Chapter 59: It's time to go to the newspaper
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The horse-faced man then said a few more polite words: "I'll send it over later, don't be late tomorrow's edition." In fact, if it is explained that these three essays are the children of the leader, it must be someone from the newspaper to take them, but now in order to be less blatant, it is not so.
"Brother Zhang, you don't have to worry, I've already said that I've left the version," said with a watermelon seed face and handed over a stack of papers in his hand, "Look at this comment I wrote, if it doesn't work, you can change it again." ”
"No, I'm relieved of what you wrote." The horse-faced man took it and waved his hand to signal that he would not change. He actually has a comment here.,Of course, it's about "The Death of the Red Rabbit".,I wrote it hastily yesterday.,To be honest, this article doesn't need a comment and no one can see it.,It's simply a clear stream in this essay.。
Watermelon Seed smiled: "Then I'm here for the Education Office." "The two of them are now in the Provincial Education Office, and they are not tired of running an office, in fact, they just give the list of first and second prizes.
The horse-faced man nodded, got up and walked out with the three first prizes set in the house, and he was relieved to finish it early, and now he was still a little nervous when he had to replace the composition of the vice governor's son.
After driving for a while, I arrived at the Qi Provincial Daily Newspaper Office, found the person in charge, and handed over three essays.
The person in charge took it, and of course the people from the Provincial Education Office had to pay attention to it, and bowed his head and flipped over: ""People are based on sincerity", "Believe in people", "The death of the red rabbit"? When he turned to "The Death of the Red Rabbit", he sighed lightly, the titles of those two articles are very clear, what does the death of the Red Rabbit mean?
"Well," the horse-faced man nodded, "These are the three first prizes this time, and the comments are all attached to the back." ”
That "Believe in People" is "My Mayor Father", he changed the name to make it look less eye-catching, and the horse-faced man sighed a little, why is this bureaucracy corrupted to the school now, and it is so unscrupulous?
"Okay," the person in charge resisted his curiosity and didn't read it, "how do you think these three articles are typeset?" Who's before and who's behind? Horizontal and vertical? Or ......"
"You can do whatever you want, you are professional, how can I care about this."
The person in charge smiled when he heard this, and asked just now, and then chatted politely for a while, and the person in charge sent the horse-faced man out of the daily newspaper, and turned around and flipped through the three essays.
The first thing to read is, of course, "The Death of the Red Rabbit", as an editor who has read countless articles, he was immediately attracted to this topic, and I have to say that this article is very successful, at least in terms of the title.
Newspapers are not allowed to have headlines, and they editors and reporters naturally have studied headlines if they want to attract people's news, and everyone knows what kind of headlines can attract people.
Last week, an old editor and newcomer wrote a report to the demonstration: "The woman was seriously injured and almost died due to eating spicy hot!" 》
The title is very scary, why did you get seriously injured after eating Malatang?
In fact, this report is about a woman who was hit by a car on the way to eat Malatang because she was in a hurry to cross the road, you say it has nothing to do with eating Malatang? She crossed the road just to eat Malatang? How can it be called okay? But if you want to write about the woman crossing the road and being seriously injured and almost dying, then there must not be much to see, this is the importance of the topic.
To be honest, he really can't think of how it can be related to integrity, Chitu Ma himself knows that there are a few mentions in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, but how can its death still be related to integrity.
Quite puzzled, he began to read, and when he opened his mouth, he whispered again, this kid might as well be a reporter or editor, the title and the beginning are attractive enough!
The more he looked, the more curious he became, how could this have anything to do with integrity, what this person was thinking now was that this article might be the same as the one that was seriously injured by eating Malatang last week, but this kind of article can also be awarded the first prize?
With this thought, the more he read, the more frightened he felt, as the editor of the Qi Provincial Daily, which reads quite a lot, of course he can see that this article is good, but this is written by a high school student? How can this be written by a high school student?
Quite sluggish, he hurriedly looked at the comments, and sure enough! An idea was confirmed, and he was completely convinced...... This is the level of the first prize for high school students now? Are all high school students so powerful now?
While thinking about it, I hurriedly went to turn through the two articles, and first read the article "People are Honest", well...... Argumentative essay, at a cursory glance, he was a little disappointed, after all, the argumentative essay is too mediocre, it is difficult to produce a good article, this good is of course relative to that one, he feels that the argumentative essay has no possibility of surpassing that one in terms of style.
Put away his mind and continue to look down, and after reading it quickly, he thought about it, this article is okay, the arguments and arguments are good, and the writing is good, but it is too far from the previous one.
Well, this should be the level of the first prize for high school students, right? This editor thought, as for the "Death of the Red Rabbit", it should be a blast, right?
Put this away and look at the narrative of "Believe in People", he is a little interested, is it another narrative at the level of "The Death of the Red Rabbit"? Are all high school students so good now?
With this in mind, he was a little dumbfounded when he first read the first paragraph...... This, the level seems to be a little poor, huh? Is it not good at opening?
Then looking down, he quickly denied his previous thoughts, isn't this not good at the beginning, this is not good at writing at all!
What the hell is this?
Let's not tell the story...... The only highlight of this article may be the writing, but how blunt this writing is, as if it was not written by the author himself, he naturally thought that this was the possibility that someone had revised it.
Look at this whole red. My father was the mayor of the city, and he immediately realized that this was indeed the child of the leader...... This is really the child of the leader! Without mincing matters! There's no meaning to hide at all!
For a moment, he was a little envious, just this kind of thing can also be awarded the first prize, and the children of the leader are cool...... At the same time, of course, he began to despise the horse-faced man, how did he know that if it wasn't for the horse-faced man, the first prize would also be "My Vice Governor's Father"!
Looking at this article, he didn't have any other ideas, the newspaper, there were a lot of things to write, and it wasn't bad for this one, looking at these three articles, he thought about the layout. That "The Death of the Red Rabbit" should be placed at the end of the finale, and this "Believe in People" might as well be changed to my father as the mayor...... Put it in the middle, put the two articles in front and no one will read them.
humming lightly and preparing to engage in typesetting, looking at the "Death of the Red Rabbit" in his hand, he always felt that the possible achievements of this author named Yu Yan in the future may be unimaginable...... It's a weird intuition.
(I've read dozens of chapters of urban novels so far, I'm really a big star, so I don't know which plots and which works have been written badly, and I'm going to build a building, and if you think it's rotten and don't want to read it, you can say that I try to avoid writing it.) )