. Loyalty. Military novels are an extension of the army, and any military work we can see is a slogan of loyalty, which is closely related to military enthusiasm.

3. Functions. This takes a little time to check the functions of some troops; For example, if you want to write an armed police anti-terrorism unit, you must understand the corresponding training content and functional characteristics. If you don't understand it, you will become four different after writing it.

4. Rules. This rule is very simple, that is, obedience, and it is the duty of soldiers to obey orders.

If these four points are grasped well, the taste of soldiers will basically come out.

Another: Nowadays, military novels are basically mixed abroad, and it is easy to touch the line when writing at home, but as long as you go abroad, you can play to your heart's content. Another important point is the comradeship and sacrifice spirit.

How to write a Hongda war scene in concise words, no matter how you write it yourself, there is always a kind of petty family atmosphere.

This is not difficult.

1. The situation; An environment of tension must be created. As long as it is tense, as long as it is urgent, then this overall environment will come out.

2. Small battles in big battles; The big battle scenes are highlighted by the small battle scenes that are separated, and the small battles are written cruelly, such as biting the enemy's ears when they die, so that the reader can feel the cruelty of this big war.

3. The use of weapons; A rumbling torrent of steel, tanks crushing in front, howitzers intensively bombarding a certain position, and helicopter gunships seizing air supremacy, using weapons with a wide range of lethality to set off.

How about military writing for hegemony? Write from small to big, such as impersonating big heroes.

That is the target positioning, when the little person is a small person, there can only be a small goal, for example, there is only one goal for a small person on the battlefield, which is to save his younger brother.

When he kills an enemy and saves his brother, his little goal is accomplished.

What if the enemy you killed was an important one? This little guy will be pushed, but his goal is still a small goal, which is a typical upgrade.

Generally speaking, this kind of environment pushes the protagonist to complete one small goal after another. When the small goals are completed, it becomes him to promote the overall environment.

The so-called hegemony is nothing more than being pushed first, and then pushing, the most typical upgrade text.

What should I do if I write with a lot of ideas, but I am not satisfied with what I have written?

It's a good thing to have too many ideas, and it's normal to be dissatisfied with what you write. Seriously, I'm not satisfied with every single one I write, because I think I could have written better, haha. I guess everyone has this common problem.

If it's a problem with writing skills, then add skills, if it's not a problem with skills, then refer to a positioning, and the standard for this positioning is: whether I write a cool essay or not. Shuangwen is unique, light and simple, clear and easy to understand, the joy of harvest, the quick pass of revenge, the sense of game of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, the sense of justice of recognition, etc.

In line with the cool text factor, so what is not satisfied? If it is written and cannot be expressed, then there must be a problem with the wording and other basic aspects.

There is also the easiest way to throw it to the editor, to throw it to a friend.

If most people think it's good, then it's not much of a problem.

Generally speaking, a large-scale war between countries is better to focus on the personal combat power of the protagonist or the strategy used by the corps led by the protagonist?

This depends on the individual's ability to control and positioning, if it is written in the form of personal heroism, it is natural to value the individual. Anyway, it is a novel, and the individual reverses the local situation and thus affects the overall situation.

For example, the protagonist infiltrates behind enemy lines and kidnaps important people in the enemy country, so he can naturally turn the situation around by himself.

The way to write the flow of war is team and tactics, but this way of writing is not much different from individual heroes, it is nothing more than turning the individual into a team.

One person kills and kills, and a lone army goes deep into the depths is also killing, killing, killing. A person can kidnap the princess and queen, and an army can do the same, the only difference is that the tactics of a force must be well designed, which requires a little effort to make a simple map, where to attack first and then where to attack.

What kind of opponent he is, what kind of character, how many troops, and what kind of combat he is good at will be clear at a glance after marking, and then control the troops to attack one by one.

Every time, it's clear that the character design is very well structured, but when I write, I always deviate, and the person's personality is different, what should I do?

This questioning kid must have a strong mind and a strong jump.

If that's the case, learn from me, write without an outline, and your thinking won't be controlled. (Black and white cute: Seven pins of giants, you actually have no outline...... ）

Yes, I don't have an outline, set the beginning, set several important links and endings, and play the rest as you like. If the general direction does not deviate, there will be no major problem.

The important plot points are not biased, even if they are deviated halfway, they can be pulled back. (Black and white cute: How to pull?) ）

Pits can be dug! For example, the next node is that the protagonist is going to carry out a big mission, but the protagonist is visiting relatives and going home, which is already biased, so he encountered a violent incident on the way home from visiting relatives, and followed the incident all the way to enter this task, but he entered from another aspect.

Insert a digging hole halfway, such as the truth behind the big guys, so that it can be extended again.

If you want to write a war well, you should focus on what details should be described, or what details can be done, you can write a war well, and what aspects can be highlighted about the tension of the big scene in addition to describing the weather?

Personally, I think that the details of the war are more about the foreshadowing before the war, which is particularly important, creating a strong sense of expectation and urgency, after entering the war, it is still the local battles I just mentioned, if we are entangled in the overall battlefield, we can't write it at all, the picture that can be expressed by the text is very weak, and the American blockbuster war is good-looking, right? For example, a beachfront landing at the beginning of "Saving Private Ryan" can set the overall tone.

What's in the back? Small battles, always small battles. Doesn't that feel like it's a big war?

There is also this atmosphere creation in addition to the description of the weather, psychology, everyone's psychology is different, the battlefield especially needs psychological conflicts, some people want to escape, some people are excited, and some people have no choice but to accept it, but when the shells fall, everything changes, it becomes a fight for life, everything is no longer important, life is the first thing. The battle for survival and the battle of shouting slogans, naturally the former is more substitutional.

How do you grasp the rhythm well, the rhythm feels slow, but I feel good when I reread it, and I feel that something is missing when I cut it out?

Let's put it this way, we set a small goal, that is, to win the first place in sniping in the regimental competition. Suppose this is 30,000 words, a regiment has 12 companies, and each company has a sniper to participate in, and the protagonist can challenge it, and there are selective challenges.

By the time he reached 30,000 words, he understood the habits and ways of challenging the object. Knowing oneself and knowing one's opponent, it unexpectedly won at 30,000 words.

This is the rhythm, this is the plot.

What can be specifically expressed through the sense of substitution, so that readers can naturally substitute it?

Some categories are born with a sense of substitution, such as the theme of the Anti-Japanese War, as long as you kill devils, you can have a sense of substitution, and the embodiment of substitution is skill, which is the basic skill, but it is usually nothing more than these points.

1. Oppression.

2. Being humiliated

3. Abandoned

4. Despised for it

These are the most basic points, and they are no different from us in real life. ”

"This is negative, the positive is usually based on a sense of justice, such as rescue, in the case of unaffordable, the protagonist's sense of justice exploded, and in the impossible case, the rescue task was completed, and it was naturally substituted, everyone has a self-hero living in their hearts, satisfying the reader's sense of heroism, what else can not be substituted?"

How do you embody a person's resourcefulness? Is it better to make up a perfect campaign or to know the enemy's next move?

Each has its own strengths, and the resourceful can control the overall situation, accurately calculate the development trend of the gaffe, and make a step to know the next step The sense of substitution will be stronger. For example, walking into a trap, falling into a Jedi, and then the Jedi fighting back. What dominates the whole situation is a kind of pleasure of violence and cruelty.

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Technique handling and story construction of self-description and fiction:

I'm the channel operations manager of Fei Lu's side, and I'm also an old author who has been writing books for six years, not to mention that this aspect is very good, but at least the ordinary level can still be achieved, and 50 of the 80 books I chose can exceed 10,000, which is almost like this.

I've prepared two here, and on the other side is the technical processing of the novel and the construction of the story.

(1) Let me talk about the skills first:

Many students believe that they will encounter a problem when writing essays, that is, they feel that the writing is scummy, Kavinka's can't write, or they feel that the feelings are not brewing in place, and the climax is not well written.

So~ I'll teach you a few ways first. One is typography, one is character symbols, and the other is sentence breaking.

1. Let's talk about symbols first, for example, a boy wants to pursue a girl, prepare to confess, and say I love you to the girl (I give an example here, I hope you can experience the effect of different uses of symbols.) I can only point to you, I can't help you specifically)

Example 1:

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This is the use of symbols, in fact, the words are still the same, but you add a different number of exclamation marks, choose different symbols, it will have different effects, so it is recommended that you figure out the use of symbols, although this can not improve the writing much, but can add a lot of color to the novel.

2. Secondly, there are broken sentences.

Example 2:

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There is also punctuation about sentence breaks, you can experience it carefully.

3. Let's talk about typography.

Many children's shoes may know the layout, such as a few sentences to arrange the layout, but the grasp is still very shallow, the same sentences, different layout, will also play a different effect, so that the content of the novel is enriched a lot.

Example 3:

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Which one has a more graphic sense, you can experience it, and I feel the best for the use of typesetting skills, which is greasy. I'll give you an example.

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You can take a closer look at which sentence the beginning of the book comes from. Not only this one, but in fact, many of them are, often after a lengthy narrative, a short sentence in a paragraph after typesetting, which can often bring readers the strongest sense of picture.

I have carefully studied many novels, and I have found that the most attractive ones are often those short sentences, and many great gods have worked these short sentences.

This is actually related to the reader's reading habits, when the reader sees a long sentence, it will pass quickly, but the short one will read very seriously. (Donghuang Taiyi: Short sentences are really easy to stop the reader's mind.) Yes, that's it, so it's recommended to use long and short sentences when writing essays.

For example:

Passerby A FDSDASDSAFSDSDSDSDSDSDSDSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFSFFSFSFSFSFFSFSFFSF

Passerby A, won

You see, if I type a random word, your focus will definitely be on the back. Therefore, short sentences should be used well, and how to use them will not be expanded here......

(2) Let me tell you the structure of the story:

The structure of the story, how to systematically write an essay?

Many authors believe that there is a trouble, how to write a story, I will teach you a way to sort out, for example, if you want to write a story, you first determine what story you want to write.

For example, if you want to write a story about youth and inspiration, don't bully young people and be poor, that is, the story of a passer-by who became a god against the sky. This is a main line, and the main line is to become a god against the sky.

The main story is there, right? Then you can set the background of the pig's feet: the story of a bullied passerby A who counterattacked and became a god→ the story of a bullied young master of the Ye family who counterattacked and became a god→ a story of a bullied young master of the Ye family, who counterattacked and became a god when he fell in the middle of the family road, and finally ascended to the altar. Step by step, this is your main thread.

Then around this main line, you can set up two different lines, one is to set the plot that prevents the pig's feet from completing the main story, and the other is to help the pig's feet complete the main story. That is, one is an obstacle and the other is a help.

For example, if you want to set up obstacles, then the obstacle is what the innate qi is not there, and the main line of being pulled by people with hundreds of limbs and bones, and then the main line of compliance is very simple, that is, the pig's feet get the golden finger, and step by step develop the golden finger and embark on the road to becoming a god.

In fact, throughout many TV dramas, novels, movies, or something~ In a movie, there is often a main line, one is to promote the main line, and the other is to prevent the main line.

Take the familiar tomb robbery notes as an example:

Pig's feet are to explore, and then the main line is exploration, one plot is to explore successfully, to discover a greater exploration, and the other plot is to explore and be prevented.

Maybe I'm more abstract to put it this way:

For example, it is a very popular love series or something~ Love series, the main line is that the hero and heroine are together, and then you will be surprised to find that every plot either prevents the hero and heroine from being together, or promotes the hero and heroine to be together, interlocking, step by step, and often, in order to expand the audience, there are often many such love lines, crossing, vertical and horizontal, sometimes intersecting and sometimes diverging.

With this in mind, it's a good idea to start writing a story. Only when you figure out the routine can you write the routine, right? For example, a fantasy upgrade text: encounter a setback - get a cheat - upgrade - solve a setback - encounter the next setback, further develop the cheat, upgrade, solve the setback.

An upgrade article came out so clearly.

Another example is modern urban literature: When I meet the male protagonist, I secretly promise to encounter a crisis - solve the crisis and improve the goodwill of men and women - I encounter other crises - because of a misunderstanding, I have no good feelings with the male protagonist - I encounter a crisis again, the male protagonist saves the scene, the misunderstanding is resolved, and the goodwill is improved again - when I encounter the next crisis, the hero and heroine can't be together - solve the crisis - the hero and heroine can finally be together, and I have encountered a major event again, I can't be together, and then I encounter the mother-in-law and my father-in-law are difficult, all kinds of difficulties, You can be together, you can't be together......

The above is the construction of the story of the novel.

2. Ask questions:

I'm going to start a few, but I don't know which one is the best, can you talk about it?

Start with this, write that if you're sure.

I want to ask about slapping the face? What should I pay attention to? How to fight?

If you slap your face, pay attention to foreshadowing. Generally seventy percent of the foreshadowing, three percent of the outbreak, if you personally feel that the face is not good, it is recommended not to pave the face directly, the pig's feet are two punches, directly beaten down.

Mr. Yue, the plot is too old-fashioned, can it be popular?

It depends on the pen power, the plot is old-fashioned, and the pen power can and can.

Luna, now the rebirth stream, the system stream so much. Waste firewood flow, is it difficult to catch fire?

The setting, the background, are all very important, if you write well, you can get up, and there are many books that have become popular recently.

Every time I say something when I taunt it, writing it makes me feel like I'm a fool?

Then don't write ridicule, just crush it domineeringly, and avoid shortcomings.

I wrote about the plot of the auction, I don't know how to write it, I read a lot of novels, and the traces of imitation are very heavy, will it be said to be plagiarism? Because I feel that the plot of the auction is almost always the same, and there are few new ideas?

You are actually very simple, jump away and write, for example, the plot of the same auction, others are talking about preparing to buy magic weapons, you pig's feet walk up leisurely, "I bought them all", and then there are all kinds of ridicule, pig's feet don't look at them, turn around and leave.

How to describe the transition chapter from the end of the event to the next event, and how to write it to be vivid, thank you?

To be vivid is actually very simple, write around this event, what A says, B says, C says, what is D's reaction, specific examples can refer to the founding ceremony, a new China, how many lens changes, are written around this event, in fact, it is a foreshadowing.

What should I do if I am not satisfied with the climax no matter how I write it? It's time to fight the boss.,But I feel like it's almost hard to write.,There's no sense of orgasm?

This is a matter of pen power.,If you feel that the climax is not well written.,You can add a pig's foot after killing the boss after the pig's foot kills the boss.,What caused?,Make XXXX surprised.,Let XXXX exclaim.,Let XXXX be scared half to death.。

What should I do if the plot is slow to advance?

I feel that I am writing long-winded words, but in fact, the way to deal with it is very simple, just write a few key words, such as a sentence describing the scene, how is the big river, how is the big river...... How about the beauty...... you feel too verbose, as long as you find the right keywords.

It can be written like this: The river is mighty, and the beauty is like the moon!

There is also a little more experience of these words: 'small bridge, flowing water, people', these are all key words, put together is the artistic conception.

Many of your descriptive statements can actually be directly simplified, and if you fight fiercely, it depends on your personality, and there is no limit to this.

Sometimes dialogue is very important, but if you write too much, it will feel cumbersome?

Actually, don't worry about this problem, you just write according to your own ideas, cover your head first, and then look back after writing, you will know how to delete it, I personally think that the novel should be made clear, it's okay to be verbose, artistic conception or something~ You have to wait for the reader to understand it to understand it......"