As a newcomer, I actually don't want to write anything about the work at the beginning, but I can't help but post one today, because there are some important things that should be talked about. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

First, first of all, I should thank all the book friends who gave me comments in the book review area, my first draft of this book was actually written in the first person, and I didn't think there was anything wrong with it at the time, after all, the primary element of urban rebirth novels is yy, and I think writing in the first person can deepen my involvement in the characters of this book. But since the fifth chapter, a book friend left me a message below asking if it could be changed to the third person, and it felt strange at the time, is the third person more advantageous than the first person? (After all, newcomer, Han Xiao), at that time, I felt that as a creator, the first thing is to have my own attitude (hugging my fist), so I didn't go to my heart at that time, and I kept writing in the first person. But as more and more book friends asked me this question, I suddenly realized that there might be something wrong with the writing, so I carefully read the article I posted earlier, and found that it really felt strange. (As a friend of mine said, it's a bit of a supernatural feeling.) So I spent a day today changing the manuscript to the third person, hoping to make up for the mistakes I made in the past few days, and thank you again for giving me advice.

Second, as a newcomer, I actually signed a contract in the case of 20,000 words in the first book, and today the contract has been sent, happy, excited!!

Third, I code words around 12 o'clock in the evening every day, sometimes not serious, so there are a lot of typos, sometimes it affects everyone's reading experience, I hope you will bear with me, point out more, grateful.

Fourth, at the end, I brazenly begged for votes and comments, thank you!!