When Bai Luohuan's hand was taken away, her body lay down weakly. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

"You can close your eyes and feel it now, and then follow your practice to cultivate." Bai Luohuan said, she crawled into the quilt alone, what are you kidding, cultivation is not something that she, a cabbage, has to do.

And even if it is cultivation, she, the cabbage essence, does not need such cultivation at all, as long as she continues to carry out periodic qi operation under the light of the sun during the day.

Of course, Mo Xiaozao didn't know that Bai Luohuan was complaining about her in her heart, and she was wholeheartedly following the meridians of the cultivation exercises, she could see her bones, and she could also feel the way her skin breathed.

She was fascinated by such a strange feeling that she had never experienced before, and in just one night, her first star was lit up, and as the black star lit up, she began to mobilize her energy in her body.

Her bones were all golden in the operation of the golden qi, and her first golden little star appeared in a short time, opposite to the black star, like the little star in the mirror and outside the mirror.

She came out of her cultivation, and the time was almost time to go to work, shaking Bai Luohuan, who was sleeping, and checking the messages on her mobile phone while Bai Luohuan was washing.

Anxia Studio ushered in a new partner last night, and when this little friend arrived, he directly sent his article to Bai Xiao, and Bai Xiao couldn't see the quality of the article, so he sent it directly to her.

Open the file, this is obviously not a novice written article, sophisticated narrative, and appropriate structure, but there is still a fatal problem in this article, that is, the main line is not strong enough, and it always goes off topic when writing the main line.

Even if it is pulled back by the author, it will still have an impact on the article.

She gave her number to Bai Xiao, and asked Bai Xiao to give her number to the author of this article, she wanted to talk to this author and tell the author what she thought.

Immediately added when she got the addition message, she sent her thoughts directly, "It can be seen that it is a very organized and thoughtful article, but have you ever thought about what your article is writing?" What theme is it about? ”

"The strong are better than all."

"Since your center is this, you have been writing around the strong over everything, your characters are to become stronger, and all the ultimate goals are to become stronger, and this constant emphasis will not leave your center, nor will it make your essay scatter." She uttered her own words and heard Bai Luohuan calling her.

went to Bai Luohuan's side, handed over the towel that Bai Luohuan wanted, and continued to reply to the author with his mobile phone.

"There are three stages of writing, the first is to have ideas and creativity, there are many authors at this time, as long as you have ideas, you can write, this kind of person is a lot of literature lovers. The second is that you have an outline, you know what you want to write, and you will think about how to write it for the sake of what you want to write. ”

"The third is that there is a beginning, and the text is also written, but the content can only be said to be a stroke in the east, a stroke in the west, and you can write whatever comes to mind, which is completely in prose, which is a street."

"You didn't say what stage those who became gods are." The author replied to her that he had said nothing about her views, or that he did not want to say them at all.

Mo Xiaozao calmly began to say the next stage, that is, there is an essay, an outline, and what to write around himself, this kind of person will keep his essay attractive at the beginning, and keep going down a line, and the chance of becoming a god is very high.

However, this kind of person also depends on what kind of essay is written and what kind of resources are available when writing the article. She didn't say this, and she didn't want to say it to hit the author.

"So are you a god? I heard them say that you are very good, so I want to come over and ask for advice, as long as you give me enough guidance to get better grades, I will open the article here, and I will open the one I posted! As if to give her a gift, the author uttered this sentence.

She suddenly smiled, turned off her dialog box, went out to eat with Bai Luohuan, caught the car, and went to the company.

In many cases, there is no need for this kind of author to continue like this, as long as he is left to dry for a while, he will come to you himself, although he will not completely listen to her, but it is also much less troublesome than cultivating a complete newcomer.

Sitting in my own place, reading the manuscript on the computer, in just one morning, I saw a lot of authors who were much stronger than the author I was mentoring today, but she would not sign the contract until she was selected.

And this kind of author, not new or old, has a little seniority, and does not have sufficient strength, it can only be the result of signing a share, and even most of the subscriptions are not yet few, and they are completely living on subsistence.

"Mo Xiaozao."

She followed the voice, looked at Li Xiaoyao who came in, wearing a well-cut suit, a clean and handsome face full of smiles, smiled politely at her before speaking, "The above gave you a transfer just now, and you will continue to be on duty in the future, and there will be a new editor here." ”

"And when am I going to go?" She turned around and glanced at her desk, which didn't seem to be anything, just some of her papers, and her water glass, all small bits and pieces.

"You go now, the new editor is expected to be back in the afternoon, so I want to trouble you to go now." Li Xiaoyao said very politely, and deliberately took her to the other side to have a look.

She is going to the Guyan group, there are three female editors, one male editor, who is doing in front of the computer and reading the manuscript carefully, and what she is going to is the position next to the male editor, and a beautiful little flower is placed.

After packing up her things, she began to move to the Guyan group, and only moved once, and the other four editors began to help her get things, that is, two back and forth, and all the things in the male frequency editing room were brought over.

Sitting in Gu Yan's office, she stretched, and the male editor beside her began to introduce himself.

"Hello, I'm Zuo Yiyang, the editor's name is Watermelon, and I'm managing the editors of the first and second groups." The male editor said, pointing to the small flower on her desk, "I gave this one." ”

"Go, go, you big watermelon, such a cute girl is mine!" The slightly chubby girl hugged her and said affectionately, "My name is Choi Eun-sook, I am a Korean ethnic person, and I am twenty-six this year." ”

Before Cui Eun-sook could finish speaking, a girl interrupted Choi Eun-sook's words, "I don't know if you have any brothers who haven't married yet, you can introduce them to Choi Eun-sook, she is crazy when she is single, and when she first saw Yiyang, she almost pounced on it and nibbled on it." ”

The woman said very disgusted, her big eyes were painted with thick eyeliner, and her sharp melon seed face looked very small, and she grabbed Cui Eun-sook, and it could be seen that the relationship was very good.