Afternoon

Li Wendong took a nap, and after waking up, he wrote "Zhu Xian" on the Internet, and wrote more than 200,000 words in the past few days, this novel is close to completion, rest for a while, and the penguin appears again, and the mouse moves over to take a look, it is his friend Kamikaze looking for him, and asked him to write "Breaking the Sky" a few days ago, this guy worked very hard, and wrote 10,000 words on the same day, but in Li Wendong's opinion, it was really 'miserable', there were several typos, and he immediately sent it back for him to write. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 ｉｎｆｏ

"Big, are you there?"

"Yes, has "Breaking the Sky" been changed?"

"It's been changed according to your request."

Kamikaze sent a document, Li Wendong still shook his head when he read it, there were no typos, and the sentences were smooth, but the plot was not well written.

"How's it going?"

"No, you have to change it!"

"Give me a hint!"

"First of all, the beginning is not good, you haven't changed much at all, a good start is half the success of an essay, on the contrary, a bad start can ruin the whole novel!"

"I understand that, but I can't write about the feeling I want to express!"

Li Wendong thought for a while and said: "First of all, you have to understand that the supporting roles are all to set off the existence of the protagonist, such as Xiao Mei, this role strengthens the reader's impression of the protagonist before he is a genius, compared to being ridiculed and humiliated now, the strong contrast will make the reader resonate and have a sense of substitution, have you found that although you have written a lot of words, you have not written the key point." ”

Kamikaze was unconvinced: "How about the other supporting characters?" ”

Li Wendong took a sip of water and continued to comment: "Next, Xiao Xun'er will come on the stage, it's useless for you to just write that she is beautiful, you have to write that her attitude towards the protagonist is completely different from Xiao Mei's attitude towards the protagonist before, so as to form a strong contrast, and the general personalities of the two of them in the minds of readers are described in this way." ”

Kamikaze wondered: "Isn't writing a supporting role to suppress the protagonist's edge?" ”

Li Wendong shook his head helplessly, this kamikaze didn't understand what he meant, and said patiently: "Although Xiao Xun'er is the heroine and very good, the protagonist is the most awesome existence, what did I say just now?" All the supporting roles are to set off the existence of the protagonist, do you think of such a mysterious genius girl, one of the strongest geniuses in the family in a hundred years...... Xiao Xun'er is unexpectedly so good to the protagonist, can it bring out the extraordinaryness of the protagonist. ”

Kamikaze smiled bitterly: "I thought it would be enough to write a plot of pretending to be forced to slap my face, but I didn't expect there to be so many ways in it!" ”

Li Wendong said lightly: "Pretending to be forced to slap the face is the essence of this book, there must be a contrast at the beginning of the novel, the protagonist has changed from a genius to a waste, a strong contrast, two girls have completely different attitudes towards the protagonist, a strong contrast, Xiao Xun'er, such a genius girl has such a good attitude towards the protagonist, the reader's curiosity is immediately hooked, this is the highlight, attracting readers to continue to jump into the pit!" ”

Kamikaze carefully recorded and concluded: "Thank you, I'll change it again!" ”

Li Wendong reminded: "Don't think about completing the task, you have to eat the outline thoroughly!" ”

"Understood!"

"Okay, the manuscript is written and sent to me, and I have already paid your account for the salary you withdrew in advance, pay attention to checking."

"Thank you, great!"

"You're welcome!"

Li Wendong closed the dialog box and browsed the news of his friends, Liu Qian's concert has toured to the Pearl River Delta region, Yang Mi's surrender is gray, but he was asked where he was two hours ago, and there was no reply when he was sleeping, Li Wendong entered Liu Qian's space and walked around, and found an article named '520, have you been confessed? Tell me, this little girl actually came to the space.

The mobile phone rang coldly, Li Wendong looked at the time, it was already three o'clock in the afternoon,

"Hello?"

"Wendong, it's me!"

"Fatty?"

"This is my new mobile phone number, why didn't you come to school?"

"I'll go back tomorrow."

"The whole class is here today, and you're the only one missing."

There was a noisy voice on the phone, and Li Wendong smiled: "In the classroom? ”

Wang Lu said mysteriously: "Did you hear it, many classmates are talking about you." ”

Li Wendong turned on the speaker, his voice was very clear, someone asked him what his profession was, and his classmates replied in a variety of ways, some said that he was an anchor, some said that he opened a company, some said that he was a director, and some even said that he was playing tricks in the crew, and finally many people gloated and let out a hearty laugh.

Wang Lu scolded: "These grandsons, they just can't see others better than them!" ”

"Let them go, jealousy is in human nature." Li Wendong pretended to be forced and disdainful: "The loudest laugh just now was the squad leader, hehe...... This kid still wants to come to work in my company! ”

Wang Lu said: "Yes, I also heard that Su Bumei is recruiting!" ”

Li Wendong said: "The list is still with me, how is the boss and Wen Hao messing up?" ”

Wang Lu said with a smile: "They have all found jobs, don't look at the boss who is short, he came out in the middle of the night to cook barbecue, and earned more than 28,000 in these two months!" ”

"Awesome!"

"Yes, I'm all moved, Wen Hao is doing field work in the crew, and he is more than 5,000 a month!"

"Well, I'm hanging up on nothing."

"Wendong, remember to drive the sports car tomorrow!"

"You want to be in the limelight?"

"You don't know how many couples have confessed in the past two days! Tomorrow I'll drive a sports car and court, and torture those single dogs! ”

"Hehe, do you have a driver's license?"

"Khan, why don't you be my driver?"

"Damn!"

Li Wendong scolded with a smile and said, "Okay, I'll help you this time!" Who do you want to confess to? ”

Wang Lu thief smiled: "Liu Meimei of the dance department! ”

Li Wendong had the image of a big wave girl in his mind, with an average appearance, and shook his head and said: "She had a boyfriend in her freshman year, and you want it to be **** rotten?" ”

Wang Lu said again: "Otherwise, I post a marriage proposal advertisement in the Ferrari sports car and drive to the gate of the dance department, hehe, I like the flexibility of my dance department!" ”

This kid is **? Li Wendong was curious: "How do you know that the dance department is flexible?" ”

Wang Lu thief smiled: "Last month on a business trip, my partner took me to do a foot massage, that young lady is learning dance, I can't forget to do it once in my life!" ”

"I'll go, you were ******** by Miss anyway, it's like you have Su Bumei as a spare tire......"

"Don't talk about it, hang up first!"

Li Wendong really can't listen to it anymore, and having money hasn't changed his forward-looking personality, Liu Qian, Yang Mi, Su Bumei, Qiu Ya, so many beauties, as long as he is stronger, it's already early, a good man in his last life, he was bullied by this and bullied by that, he likes a girl, he is reluctant to hurt it, he doesn't dare to start, and in the end the girl became someone else's girlfriend, and in the end they didn't break up.

If you don't go up yourself, you will cheapen others!

and Xia Dongyang, why was he bullied!

The more you think about it, the more you swork!

Li Wendong slapped himself and said: "I will never be a bad person in this life!" ”