"Well, the serials in magazines are usually only a few thousand words, but the quality has to be very high, and this is also my job. Pen %Fun %Pavilion www.biquge.info" Li Wei explained, then looked at Xiao Ling with anticipation, and asked, "Take a look, what do you think?" ”

With such a little draft, Xiao Ling read it with a sweep of his eyes, he smacked his lips and said suspiciously: "This is the level of Tanggu Culture's contracted writers?" Did this Wen writer have any previous works? ”

"Well, when it comes to works, there are still some, but they can't be compared with the novels you wrote, and the longest article written by Writer Wen is only fifty or sixty thousand words."

Li Wei's explanation was full of helplessness, she shrugged her shoulders with great beauty, and said: "Even if it is such a short story, Writer Wen can't publish a few articles a year, and every time we need to urge the draft." ”

Xiao Ling was stunned.

At this time, Writer Wen walked over, his expression became a little cold, and said to Li Wei: "Miss Li, are you reviewing the manuscript here?" But please don't show my manuscript to outsiders, this ...... Well, the owner of the Internet café, may not be able to understand the meaning of my novel. ”

"Meaning?" Xiao Ling's eyes widened and looked at this Wen writer, the obvious contempt and disgust in the other party's tone, how could Xiao Ling not feel it.

Now Xiao Ling's heart is broken, not the collapse of being humiliated, but the kind of collapse that seems to see ants teasing elephants, he wants to laugh.

Before seeing the works of this Wen writer, Xiao Ling still had a respect for this Tanggu cultural contracted writer, and even felt that he might not be able to comment on other people's articles, but after reading his articles, Xiao Ling only wanted to send the other party four words: bullshit!

On those A4 papers, the things written are very simple, a master teaches three apprentices, two men and one woman, and then the two male disciples like the only female disciple, each of them starts their own pursuit, and finally competes in martial arts, which one wins, and finally holds the beauty.

It's very simple but has a very complicated story, but Xiao Ling feels very familiar, this thing is a lot of bridges in online novels, and his first feeling is: This Wen writer can't be copied from today's online novels, right?

If it was something else, Xiao Ling really couldn't say it, but for Lanxing's web novel, Xiao Ling felt that he was still very qualified to speak.

Blue Star's online novels tend to be serious literature, and at most they will write some love and love, so this kind of bridge is a big deal, Xiao Ling used to write like this, but since he got the system, Xiao Ling found that Blue Star's online novels are too backward, if they are replaced by the earth's online novels, similar bridges will be written very exciting.

For example, under the same background setting, two men, one is the protagonist and the other is the villain, the villain deceives the heroine, and the protagonist can get some good treasures and exercises, and gain insight into the villain's schemes, so as to rescue the heroine at a critical moment.

Writing like this will undoubtedly be more anticipated and exciting.

Not to mention the bridge of the web novel, just take the example of this Wen writer, what did he write throughout? This article is simply a thing that cheats the number of words, say that it has a description of martial arts, it writes a mess of love and love, and it writes a gentle and moving love story, it actually relies on only one competition to determine the final belonging of the female apprentice.

In this regard, Xiao Ling just wants to say: The characters in this novel are really pitiful, especially the female apprentice, it seems that she is a core throughout the novel, but she has no sense of existence.

Okay, maybe Xiao Ling is too entertainment-oriented, but is this thing really literary? In Xiao Ling's opinion, it doesn't even have a literary nature, because the whole thing can't see any practical significance, just like a plate of food, it is not fast food, nor is it a home-cooked or exquisite meal, but an ordinary bowl of rice!

"yes, can you read my novel? Do you know what I'm writing about? Writer Wen didn't know what Xiao Ling was thinking at all, he raised his head, looked down at Xiao Ling, and asked.

"Oh, so what type of fiction do you write? IMHO, I really don't understand. ”

Writer Wen raised his eyebrows, he felt that he was already very "restrained", but the other party dared to take the initiative to provoke him, which was really unbearable.

At that moment, Writer Wen sneered and said: "This is a post-modern realist work, a martial arts love story, I will combine the current mainstream martial arts and love novels with different themes to write an unprecedented epic masterpiece!" ”

"Poof......

Xiao Ling finally couldn't help it, he laughed loudly, and said apologetically: "I'm sorry, my laughter is really a little low......"

"Well, Writer Wen, I'm sorry, but don't worry, from the moment your manuscript is delivered to me, it has automatically owned the copyright, and every manuscript I review needs to be reported for copyright first."

Don't look at Li Wei's arrogance in front of Xiao Ling, in fact, at work, she can keenly see everyone's thoughts, so she can see at a glance why Wen is hostile to Xiao Ling.

"Hmph, Editor Li is an understanding person, as for this, I'm too lazy for you to care, you don't know what literature is at all."

Writer Wen glanced at Xiao Ling coldly, Li Wei was his review editor, so he naturally wouldn't have trouble with Li Wei.

But at this time, Xiao Ling quit, and this Wen writer sneered at him repeatedly and four times, which he couldn't stand personally, not to mention that the other party was unreasonable at all.

Xiao Ling pointed to a few pieces of A4 paper in his hand and said coldly: "Since you said that I can't read your article, then I'll give you a review first." ”

"First of all, this is a martial arts article, and it is a novel that is about to be serialized in a magazine, what is a novel?" From the old definition, novels portray the plot effect you want to achieve through the three elements of characters, plot, and environment. What effect does a novel need to be serialized in a magazine? It is to entertain the public, so that the public can read the first article, so that they have the desire to continue reading, look forward to the second article, and indirectly increase the sales of the magazine. ”

"Let me ask the writer Wen University, where is the entertainment of your article? Would anyone watch such a clueless martial arts story? Sorry, but it's not even a 'story', because it's almost illogical. ”

"Secondly, this Wen writer, what did you write in this article? You say it's martial arts romance literature, but unfortunately, this article may occupy the name of martial arts, but it really has nothing to do with love. What is love? Love at first sight? Falling in love over time? Is there one in this? Have you ever depicted a heroine? Or, is the only female character in it the heroine? Could it be that this is a piece of high-end gay literature? Is it that two men fall in love because of hatred and end up falling in love with each other? Well, if you could write like that, you might get a conventional-breaking compliment from me, but you didn't even write that. ”

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Today's second update,I've been fine-tuning the previous plot recently.,It's going to last about two or three days.,So if you don't look right there.,It's not actually a mistake.,But the previous text has changed.,Of course,The general plot is unchanged.,The focus is on modifying the order of system tasks and other aspects.,Make the system smoother.。 It is hereby clarified.

Well, because of the revision, it's estimated that there have been two changes recently.