Chapter 5 Comprehension
"He is so loving, how can I deliberately expose my real identity in order to be greedy for his thousand dollars?"
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After doing this, Qiao Xiaofan took out his textbook and began to preview.
After his body was integrated into the Illusory Sea Vientiane Beads, he only needed to sleep for four hours a day to ensure that he had enough energy for the day.
Following.
Qiao Xiaofan got up early to go to school. This is the first time that Qiao Xiaofan has so desperately wanted to go to school.
"If I can improve my writing level a little, I will definitely be able to trick more people into liking my book." Qiao Xiaofan is eager to trick more people into the world he has created.
On the other side, Old K routinely gets up to see updates.
"Huh! "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust" turned out to be three more, and he still thanked me with the little tail of the chapter. ”
Old K smiled and said categorically: "That bastard who cheated paper is definitely not a student." ”
Lao K glanced at the monthly ticket list, "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust", which was only on the shelves yesterday, ranked eleventh on the new book monthly ticket list at this time, and the number of monthly tickets was only a pitiful sixteen.
At present, the top three on the list of new books in the monthly ticket list are the innocent "Rogue Master 2", the high-rise "Seems to be a Master in the Other World", and the Internet Black Man's "Online Game: Magic Era".
These three are all old authors from the starting point, with previous books as a foreshadowing, the writing is very good, and the results are so good that there is nothing to say.
"Poor liar paper, the new book monthly ticket list and the three gods collided."
Lao K shook his head, obviously not hoping that the new book "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust" would get good results on the monthly ticket list.
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in class.
Qiao Xiaofan listened very carefully, and did not have the slightest idea about the list in his mind.
"This is my first book, just work hard, grades don't matter."
With such a thought, Qiao Xiaofan completely ignored the list and ignored the subscription. Qiao Xiaofan knew that he was a very ordinary person, and he couldn't be like many geniuses, not angry when he saw abuse, and didn't care when he saw poor grades.
Therefore, except for every night after the code is finished, he will look at the comment area, and at other times, Qiao Xiaofan does not dare to look at the results at all, because Qiao Xiaofan is afraid that he will be scolded, and he is afraid that his mood will be affected after being scolded, which will lead to a decline in the quality of the coded text.
And just like that, a week passed.
While Qiao Xiaofan was studying hard, the grades of "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust" rose steadily, and the increase in the phantom power value returned to calm after the sudden outbreak a week ago.
30-50 points per day, this is the current rate of growth of magic power.
Over the weekend, Qiao Xiaofan began a routine summary.
"The growth of magic power has nothing to do with the number of updates." Qiao Xiaofan compared the increase in the magic power value between the update outbreak and the update average, and came to a conclusion.
"So, what exactly is influencing the growth of magic power?"
Qiao Xiaofan read "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust" from beginning to end, and after comparison, Qiao Xiaofan found that when the contradiction is resolved in the novel, the magic power value will increase quickly.
"In other words, orgasms are easier for people to substitute."
Qiao Xiaofan wrote on the paper, and after a while, Qiao Xiaofan crossed out this line and muttered, "It shouldn't be like this." ”
Although the climax is what the reader wants to see the most, the key to the birth of the climax is the 'foreshadowing'.
Without good foreshadowing, the climax simply cannot be born.
"If the novel is compared to a scam, then the previous article is to lure people into the trap, once you lure people into the trap, you will naturally cheat as much as you want."
Qiao Xiaofan looked at the public chapters of "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust", and then compared the chapters of "Panlong", and found that the rhythm of "Panlong" is very fast, and although there is foreshadowing, it is not particularly thick.
However, this kind of foreshadowing, which is not very thick, does not affect people to read.
"Yes, since you deceive people, you have to deceive people into comfort."
"Panlong" is the kind of high-quality online text that can't be stopped once you watch it.
But "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust" is different, the foreshadowing in the early stage of "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in Dust" is too long and not fast enough, and the climax is repeated after it is put on the shelves, which is not slow enough.
"The rhythm is out of order."
Qiao Xiaofan came to his senses.
After waking up, Qiao Xiaofan's consciousness dived into the Illusory Sea Vientiane Pearl, and picked up "Hong Yunzhi" again and watched it.
After a long time, he threw the book aside, and he had a deeper understanding of how to write books to deceive people. The only thing left is to keep practicing, get feedback from readers, and verify the idea from the growth of magic power.
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Lao K has been going crazy recently, watching the continuous climax of "The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust", he is almost crazy with excitement.
"How is that possible? How is this possible! How can the climax of a story last so long without falling? ”
"The Legend of Cultivating Immortals in the Dust" has been on the shelves for a week, and it has been updated with 70,000 or eight, and the whole process is high-burning, and the suffocating feeling of infinite burning makes people can't stand it and really want to watch it. The calories in the body, in these 78,000 words, are burned out. The light of life is also constantly burning.
"Whew~"
Old K took a deep breath and drank a glass of warm water to relieve the burning in his heart. He woke up and said: If he continues to burn like this, he may die of sudden heart death.
"Forget it, let's not look at it yet, go out for a trip and relax."
Old K glanced at the computer nostalgically, then took off the straw hat from under the hanger, put it on his head, took his mobile phone and wallet, and embarked on the road of travel.
Just go.
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It was another weekend, and Qiao Xiaofan climbed to the starting point and began to scan books.
First of all, the monthly pass list.
"The Law of Demons" and "Panlong" ...... Familiar names are imprinted in the eyes. The corners of Qiao Xiaofan's mouth grinned, "The great god is really a great god, and he is unstoppable." ”
The author of "The Law of Demons" might as well dance.
The author of "Panlong" is a big tomato.
Both are platinum writers at the beginning and are strong.
"Rogue Master 2, not guilty."
Qiao Xiaofan saw this familiar and unfamiliar name, and nodded in curiously.
Innocence is the god of game novels, and he is good at writing a game called "StarCraft", which is said to be very well written, but Qiao Xiaofan just can't stand it.
Because he hadn't played the game, he didn't know what it was written about a lot of the time.
But "Rogue Master 2" is different, this is a novel that can be understood even if you haven't played "StarCraft", and it is very refreshing to read.
After Qiao Xiaofan saw this book, he suddenly understood something.
"What exactly?"
Qiao Xiaofan scratched his head, trying to catch the aura.
Night.
Qiao Xiaofan's face was pale, which was a manifestation of excessive mental consumption.
After a day of crying and thinking, he finally knew what he understood.
The idea of a new book is slowly taking shape in my mind.
"I want to write a novel that I can understand even if I haven't cultivated immortals, and it's very refreshing."
Thinking about this clearly, Qiao Xiaofan was relieved and fainted. As soon as you sleep, it is the third pole of the sun.
After waking up, Qiao Xiaofan was dazed.
Interrupted, absent from class.
Is there anything more terrifying for a good writer (student)?
Qiao Xiaofan flushed his face with cold water and glanced at the time: 11:47.
There's still time, and I can still code a chapter and a half before going to school.
As for the consequences of absenteeism...... Now I want to easily affect the mood of the codeword, or ignore the codeword. Qiao Xiaofan thought about it, turned on the computer, and his ten fingers flew like butterflies, and soon, the update was completed.
"Now it's time to think about the consequences of absenteeism."
Qiao Xiaofan uploaded the chapter, attached an apology, and began to think.