16. A short story

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This is a matter of course - Mr. Kishibe Ryutomo, the most famous manga artist of Japan's new generation, is coming to visit the Comic-Con this weekend, and he actually made a special trip to Xiangbei before the exhibition......

Of course, I won't tell her that the shore is also a traverser, and he came to visit Mitaka instantly.

Since you've been bumped into by Spring, then count yourself unlucky, so don't cry anymore, it's a natural disaster, a natural disaster......

Kasuga was very happy to see the president of the anime research club devastated by the blow, so when we returned to the activity room with the shore dew companion hostage, she couldn't wait to take out everyone's work, so please comment.

On the shore, you know what to say and what not to say, right?

The famous cartoonist's Adam's apple slid a few times, and he should have understood what I meant.

The first thing to come out is the work of Koyamada Manta.,In the weirdo-filled SOS group,,It's just a little black-bellied, he can indeed be called a "common sense school"-although the traverser itself is an existence outside of common sense.,And his works,It's really decent.,Plain and meticulous painting style、Soft and concise lines,Although the painting skills are a little poor.,But as an "amateur's fandom",At least you can still take it out to meet people.。

His comic, called "A Thousand Miles Away", tells the story of a wandering teenager:

The boy wandered in the city, he kept meeting new friends and saying goodbye to old ones, he always said goodbye when everything seemed good, and he always left with a smile from others. He himself always has a smile on his face, everything is fine and looks good.

Actually, it's not so rosy......

The boy waved his hand, said goodbye to the city that was slowly sinking into darkness, and left with a smile.

Then he wept in no one's place.

Tossing and turning, traveling thousands of miles.

"I always feel a little darker," he said as he commented on the manga earnestly, looking serious and reliable, and indeed a trustworthy senior, "Hmm...... I can understand your intention in using gray tones, after all, the story itself is gray, but since your protagonist hides the gray under laughter, why lean towards gray in the color of the painting? ”

"Since there is already a contrast in the plot, we might as well continue this contrast in terms of color."

The implication of his words is that Koyamada needs to re-post the dots, right?

Very good, very powerful—well, Wan, there are still three days to go, and I think you should have time to revise all sixteen manuscripts......

The second one to take out the work and ask the shore to comment is Kazuki Furuizumi.,This superpowered teenager is indeed versatile.,Although it can't be compared with Yonghiko.,But in terms of the level of ordinary high school students.,His talent for painting is already quite good.,It's not inferior to the group of ticket holders in the Animation Research Club.。 And the stories he draws are also very much in line with the style of ordinary high school students......

Otohime, a young high school student, like many of her peers, studies hard while longing for romantic love, she has a crush on John Smith, the senior of the school's football club, but has never been able to find a suitable way to express her feelings......

If you only see this, it seems that this is a campus love story, but-

Otohime has an unknown identity: she's a superpower!

Every night, she would hear a mysterious voice, and then an inexplicable throbbing gushed out of her chest, and the ordinary girl suddenly turned into a superman with a red light, fighting the blue giant who tried to destroy the world.

As the battle gets harder, the red companions continue to fall, and the maiden grows up......

"Are you preparing for a sequel?" Shore shook his head, quite dissatisfied with Furuizumi's work, "It's okay to be a traditional theme like Superman, but this kind of story should take a short and concise route, just like a sitcom like a sitcom with its own story in each episode." Your ending is not concise enough in order to leave suspense, and the point is that there are no clear paragraphs, which affects the structure of the whole story. ”

"My suggestion is to work harder, draw a few more, and finally finish the first act."

I drew a few original manuscripts in three days -- it seems that Gu Quan has to stay up late......

The third thing that made the shore comment was the work of Xuzi.

I didn't know that Xuzi was also good at drawing.

This was normal, because even Uncle Ah Xuan didn't know - when we talked to him about it, his expression of surprise didn't seem like he was pretending to be at all.

"Because there are good teachers." Xuzi replied.

Please, don't irritate your dad, he's laughing bitterly!

Xuzi's work is pure romantic comedy: an ordinary girl who for some inexplicable reason transfers to a mysterious school and lives with a group of geniuses, geeks, and ghosts.

A handsome and decathlon squad leader.

A sports commissioner who is as powerful as an ox and as stupid as a cow.

The self-willed and arrogant student president who is very powerful and charismatic.

A quasi-cross talk actor who hides a knife in his smile.

A librarian who seems to be loyal but is actually black-bellied.

A peerless but cold athlete.

……

Such a group of people laugh and scold all day long, and live in a mess.

Saying...... Isn't this our SOS group? Even a dull guy like me can see it!

"We often say that art should come from life and be higher than life...... "Under the gaze of Yuyan on the shore, he wiped the beads of sweat that oozed from his forehead and carefully chose the words, "Your story is very interesting and well drawn, but I think - at least change the names of the characters, and using real names in your works may cause confusion to everyone." ”

Yuhiko's work was the fourth to comment on him, but in the face of "Interstellar Reincarnation", whose drawing skills were superb enough to be sent to a manga school as a teaching material, he really couldn't say anything about it except for lamenting the horror of the afterlife.

The story is actually very old-fashioned: the alien prince falls in love with the girl of the earthlings, gives up the throne for her, and stays on the earth.

Really, it's that simple.

Yuhiko spent a lot of space drawing landscapes and character close-ups, and the whole manga is beautiful and gorgeous to the extreme.

The most exaggerated thing is that this cartoon does not use dot paper at all, and all the special effects are hand-drawn by him!

In the face of a work that is so strong, what else can the shore say?

"My painting is terrible."

"I can guess you don't look like you can draw."

"Not really, I can still draw a little bit......"

"Don't procrastinate, take out your own work!"

At the urging of Haruhi, I reluctantly took out my paintings.

There is only one painting.

The canvas, which is about one meter high and three meters long, is painted with incomprehensible patterns in different shades of red.

"Could this be the legendary abstraction?" Gu Quan squinted his eyes and seemed to be smiling happily - assuming that he ignored his trembling legs.

He was not scared, but cold.

As soon as the painting was unfolded, a cold mist appeared in the activity room, and even a layer of frost formed on the windows.

Yuhiko took Xuko's hand and helped her ward off the cold.

Xiaoguang pressed a few times on his clothes, and his originally frozen pale face quickly returned to ruddy.

Mrs. Wan went to the bathroom.

Kasuga, I, Galadia, and Shore are all types that are not afraid of the cold.

So the only one who was really choked by the cold was the superpowered Guquan Kazuki.

"I can't comment on this painting." Shore sighed, "I suggest you put it away and donate it to the Royal Gallery for a few years, so that in a few years, all those pesky John Cows will freeze to death......"

Because I really didn't know how to draw, I had to think of a different angle: I found a roll of white silk cloth called "Demon Pattern Cloth" from the pile of inexplicable rewards given to me by the Destiny Host, and found a bright looking red pigment, and then poured nearly eighty percent of my spiritual power into the pen and ink and smeared it on the canvas.

As a result, you get such a strange picture.

Because I was in a bad mood when I painted—anyone who couldn't paint even the slightest bit of anything in front of the canvas for hours would be in a bad mood—so I subconsciously poured out all my anger and frustration on the canvas, and by the time I came back to my senses, the painting had a terrible curse power.

As soon as it is unfolded, the icy resentment will invade the surroundings, the most notable manifestation of which is the sudden drop in temperature.

To be honest, this thing shouldn't actually be called a "comic", but already a magic weapon......

Xiaoguang's level of comics is quite high, even close to the level of Yuhiko, but he paints like a person, his drawing style is soft and delicate to the extreme, and he can't tell that the author is a man at all - because it is a girl's manga that is extremely feminine!

A frail teenager accidentally boarded a submarine named "Nautilus" and became a makeshift cook, sailing the vast sea with Captain Nemo and others in search of ancient ruins. And the boy's real wish is to find his sister who went out to archaeology but has no news.

Captain Nemo was a brilliant polymath, but also a stubborn and headstrong youth; The first mate is a tall Russian who is always accustomed to solving problems with violence, and the motto is "Violence does not solve the problem, but it can solve you!" ”; The second mate was a middle-aged man with a smile on his face, so scheming that no one understood what he was thinking; The chief engineer was a genius inventor, but he only set his eyes on the ship's doctor, and spent all day not doing his job properly, holding her with a dead face......

Okay, I know you're obsessed with getting your sister back, but there's no need to insinuate us in the comics!

"Very well drawn!" The shore spoke highly of Xiaoguang's "20,000 Leagues Under the Sea", and even suggested that he submit his manuscript to a famous comic publishing house to try to become a serial author.

Unfortunately, Kasuga vetoed the shore's proposal on the grounds that "Hikaru is also busy in the SOS group".

Feed! What are you busy doing as a maid all day? And the pseudo-maid and the beautiful boy cartoonist, which of the two professions is more promising, isn't it clear at a glance?

Like the island of the Great Sword from which she was born, Galadia's work is bold and crisp, with bright and powerful lines forming a symbolic picture, and the result is that the picture is extremely simple, almost pure white drawing.

"It's well drawn, but the plot seems to be a little problematic......"

It's not just a problem!

Ziji is a great general of the great country "Cheng", a famous knight, she leads the most powerful knight order in the country and guards the national capital.

The monarch of Chengguo is the queen named Zixin, Zixin is the sister of Ziji, she is both civil and military, talented, but she is willful and stubborn, she will do whatever she thinks, and never consider the consequences. Ziji was very distressed by this, and often persuaded Zixin to be a little more restrained, but Zixin never listened.

The vassal state "Qi" in the west has grown stronger and stronger, and has slowly affected the surrounding dependent territories, threatening the rule of Chengguo, Ziji repeatedly persuaded Zixin to send troops to crusade against Qi, but Zixin was ignored by Zixin, who had been confused by all kinds of gorgeous utensils that had paid tribute to Qi.

Later, Zi Xin, who was too annoying, simply sent her to lead a large army to the great wilderness beyond the eastern mountains to conquer the barbarians.

Ziji fought the barbarians very hard, but the barbarians who occupied the geographical advantage had the upper hand in terms of numbers and provisions, and she could not defeat them despite her best efforts, and the battle continued for several years.

At this moment, Ziji met Lu Wang, who led the people around the nomadic herds.

Lü Wang is a descendant of the ancient hero Lieshan Jun, he is eight feet tall and infinitely powerful, capable of giving birth to cracked tigers and leopards, driving bears, and his brave name is revered by the whole world. And he is also Zixin's fiancé, but there is no affection between this pair of men and women with incompatible personalities, it is just a pure political marriage.

For the sake of the alliance, Lu Wang helped Ziji fight, gradually recovering his disadvantage and defeating the various forces of the barbarians one by one. And in the process of fighting side by side, they also gradually fell in love with each other.

How to explain this to Zixin? Ziji was very embarrassed.

Soon after, they received an astonishing news - Qi Guo took advantage of the fact that Chengguo's army was out and the national air defense was weak, and rebelled, and had defeated Chengguo's improvised patchwork army in the decisive battle of Makino, and was about to attack Chengguo's Yin capital.

Ziji and Lu Wang left their army behind, rode the flying magical beast Isli, and rushed back to Yindu day and night, but they were one step too late after all.

On the burning Imperial City Observation Deck, they saw Zixin, who had already taken poison.

Zixin died, Yindu was also burned, and the Qi State had been operating for many years, and it had already subdued the various subject countries.

In desperation, Ziji took the remaining soldiers after the war and re-established the country in the far east, while Lu Wang led his people to establish his own country between Ziji's country and his homeland, and used his prestige to block King Qi's pursuit of Ziji......

The nearly 100-page tome tells an epic story, and the battle scenes in it are even more realistic and admirable.

But......

"Such a tampering with history, the ancients would cry......" The shore touched his forehead with his hand, and said helplessly, "Jiang Ziya and Jizi love each other......"

Well, you can't complain......

And you look at Haruhi's face - don't insinuate so obviously, okay......

"Well, the best story should certainly come out at the end!" Considering the presence of respectable seniors, Kasuga quickly adjusted his mood and came up with his own work.

Lao Bai is a poor middle-aged man who drives a dilapidated pickup truck every day to sell bento boxes in the city.

The mobile stalls don't have much profit at all, and Lao Bai's daily income, in addition to living by himself, is only enough to prepare the raw materials for tomorrow's lunch.

Every night he worked until two or three o'clock and then continued to work during the day......

Hope for the future? He didn't know.

One day, he was driving a pickup truck and selling bento boxes on a busy street, when suddenly a white robot and a red robot were fighting nearby, and the missiles exploded right next to the lunchbox.

Lao Bai died in the bento car, in the bento that he hadn't had time to sell.

"Even though it's a story that's so true and cruel, I have a wonderful feeling...... "Shore frowned, puzzled, "why am I a little happy when it's a tragic ending?" ”

Yes, so did I, and I felt very happy to see the middle-aged man who sold the bento die silently in the bento.

Galadia even burst out laughing......

What's going on...... It's hard to understand......

To be able to write a tragedy into a comedy, she really deserves to be a goddess of spring!

………………

It's so cold, my fingers are almost frozen......

Each person's story is an allusion to their life or inner desires.

Of course, Kasuga is the exception.

Who is the story of Kasuga, I believe I don't need to explain more, right?

What? Can't you see that?

Mouth beard! Drag it out and cut off your head!