Mo Xiaozao also knows that this is an unwritten rule in the writing world, as long as a new manuscript comes out, the first one must be shown to his editor. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

Only after the editor approves can the manuscript be sent.

Her long eyelashes fluttered, but she remembered that she hadn't shown it to the editor for a while before sending it out, and the article was asked to be rewritten by the editor after tens of thousands of words, just because it deviated from the main line.

"The manuscript is generally fine, but don't you find that your story doesn't feel good?" Chocolate sent a message as she thought, not even hitting the symbols she was used to.

Obviously, chocolate is very concerned about her problem.

"I know." Mo Xiaozao replied, knowing very well in his heart the article he wrote.

It's too trivial and prosaic, and there are no climaxes and ups and downs that make people want to continue reading, and of course, it lacks the feeling of attracting readers.

"You shouldn't know how to provoke the ups and downs of the story, just blindly follow the story, no~" Chocolate's words turned, and her eyes seemed to fall on her through the screen.

"How?" Mo Xiaozao habitually asked.

Chocolate surprisingly didn't reply to her, so she had to go to the group and privately poke an author and secretly ask why Chocolate suddenly ignored her.

Before the other party could reply to her, a page of calls appeared on her mobile phone.

She remembered the call, it was Jaws'.

The fingers poked flexibly and hung up, and the heart was full of chocolate and dissatisfaction with the three thousand words.

"Do you know you're out of work? And it's already the next day, and if you don't update it, the site will think that you have automatically abandoned the article. ”

The voice of the great white shark was impatient, and the sound of the rushing water on the side became louder and louder.

"That's my article, I don't think you have the right to do that." Mo Xiaozao's voice was faint, and he turned over and lay on the covers.

"I forgot to tell you that we haven't signed a contract yet."

The corners of her lips lifted, and her voice added with smugness.

After listening to her words, the great white shark reprimanded her sentence after sentence, not the kind of casual and simple scolding, but the allusion of Sang scolding Huai.

"I'll finish the article tomorrow, and you won't be my editor in the future." Mo Xiaozao whispered, stretched out his hand and hung up the phone, and turned off his mobile phone again.

She reluctantly left her bed and slammed on the boot button of her desktop computer.

I still need to know why Chocolate suddenly didn't talk to her, and I'm worried that I got Chocolate there.

His fingers habitually inserted into his long hair, pressing his scalp again and again.

The buzzing sound of booting echoed in the room, and the steel helmet also woke up and meowed around her legs and feet, and relaxed a lot from the inside.

"Actually, Chocolate ignores you, just wants to see you find your own way to solve it." Anxia's voice interjected, her white fingers rubbing her eyes.

Except for the lack of blood and the slightly cold temperature, Anxia looks like a living person.

You can touch the ground, you can eat food, you can sleep.

"I'm looking?" Mo Xiaozao cast her eyes in confusion, and silently thought in her heart, the editors she contacted and knew were not like this.

It's just that An Xia is now her master, and she can only move herself to the balcony in small steps.

The quilt in his hand was handed to Anxia, but he didn't understand why Anxia was still wrapped in the quilt even though it wasn't cold.

"Of course you're looking for it, and you're going to have to change it yourself and send it to her." Anxia said slowly, her long, curly eyelashes fanning.

She didn't want to tell Mo Xiaozao, Chocolate just wanted to know how hard she worked.

But looking at Mo Xiaozao's appearance, he obviously knew what he should do.

Mo Xiaozao typed out his thoughts on the computer, reorganized the chapter process, and thought about it again, how can demons and people be liked.

Counting the memes in the article, she discarded seven ideas.

In the end, she chose to let the demon who had just come down the mountain be a pure baby who didn't know anything, and was coaxed by the bandits to the mountains to be the boss.

Then when robbing others, the food supplies brought by others let the demon follow and leave.

They bumped more than a dozen cities, saw the scenery of the north and south, and returned to people's homes together in Yanfeng City.

During the half-moon journey, they leaked their hearts to each other.

And Mo Xiaozao is the demon and the person leaving from the people's home, the monstrous dark clouds, the purple and green thunder and lightning, the big drops of raindrops falling on the ground, and the back of the demon leaving.

She thought that Lushun was more detailed, and An Xia beside her also hooked her lips, in the end, she had this ability.

is not at all worthy of the fate of the sixth Wenqu.

An Xia thought about it, her eyes kept falling on Mo Xiaozao's body, and she didn't even know that Mo Xiaozao stopped moving and looked at her.

"Anxia, do you think this is okay?" Mo Xiaozao finished the newly written 3,000 words, and added a small foreshadowing of a straight line after the 3,000 words.

"Yes."

"Then I'll send it like this."

She sent the story to Chocolate, and the next second she saw Chocolate's reply, "That's smart, Momoda." ”

Mo Xiaozao sighed helplessly, and the whole person also felt the exhaustion of his body.

"I've seen it, the new writing ideas are good, but the description is the biggest problem now." Chocolate replied to her and got up and walked to the pantry.

The pantry was beautifully furnished, with a wooden table covered with a blue tablecloth, a bouquet of blooming flowers on the table, and chocolates leaning against the table and sipping their own strong tea.

Mo Xiaozao, you really don't know any precautions, Anxia follows you, how can I rest assured?

Chocolate stood up, straightened her handsome coat, and strode outside to the computer.

Although he was worried that An Xia was by Mo Xiaozao's side, he still needed a new identity.

The person of chocolate is also just right, and he will successfully blend into Mo Xiaozao's side, so that he can protect An Xia well.

Mo Xiaozao didn't know that when she was tired and asleep, the chocolate in the distance was thinking about her.

And when she woke up again, she saw the shiny phone screen.

"In order to guarantee the click-through rate of newcomers, we will give you a referral spot on the third day of your book. As for where you will get the spot, it will only depend on your luck. ”

The word chocolate was just sent, and then it had a few cute little expressions.

"Thank you, editor, great." Mo Xiaozao politely thanked the chocolate, thinking that he had really come to a good place, and he would definitely make great progress.

She also mentally calculated all her recommendations, which were nothing more than a few small poor mosquito legs.

It's just that for a little transparent like her, the recommendation of mosquito legs is already extremely happy.