(This one has a slightly more word count~)

Put on your clothes, bring a backup of the script, gently push open the door, and walk into the cold night. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

The light of the early morning was different from usual, and there were few pedestrians on the road, except for the wind blowing branches sticking out of the fence.

I hadn't been outside the house for a long time, and while I was getting some fresh air, I noticed that the weather was getting cold again, and I was wearing less clothes.

But I didn't want to toss again, I walked briskly, the faster I ran, the more cold I shivered, but the surging passion in my heart made my tired body burn with the last flame, just like the little girl who struck a match in Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tale.

I knocked on the door of Xu Qingying's house, and the door soon opened, Xu Qingying was wearing brocade pajamas, fiery red, and the delicate curves of her body showed a strange temptation in the dim light and shadow, and a faint halo hit her side face, even if she woke up from her sleep, even if she was plain face to the sky, her beauty was still like a red apricot on the branches, which could not be shaken.

The beauty of ordinary girls is single, flat, and it is impossible for beauty to be mixed with too many attributes, or simple or bewitching, you can only control one, but Xu Qingying is different, you say she is the queen, indeed, she wears such pajamas like a mountain full of flowers, but at the same time she has a unique simplicity, such as the pair of plush slippers with cat ears on her feet.

The embellishment of the details makes it even more cute and moving.

And she doesn't wear powdered makeup, her cheeks are slightly red, but her lips pursed lightly when she saw me, this action is very neighborly, but her hands on her chest are a little more stunner-like temptation.

Her structure is unstable, and everywhere is amorous, so I naturally don't dare to stay too long.

"Coming? No man has ever been here, and I haven't prepared your slippers, but there is heating inside, so you can just come in barefoot and take a shower, right? Xu Qingying raised her eyebrows slightly.

"That's for sure, I take a shower every day." I didn't have much nonsense either, just stepped in and closed the door.

The decoration in Xu Qingying's house is still quite interesting, generally speaking, like a wealthy compound with a certain status, the general choice is mahogany type furniture, the mansion door, this is a tradition and a kind of heritage, mahogany furniture is indeed a symbol of status, and what is European and what Mediterranean, is the kind of simple white style is essentially different, mahogany after a few years, the real mahogany furniture is still shining, but the European style is like a pearl dusty, gray, slowly dilapidated.

Xu Qingying's home also has mahogany, pear blossom wood, but more, it is an exotic style like a Loulan outside the Saiwai, the color is not oppressive, the pale yellow is quite bright, and there are bright colors like the Mogao Grottoes in Dunhuang to outline the flying sky, and even in the restaurant, there are white marble conpoys.

There were some incense burners on the black shelf, and suddenly I thought of Zhang Ailing's agarwood crumbs, and there was one in it, which must have been given by the elders, and eight gilded characters were written on it, "Wind and rain, all over the rivers and lakes." "Of course, this is just the decoration of the hall, and the outside seems to be a large hall, a large and bright hall, and the treasures are displayed like waves in turn, as if it were a miniature river of history, but it is not like a home.

Xu Qingying's own bedroom adheres to a low-key and restrained decoration style, almost pure black, dark brown, with its own cloakroom, a computer next to the bed, goblets, and a few red wine bottles on the ground.

"Call me to your bedroom to talk about the script at night, that is, your goddess of shadows, I feel that Sister Ying, your decoration has a very ancient taste." I was heartily impressed.

"I don't like the decoration outside, but I'm too lazy to re-get it, the outside was given to me by a few elders in power before, those rare antiques are placed at home, and the study looks uncomfortable, when you have what you want, you can take it away, only this bedroom is designed according to my own ideas."

The design of the bedroom is too simple, basically an ordinary type, but the deep heritage outside is simply a luxurious feast, of course I am slandering.

Xu Qingying sat on the bed casually and motioned for me to squat on the carpet, "There is no chair, I don't really want to talk about things on the sofa outside." ”

"It's okay, Sister Ying, you can say it, how about my script, can you use it?"

"Well, I read it again on the way you came, and overall, this story can be used, it's pretty good, it can't be described as very good, although the script is not professional enough, but this storyline is quite powerful, and it belongs to the type of sword going sideways." Xu Qingying's serious appearance was quite aura and courage, and a few words made me blush.

"But don't be complacent, this script, to be honest, is too desperate, although I know, you think I don't need the box office now, but, this type of script, I myself don't want to act, one is that there is almost no hope in the whole story, I know you want to say that there are several points of hope, including the ending, but the ending is too hasty, this most important part of the advancement, you actually used a blank expression, this is definitely a failure, and this article you have not explained in some places, But the irony and darkness are too strong, I can directly start shooting your story, but even if I have my hands and eyes, the review may not be passable, and few people can accept such a painful story, let alone the leaders above. ”

"So my advice is to add positive energy in some places! For example, in the last place of the reservoir, the parents of the two children must be grateful, although it is a not very wealthy family in the village next to the reservoir, but how they are still how, such as giving money, such as kowtowing, here must be written moving, impactful, such as an old grandmother came to kowtow and kowtowed The blood came out, this is the most traditional and the most shocking thanks. The heroine is moved because of this, and it makes sense.

"Another example is the boy who liked the heroine before, you don't write him so tragically, he died directly at the construction site, you have to write that he worked hard to move bricks on the construction site, and went to the heroine for the first time with a meager salary, and his fingers were frozen and cracked in that winter, and then the heroine was moved to tears, and made dumplings for him, this boy can't die, at least one pillar must be left for this heroine, otherwise the world is too desperate, right?"

"Yes, Sister Ying, you can think of so much in such a short period of time, I really admire it, I didn't even notice it myself, maybe I just cared about myself." When Xu Qingying was serious, she did criticize one by one, and I liked the attitude of clear rewards and punishments, and I also had an understanding of her personal ability again, the modification of these places is quite reasonable, and the compromise within a certain range cannot be said to be a compromise, which is another way of artistic expression.

"It can't always be a tragedy, or at least in such a tragedy, it has the power to urge people to force, this is what an old filmmaker who passed away told me before, blind criticism is meaningless, you find such a support point in criticism and reflection, but the name I think is okay, it is difficult to walk, of course such a life is very difficult, but it is really because of that sentence, that bit of faith, and the people who accompany you to move forward."

I nodded, "Sister Ying, I'll revise it tomorrow, oh no, tonight, I'll give it to you tomorrow!" ”

"No, you see you have dark circles under your eyes, you can write such an article in a week, I think you should be very tired, your lens language is very rough, but I have seen a lot of shadows of movies, "The Life of the Disgusted Matsuko", "My Father and Mother", "Flying Over the Asylum", you should all have references, the details in it, all have similar, overall, it's really good, I always thought you were just joking, it was impossible to write any decent script, I also thought you were just a white rice eater, only a stinky and shameless little fool who would only cook some food and talk about it, I apologize to you, at least I still have the team I have now, no one can think of such a story. Xu Qingying bowed slightly to me quite seriously.