Chapter Twenty-Nine: Revising the Plot of the Novel
At night, Yang Hao sat in front of the computer with a frown, and the screen showed his blog post homepage, at this time, the friends above were almost fifteen thousand, and the uploaded novels were forwarded by nearly 10,000, and the data can be said to be very good. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info
"What should I do?"
Yang Hao was a little irritable at this time, and muttered.
"Jin Dada, why did you design such a plot in the first place? What should I do now? ”
Yang Hao scratched his head frantically, with a depressed face, yesterday the novel was uploaded to the sixth time, and today Yang Hao is going to upload it two more times, but as soon as he wrote about Xiaolongnu being Yin Zhiping, Yang Hao was dumbfounded, he had forgotten this stubble before, and now he was not prepared at all, and he was about to die of sorrow.
He had heard that when Jin Dada wrote the plot, he was threatened by many book fans and asked to change it, if he wrote it and uploaded it today, Yang Hao could foresee how those book fans would spray himself.
Green heroine! Now there is an author who dares to write like this, absolutely dead, dead, maybe one day there will be a water meter standing outside the door, and when you come in, it will be a white knife, and when you go out, it will turn red.
"Didi"
The voice of a new message interrupted Yang Hao's contemplation, and when he clicked on it, he smiled bitterly, "It's urging again." ”
The screen was pulled down, all of which were urging the update, including this one, Yang Hao couldn't count how many book fans were urging the update.
After thinking and meditating for a while, Yang Hao gritted his teeth and wrote such a paragraph, and continued to write down to always feel unwilling, Xiaolongnu is one of his favorite characters, when he first saw the plot of her loss of virginity, he himself was angry, and now he wants to write it, there is always a thorn in his heart.
Stopping writing and continuing to be in a daze, Yang Hao collapsed on the bed, really not knowing what to do.
"Just because I looked at you more in the crowd, I never forgot your face."
The legend of a male voice sounded, awakening Yang Hao's mind, after the song was recorded, Yang Hao set the song as the mobile phone ringtone, the exclusive ringtone for Huang Ziqi's call.
"Hey, Ziqi."
Yang Hao's voice on the phone seemed weak, and Huang Ziqi asked worriedly, "Yang Hao, are you uncomfortable?" Why don't you have any strength in your voice? ”
"Ho" Yang Hao straightened his waist, puffed up and said, "It's okay, I'm just a little tired." ”
"Then you have to pay more attention to rest, your body is already relatively weak, don't be tired and sick, and eat more good food to make up for it."
"I know, you don't have to worry about me, how is the song practiced? Are you all familiar with it? Huang Ziqi's soft care made Yang Hao feel a little depressed, much better, and the girl always cared about him like this after the two got along.
Speaking of this, Huang Ziqi was extremely proud, after she arrived at her aunt's house today, her aunt didn't believe that Yang Hao could write songs, and she also said that she had met a liar, until Huang Ziqi played Yang Hao's song again, her aunt didn't believe it,
At this time, Yang Hao came to a few more songs, and Huang Ziqi remembered the stupid appearance of her aunt who opened her mouth wide after watching it, so she couldn't help but "giggle" and laugh.
"What do you think of that happy thing? Laughing so happily? Infected by Huang Ziqi's laughter, Yang Hao's somewhat boring mood was much better.
Huang Ziqi said happily: "My aunt ..... today"
Listening to the girl happily talking about the reaction of relatives to him, Yang Hao smiled knowingly, a similar scene seemed to have happened not long ago, he couldn't help but think of the first time he went to his wife's house, the reaction of her eight aunts and seven aunts, it seemed that they didn't believe it at first, but they were surprised in the end.
In the end, Huang Ziqi said: "Yang Hao, don't you know, today I gave your novel to my parents and aunt, they were all surprised, my father is a professor of literature at Modu University, and my mother is a junior high school Chinese teacher, they have all been doing literary work all their lives, they all praise your talent, and those two sentences are peerless!" ”
The praise of the future father-in-law and mother-in-law cleared the worries in Yang Hao's heart, and he was recognized before they met, and he believed that he would be very excited and happy as a son-in-law.
Suddenly, Yang Hao was stunned, "Ziqi also has good literary skills, can I seek her advice on the matter of novels?" ”
Thinking of Yang Hao, he did it, and immediately informed Huang Ziqi of the troubles just now, of course, he only said that it was his own consideration, and finally said: "Ziqi, do you think it's okay to write like this?" ”
There was silence on the other end of the phone for a long time, and Yang Hao didn't urge, giving the girl time to think.
"Yang Hao, do you want to express other meanings besides the plot?" After a long time, Huang Ziqi said slowly.
Yang Hao was stunned, yes! Why did Jin Dada write such a plot?
In his previous life, whether it was a celebrity or an ordinary book lover, he discussed this matter countless times, and there were all kinds of speculations, some said that Jin Dada told his beloved that he didn't mind that she was married and was willing to accept her.
Some say that Jin Da wants to write about broken love, the dragon girl loses her virginity, and Yang Guo has a broken arm.
Some say that Jin Da is an opportunity to give two ignorant young men and women an opportunity to pierce the window paper, and some say that it is in line with the plot of the Valley of Despair, Chongyang Palace and even the whole novel.
At the beginning, Yang Hao also had a guess, he felt that Jin Dada wrote such a plot in order to rebel against the etiquette of the society at that time, that is, the Song Dynasty, but also the era in which he lived.
Jin Dada was born in the old society, although the crazy influx of Western civilization at that time caused some of the people's concepts to change, but the tradition still exists, nearly a thousand years of etiquette between men and women, the narrative is only one concept, men and women do not kiss.
Although the time of creation of "The Condor Heroes" is already in modern times, people still attached great importance to women's virginity at that time, and how many women were cold-eyed and ridiculed by the society because of various so-called virginity loss, and finally lived a miserable life.
However, in the novel, Yang Hao's infatuation with the dragon girl ignores all this, all he cares about is the dragon girl herself, and he doesn't pay attention to all the etiquette in the outside world, maybe it's just a kind of contempt for Jin Dada's etiquette!
Yang Hao's other idea is that Yang Guo's broken arm and the dragon girl's loss of virginity are more important to emphasize the unforgettable love between them, Yang Guo doesn't care about the dragon girl's loss of virginity, the dragon girl doesn't care about Yang Guo's broken arm and mutilation, the two only have love and love for each other in their hearts, and anything, any difficulty, any obstacle, can never separate the two.
Nowadays, how many men and women fly separately when disaster comes, how many men and women break up because of each other's bad conditions, how many men and women have to part because of the world's opinions, and how many men and women only care about each other and abandon everything?
In order to survive in the book, the dragon girl resolutely left the book and jumped off the cliff, in order to reunite with the dragon girl in the underworld, Yang Guo also resolutely followed in his footsteps after 16 years, and it is precisely because of their never-fading love that the dragon girl was able to heal from her injuries, and Yang Guo can still meet with the dragon girl after 16 years.
When Yu Yang Hao and the Dragon Maiden reunited, Jin Dada wrote: "Although they have also dived into the pool, because they do not have the force of jumping down from a height of more than 100 zhang, the pool is not deep, so they can't see where the ice cellar is." If I had come down by fate, I would not have found you. ”
If it weren't for Yang Guo's affection, jumping off the cliff, he would never have found the cave at the bottom of the pool, and the two probably wouldn't have met again, but I was afraid that they would die alone.
Sometimes Yang Hao feels that this novel is just a romance novel dressed in martial arts, otherwise why would Jin Dada use the words written by Yuan Haowen to ask what the world is and directly teach life and death, this sentence can be said to run through the whole novel.
After thinking about it, Yang Hao told Huang Ziqi what he thought, of course, Yang Hao just said that this was written to rebel against the etiquette of the society at that time, and to emphasize the unswerving love between Yang Long and the two of them.
Fortunately, in the historical era that Yang Hao borrowed from this world, there were also strict requirements for etiquette similar to those of the Song Dynasty on the earth.
"Stupid Yang Hao, I didn't expect that such a smart and talented person as you would actually walk into a dead end." For a long time, Huang Ziqi teased with some joy.
After getting to know Yang Hao, his self-confidence, his calmness, and his various talents gave Huang Ziqi a sense of unreality, as if Yang Hao could control everything, but now seeing that he is also confused and can't figure it out, Huang Ziqi feels that her boyfriend is more real.
"Huh? Ziqi, you're confusing me. ”
Yang Hao's surprised words made Huang Ziqi even happier, "Since you are writing a criticism of the etiquette at that time, just write that the Taoist priest touched or saw the body of the little dragon girl, this was also an act of loss of virginity at that time, you don't have to write it..... write it..."
Huang Ziqi didn't know how to say it for a while, and immediately she thought of a word, "You don't have to write so thoroughly." ”
"That's right, Ziqi, you're so right, I did get into the tip of the horns, and I've been writing about ancient things with my current thinking, Ziqi, you're so smart, I really love you, huh."
Yang Hao's exclamation of love and the sound of kissing made Huang Ziqi's face flush, but he was very happy in his heart
"Ahh
Then Huang Ziqi exclaimed, and then said, "Yang Hao, I'll call you tomorrow." ”
Yang Hao still wanted to ask what's wrong, Huang Ziqi's angry voice came from the phone before he hung up, and Yang Hao's thief smiled, very obscene.
It turned out that Huang's mother was eavesdropping on the side just now, and when Huang Ziqi found out, she screamed, this Huang Ziqi was complaining!
The plot was about to be modified, Yang Hao's troubles disappeared completely, and then he began to code words, this plot of the dragon girl's loss of virginity, he designed that Yin Zhiping was just about to take off the dragon girl's last protection, when he heard Yang Guo's footsteps coming back, Yin Zhiping hurriedly helped the dragon girl get dressed again, and fled in embarrassment, and Yang Guo left because of his godfather's madness, and was depressed, so he just lowered his head and waved a stick to beat the grass, venting his emotions, and the trees blocked him, and he didn't see this scene.
Later, because of the plot of the dragon girl's loss of virginity, Yang Hao also thought about how to modify it, for example, Guo Fu secretly Zhao Zhijing and Yin Zhiping's conversation was not complete, and he only heard Yin Zhiping defile the dragon girl, but he didn't know that he didn't go to the last step.
And even so, according to the etiquette at the time, the dragon girl did lose her virginity, which led to the fierce fight in Chongyang Palace and the development of the plot later.