Listening to the meaning and tone revealed in Mr. Liang Kun's words, Yu Yan felt that he really had to find an opportunity to write about the anti-pornography and anti-illegal activities. You have to think about your rhetoric carefully, you have to be decent and annoying!

Isn't the damn still trying to fix me? Let's be whole, the more neat Lao Tzu lives, the more comfortable he lives! You've done me a great favor by mistake, and your reputation has skyrocketed to more than one million, and it's really itchy to be panicked if you can't say it, and you will definitely be half angry to let them know that it has also increased their probability of survival. Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 ｉｎfo

Teacher Liang Kun couldn't wait to take over the manuscript in Yu Yan's hand, firstly, he was quite confident in Yu Yan's talent and wanted to see what level this song reached, and secondly, he had to at least see if this level was enough to let himself be sent for a round, if it was really bad...... Well, Mr. Liang Kun thought about it, why don't you help change it yourself?

He was really tired of that document, and he didn't want to directly eliminate Yu Yan, it didn't matter if he couldn't enter the finals, but he just couldn't be eliminated in the first round, and he didn't care about it, but he couldn't do it at first! If you really want to weed out those people in the first place, you should think that you really listened to them.

With this mentality, I looked down at "Those Flowers" seriously, and after watching it for a while, Mr. Liang Kun raised his head: "I feel that the style of this song is very casual...... Well, how to say it, it's peculiar, let's not talk about the level, at least it's peculiar. ”

This song does have a bit of a casual feeling, this kind of casualness is different from Cui Jian, it has a slight inheritance but the essence is different, his casualness is quite literary, different from Cui Jian's kind of casualness with a slightly rogue atmosphere, this casualness can quite be loved by most literary and artistic youth.

In the previous life, most of the people who liked Cui Jian were actually literary and artistic youths, but literary and artistic youths were also classified, Xu Wei's songs have the meaning of later folk songs, and his ability to attract fans is much better than Cui Jian's, this style is more acceptable to the public, in the words of some people, Xu Wei's rock is not rock enough, this is actually his advantage.

"Teacher, can you help you change it?" Yu Yan said, thinking that if this was in the field of literature, the master's work would definitely not be changed, and the music would be arbitrary.

Teacher Liang Kun frowned and looked at it carefully, and then shook his head: "No need to change, no need to change, this song is really good." Although this song did not bring me the same shock as "A Red Cloth", it was indeed surprising enough.

In fact, it's not to blame that the level of this song is not good, it's really surprising that "A Red Cloth" came out, it is a new direction, and it still makes the tutors feel incredible, who would have thought that the song could be sung like that? Who would have thought that this form of song would have such power?

In the case of "A Red Cloth", Liang Kun estimates that there are few songs that can surprise him more, and his first reaction when he sees this song is to compare it with "A Red Cloth", especially looking at Yu Yan's own analysis, the complexity and profundity of the connotation of that song is simply not something that people of this age can write.

This song "Those Flowers" still has the meaning of "A Red Cloth", but there are some new ideas in addition to this, this novelty comes from the old, in the opinion of Mr. Liang Kun, this song is not thorough enough, he always feels that this kind of innovation is not so meaningful.

That's right, of course, this is also an innovation, which Mr. Liang Kun sees very clearly, but the novelty comes from the old and makes him a little disappointed, but this level is completely enough for him to send a round, thinking of this Liang Kun smiled a little: "Xiaoyu, how long your brain is, it's really enviable!" ”

"Where is it," Yu Yan smiled, in fact, he saw Liang Kun's reaction before, and he probably knew that this song did not achieve the effect he imagined, maybe it was a bit of a big change? The rock nature of this song is a little smaller, it is more simple and sincere, "I think this song is almost meaningful, teacher, can you help me take a look at it again?" ”

"Don't be modest, if you're too modest, you'll be arrogant." Liang Kun smiled, he actually didn't have any ideas for this song, how to change it? He didn't know at all, and he had to study his original song again, and he didn't have much time now.

"No, no, I really think it's not that interesting." Yu Yan said sincerely, thinking in his heart why don't you copy another poem? But if you finish copying the next song, you really don't have a song.

In fact, if Yu Yan enters the finals, he doesn't know what to do, he has basically been able to innovate, and he finally got an idea from Su Xueying to sing two more songs, but there is really no other innovation in the finals, and he really doesn't know much about non-professional fields.

Teacher Liang Kun tilted his head and thought about it: "I think ah, this song is really good, it doesn't need to be changed or what, there is no such thing as almost meaning, you can prepare for the next song during this time, you have to be ready for your own promotion, do you say yes, the three of them must also be prepared, don't forget this stubble." ”

Hearing this, Yu Yan was stunned for a moment, the meaning of this is definitely not a simple reminder on the surface, how can the meaning in this seem to tell you that you have been promoted? It seemed to be quite clear and direct, and for a while Yu Yan suspected that he had heard it wrong.

The translation of this passage can be completely understood in this way: "Your song is very good, the central government has decided, and you will be guaranteed to advance to the next round!" Hurry up and prepare what you want to sing in the next round, don't waste time here. ”

Yu Yan thought to herself, should I read two lines of poetry? Profiteering...... Well, you get the idea!

"Take a long-term view, you have to be ready to advance to the next round, now you don't have too much time, you have to prepare for something else, don't you?" Teacher Liang Kun then said with a smile, thinking about it, if the level of this song is too high, it doesn't seem to be too good, but it's quite good at the moment.

After hearing this, Yu Yan was quite sure that he had been promoted, and the meaning of this was too obvious! I'm afraid I didn't understand the first sentence.

"Thank you, teacher, for the reminder!" Yu Yan said with a smile, thinking about the stalk of his previous life, "I read two lines of poetry at that time!" "I didn't expect it to be so amazing, it was really refreshing!

"Well, you sing this song, I'll listen to it, if there are any other problems with singing skills." Teacher Liang Kun knew that Yu Yan understood the meaning of his words, and then said, although this song is not very important, but listen to it, at least avoid obvious flaws.