Chapter XXVII: The Healer and the Sick
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Yu Bai's expression was very illustrative of his thoughts at the moment, as if he had expected such a reaction, Luo Shui smiled casually, took out a box of Yuxi from his pocket, lit one by himself, and then reached out and handed it to Yu Bai.
"To be honest, I just wanted to come over and see the so-called elite ......" Speaking of this, he found that Yu Bai did not reach out to take the cigarette, so he smiled self-deprecatingly and smoked the cigarette back, "I forgot, good students like you don't smoke." ā
Maybe it's so simple between men and men, those who drink will get drunk when they meet those who drink, and even if they don't usually want to say something, they can't help but say it.
When a smoker meets a smoker, even if there is some unfamiliar distance, the distance will be shortened by a cigarette.
There is no doubt that at this moment, Luo Shui's expression has a kind of meaning that you and I are two people, according to the development of this situation, even if the two will continue to chat, but they will almost stop at this kind of greeting.
Yu Bai leaned over, reached out and picked up the cigarette he had placed next to the bed, and lit one as well.
Looking at the other party's interested eyes, Yu Bai took a big sip violently, learning Mr. Xu's extremely ecstatic posture, "You are really wrong, first, I studied countdown in class, and second, I learned a few words that I couldn't even understand, and I studied scum." The word elite really doesn't match me. ā
After saying that, both of them laughed.
I don't know if it's to laugh at each other for being scum, or to celebrate meeting a fellow scum.
Speaking of ghostwriting, even if it is a new concept essay competition, it is not without precedent, and the most puzzling and confusing thing must be the Han Han incident.
Some people suspect that the articles for the semi-finals of the Han and Han preliminary rounds are all mailed, and it cannot be confirmed that they were written by himself, coupled with the special circumstances of his finals, the separate exam questions, and the separate examination room, and no one can be sure whether the cup peep that made him an instant hit is from him.
This suspicion has persisted since the results were first announced, but as time went on, no one looked into it, because no one could give a conclusive fact or convincing evidence.
Judging from the situation before his rebirth, Han Han lived a more chic life than most people, writing books was regarded by him as making extra money, racing cars were used by him as a career, and finally he became a guide and made a lot of money.
By the way, they also got married and became national fathers-in-law, and those who doubt may be really suspicious, or they may be ...... It's really envious.
We can't interfere in the lives of others, but we can arrange our own lives at will.
Yu Bai and Luo Shui hit it off at first sight, because they both love to smoke and read novels.
The two discussed the current martial arts, discussed the newly rising online novels, and discussed all kinds of things they thought were interesting. There are thousands of glasses of wine for confidants, and the two hit it off and went to a nearby night market stall to eat barbecue and drink beer.
Yu Bai will take the exam in the afternoon tomorrow, and Luoshui will take the morning exam, but he doesn't care at all, he just came over to watch the flowers, who can hope to really get the first back.
The next day, Yu Bai, who was drunk, was woken up by the alarm clock and found that Luo Shui was still sleeping with a pillow like an octopus, and he was stunned.
"Holy! You're not going to play again. ā
called a sentence and woke him up in the past, but he got up angrily, "Don't stop me, I haven't gotten up at eight o'clock for hundreds of years, so you let me continue to sleep." ā
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Only then did I know that the other party had already taken the test.
smiled helplessly, then began to wash, sorted out his things and walked towards the test center.
The place where Yu Bai took the exam was arranged in the 17th Middle School of Shanghai City, and several classrooms were specially set aside for the competition in the past two days.
As soon as you enter the school, you can see the people of the organizing committee and the guidance sign placed next to it. I asked about the test location, and I followed my companions towards my destination. At the same time, I can see some people excitedly discussing the proposition and writing experience.
Every time there is such a scene, it will attract the attention of the students of our school, and it may seem to them that the ability to participate in such a competition is something that is enviable.
And the seventeenth middle school is also one of the few girls' schools in China, and the impression of Yu Bai of the girls' middle school is still on the movie, but when you really come here, you find that it's just like that, a unified school uniform, a unified short haircut, in addition to the difference in each student's facial features, maybe these people stand together, you really can't tell who is who.
In the examination room of twenty people, by the time Yu Bai came over, almost all of them had arrived, and the invigilator of the organizing committee checked the temporarily distributed identity documents and let Yu Bai in. The classroom of twenty people still seemed a little empty.
At this moment, there are still ten minutes before 4:20, but the whole classroom is already full of tension, no one speaks, probably because they don't know each other, except for looking around left and right, more looking at the two invigilators on the podium.
In fact, it is better to say that it is a final, but it is better to call it a semi-final. Because the shortlisted contestants pass a round of exams, the finalists will be selected again, and the first place will be selected after a competition among these people.
Those who fail to be eliminated in this link will receive consolation prizes.
"Okay, I won't repeat the discipline in the examination room, since everyone can come to Shanghai to participate in the semi-finals, it shows that they are all top students in their own studies. Now I am giving you a scratch paper, and you can now type a draft of what you want to write. The second is the test paper, which should clearly write your name and region. The third is the question, there are three of them, everyone chooses one of the three, and you can start answering in ten minutes......"
Listening to the voice in his ear, Yu Bai looked at the three pieces of paper in his hand, filled in the personal information that needed to be filled in on the test paper, and began to read the questions.
As in Yu Bai's memory, one proposition and two and a half propositions are as follows.
"Question 1, essay on the topic of 'Why do people always look up' (self-composed topics are not allowed, and poems are not allowed).
Question 2: Write an essay based on the following material, develop associations, imaginations, or discussions. The topic is self-designed, and the subject matter is not limited. A rich gold mine was discovered in one place, and people flocked to it, but a large river blocked the way......
Question 3: The doctor is benevolent, but the patient is sick. ā
After reading the three questions very carefully, because he was ready to be self-reliant, when he saw the first question, Yu Bai immediately thought of Guo Jingming's article looking up at the sky and bursting into tears, because this kind of article is something he is more familiar with and good at.
Although I have written it, I already have ideas and the general layout and ideas of the article in my heart.
Looking further down, question 2 is obviously a topic that requires divergent thinking, what kind of writing and what ideas you want to express are all based on your personal preferences and abilities. Yu Bai shook his head, the more this kind of topic is, the more difficult it is to write.
Don't think that the semi-proposition is to give you enough space to play, because the more this kind of writing skills, the more you can study a person's writing skills, and the slightest mistake will deviate from the intention of the questioner, in that case, even if you write flowers, you will be abandoned.
Yu Bai would never do risky things, let alone bring them with such a time.
The last question is just a sentence, but it is such a sentence that makes Yu Bai like a fish in his throat. It's uncomfortable, it's very uncomfortable! But at the same time, I was extremely excited. Because of this title, he instantly thought of Han Han's "Seeking Treatment" in his previous life.
There is no doubt that "Seeking Treatment" is the right place to use it here.
Just as this title is tailor-made for this article, "Seeking Treatment" belongs to the category of essays, exposing and satirizing some things through going to the hospital in the text, and the essays are the most direct and clear style that can clearly express the meaning they want to express.
Although it is now in a marginal style, it is known for its short, concise, bright and sharp style, and can use the author's usual writing techniques to write.
And the topic is that the doctor is benevolent, and the patient is sick. Whether it is to write about the particularity and dedication of the profession of doctors from the benevolence of the former doctor, or to write about the state of seeking medical treatment in the latter, it can clearly and directly hit the intention of the questioner and write what they want to see.
But to write these is to fall into a strange circle, a trap of the questioner.
New concept essay, college entrance examination essay, although both are writing essays, there are still differences. If you write in the way of college entrance examination essays, then no matter who writes them, they will get points steadily.
But if you write like this on a new concept essay, then it can only be mediocre.
In this way, it is necessary to be able to write not only what the questioner wants to read, but also the uniqueness of one's own essay, or the style and essence of the essay that distinguishes it from other contestants.
Criticize, satirize, expose!
There is no doubt that integrating these three into it will definitely add a lot of points, and it is quite a safe way to use the essay "Seeking Treatment" to pass the semi-finals and enter the finals.
Thinking of this, Yu Bai exhaled lightly and looked at the time, there was still an hour and a half.
Right now, on scratch paper, I wrote.
put pen to paper, and what was written was "Seeking Treatment".