There may be many readers who think this book is too cluttered when they look at it. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

Yuque is here to answer questions.

1. The space of the heroine.

This space is not a product of cultivation, and it is not a bug opened by God. Its appearance is basically the core of the whole book.

2. The heroine's personality.

She is an orphan, cowardly, careful, sensitive, not very intelligent, and willful. Her personality has to be transformed through experience again and again, and Yuque's last book is also the same, and the heroine's personality is changed and stereotyped little by little.

3, the mind of the male protagonist

portrays the male protagonist, and does not particularly write about his amazing talent. The male protagonist's mind has always been easy to guess.,Yuque doesn't know if everyone has guessed it.,This is an important part of the emotional line of the whole book.,Yuque doesn't plan to pick it out.。

4. Inconspicuous-looking little people

For example, some passers-by have only mentioned a few names, not boring numbers, including something. I'll write them all out later.

5. The knife of the madman

I don't know if anyone complained in the latest chapter, that is, their things were searched, why is the knife of the reputation madman still there, and the chapter on killing zombies, which mentions some things of the reputation of the madman. Uh-huh, it's not disease-free**, it's a clue!

6. Caught by the lid of the pot

It's not a bomb plug-in, and it's not a brain hole. This is just a set about the heroine.,Who got it.,As long as you look carefully at chapter 69.,You can guess a rough idea.。

Recently, Yuque has been writing very hard, and after seeing the data, I suddenly felt the urge to cry when I wanted to throw away the computer. It's very hard, it's very hard, the layout is set up, including the details of the foreshadowing, no book has ever worked so hard, but the result is very miserable, it can be said that Yuque's confidence has been emptied all of a sudden. It may be that the words used in character building were used in the wrong way at the beginning, and it will be a waste of time to go back and revise them now. When inspiration is missing, you can't make a hundred words a day.

I hope that you will be kind to the work, and I would like you to give us more opinions, and I will do my best to improve this long book.