Suddenly, when he saw such a topic as "Peeping People in a Cup", Qiu Ming immediately became energetic. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

After all, he is also a senior writer and a master of playing with words, and just from such a "peek at people in the cup" four words, you can see that this composition should be very good.

"Can you peep out of the cup? Interesting! But how does he relate to the subject of the composition? Let me take a good look at ......."

Qiu Ming, the vice chairman of the Writers' Association, who was originally hungry and wanted to eat, couldn't wait to read the text of this essay.

"There is a cup in front of me, there is some water in the cup, and a ball of paper is crumpled into a ball and thrown into it.

The first sentence of the composition, the previous part was not in Han Han's original text, because Han Han's proposition at that time was that the examiner temporarily asked him to see the paper ball in such a bottle of water.

Therefore, when Lin Can was writing at that time, he deliberately added such a situational premise. From the back sentence "What I think of is human nature" is Han Han's original text at that time, but the overall article was also revised by Lin Can with his own thoughts, which took into account the display of ideas and talents.

"A good one sees the water in the cup, and a good one sees the human nature and the inferior nature of the nation."

Old writers of Qiu Ming's age usually have deep experience, so they especially like ideological things and like to read critical articles and content.

Most of the hundreds of essays I have read before are general, and even if there are some slightly ideological essays, they are just a little immature and too idealistic about some social phenomena.

Like this essay, the first sentence of the opening chapter dares to point the finger at the root of the inferiority of the entire Chinese nation.

Such a big idea!

Such a big breath!

Such a big guts!

It is really something Qiu Ming has never seen before, let alone a student of the essay submission contest, even those critics who have been famous for a long time and have a spicy style, do not dare to come to the inferior nature of a Chinese at every turn.

"Audacious! If nothing else, just such a spirit of daring to speak out about the inferior nature of the Chinese people is enough for me to choose you......"

How difficult it is to be able to see such a profound idea in so many immature essays! Therefore, Qiu Ming only looked at the first sentence, and decided in his heart that no matter how the later essay was written, it would be shortlisted for the first round of screening.

However, when Qiu Ming looked towards the following content with great expectations, he suddenly saw two words that made him feel particularly dazzling - "Jibei".

Mr. Ji Bei has not exhausted it. I have my opinion. ”

is just the second sentence, Han Han used "Mr. Lu Xun" here in the original text, but there is no Lu Xun in this world, there is only a similar character named "Jibei", so Lin Can naturally replaced Lu Xun with Jibei.

But on the contrary, it was the two words "Northern Hebei" that made Qiu Ming's favor disappear for a moment, and these two words were like nails, stabbing him in the heart.

There is no other reason, it is all because "Volcano" wrote a poem "Some People" to commemorate northern Hebei, which is obviously to commemorate northern Hebei, but in fact, he used this poem to scold Qiu Ming for being bloody, and even made him have nothing to say.

Even, on the official website of the Association to commemorate the Northern Hebei Province, this song "Some People" is also hung on the official website, I am afraid it will be hung for a month, a year, or even several years.

As this poem "Some People" continues to circulate, every year to commemorate the days of northern Hebei, everyone will see this poem, thinking of the origin of this poem, he Qiu Ming is very likely to be abused and ridiculed year after year.

Let's ask like this, how could Qiu Ming not hate the word "northern Hebei"?

"Jibei! Hebei North! Do you mean northern Hebei again? ”

As soon as he saw these two words, Qiu Ming forgot all the words he had just said to praise this composition, and he continued to look down.

I saw that almost every sentence in this "Peep in a Cup" is extremely spicy and ironic, there is no elaboration and metaphor, but there are a lot of quotations and direct points of view.

This is some criticism and satire of the inferior nature of the Chinese people, and it is written just right, which often makes people who watch it can't help but applaud, and triggers some reflection and inspiration.

But on the contrary, the word "northern Hebei" in front of him has made Qiu Ming deeply hostile to this composition.

He felt that every word, every word, every word that was spoken between the lines was as if someone had pointed a sword at him in the chest.

In the composition, he only broadly talked about the inferior nature of the Chinese people, but Qiu Ming felt as if someone had been pointing at his nose and scolding him, and the more he looked at it, the more angry he became.

"How can this be true? Outrageous! ”

Syllable!

Slammed the desk, Qiu Ming scolded angrily, "What kind of bullshit article is this?" It's all swearing! I'm! I'm......"

Smack!

With a move of the mouse, Qiu Ming directly "eliminated" this originally very optimistic "Peep in the Cup".

And because the amount of submissions this time is particularly large, there is no second review, and each essay has only one chance to be reviewed.

"Grandpa! What's going on? What makes you so angry? Could it be ...... Is that abominable volcano coming for your trouble again? ”

Outside the study, Qiu Hua, his grandson Qiu Hua, who came to ask Qiu Ming to have lunch, hurriedly asked when he heard this.

"I didn't ...... It's nothing, it's just reviewing the manuscript of this New Century Essay Contest, and there is an essay that is written in what kind of bullshit, which makes me panic when I look at it! ”

Qiu Ming, who was huffing, snapped, turned off the computer, and then waved his hand at Qiu Hua and said, "Forget it!" Don't look at it...... Eat and go! ”

And Lin Can's "Peeping People in the Cup" was originally Han Han's famous work that won the first prize for new concept composition in another time and space earth, but because Lin Can's luck was too bad, it actually fell into Qiu Ming's hands, and then because the name "Northern Hebei" appeared in it, it was eliminated in a daze.

It's a pity that Lin Can didn't know anything at this time, in the school one afternoon, although he didn't have Huang Quanrong, a person with worse luck than him, by his side, he didn't encounter any unlucky things, he thought that today's unlucky things were over!

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