As for her not wanting Xi Shi to die, she should always feel that such a woman will continue to live, but she just wants the heroine to occupy and leave, deliberately contributing to the war and destruction of this country, and it is best to die. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

Mo Xiaozao set up in her heart that Xi Shi died with King Wu in the end, and it was King Wu who asked her to leave, but she revealed her purpose step by step.

After setting the result, she continued to write about Xi Shi's efforts, so that the heroine followed the traces left by the devil, deliberately learned to dance, deliberately learned, and practiced over and over again when others were resting, and she was so tired and paralyzed every day that she wanted to escape.

But it is clearer that there is a demon watching in the shadows.

Once the heroine leaves here, she will leave with all her might, just like the escape in the Karma tribe, and then wake up and be in the same place.

As she wrote, the magic pen in her mind flashed, much brighter than when she first entered her mind, silent in a corner of her mind.

"It doesn't feel right." The hand of the code word stopped, the computer screen in front of him lit up, the black words were on the light blue page, and the green four-leaf clover occupied most of the screen, "Bai Luohuan, come and take a look at this paragraph, I feel that this paragraph is a little strange, but I can't find anything wrong." ”

"Wait." After typing a line on the computer, I pressed the full stop and put it aside.

She watched Bai Luohuan get off her bed, and then went to her bed, hugged her computer and began to read the text from the beginning, and simply said that her chapter had only started a short time, only nine thousand words.

"It's not strange, it's that your conflict has arrived, maybe you didn't notice it yourself when you wrote it." Put the computer in the middle, slide the little white mouse on the screen, and the first three lines of words selected will turn red, and the next two lines will also turn red.

Mo Xiaozao looked at the two reds by himself and compared them seriously.

In the first red, her description of Xi Shi is kind and gentle, so the heroine can come here at the request of Xi Shi's friends.

In the second red, the obvious Xi Shi showed his scheming, designed a woman who trained together, and deliberately began to give his friend the first time to enter the drug, deliberately saying that this was the medicine she begged for, which was good for the body.

"Did you find out?"

"I found that the personality gap between the characters before and after is too big, although the heroine has entered the body, it will make people think that the characters are split personalities." Mo Xiaozao put the computer on his lap, wanting to modify the heroine's character at the beginning, but found that it would not be in line with Xi Shi's character.

Ben is a gentle and hard-working woman, a woman who sacrifices herself for the country.

Thinking about it, she directly deleted thousands of words from the article, looked at the 20,000-word manuscript, continued to write, and re-set Xi Shi's behavior and purpose, connecting them back and forth.

It's a pity that the article still has a lot less feeling in the setting, and it's not as good as the story of Tuoba Xianbei when written, with such a clear context, directly along the memory of the splicing, and then the refined portrayal can be expressed to express what you want to express, Xi Shi this because there is no memory, the obvious logic and character are made up by their own brains.

"It's already past seven?" She put her computer on her lap, clicked on the article settings on the page, clicked on the location of the newly released chapter, copied her article, and pasted it in.

Several chapters and titles of chapter 34 were typed by her own hand, and they took a separate place on the copied text.

She clicked on publish, and the flipping book was moving, and the article was published, and then she continued to publish thirty-five chapters, thirty-six chapters, and until chapter thirty-nine, the word count reached 11,200.

With the end of the post, she clicked on the article settings, and she could see that the collection had risen by more than 30 clicks, and she clicked on the title of the book to view and click, and it had risen by more than 40 clicks compared to before.

Sure enough, adding more is a great help to the article, and when it is sent out for a while, the article only has a few favorites on weekdays, and more than a dozen clicks have immediately doubled several times, just like the recommendation effect of the articles she wrote before.

The subordinates no longer hesitated, opened the code word software and began to continue the code word.

There are still 10,000 words of manuscript, which is only enough for her to consume one day, which indirectly told her that she can only stay up late and continue to write down enough to save the article, otherwise she will not be able to support the first three days of ten thousand changes.

Mo Xiaozao sighed, in fact, she knew that saving the manuscript was very important to her now, but she knew very well that if she wanted to rely on this article to enter the annual meeting, she could only continue to make this article better, and the manuscript could not be saved with continuous revisions in such a good situation.

"Bai Luohuan, how can you code words faster?" She asked, her hand darting on the keyboard, and another line of words was typed.

"Are you kidding? Code word fast? If you just want to finish writing the essay in your hand quickly, I guarantee that you will never enter the annual meeting if you write so hastily, and I can also guarantee that you will not be able to protect yourself after half a year, and Leng Suran will definitely kill you for the safety of the magic pen. ”

Bai Luohuan didn't look at her, kept his small backpack, took out a very cute Ragdoll cat in his hand, and observed it up and down for a long time before stuffing the Ragdoll back and putting away the computer.

She watched Bai Luohuan pack up and walk out, and tightened her hand holding the computer.

It turned out that Leng Suran had already prepared for her to enter last year's meeting, and it was okay, when she didn't have the strength, only Leng Suran had the strength to hold it when she took out the magic pen.

The mood is dull, the speed of the code word naturally decreases, and the plot also goes gloomy with the mood.

"Are you there?"

Her QQ pops up, the editor's name and the dialog box are clearly displayed in front of her, and she replies on the page of the codeword, continuing to write the plot, thinking about finishing this sentence, and talking to the editor.

"You can guarantee the quality of this for a long time?" The editing dialog pops up again, directly stating what you want.

"Ten thousand days of updates? If the quality is not guaranteed, it can be done every day, and the quality will be a little slower, and it can be updated for two days, and then it can only be six thousand a day. She replied honestly, calculating that she stayed up late today, and wrote more words in one night, and only revised more than 6,000 words.

"It's a little little, your remaining days are six thousand, try to save more manuscripts, I'll see if I can get the best list for you next week, that time is also seven days, but it's a very conspicuous good position, even now there is a lot of traffic, and it is inevitable to add at that time."

"I see." Mo Xiaozao sent it to the editor, looking at the computer in front of him, not knowing how effective the best list could be.

"Save the manuscript well, your article is very new, and you are the only one who relies on collecting grief as the task, and there is hope for the list to come down, and now it is also a signed state, and the only difference is that several large doses of updates have successfully hit the list for a period of time."

She listened to the editor's careful analysis and knew that her article was not a waste of time.

(To be continued.) )