Chapter 233: It seems to make a lot of sense
Tang Zhu woke up suddenly, fiddled with his pen, licked his dry lips, and stood up. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ļ½ļ½ļ½ļ½ļ½ļ½ ć ļ½ļ½ļ½ļ½
"Generally speaking, it should be combined with YY, combined with pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, combined with a clear level division, combined with a large number of exercise treasures, combined with many copy demons...... It is also necessary to combine a protagonist aura to make him unique! ā
"Upgrading the practice routines, after years of experience, I have now come to the following part of the conclusions, to share with you, if there are mistakes, don't be surprised."
Speaking of this, Tang Zhu smiled at the classmates around him, and then cleared his throat.
"First of all, obviously, you need a male lead-"
Tang Zhu deliberately dragged out his voice.
"I still have a few opinions about this actor......"
Some people snickered from time to time in the class, obviously familiar with an official tone like Tang Zhu, and Qin Kai's expression on the podium gradually turned iron blue, and he seemed to be very uninterested in Tang Zhu's remarks.
Seeing that everyone was shaking their heads and sighing, Tang Zhu secretly sighed that the time had come, and couldn't help but increase his voice.
"Second! It's important to note that this is crucial. This protagonist should be a very ordinary, even very unlucky "innocent body" at the beginning, and then he will dedicate himself to peerless beauties. ā
"Third! At the beginning of the plot, he should have stumbled upon something inconspicuous. ā
"Fourth, this thing is a big treasure, with a lot of magical and practical powerful functions, with cheats, plug-ins and other anti-heaven functions!"
"Fifth, explain the origin of this thing a little bit, leave a foreshadowing, and discover it little by little in the future. You can't let the protagonist know all the uses of things at once. Naturally, this is also to arouse the interest of the will of the plane. ā
"As for this sixth point, after getting the benefits from the baby, the former enemy will definitely take revenge, and the enemy has been chasing but has not been able to catch up with the beautiful woman. Who's got it? Can it be those tricks? No! It has to be the protagonist, and all good things have to be left to the protagonist! Of course, this is known to everyone, and I don't need to say more. ā
"Seventh, after getting benefits from the baby, you will definitely cause trouble, and if you get trouble, you will get trouble, and so on, the snowball will get bigger and bigger, and the story will become more and more complex and exciting. These troubles, there are annoying and powerful enemies, there are cute and charming beauties, and of course, there are also lunch boxes who don't know the height of the sky. ā
"Eighth! The protagonist, with the help of the baby, will definitely be able to kill people beyond the level. In this way, at least two or more of the same level can be defeated, so that you can pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger to the end! ā
Hearing this, all the students showed a solemn expression, some of them had already begun to take notes, and the lecturer Qin Kai was also very relieved, and motioned for Tang Zhu to continue.
āā¦ā¦ Ninth, the treasure obtained will involve a huge copy, and the copy has a rapidly upgraded Dongdong. Tenth, there will be people who take a fancy to the protagonist's abilities and invite or force the protagonist to join them in the dungeon that they know in advance, but have not yet gone to. Do? Of course, it's a monster hunt! Ha ha. Then, the protagonist quickly upgrades in this one copy after another, turns over and takes the lead, and turns the danger into a disaster! ā
"Eleventh,The protagonist generally has a BOSS-level enemy.,This enemy,Don't bother to do it yourself.,Old-school some box lunches that are a little higher than the protagonist come to let the protagonist level up.,Wait until the boss personally shoots before you regret it.ć Or the boss will personally attack in advance, and then at the same time, another boss from the protagonist's side will come to stop and rescue. Otherwise, the protagonist is dead, and he's still playing with a fart! ā
Tang Zhu's voice became faster and faster, and the voice of taking notes became faster and faster.
"Twelfth, among the beauties that the protagonist encounters, at least one beauty is very big, and this beauty's own strength is generally not stronger than the protagonist, even if it is stronger than the protagonist, it is not as fast as the protagonist's upgrade. Even if you level up faster than the main character, you will only end up as an accessory. Remember, remember! We're not playing female frequency! The male protagonist can hang the sky, and the female protagonist is just a symbol, so you don't need to pay too much attention. ā
"Thirteenth, there must be villains who make enemies for the beauty and the protagonist to make trouble for the protagonist, and then the protagonist gets it. Fourteenth, the protagonist is getting smarter and smarter as his strength increases, unlike the supporting characters, the more powerful he is, the more stupid he becomes, hehe. Of course, this is all the effect of the aura of reducing intelligence. Before the mission begins, be sure to stock up on enough Wisdom Aura. ā
"Fifteenth, the powerful and inconspicuous baby that the protagonist encounters at the beginning will accompany him until the end of the story. Sixteenth, those who are close to the protagonist must all be beautiful, and those who are against the protagonist must be, all! Division! Die! Break off! Those who help the protagonist, the protagonist will definitely give feedback tenfold and hundredfold, and those who use the protagonist will often be dug up more benefits by the protagonist in turn, so when the characters in the supporting roles are prescient, they must have good eyes! ā
"Seventeenth, the protagonist didn't know what the character was at first, anyway, later, it must be a character who kills people without blinking. Even if you don't, you will definitely not be afraid of killing, let alone trembling hands. Otherwise, why would he be the protagonist? Let's not want rookies, rookies can die. ā
"Eighteenth, the protagonist is certainly in favor of polygamy, even if he is not explicitly in favor of polygamy. Even if he really "disapproves", he will definitely be forced to "approve". Men, they all know. ā
Tang Zhu left his seat and came to the podium, Qin Kai silently left his seat with a look of appreciation.
"The nineteenth point, in addition to the company of beautiful women, the protagonist usually has a male number two who sets off the image. This male number two can be an animal or a human. Of course, there may also be females, like this, most of them are well-behaved and cute Lori. About this Lori?,I didn't have any experience in manipulation before.,Let's make progress together.,Hehe.,Progress together.ć ā
"Article 20, generally speaking, there should be a potential enemy who is as good as the protagonist, the same luck, the same magic weapon, and so on. This person is likely to be the biggest obstacle for the protagonist to the eve of the end of the story, the protagonist will definitely be able to defeat him, but it will certainly not be easy, at least once will not work. But it will definitely be defeated, who calls our host the protagonist of the plane? In case we become the pseudo-protagonists of our grandfathers, then we can't leave those little shrimps half a chance. ā
"This is the twenty rules of Tang's YY, everyone is welcome to criticize and correct, I am grateful!"
In the applause of everyone, Tang Zhu took the opportunity to leave the podium and returned to his seat.
"Xiao Tang, I'm very optimistic about you."
Qin Kai also nodded.
Next, let's extend these rules a little more. You should pay attention to it, this is a valuable opportunity to improve yourself! ā
"However, after all, Xiao Tang is only from a low-level universe, and he doesn't know much about the recent development of routines. Just like in Xiao Tang's place, well, it is also my hometown Wanxian low-level universe, the Xiuzhen stream has differentiated into the Xianxia stream, and the technology stream has differentiated into the urban stream, and now the routines in the guild are changing with each passing day, and they have reached a very rich point. ā
"As far as our Longkong Comprehensive College is concerned, it can also be divided into two basic schools. Near-realistic: urban, youth, romance, military, historical, suspenseful. Near-fantasy categories include: fantasy, fantasy, time-traveling, and cultivation. ā
Students, do you know what this "reality" is? It's not the world we're in, it'sā"
Qin Kai was talking, and suddenly seemed to remember something, and stopped abruptly.
"Ahem, that's not a good question to answer. Well, at your level, you can't understand it yet, so let's talk about it later. ā
[Could it be that I am not in the real world now?] ć
A ridiculous thought suddenly flashed in Tang Zhu's mind.
"The next thing is a bit out of the ordinary, and I don't know if you'll be able to understand it smoothly. All in all, according to the style of the plane mission - this style, you should have a little feeling, right? ā
"According to the whole, it can be divided into drama, comedy, and tragedy. According to the rhythm, it can be divided into relaxed, hilarious, and dark. According to the text, oh no, it should be said that according to the laws of the plane, it can be divided into ordinary, funny, sad, beautiful ......"
Qin Kai paid special attention to the students' reactions, but found that even Tang Zhu's face showed a blank look, and he couldn't help but be a little disappointed.
"Well, you'll get it later. Alas...... This reality, non-reality, the origin world and the like are just a theory, not necessarily true, or the threat of the main god space is more imminent. Now that the guild is about to collapse, the senior leaders still care about these things......"
"In short, I ask you to put your Plane Mission Operational Records into writing. You don't need to memorize it all, just one or two thousand words, and you can summarize it roughly. This is probably the guild's latest research result - 'outline'! ā
Looking at the little heads under the podium that revealed a blank look, Qin Kai also had a headache. It seems that these junior students, who are deeply educated in traditional taolu theory, cannot correctly understand and accept the new theory of the guild. It was Tang Zhu who lowered his head, not knowing what he was thinking.
"Forget it, I'll tell you the truth, there's nothing to say. The guild is located in the bustling area of the high-level universe, and you all come from different low-level universes, and we are now in a medium-level universe. Do you think that the advanced universe is the limit of the cosmic level? No! ā
"Above it, there is a higher level of the Origin World, which is the so-called 'reality'! I won't go into more details, you can put down the doubts in your heart and do as I say. You should write down your plan for the tasks you are going to carry out. ā
"At the very least, there must be seven or eight hundred thousand words! Preferably more than two million words. It's a long-term process, and you can write it in stages. Listen to me, this has something to do with the guild's latest discovery, and this so-called 'latest discovery' has been around for two or three hundred years, and this is your opportunity, and it is our opportunity!" Do as I say, and you won't suffer. ā
Tang Zhu suppressed the doubts in his heart, did not ask, and continued to listen.
"How many words are in the whole text, you estimate by yourself, at least 600,000 words! You have received higher education in the lower realm, so it should not be difficult. This first practice work, I don't have high requirements for you, you just need to be able to read it smoothly. ā
"The gist of this content - the cause, the development, the turning point, the climax, the end, you should not have forgotten the whole of your 60 years of Chinese education in primary school, right? Just write whatever you want, just pick up the most exciting things that you think are the most interesting according to your daily task experience. ā
"About the main plot setting...... What the? Can't get it? If you don't understand, keep listening, and do as I tell you until you can understand! ā
Seeing that the students in the class all had sad faces, Qin Kai also sighed helplessly.
"Okay, let me give you a hint, don't spread the word, this is a secret, the highest level of secret, even I don't get this information so easily!"
"The main line, the auxiliary line, the event line, the emotional line, ah, that is, the climax, the ups and downs, and the trough, are easy to understand, right? Also pay attention to the logic before and after...... Forget it, the requirements for you can't be too high, it doesn't matter if the logic is illogical, just be able to read it.
"The overall synopsis of a novel is what kind of story you want to tell. Write a clear main line, at least 500 words. That's right, the name for these contents is 'fiction', and you may not understand it yet, but it's okay, I'll explain it to you. ā
"The characters should have the main character and a number of supporting characters. As for the name...... It's up to you to choose a name. But I suggest that you choose a name and don't take some obscure words, at least not let me read the text without recognizing what to pronounce after reading it! The name should be simple and easy to remember. ā
"The appearance of the character, i.e. the hair color, hairstyle, eyes, carrying, oh, including the gold finger. Appearance can reflect a person's personality and temper, for example: a person with the word "Chuan" in the center of his eyebrows is easily angry, and his personality is more impatient...... Pay attention to the depiction! ā
"Personality introduction: straight temper, strong self-esteem, love and hate, etc. Character background: Modern, ancient, completely unlimited, if it's overhead - overhead is far away from the origin world, strictly speaking, we are also ...... Well, let's put that aside for now. ā
"You also need a complex background that brings out the character's social status, abilities, and so on. Skills: In ancient times, I wrote what martial arts and what system I had. 'Invincible Shenhao System' and so on. Modern texts are written about character specialties and golden fingers. Like what...... There is no limit to this specialty. You should know more than I do. ā
"If there are a few supporting roles, just write a few, the supporting roles are to set off the protagonist, you can write in detail or abbreviate, you know the importance of the role in your own hearts."
"The relationship between the characters and the refinement of the plot will be explained in detail later. Let me start with a few examples. ā
"1. In what context the protagonists meet
2. What happened to disrupt the relationship between the characters
3. What happened again, how to solve the misunderstanding, and the relationship between the characters was restored to the same as before......"
The setting at the end:
1: Death, the protagonist dies one, and the other tragedy.
2: Great reunion: The people who love each other are together, all the tribulations are lifted, and all are happy and happy......
3: Leave suspense: The ending is suspenseful, making people guess what the future of the protagonist will be
4: Revealing the secret: At the end of the article, the secrets are revealed one by one
5: There are countless ways to set an ending. The final direction of your storyline development is determined at the beginning of the writing, and how the ending will be ......"
"By the way, one last thing, you also have to write something called 'copywriting'. As soon as the article is opened, it is your copy, which is generally a brief introduction to the work.
Introduction: Write the characteristics of the story within 300 words, the purpose is to attract others and make others have an urge to read the text. Don't ask me what the use of this is! That must be useful. Now that the guild landscape has changed, it's no longer the time to do things behind closed doors! ā
Tang Zhu felt a little headache as he listened to Qin Kai's gushing speech on the podium, but he still recorded these things.
āā¦ā¦ Alright, take your backup database away, I'm going to see your results in a month. Classes continue in the afternoon, theory is followed by practice, and we are very short on time. Thirty years is a short time, seize the day, be sure to seize the time! ā
At noon, after lunch, Tang Zhu sat in the classroom, browsed the information in the backup database at full speed, recalled his past experience, and greeted the sunlight outside the window, Tang Zhu spread out the manuscript paper and wrote the first line.
Through the window, you can see that line of words: "Reborn Camel Xiangzi"
[This is one of the historical materials in the database, describing a low-tech, demon-forbidden near-historical plane.] I used it as a blueprint and infiltrated the era called the "Republic of China", which should be more innovative, right? ć
Tang Zhu put down his pen, sorted out the manuscript, and walked out.
At 14 p.m., a chubby female teacher walked into the classroom.
"Hello students, I'm Luo Shan, and I'm a senior teaching assistant in the department next door. This time, I will teach you how to draw the 'outline' in detail. ā
"Alas, you Teacher Qin don't talk much, but he is very concise. But in my opinion, it is still far from enough. You are all smart people, and you all know what has happened to the guild recently, which makes the guild leaders so anxious, and even does not hesitate to increase the number of admission places to cultivate new forces. ā
"But I'm not qualified to tell you anything specific. After one month, your work will be submitted to the examination office of Longkong Academy for review, and 90% of the entries will be unqualified. Of the 36 of you, only three or four will stay, and the others will be eliminated! ā
"Why? It's because we've over-admitted too many students! Among you, eighty percent, ninety, or even ninety percent of the students are unqualified and will be dismissed. Now that the guild's standards have changed, do you still think the old ones can survive? You Teacher Qin are bodhisattvas and can't bear to tell you the truth. Not with me, Roshan. Why write this weird thing called a 'novel'? Why write an 'outline'? The final answer to all of this will not be solved until you pass the examination in a month's time, and most of you will never know the answer in your lifetime! ā
Seeing that everyone in the class was frightened, Roseanne nodded in satisfaction.
[Maybe something big is happening...... Even ignore the threat of the main god space - maybe it has something to do with the origin world, the so-called "reality"? ć
Tang Zhu was still thinking nonsense, but Luo Shan's explanation had already begun.
ā1 . A novel outline doesn't need to be formatted, but in my experience, it's generally a few steps;
1st, divided into four parts; i.e. time, place, person, main content.
Second, fill in the main content of each part in detail; The time is generally written in the background, and it does not have to be detailed to the day, time and minute.
If you're writing a novel, the initial schedule may need to be changed, but does it make sense if you change the time frequently when revising? Then there is the location, and I will write a few big locations first. Easy to modify. ā
"In terms of characters, it is necessary to write from the aspects of personality, identity and background, etc., and it is necessary to be more detailed here, because the more detailed the introduction of the characters, the more beneficial it is to promote the development of the plot in the future, because if you are clear about the character and identity of the characters, you can understand how the characters will deal with changes in the surrounding environment, as well as emotions."
Tang Zhu quietly glanced up at the fat lady, keenly aware that she was using the title "you".
"I don't know if you've seen Shakespeare...... Well, it may not be that way in your lower universe, but there should be similar scholars. Shakespeare's work starts with the character of the character. ā
"In terms of the main content, my general approach is; Outline the beginning and end of the event. The development process in the middle is empty, and it is still convenient to revise, add and delete, and finally fill in this part when finalizing. ā
"A lot of new authors -- it's you old grandfathers, you junior students! Really, lecturing to junior students is a waste of effort. After a large number of works have been released, it is left to the reader, cough, you can also understand "reader" as the will of the plane, then it is easier for you to think about it. What you leave to the will of the plane, what you leave to the readers is confusion, even including the author himself, you experienced grandfathers are in confusion, so how can you write? ā
"At the beginning, I wanted to write a magnificent masterpiece, the scene was huge, but halfway through the writing, I found that I didn't know how to write the text, I didn't know how to continue, how to finish, hundreds of thousands of words of articles can move readers, how to write with confidence, which requires, like before building a building, there must be a set of fine drawings, any part can be known, the article will also, and the plot can also be gradual."
"It's impossible for your work to be submitted to that place now......"
Luo Shan muttered a few sentences and continued: "But it doesn't matter, the comrades in the examination office of the college are the readers, and they are the will of the plane. Before you can conquer a wide audience, be sure to go through their harsh eyes. 1 in 10 chance of passing, comrades! The task is daunting and very difficult to pass! ā
"The following outline is for the new authors - even if you already have a lot of experience in your own low-level universes, you are only the gold medal grandfathers of the low-level universes. To the Intermediate Universe, to the Guild, you are still newbies. Yes, that's right, you're novices, you're beginners, you're newcomers! ā
"The 'people' are also people, and the scholars are also." The one who does 'creates, and the establishment is also, that is, the meaning of the initiation. What is an 'author'? The Founder is the God of Creation! As long as your level is high enough, you can evolve the real world through your works, create your own plane, and harvest a large amount of plane origin! ā
"What is a 'novel'? That is what you have done, what you have created, what you have said! One word can transform the world, this is the 'author', this is the power of the legendary grandfather! ā
Seeing that the students in the hall nodded one after another, Luo Shan also wiped the cold sweat on his forehead, thinking that he had finally fulfilled these words.
She coughed and continued.
"The college arranged for me to tutor you students who crossed the department, then I will provide you with a framework for writing novels, which is also suitable for multiple people to write together, if you treat the novel as a person, then this outline is the skeleton of the novel, the plot is the muscle, the style is the appearance, and the pen power is the emotion."
"Without a solid skeleton, the novel will appear weak and weak, so that the reader cannot really understand the author's intentions! The novel is not for the author himself, but for thousands of readers to enjoy! At the very least, it must be reviewed by the examination office! Therefore, it is important to express yourself clearly. ā
"First of all, before you let others see it, you must know it yourself better than others."
"Although the outline below is a bit like the premise of the game...... What is the game, everyone understands, right? Is there a game stream for students, raise your hand? ā
A few sparse people in the class raised their hands, and Tang Zhu was among them. Roshan nodded, motioning for her to put her hand down.
"This is also the element that the novel needs to have, every link and setting is clearly listed before writing, because writing a novel spans a long time, and it is impossible for people's memory to remember the original set content for a long time, and there will be no embarrassing situation such as starting and even deviating from the original setting when writing."
"The editing of each section will be like enlarging a sentence into thousands of words, so that the progress and direction of the novel can be grasped at any time, and the difficulty of writing will be greatly reduced, which will help new authors to show their unique style and creativity to everyone. After you pass the assessment in one month, the academy will equip you with a light brain to facilitate your creation. ā
"The following is a draft outline for writing, so let's decide on the title of the book first. Then divide the subject matter. Fantasy, martial arts, science fiction, fantasy, military, YY, divided into many categories, inexhaustible. I'm sure you've already learned this through your own work.
"Second, the theme; What do you want to say about the main plot content? Third; Brief introduction; Fourth; Estimated word count; XX million. Fifth, it is the environment setting. ā
"Environmental geography; Which world environment, such as a different time and space, needs to be explained, what location, the farther back and farther, for the character to move. You've all been to countless planes, and you should already have a lot of experience, so it's not that difficult. It doesn't matter if it's east, west, north, south, middle or something like that. ā
"Sixth; Character setting. Positive characters, negative characters, intermediate characters and miscellaneous professions. There are also names; Gender, age, personality, language style, initial skills, post-learning skills, and so on. ā
"Good, you still know how to take notes, I'm satisfied."
Roseanne looked at the students who were taking notes, and the nervousness in her heart subsided a lot.
"Another important aspect is skill setting. Do you remember the golden fingers you arranged for your hosts in the past? There's nothing wrong with being inspired by it, or even copying your own life experience entirely. ā
"Skill name; Dimensions, shape, weight, location of main functions, special effects, manufacturing composition. Pay more attention to the arrangement of the gold finger, this is a monthly test assessment with a elimination rate of nine out of ten! ā
"The plot setting is also indispensable for you junior students. Just use the most concise sentence to introduce the whole plot, mainly including the environmental introduction; world pattern; distribution of power; Plot structure: The protagonist is born; living environment; triggering the plot; The protagonist joins the WTO...... There are many things that you don't need to memorize. With your sense of rhythm, with a little reminder from me, you can do it very well. ā
"Introduction, in-house, dialogue, learning, frustration, teaming, ally, helping, hostility, fighting, feuding, evolution, re-learning, great power, division or development, end-of-verse battle, end-of-verse ending, hostility, such plots are indispensable."
Speaking of this, Luo Shan's face suddenly revealed a little ambiguity.
"Actually, you can still team up to write it...... Theme proposal, plot planning, initial outline, creative supplement - plot supplement - establish outline - lump sum distribution - review of the draft - chapter revision - adjustment of ideas - return draft correction - splicing and polishing - loopholes group repair, just a few points, as long as you can find someone else with strength to cooperate with you, then you can team up, which does not violate the regulations. ā
As she spoke, Roseanne glanced at everyone with bad intentions.
"That's how I came back then...... However, the stylistic and linguistic changes in your work must be done by the same person; If the country needs others to fill in the renewal, it is necessary to provide a detailed outline and ideas of the renewal, and retain the personal mark of the renewer.
If you have some foreshadowing or new ideas, you need to indicate them at the end of the section to facilitate the writing later. If a single section is reviewed and revised by the original author, a detailed book review needs to be written, with advantages and disadvantages. As long as the cooperation is good, even if the chance of passing is less than 1 in 10, it can fully meet the requirements of Longkong Comprehensive College! ā
"You've only got a month, you don't want to be cleared, do you? Then work hard! Want to know the purpose of these requests? Easy to do! You only need to meet the assessment criteria. Although you are already a full member of the Plane Grandpa Guild, who doesn't know the importance of the graduation certificate of the Dragon Sky Comprehensive Academy? It's a great thing to have! ā
"Prepare well and play hard. There's still a month, and it's still too late. Tomorrow's course will continue, time is running out, you go back early, and make your own 'outline' first! ā