Explain about the personality of the male and female protagonists
First of all, I have to admit that the heroine collapsed!
I don't have a good pen, I can't write the setting in my heart, and I set my own character to write it down......
This article is my first article, and it is also my practice writing article, to tell the truth, I came to the starting point of full attendance, it is said that the starting point can be comforted on the shelf, and it is easy to take full attendance, so I will come to the starting point to send a novel. Pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info this article is not a hot topic.,It's just that I personally love online games.,There's just an online game stalk in my head.,It's expanded into an outline.,And then this article came out.。
Ah, there's so much gossip that won't change.
Let's go back to the heroine first
The heroine is in my setting, and her personality changes a lot in the early and late stages.
In the early stage, she was more confused because of the relationship in her previous life, and she was sorry for her family in her previous life, so she wanted to repay her as compensation, but the focus of compensation was the "male protagonist" in her previous life, she was controlled by the plot, and she couldn't even look at it, which made her unable to get along with her family after she was reborn - she couldn't ask her parents to drive away their biological son as soon as she got home.
And she had no friends in her previous life, and she didn't come back from rebirth, Xiao Man's waist, Yu Gezi and the fox were all teammates I set for the heroine, and they would also be her friends in this life.
The heroine will be too good to her friends
One is because the heroine feels that this is a novel, and she is still controlled by the "plot", and she has no sense of reality in this world, so she doesn't cherish everything in the game, including her feelings for her friends.
The second reason is that people are social animals, the heroine had no friends in her previous life, and naturally she has no in this life, she has moved out of the house, and there is a separation between her family, and at this time she needs the comfort of her friends, otherwise she will feel lonely. But the insecurity of being manipulated by the plot made her afraid to take the initiative to contact others, so she could only wait for the arrival of her friend who took the initiative to post her. Her friends are too passive, she needs to test whether these friends are sincere, how to test, just like the candy comment [Dou Mi En Shengmi Hatred], the interests are the most easily moving, and the insatiable person will naturally not be her friend. And the more she values the friends she likes more and more, the heavier she tests. That's why he gave a dragon corpse to the fox.
The heroine's behavior just shows that she doesn't have much trust in her current friends, and she needs to use this behavior to build trust in her friends. Of course, once she fails the test, she will instantly abandon that "friend".
The heroine snatched Su Xiaoyue's biggest opportunity in the later stage, and after determining that Su Xiaoyue was unable to make a comeback, she would truly build up her self-confidence and become a normal person again.
Manipulated by the "plot", her way of getting along with anyone is pathological - it's just that because she still has the memory of the first Lin Tianqing, it doesn't seem obvious.
That's all the heroine said, and she can't mention anything else, otherwise it'll be a spoiler.
Let's talk about the male protagonist.
The male protagonist is even more pitted.,I'm changing the male protagonist halfway......
The original male protagonist was Chu Tianheng, in the original outline, Chu Tianheng would get Yi, Rong, Face, and Mask, and approach Chu Tianqing with another identity, but then I asked someone that the relationship between the adopted brother and sister could not be written, it was considered incest, so I had to change the male protagonist...... That is, the fox.
I know that some readers don't like foxes very much, but in fact, this has something to do with the fact that I didn't set up a detailed character for foxes before.
Two days ago, I went back to my hometown and was busy with my feet not touching the ground, and I finally came back with a cold in the past two days, so I had to wait for the fox to slowly plump up the character of the fox.
But the basic character of the fox won't change.,It's not wrong to be such a sticky guy.,There's no way.,If you change it again, it's an overhaul.,It's too troublesome.。
[Bow and admit your mistake]
I will try to continue to write the story better in the future, and if you are willing, please give me some advice, thank you