Chapter 85: Mio Akiyama X Oriki Bongtaro's Love Story (Part II)
"Recently, I accidentally found out that Xuan Zhang-kun was drawing a manga, and he was about to secretly submit a post to Shueisha's boy jump, but I stopped him when I found out...... I'm just making comics, how can I get him to run to Shueisha, and how to say, in terms of the content he draws, although I think he's still very immature, but I think he has the potential to be malleable and get better......"
"Aren't we going to reopen the shonen manga, so I want him to try it with us?" Yoshishi Kubo said, and then he handed a stack of manuscripts to Shizune Miyahara. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
"You're making comics, but you're making shoujo comics......"
As for Kubo Nobuki's own protests, they were selectively ignored.
Miyahara really didn't expect that the person sitting across from him was actually a classmate of Kubo, which was amazing news.
Indeed, in terms of grade, Kubo Obito at this time was indeed a high school student...... What should Shizune Miyahara say? Where don't we meet in life? The migrant manga artist is actually related to Yoshishi Kubo.
Because of Miyahara Jing's intervention, at this time, the Hibiscus Society has already saved up 3 god-level characters in girl comics, but it is the first time he has seen a big cow who draws shonen comics.
Therefore, if you can, try to keep Kubo with people at Hibiscus Society, which is a judgment made without even thinking about Miyahara Shizu.
It's not that Miyahara Jing has to pry into the corner of Jieisha, but there are only so many excellent cartoonists and works, one more on your side, one less on my side, the manga publishing market is so big, if you eat more, I will eat less.
Miyahara Jing never felt that there was any "personal grudge" with Shueisha, but sooner or later Hibiscus Society would become a competitor of Shueisha, you know, why does Meizu hate Xiao M so much...... Ahem, wrong, why does Samsung hate Apple...... No, at this point in time, it should be asked why Nokia hates Motorola? The answer is simple, because of the market competition.
Why not increase your leverage and weaken your future competitors.
So Miyahara took the stack of sketches, and then what did he see?
Zombie fans.
That's right, he saw that Kubo Obito's painting was a zombie fan, and this one was supposed to appear in 99. Although I don't know why some works appear in advance, Miyahara still wants to lower her head and look at it seriously.
Kubo Obito was only sixteen years old at this time.,Neither the style of painting nor the painting skills can be compared with the future style of the great achievement.,It can be seen from this zombie fan that he is at this time.,Painting skills are weak.,The original picture is rough but the texture is very strong.,At the same time, the story structure is also a little thin.。
Miyahara looked through the original manuscript of this zombie fan, and he found that this story was similar to what he knew in his previous life, telling the story of a hunter named Mustard Gamma who searches for something called the Ring of the Dead in search of a secret elixir that can bring the dead back to life.
The original manuscript in his hand is more than 30 pages, and although a small section of the story has not yet been drawn, it can be seen that this is indeed the volume of one sentence, and it seems that Kubo Obito is really ready to submit it to Shueisha.
Yoshishi Kubo is really a good steal! Miyahara silently praised her editor-in-chief in her heart.
He may feel that others are looking at his work with a critical eye, and Kubo seems a little uncomfortable, and after being uncomfortable, he wants to find something to say.
"I heard Uncle Kubo say, can you serialize four works at the same time?"
He asked Miyahara Shizune, it was because he heard Yoshishi Kubo say that there was a manga artist about the same age as himself in the Hibiscus Society, but the difference was that others had already debuted, and it was very exaggerated that he was serializing four works at the same time, and he was curious, so he really followed Yoshishi Kubo over.
"To be exact, there are only two, and the remaining two are just me doing the original storyboard." Miyahara said lightly.
Kubo nodded, it turned out that there were only two, so it was no exaggeration, he felt that he could do it with a little force, it was not too remarkable.
He obviously underestimated the difficulty of conceiving the storyboard, and the word "serial" meant that it was not a day or two of overwork, but a continuous cycle until the end of the work.
Yoshishi Kubo saw the change in his mood, and couldn't help but show a wry smile, this little guy in his own family obviously read the manga serialization too simply.
At this time, Miyahara Shizune had already read the original manuscript in his hand, and he asked Kubo Obito, "Are you going to use this to submit to Shueisha?" ”
Kubo nodded, and in the face of Miyahara Shizu's gaze, he suddenly felt a little nervous.
"This work called zombie powder,I hurriedly looked through it.,Although a small story is not finished,But I still see some problems.,Let's not talk about your painting style.,This is a personal style that's not easy to change for the time being.,In fact, the structure of your story itself is a bit of a problem.,The details are inappropriate.,The place where the description should be omitted has been skipped.,The abbreviated place is too verbose.,The reader is likely to see it inexplicably...... At your current level, I wouldn't say you don't have a chance if you want to go to Shueisha, but it will probably take at least six or seven years between now and when you can actually get a long-form serialization opportunity for Jump. ”
Shizune Miyahara isn't talking nonsense, it's based on facts, in another plane, Kubo Obito began to contribute to Jump in 96, and it was only in 2001 that the long-term serialization of the Grim Reaper began.
For a sixteen or seventeen-year-old person who is eager to succeed and firmly believes that he can succeed quickly, Miyahara Shizu's statement is obviously not very happy, and he thinks it will take six or seven years to get the opportunity for a long serial, which he thinks is too long, what is the difference between this and saying that he will succeed in 100 years? So he wasn't convinced.
Originally, everyone is about the same age, and you can't look down on cartoonists of the same age just because you are a little talented and debuted early, and besides, you still debuted in your own comic magazine, so the credibility and judgment of your speech are even lower.
In fact, Yoshishi Kubo made a similar judgment about his manga. But in the same way, he abandoned his uncle's judgment on the grounds that the editor-in-chief of shoujo manga didn't understand shonen manga.
Miyahara Jing saw Kubo's thoughts at a glance, he smiled and didn't care too much, it's normal for young people to be stubborn.
"Have you seen Mary lately?" He then asked.
Kubo shook his head, "I haven't read it, isn't Simiel a shoujo manga, I only read shonen manga like jump." ”
That means you haven't seen your own work? Miyahara thought to himself.
To be honest, don't look at the Kubo belt sitting opposite, but Miyahara Jing is not very excited, don't say that the other party is still a little kid at this time, even if it is a Kubo belt after becoming famous, Miyahara Jing feels that he is not worse than him.
Compared with the current or future manga artists, let's not talk about the story, from the aspects of painting style, painting skills, storyboards, and composition, Miyahara Jing only admires one person, and it's a pity that the person's name is not Kubo Yoshishi, but Inoue Yuhiko.
"Maybe you don't feel convinced by my statement, but you can ask the editor-in-chief Kubo if my judgment is reasonable, and it is basically impossible for you to quickly stand out in Shueisha with such a style." Miyahara said that he remembered that Kubo's zombie fan seemed to be serialized for less than a year before being cut in half.
Shueisha is indeed a publishing house that values stories more than painting skills, but it also depends on the fact that the story performance is not strong enough to cover the defects in painting skills, and the current Kubo belt is only Kubo Xuanzhang, his painting style is a bit problematic, and the storytelling of his works is also a bit problematic.
Shizune Miyahara returned the manuscript to Yoshishi Kubo, and then asked Yoshishi Kubo, "Editor-in-Chief Kubo, do you have paper and pen?" ”
Rather than just explaining dryly, Miyahara still feels that some dry goods are more convincing.
"Yes." Although he didn't know what Shizune Miyahara was going to do, Yoshishi Kubo handed him a few sheets of A4 paper and a black marker.
After everyone had finished eating, Yoshishi Kubo called the waiter to clean up the table.
Then everyone was curious about what Miyahara wanted to do.
Miyahara took the pen and paper, pulled off the cap, and began to draw on the paper as she said, "Generally speaking, manga has a story first, and then there are character settings, but there are also ways to set the settings first, and then fill in the details of the story. ”
"For example, let's start with a story of a teenager protecting a girl, which is the main premise."
"Then we have to make the reader understand why we want to protect this girl, so we have to set the identity of the girl, and we assume that she is ...... Well, it's the reincarnation of Athena in Greek mythology, and then all kinds of messy evil gods want to harm her, so he needs the protection of the boy. ”
But how can humans contend with God? Here we have to reset the girl again, she is the reincarnation of Athena, although she can't use divine powers, but she can give some teenagers the ability and equipment that can compete with the gods, well, we can call these equipment holy clothes. ”
In the stunned crowd, Miyahara Shizune drew Seiya's character while telling the story of how to snatch back his goddess from twelve rich and handsome people with an average height of less than 1.7 meters, wearing a whiteboard equipment with spicy chicken attributes, and also having various physical (such as blindness) and psychological (such as mothers, brothers, and sisters) defects.
Note 1, fill in a small hole, and then start mixing and matching, I want to see the Grim Reaper early, Kubo takes people to draw Saint Seiya, tsk, I just don't want it, the style is different, completely, not at all.
Note 2: Kubo is said to be a fan of Seiya.
Note 3, it is said that the author is a brain-dead fan of Rogue Xing, so I like Inoue very much.