Lin Chuxue thought that the script would be difficult to write, but in fact, she came up with a rough story that night. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

The next day, Lin Chuxue summarized all the ideas and wrote a story of about 2,000 words. It mainly tells the story of the deeds of six friends who were fighting together in the rivers and lakes. The plot can be said to be a bit bland, but Lin Chuxue feels that it fits the theme of martial arts games very well.

So, Lin Chuxue excitedly posted the story to the WeChat group and asked the friends to give some opinions. Everyone else thinks it's good, but after Yue Lianfeng read the story, she was particularly surprised.

Moon Love: Cher, did you write it yourself?

Xue Chu: yes.

Moon Love: I don't know what to say......

Xue Chu: It's okay, what to say, I'm not good at writing this. If you think it's badly written, just say it and change it until everyone is satisfied.

Jinxiu: Happy enmity, smiling proudly, I think this story is very good.

Affection: Well, it's good, but I always feel like something is missing?

Moon Love: It's not that this story is bad, it's just, how to say it, if Xiuxiu wrote it, I really don't think there's anything wrong. But Xue'er, you're a girl, there is no emotional drama in this story, can you not be surprised?

Deep affection: Yes, yes, there is less emotional scenes. There are men and women in this character, but there is no emotional line, no wonder I always feel that something is missing.

Xue Chu: Ah, this ...... I hadn't really thought about it.

Jinxiu: Haha, Xue'er, you are also enough, the men and women in your pen are brothers and sisters.

Snow Beginning: ...... Isn't it okay buddy?

Jinxiu: Okay, haha, let me go to the laughing party first.

Wind Falling: Cher doesn't seem to be good at dealing with feelings.

Moon Love: Husband, hurry up and withdraw this, the great god is still there.

Wind Fall retracted a message.

Wind Falling Moon: ...... Hand mistake, don't get me wrong.

Snow Beginning: ......

Songs: Facts.

Jinxiu: [snickering] Silence is better than sound here, and I seem to feel the deep helplessness of the great god.

Deep love: I didn't expect Xue'er to be so slow.

Moon Love: Secretly order a wax for the great god.

Snow Beginning: ......

Is this script still going to be discussed?

seemed to be able to predict Lin Chuxue's embarrassing mood, Han Gexing immediately shifted the topic to business and helped her out.

Xing Song: Talk about business.

Jinxiu: Why don't Ah Yue change it, anyway, Xue'er has already written the story framework, so it would be nice for you to add another emotional line.

Deep affection: I agree.

Moon Love: Okay, I'll revise it first, and I'll send it to you later.

As a result, the burden of the script shifted from Lin Chuxue's shoulders to Yue Lianfeng. And the modification of Moon Love Wind was changed for two days. It wasn't until Friday night that she sent the revised version to everyone.

The characters have not changed, but the story is completely different from what Lin Chuxue wrote.

The content of the revised script of Yue Lianfeng is like this: the heroine Snow Kite and the male protagonist Ye Chen are childhood sweethearts, and they are married to the belly. However, when Xue Kite was eight years old, the Xue family suddenly changed, and all the doors were slaughtered overnight. Ten years later, Ye Chen, who was already the chief disciple of the Huashan faction, bid farewell to his master and went to the rivers and lakes alone. During his travels, Ye Chen met four young people who were also from famous and decent families. They are Yue'er, a disciple of the Emei faction, A Feng, a disciple of the Shaolin layman, Xiuxiu, a junior disciple of the Hengshan faction, and Tang Sen, the son of the Tang Sect. The five were like-minded, so they became brothers and sisters of the opposite sex and went into the rivers and lakes together. When the five of them passed through Hengshan City, it happened that a major event happened here. It turned out that the 120 members of the Liu Mansion, the richest man in Hengshan City, were wiped out overnight, and even the baby who was still in swaddling clothes was not spared. The local people condemned the executioner's ruthlessness, only Ye Chen looked at the bloody Liu Mansion and remembered what happened ten years ago. At that time, the plaque of this huge mansion was still written with the word Snow House.

No one saw the murderer of the Liu Mansion extermination case, but everyone was talking about it, this was the handiwork of the Five Immortals Sect of the Cult. One night when the people were panicking, Ye Chen rescued a girl from southern Xinjiang. Seeing that she was dressed strangely, with a Gu box and a barbed glass whip around her waist, everyone knew that this girl was the witch in everyone's mouth. And this girl who frightened the people was Snow Kite. The first time she saw Ye Chen, she recognized him. But because of his own affairs, he didn't dare to recognize him.

It turned out that the snow kite was rescued by the leader of the Five Immortal Sect who was passing by and taken to southern Xinjiang. Because of the snow kite's good qualifications, he was trained as the next sect leader. This made the other senior sisters quite dissatisfied, and not long ago, after the death of the sect leader, the snow kite, who was promoted to the position of the sect leader, was betrayed. Snow Kite simply came to the Central Plains to avenge the extermination of the clan that year. But she didn't want her sisters to be at ease with her, so she sent someone to hunt her down.

Snow Kite didn't want to bother Ye Chen, so she didn't say goodbye after waking up. When she came to Ye Chen again after dealing with the things in the sect, and wanted to recognize him, she suddenly heard about Ye Chen and Yue'er's marriage.

It turned out that Ye Chen took his partners back to Ye's house, and his parents were very satisfied with Yue'er, so they took it upon themselves to propose to Yue'er's master. Yue'er and Ah Feng had already made a private agreement for life, and after hearing this, they were anxious, and ran to discuss with Ye Chen, but they happened to be bumped into by the snow kite. Snow Kite was furious, poisoned Yue'er, and gave Ye Chen a concentric Gu.

Ye Chen knew that he would not marry Yue'er, but he was also disgusted with the snow kite's methods. In order to save Yue'er's life, he had to compromise with the snow kite, and at the cost of accompanying the snow kite, he got Yue'er's antidote. After this trouble, Snow Kite knew that she had left a bad impression on Ye Chen. After thinking about it a few times, Snow Kite finally didn't tell Ye Chen his identity. It's just that Ye Chen was asked to accompany her to travel all day long, and during the period, when she encountered roadblocks and robberies, the snow kite always did it herself, and the trick was fatal, leaving no one alive.

Ye Chen didn't know that Snow Kite had lived in Southern Xinjiang for ten years, and had already developed the character of Southern Xinjiang people who dared to love and hate. He only felt that Snow Kite was acting viciously, so he didn't want to see her more and more. Even if I am occasionally attracted by her innocent and lively side, I can't offset the disgust I have for her in the end.

On the other side, the Ye family and several of his companions, who learned that Ye Chen had been bewitched by the snow kite, had to let the two of them go. But in private, they never gave up their plan to rescue Ye Chen. Finally one day, they got in touch with Ye Chen, planning to cooperate inside and outside, subdue the snow kite, and let her lift the concentric Gu.

No one would have thought that in that chaotic night, Snow Kite died under the chaotic sword in order to save Ye Chen. Before swallowing her breath, Snow Kite told Ye Chen that as long as she died, the concentric Gu planted in Ye Chen's body would naturally die.

After the death of the snow kite, Ye Chen buried her by the sea. Even though Xue Kite didn't tell Ye Chen her identity until she died, the sentence "Brother Chen, I want to go and see the sea" before she died made Ye Chen cry bitterly. He never imagined that the person he had been looking for for ten years would ever be so close to him. No wonder, Snow Kite asked him to accompany her to so many places, but he had never been to the Easy Sea.

"But it turns out that you are afraid of being exposed here?" Ye Chen smiled bitterly, picked up the wine jar in his hand, and poured it into his mouth. There was a blur in front of me, and I didn't know if it was spicy or choking.

"Brother Chen, it is rumored that the sea is very beautiful, can you take the snow kite to see it?"

"Yes."

"Really? So when do we leave? ”

"Wait for you to grow up......"

As soon as the script of Moon Love Wind came out, the friends couldn't help but marvel again and again.

Jinxiu: Tut, I can't see it, Ah Yue, your writing is so good.

Affection is shallow: No wonder Xue'er always says that you have a big brain, which is not false at all.

Moon Love: Are you praising me, or are you hurting me?

Jinxiu: It must be a boast.

Xing Song: The story is good.

Moon Love Wind: It's good that the great god is satisfied.

Jinxiu: Cut, do you want to be so doglegged? People also want to be the protagonists.

Moon Love Wind: Let you be a three-inch Ding as the protagonist to fall in love, will people say that my three views are not right? [Contempt]

Splendid: Growing up is a matter of minutes.

Yue Lianfeng: It's not easy if you want to be the protagonist, I'll help you write a script, just live broadcast you and love Shen got married, how about it?

Beautiful:......

Xue Chu: Wouldn't this love and hate be too bloody?

Moon Love Wind: Is it still called love without blood? Don't worry, I'm already abusive.

Jinxiu: It's still lightly abused, Xue'er was abused to death by you.

Moon Love: ...... This is the script, do you understand the script? Otherwise, how can it show the deep love between the hero and heroine? Such regretful feelings are the most unforgettable.

Xue Chu: Weakly ask, can I not die? Or, let's change it?

Moon Love: You are the Five Immortals, I am Emei, how can I change it? Moreover, my husband's CP and I can't be dismantled.

Wind Tilt: Ahem, I think that's pretty good, too.

Affection is shallow: Can't you arrange a love relationship for me? Also, what the hell is the name Towngsen, is this the rhythm that is going to take you to the west to learn scriptures?

Moon Love: It's not because your name is hard to change.

Deep love: Just call me an amorous son.

Splendid Beauty: [Spit] Playboy is pretty much the same.

Snow Beginning: Townsend ...... Poof, play in minutes.

Deep affection: That's the truth, Ah Yue, you change it again.

Yue Lianfeng: How to change it, aren't all Tang Men surnamed Tang? Or Tang Shen?

Xue Chu: I feel that this surname is indeed a bit difficult to change.

Deep affection: Who said that the Tang Sect is surnamed Tang, there are always disciples with foreign surnames. Qin Shen, that's it.

Jinxiu: Then I'll change it again.

Moon Love Wind: Change the wool line, you are a three-inch Ding called Xiuxiu, how apt.

Jinxiu: What is the name of my old man?

Moon Love: Okay, that's it, I'll send the script to the ruthless god to read, and then I'll finalize the shooting map.

Jinxiu:, don't bring this, and ignore me, Lori also has human rights, I tell you.

Moon Love: Lori? Where is it? Just now someone said that he was a rough man.

Beautiful:......

Xue Chu: [snickering]

On November nights, the city of G is also starting to get cooler. However, in the fiery chat of the friends, it seems that even the cool night breeze escaping from the window has warmed up a lot.