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After entering, I saw two novels passed down by the black cat.

It was her pride, though it didn't sell to the point of despair......

One is the original "Will's Ice Summer Story", and the other is a secondary creation of "Maschera ~ The Cry of the Demon Beast Falling into the Mortal World~", which is called "The Dark Wings of the Fallen Hell".

Originally, Black Cat was quite confident in her work, but this doujin exhibition made her understand the gap between dreams and reality.

No, she won't think it's her own reason, the ultimate root, sure enough, the cognitive level of ordinary people is more than one level worse than Miss Ben's "Night Demon Queen"!

After leaving "I'll read it well", Ye Li left the information room and began to prepare Chinese food.

He planned to wait for the replenishment of energy, and then read her novels carefully, after all, he promised others, and the master of the black cat was so affectionate.

Walking out of the door, Ye Li saw Xia Na holding what looked like a pineapple, sitting on the sofa in the living room, staring at the digital TV without blinking.

The little face was indignant: "What! Why does Lianye, who wants to protect the country, have to be defeated by that bastard scumbag who is ambiguous with all girls, lacks assertiveness in doing things, and has no enterprising spirit and only knows how to shout verbally! ”

This is a very good work that Ye Li sees Xia Na training every day in addition to training, which is very monotonous and boring, and then extremely Amway to her - "The Ambition of the Demon King Yili".

It's been hundreds of episodes, and it's still being serialized.

And Xana is currently seeing the small theater of "The Red Lotus That Burns Everything", which is the story of the princess of the Red Lotus Country who wants to protect the people and use the forbidden knowledge, but is regarded as evil by the protagonist and becomes his experience of farming monsters.

The lotus in Xana's mouth is the princess in the play.

Xana was originally not interested in this, but occasionally saw Lianye in the play...... Its fluttering fire, infused with all determined eyes, and its grace like a bright moon sitting in the frosty sky is peerless.

made Xana slightly interested, and then turned on the TV, so there was now a dissatisfied complaint.

But Xana just went over and over to watch the eight episodes in which Lianye appeared, and still disdained the others.

"So Xana hates that type?"

"It's not just hate, it's just hate. Understand your own heart, be aware of it, and always maintain your ideal state, right? What is a man like him? Hesitation, constant decision. ”

Ye Li smiled bitterly: "It's Xana who is too strict......"

In Yeri's memory, the male protagonist who was said to be useless by Xia Na seems to be still a very courageous person! Aren't we talking about the same person?

Xana snorted: "You actually identify with this kind of person? Originally, I thought you were a pretty good person. ”

There was no need to argue on this kind of issue, but seeing that the fire seemed to be blowing on him, Ye Li quickly changed the topic: "I'll go cook first." ”

"Oh...... Remember to prepare a few pineapple buns. "Probably thinking that I've already received so much care anyway, so it's okay to be a little bit more, right? Xana said unceremoniously.

Of course, this is also related to Yeri's high tolerance towards Xana, and he will not be unhappy because of the bottom line. And he didn't show any trouble and impatience to Shana, who was swaggering in his own home, not only that, but he was also very relieved to show a happy expression when watching her train.

As for Qiong, in Xana's opinion, except for the first meeting, Qiong has always had an expression, and she can't understand what she is thinking at all.

And Xana is not a sensitive person, but rather quite a big one in terms of emotion, so she ignores what she doesn't understand. And these days, the three of them are also very harmonious when they sit together to eat.

Lunch was quickly ready, and Ye Li came to call Qiong to come out to eat, but Qiong didn't want to come out, probably because Ye Li shouted a little annoyed, and said irritably: "I'm not hungry, my brother can eat by himself, leave me alone." ”

“…… Okay, I'll put your portion in the fridge and just put it in the microwave when I'm hungry. Ye Li replied to the feeling that after eating lunch and reading the novel passed by the black cat.

The dome in the room sat on the bed with his hands folded on his knees, his head buried in his thighs, and faintly heard a voice coming from outside the door.

"Doesn't Ye Qiong eat it?"

"Probably...... I'm not hungry yet. ”

Hearing the fading sound, she hugged her hands tighter, and the whole person looked like she had lost a lot of weight.

"Obviously it wasn't like this before......"

"Brother or something......

“…… The most annoying! ”

……

……

Ye Li opened the book uploaded by the black cat and clicked on "Will's Ice Summer Story"

【Preface】

[What color will I be in your eyes]

[If you want to be red, I will entrust you with the sunshine]

[Scattered teardrops, into my heart]

[Waves that permeate everything, gently intersect]

……

Pretty good start! If it's as prose......

But if it's an online novel with fun and storytelling as the main elements...... Yeri declined to comment......

But before Ye Li was halfway through it, he realized that he couldn't hold on anymore, and it was simply torture, the biggest loser in the punishment game.

But after agreeing to others, Ye Li felt that he still had to finish reading.

When the trip to hell is finally completed, Yeri thinks he is liberated, but there is still a ......

His fingers trembled a little, and he held back the collapse of his heart.

"This one, it should be better, right?"

As if to comfort himself, Ye Li clicked on "The Dark Wings of the Fallen Hell".

【Preface】

[This world is like an endless wilderness]

[You can't survive just by interest]

[Only those who burn with burning ambitions]

[In order to challenge in this eternal prison of sin]

……

It's over, it's a familiar style again......

Finally finished reading it, and Ye Li felt as if his brain cells had been burned out......

Log in to the Information Room.

"Aozura: Is that ......@千叶の堕天圣黑猫 there?"

"Chiba Fallen Sky Saint Black Cat: Uh-huh, yes, Master, how's it going?"

"Aoku: Hmm...... What do you say?"

"Blue Sky: Black Cat, you're writing a novel, right?"

"Chiba Fallen Sky Saint Black Cat: yes, do you have any questions? Master?"

"Aozura: Just looking at the setting, you're really amazing."

In short, Ye Li praised her first.

"Aozora: Probably not even many true novelists."

"Chiba Fallen Sky Saint Black Cat: Uh-huh, sure enough, the master is not one of those ordinary people, and he has the power of being like the true eye of the evil king."

"Blue Sky: It's Just ......"

"Chiba Fallen Sky Saint Black Cat: Just what? Master said."

The black cat that has been recognized is unusually happy.

"Aozora: It's just that the main goal of the novel should be readability and fun, right? A large number of settings without plot elements not only make it quite brain-burning to read, but also lose the original fun."

"Chiba の Fallen Sky Holy Black Cat: 欸...... Is that so?"

"Aoku: Well, like you'd like to read papers that you're completely out of interest in?"

"Aozora: No matter how the novel develops, there is one central theme that will never change, and that is - fun!"

"Chiba の Fallen Sky Holy Black Cat: Interesting"?

"Aozora: Well, every mistake, and in addition to that, you have another extremely lethal factor."

Yeli paused, thinking what to say.

Otherwise, it seems a little hurtful......

But it's important, and it has to be changed if you really want fiction.

"Blue Sky: The Tale of Ice Summer in Benville is about the sad story of a boy who fell into a deep valley and met an ice elf."

"Chiba Fallen Sky Holy Black Cat: Wow, Master is so powerful, there are always people who say that I can't understand what I write."

Forehead......

I really can't understand it, and I'm half-guessing.

"Blue Sky: The Ice Elf fell in love with the girl, but the Ice Elf couldn't feel the warmth of the human heart, and the more warmth she received, the faster she would [dissolve], that is, die."

I have to say that Ye Li still admires her setting very much.

But then......

"Blue Sky: The elves walked out of the deep valley for the girl, traveled with him, and traveled the world. There are a lot of plots that I really care about, so let's just say a few of them."

"Aozora: They saved a poor ragged girl on the way, and gave her enough gold coins to last her life."

"Chiba Fallen Sky Saint Black Cat: Mmmm, it took me a long time to write this plot, and the little girl's name is Sylvie."

"Blue Sky: That's not the point"

Ye Li touched his forehead, which was a little painful. In the words of the original text of the black cat.

"Aozora: But after that, the girl knelt on one knee, her right hand clenched to her chest, and her eyes reflected a solemn gaze: "I will give my heart to my lord until death. 】」

Yeri almost vomited blood.

"Aoku: What about the [poor girl] that I said? Where did this valiant knight come from? and a heart ......."

Ye Li thinks that if he likes to write a set of books, he may be able to develop in a good direction.

But if you don't have common sense of life, you can't write a good novel.

"Aoku: And you just gave so many gold coins to a helpless little girl under the age of 8 in front of the whole village, do you want to kill her? Or doubt the IQ of all your readers? The husband is not guilty, but he is guilty."

Yeri stopped,

"Blue Sky: You can put other aspects first, but you ...... black cat."

Yeli struggled to organize the words in his head.

Construct words that try not to hurt others.

"Blue Sky: It's blank!"

……

…..

From just now, the black cat was silent.

Long......

"Chiba Fallen Sky Holy Black Cat: Master ......"

"Chiba Fallen Sky Saint Black Cat: Can you dye me color?"

(Write hi unconsciously, 3000 words big chapter!) ）