"It's not that bad, is it?" Daisuke Akizuki's words made Miyahara Jing a little embarrassed, okay, the Naoki Award is indeed his bragging, and he knows very well that his Japanese writing ability is limited, but it's not so miserable that people can't bear to look at it directly, he wrote quite seriously this time, and he used his life's work. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

This script written by Shizune Miyahara is actually the plot of the first encounter between Fate Zhongwei Miyashirou and Saber and Illia Phil and Uncle Hercules.

At present, this plot is now being serialized on Simiel, and by the time it is winter cm, it should have already ended, so in terms of scenes, plots and follow-up content without spoilers, it is very suitable as the main content of PV.

From the point of view of the comic plot, because Emiya is a lame magician, Saber as his servant can't exert his strength, so Emiya Shirou and Rin Tosaka's revolutionary united front are actually pressed and beaten by Uncle B, but as a propaganda PV, Miyahara Jing wants to make the work as eye-catching as possible, and the scene can be more enthusiastic and burning, so he tampered with his original comic book in a grand manner.

Therefore, in PV, the two sides have to attack and defend each other, and they are evenly matched.

What kind of plot can make the audience feel burning? In fact, there is a type of scene that is easy to do, that is, the petite girl Versus Giant God Soldier, using violent aesthetic expressions and techniques to reflect the destructive power of the weaker side that should be in confrontation or fighting, and with some suitable music, you can't do it without combustion.

Saber is 154cm tall, which can barely be called petite, and Berserker is more than 250 tall, which can basically be said to be a giant god soldier.

Saber in Miyahara Shizu's modified version of the comic, because the role is very heavy, so it will be regarded as the heroine by readers, but from the role positioning given to her by the creator and her performance in the work, the character's personality and way of doing things, it is not so much her heroine, in fact, she is closer to the identity of the second male.

As the king who was summoned from the Gladiolia Hill to the present world, Saber has always regarded herself as a man, and she has always played a male role, and the masculine way of acting and speaking is more in line with the identity of the Knight King.

Between Emiya Shirou and Saber, there is no ambiguity between men and women.

Of course, this is all an expression in the sense of creation, in the eyes of the reader, Saber is undoubtedly a girl, and the interaction between her and Shirou will be preconceived with an ambiguous vision, as the original author, in a sense, it must also cater to the reader's ideas.

However, this PV is just a short plot, and there is no need to pay so much attention to the previous and the next, so in this script of Miyahara Jing, Saber mainly attacks Uncle B, Rin Tosaka against Illya, Red A long-range sniper interference, coyote soy sauce throughout the whole process, a little out of the original how to burn how to come.

And what Miyahara Jing wrote is actually not a standard animation script at all, in fact, he doesn't know how to write an animation script, he is just describing the process of the story, there is also the meaning of shot composition and action design, he even writes clearly which foot the character takes when he enters, and he has to explain carefully every time he wants to change the scene - if this thing is really in the hands of the animation company, then what he needs is not an animation supervisor, but a performance.

If you can make a PV according to Miyahara's intentions, then this kind of publicity will definitely expand the popularity of the work and increase the popularity of the work.

Animation is a form of expression that does not stick to rationality, and the benchmark that the audience likes is also different from ordinary film and television works. Reasonable expression? This is not a necessary condition for the success of the work, don't you see that playing mahjong in some works is like fighting a nuclear war, and the audience and readers don't watch it with relish?

Let the audience see what they want to see, and the work will be successful.

Well, this sentence is nonsense, how can ordinary people accurately grasp the psychology of the audience?

However, Miyahara Shizuno, he at least knows what the audience wants to see in Fate.

But the problem now is that he is not an animation supervisor, and he is not capable of being an animation supervisor, so in order to make the PV as much as possible to meet his requirements, his "script" is super verbose.

Originally, what he wrote often didn't match the preface, and then it was so verbose, it can only be said that there is really nothing wrong with Akizuki Daisuke not being able to read it.

"Let's not talk about the script for ......" said, Daisuke Akizuki pushed the stack of manuscripts to Miyahara Shizu's hand, looking very afraid that Miyahara Jing would let him read it from beginning to end, "Let the professionals do this, anyway, even if you really do PV, you need to find an animation company to do it...... But don't you want to release the PV in the name of the character song, and if the song is done well, we have to entrust the lyrics and composition. ”

Miyahara Jing is depressed.,His script was completely denied.,But although he was ruthlessly hit by the editor.,But he still feels that no matter how he writes.,Since you do it, you should finish writing the script.,Regardless of whether the animation company you find can use this script or not.,At least let them make a reference.,Know what kind of effect you want.。

But there is no need to talk about the script for the time being, Daisuke Akizuki doesn't seem to want to listen to it much, since he wants to do a character song, he has already prepared the lyrics and songs, and it's not a hard thing anyway.

"I've already written the lyrics and songs, so I can work together with the animation company and let them find someone to do the arrangement." Miyahara said.

"......" Akizuki Daisuke is speechless, you Miyahara Jing is a manga artist, and you have to write your own scripts and make your own music, why don't you go to heaven.

By the way, you're still the president of the Hibiscus Society, so as an editor who eats under Shizune Miyahara, he can't say these things blatantly.

"Shizuki-kun", Akizuki Daisuke said after considering the sentence, "I think it, your manga talent and story conception ability are very good, you can definitely say that you are a first-class manga artist, there is no doubt about this, to be honest, two comics and two original works can be carried out at the same time, I will not believe it anyway before I meet you, but God is fair, no one can be an all-rounder, everyone always has something that they are good at and what they are not good at, your script makes me believe this, so, be a good manga artist, You still manage the hibiscus club, don't you? Didn't you also say before that professional things should be done by professional people, so the scripts and songs of PV should be left to professionals, you don't need to bother. ”

As he spoke, he patted Miyahara Shizune on the shoulder with a serious look.

Miyahara Jing's face twitched one by one, this guy, found a sense of superiority from his script, and the more he talked, the more energetic he became, I don't know if everyone is unlimited, caihua, works.

You must know that because it is a possible skill, Miyahara Jing has deliberately learned to write a brief composition before...... In a fundamental sense, he really doesn't have the ability to create music, but he can copy it, cough cough, it's wrong, he can learn from it, borrow it first and then write the tune, isn't this his work?

What the? You say staves, sorry, he can't do that.

And the arrangement? That's even more impossible, he has only learned basic music knowledge, or he has learned it by self-study and skipping classes, and if he wants to do something as difficult as arranging, it may be possible unless he is reborn and crossed.

He doesn't have much musical talent in his own right.,That's actually right about Daisuke Akizuki.,With a little talent and hard work.,His manga skills are really good.,Skill points are almost full.,It can be said that even if you don't have those things in your head.,With his manga skills.,He can at least be a manga artist like Ken Kohata.。

It's just that after being "discriminated against" by the editor, he was still a little unhappy.

"This ...... I think the music I wrote can still be used. ”

This tone made Daisuke Akizuki feel that Miyahara Shizune was fighting to the death and not admitting defeat.

Then Miyahara Shizune began to swipe the screen, "What about Natsuki?" ”

"Natsuki, ah......"

"Xia Xi come here, do you still know Jian Pu?"

Natsuki Shinoha is probably the only person in this group of people who knows a little music, except for Miyahara Shizune.

That's right, Natsuki is the tragic character who was taken by Miyahara's music lessons, she studied piano for a while when she was a child, and then after being nurtured by classical music for a long time, her parents found that their daughter had no musical cells at all.

People can't study, so they abandon and learn swords.

Natsuki failed to learn the piano and abandoned to learn the sword, and then awakened the talent of beating the opponent with a stick object.

"Jingjun, you really wrote a song."

Hearing Miyahara Shizu's call, Shinohara Natsuki bubbled decisively, she was the only one who knew Miyahara Shizu's writing level, so when Miyahara Jing came up with the so-called script, she had already turned her head and couldn't bear to look at it directly, she had been poisoned like this too many times since she was a child.

Miyahara didn't answer her words, but directly handed her the two sheet music.

This is actually a kind of inheritance ritual, and the pseudo-songwriter Shizuhara Shinohara handed over the music work to the sixth-rate music apprentice Natsuki Shinohara for the appraisal of the work, in order to show the surrounding music idiots that he really has the ability to compose, and he is not deceiving people at all.

Natsuki Shinoha took the two pieces of paper, and after looking at them for a while, he hummed softly, as for the level of singing......

Why do you want to pry the corner of the protagonist's wall so clearly?

It's just a matter of human life.

"It's unexpectedly good, Jingjun, is this really what you wrote? It's very high-quality. Although she is at the sixth-rate apprentice level, but as far as Xia Xi commented on her knowledge, Miyahara Jing suddenly felt that she was much more powerful than Shi Jiu.