The main reason for stopping for a day today is that there has been a bit of a Kavin recently, and, in addition, it is during the military training, there is no time to think about it, so I want to take a day off temporarily. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

Of course, another reason to open a single chapter is also to respond to some things in the comment section.

Anyway, as far as I can remember, I never seem to have said anything like not accepting criticism or correction.

The most I've said is that maybe this type of novel isn't what you liked, not as smooth as you expected, and if it doesn't bring you pleasure, you can choose not to read it.

After all, it is basically impossible to have a book that satisfies everyone's preferences and desires. Even if someone could do it, I don't think I could do it at the moment.

Because, in essence, Shuijing is just a rookie writer who fights the streets, no, maybe it doesn't even count as hitting the streets.

Although in the past, when I was writing the "Kyoto" paragraph, someone mentioned that I was not a new writer or something. However, the meaning of that sentence is because the number of words is too much, or because I once wrote a eunuch novel of almost 140,000 words, to be honest, I still can't figure it out.

However, in my own opinion, the number of words written does not mean that it is not a problem for a new writer.

Because, only after improving my writing and style to a certain extent, I think it can be regarded as a temporary departure from the scope of novices.

So, at the moment, even though the book has written more than a million words, it seems that I am still a novice.

Although there has been some improvement in writing compared to the beginning, it is true that this process requires a certain amount of accumulation before it grows slowly.

Therefore, it is also necessary for book lovers to put forward opinions and corrections on the problems existing in this book.

Again, I have never rejected opinions and criticisms.

However, what I would like to say is that since it is a so-called criticism and opinion, please also ask questions about the reality and concreteness.

Like what the protagonist is too wasteful, emotional intelligence is too low or something, please put it forward more specifically.

For example, what do you think is the main character's waste, rather than just saying it.

In this way, it will make people feel that just by relying on such a sentence, the protagonist in the whole book is forcibly denied.

Of course, what I'm talking about here is mainly asking about the existence of those types that are still acceptable to the book.

After all, if from the beginning you want to see basically invincible, even if you are in a crisis, you can fight back at the end, or the female characters simply fall in love with the type of book friends of the protagonist, then this book is fundamentally not to your liking, that is, Out. So, if you don't like to just give up, I naturally don't have any opinion.

Because, in fact, this book was written based on some of my personal ideas.

For some book friends, it's a fake month or something.,Actually,I'm essentially borrowing.,It's just borrowing the characters in it.。

After all, from the beginning of this book to the present, except for some inevitable settings, I think most of the stories are made up by consulting some information.

Of course, in order to connect with the plot of the Holy Grail War and FGO later, the story was also written after considering the setting of the characters of the type moon.

So, this is just a book written by some of my personal preferences, and if some people think it's disrespectful to the story of the moon, I must admit that I didn't write it exactly according to the premise in it.

However, as far as other issues are concerned, I admit that the harem is admitted, but, with stallions or something, I think I may have a lack of pen power that will lead some readers to have such thoughts.

After all, personally, I love these characters because I put them together and wrote them into a story.

If it's purely a single heroine, it's too difficult.,Therefore,The only way is the harem.。

However, the harem I want to write is not so simple to capture the protagonist of the hearts of female characters, so, in terms of some emotional dramas, it may also be because of their immaturity, which will make people feel unhappy.

But fundamentally, I wrote it because I liked these characters, and because I didn't want their relationship to be so "cheap" in a sense, I arranged all kinds of plots.

I have been working hard to do this, and I hope to present a better story to everyone.

In fact, in the recent period, writing this novel was originally a fun thing, but now I feel the pressure.

Because of some things in reality, coupled with the fact that the outline was not well prepared at the beginning, it has now fallen into the abyss of Kavin.

At the same time, this time is also in military training, which is really tiring for me, a person who belongs to half of the house.

After all, after writing two chapters and a few other things every night, you can only sleep a little more than five hours a day.

Of course, I'm not complaining about anything, I just want you to understand a little bit. Well, referring to the question of the book.

If there are any questions that you can ask to talk about, we can discuss them calmly, and there is no need to use words that are too "cruel" in a sense to say something that is not concrete.

Because, if you say something like a total negative from the beginning, you will also feel sad because your efforts are said like this.

Therefore, I think it is necessary to have concrete opinions and friendly discussions.

After all, writing a book is also a personal desire to gain a sense of recognition.

Just like some people want to win in a game, a book written by an author is a joy for the reader, at least in my opinion.

Just like the miserable 140,000-word book I wrote at the beginning, I was already very happy at that time, even if someone voted for me or gave me advice.

And now, I also hope to keep this mood going, I hope that your correct correction can make me write this book better in the future, and I personally have been pursuing to present a better story to you.

Finally, let's talk a little bit about the general reservation.

As mentioned above, there was already a lot of stress when I was writing this book, so I hope you can forgive me if I accidentally wet a little during this military training, because it is possible that the state at that time was really bad.

And after this period of time, during the summer vacation, it is also because of personal problems, and it is expected that there will be fewer explosions, but it will also be as much as possible.

Presumably, after this volume is over, there will be a slightly over-the-top volume, followed by another volume of stories about other Heroic Spirits, and then a timeline that will almost bring the timeline to the Holy Grail War.

Of course, until then, I will roughly think about the direction of the plot, and I will also speed up the pace as much as possible and not be so procrastinating.

Therefore, in this process of self-learning, I hope that everyone who likes this book can continue to support me, and I myself will try my best to improve my level and improve my pen power a little more.

Well, that's it.