Chapter 14: The Book Review Zone That Is About to Explode
Approaching the Spring Festival, there is a large area of cooling across the country, and there is even a rare snowfall in the main urban area of the mountain city. Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. biquge。 info
At nine o'clock in the evening, Fang Yun went out to get bacon and sausages, and at a distance of one station, he saw no less than three cars with small piles of snow on their roofs. Does it snow? Fang Yun was puzzled.
In order to protect the environment, a clear regulation was issued last year that smoking sausages and bacon is not allowed in the city, and violators will be fined. But there is a good saying, "there are policies and countermeasures".
The bacon was secretly smoked by paying others, and the meat was handed over to the smoker party, and the two parties agreed to come and pick it up at night, and they did not dare to blatantly carry out this transaction. The place was a station away from home, uphill. Waiting for Fang Yun to walk into a small alley slowly, there were already two groups of people who were about to leave after picking up their things.
The meat is all smoked from materials such as orange peel and sawn ash that do not produce much smoke, and do not dare to use cypress branches, in fact, they do not cause much pollution.
After counting the number of bacon and sausages and confirming that they were correct, Fang Yun carried two large bags and laboriously carried them onto the bus. The surrounding passengers were not surprised by these two large bags of bacon and were accustomed to it.
You can guess where this meat must have been secretly smoked, and there are sneaky and opportunistic people everywhere, and I feel very common when I see more.
In the winter, he was sweating profusely when he brought his things home.
"If you have the opportunity, you must exchange two strong pills to try it, because of the lack of exercise, my physical fitness is too poor." Fang Yun couldn't help but think about what he wanted to get from the next crossing.
didn't rest for long, Fang Yun's parents packed up their things and went home.
"This meat is okay smoked, it's all oil, take two more waste newspapers and put them on the ground." Every year, the bacon sausage is made by Fang's mother.
"What can I do? Look at the black one, and the whole room in the living room smells of oily smoke. "Father Fang has always been disapproving of making sausages and the like.
"This is the flavor of the New Year, what do you know, isn't it Fang Yun?" Fang Mu asked.
"Yes, yes." Fang Yun was a little depressed and nodded in response.
Don't look at the two of them now arguing about whether this bacon is good or not, whether there is a need to make bacon, when it comes to eating, Father Fang eats more than anyone else, and the tone changes quickly, maybe he will say "Why didn't you make more in the first place".
On the contrary, it was Fang Yun, who really felt a little guilty in his heart.
"Everyone has a responsibility to take care of the environment, starting from me, starting from small things."
Fang Yun majored in "Soil and Water Conservation and Desertification Control" in college, what is this for? To put it simply, it is to plant trees, repair works, and prevent soil erosion, landslides, collapses, etc.
To put it more lofty, Fang Yun's ideal is to protect the earth and create a beautiful home for mankind.
And if you use Fang Yun's grandfather's understanding of this profession, it is to be a farmer, plant trees, dig canals, dig ditches, and look at reservoirs......
Alas, don't say it, it's all tears when you talk too much, Fang Yun returned to the bedroom and cared about the progress of the novel.
After the little guy's revision, the final draft is 80,000 words, divided into 25 chapters. Fang Yun didn't ask for much plot to be added, for fear of affecting the quality of the novel.
Up to now, Fang Yun has published twelve chapters online, totaling more than 40,000 words. The plot progressed to the point where Wang Xiaoer saw through the identities of Chu Feng and Wu Hai, and was about to take Wang Tiedan to test them.
The total collection is close to three hundred, and twenty exchange points have been obtained.
How many collections did you have in your last book when it was 40,000 words? Are there thirty? The gap is too big.
It can be said that the data in this book are excellent.
You know, many people simply don't read a book with such a small number of words. Fang Yun himself is like this, he can't be interested in books of tens of thousands of words at all, and he will finish reading them in a short time, what does it mean? Only when there is a shortage of books, do I occasionally look for new books.
But even so, there are 300 collections.
This book ranked in the top 20 in the list of new books by signed authors, ranking first in the new military category, and it should be noted that there are only four new books in the military category.
This type of book has received very little attention, and it is even more determined that Fang Yun writes a fantasy book, the type of book that has been popular recently.
After checking the data of the novel at the starting point, Fang Yun didn't look at the situation of other websites, in other places, Fang Yun only wanted the click-through rate, just wanted the readers to see it.
At the starting point, there will be recommended slots to go up after signing the contract, and more collections and redemption points can be added at that time.
Fang Yun exited the author's background and browsed the book review area.
The book review section is very active, with dozens of replies to several posts.
The top-rated post was made by a friend with the nickname "Salted Egg Restaurant":
"I found that the author's name was too hasty, like Zhang Dawa, Li Ergou, Wang Tiedan, what the hell! As soon as you hear it, it's a supporting role. Even the name of the protagonist is too bad, Wang Xiaoer? Why aren't you called Wang Erxiao! Let's go for a snack by the author. ”
Seeing this post, Fang Yun also realized that he should not only change the name of the protagonist, but also change the name of the supporting character to be normal.
Seeing the little guy who was lying on the quilt and turning over, Fang Yun felt the need to talk to it.
It's not really my fault, I'm just the one who took the blame.
Looking through the messages below, Fang Yun couldn't help laughing.
ZYP on the second floor: "What's wrong with Wang Xiaoer and Wang Erxiao?" Wang Erxiao is a hero! ”
The third floor is not lonely: "Wang Xiaoer is a hero? Why haven't I used it? I haven't heard of it, you're kidding me upstairs. ”
The fourth floor is afraid of not surrendering: "The third floor doesn't even know Wang Erxiao!" I'll go, you still have the face to come out and mess around. Telling his identity scares you, that's the leader of our sweet potato village! ”
……
Wei Suifeng on the tenth floor: "Upstairs mentally retarded, the identification is complete." ”
ZYP on the twentieth floor: "Speaking of naming, I found a deeply hidden funny name, Zhao Tiezhu. ”
"Who is Zhao Tiezhu? What's funny? ”
"What's funny about Zhao Tiezhu, I think the one on the twentieth floor is funny."
……
This is a post discussing the names of the characters, and Fang Yun found some to discuss the plot.
Salted Egg Hotel: "Did you see any small details in the novel?" I noticed that Zhang Dawa and the boss of the medicinal herb shop next door to his house didn't think they were the father and son, you read the novel and you wrote it like this......"
"Wow, you can even see this, it's amazing!"
"Tease, I've already found out."
"This also requires you to analyze? I could tell at a glance that something was wrong. ”
"Although the landlord has a point, it doesn't change the fact that you're a comic. Can you pay attention to something important? Eat enough to study this. ”
Fang Yun saw many readers commenting that Wang Xiaoer's first battle after the crossing was very well written and very nervous for the protagonist.
Some readers commented that the first battle he encountered was very thrilling, and several people were discussing how dangerous it would be if the Eighth Route did not move north after attacking the west, but to the south where Fang Yun was.
There are also readers who try to analyze the location of the story from the local specialty of "cured chicken".
Seeing these comments, Fang Yun was very emotional, his words did not have such great power, and it was difficult for him to write so wonderfully. The novels written by the little ones do have a lot to offer. It is particularly excellent in the description of battle scenes, the portrayal of the characters' hearts and the grasp of the overall situation.
Fang Yun, who sighed to himself, was not discouraged by this, it didn't matter if he didn't have enough control over words, as long as he performed well in another world, getting more exchange points was the most important thing, don't think about the rest.
By the time Fang Yun finished reading all the comments, it was almost twelve o'clock.
It's time to rest, and I'll go to my brother-in-law's house tomorrow.
Approaching the Spring Festival, the uncle mentioned it many times, and the parents also urged it several times, Fang Yun can't always stay at home, and if he doesn't visit his uncle's house, he won't have a chance, and the uncle's family plans to go to his aunt's house for the Spring Festival this year, far away in Xiangyang.
Early the next morning, Fang Yun took the bus to his father's house, stayed for a while, and then transferred to his uncle's house.
For a person as lazy as him, going out once and visiting two houses saves time.
At both relatives' homes, they were inevitably asked about their studies, what they planned to do in the future, and the main event - how was the girlfriend talking? Do you have a favorite?
Uncle doesn't have any elder shelf, and he likes to joke. Asked Fang Yun: "Is there more students or more girls in your school?" ”
"There are more girls, and the ratio of men to women is about four to six."
"That's easy to do, so many female classmates, you cast a bigger net, talk to a few more girls, you can always talk about a good one." The uncle gave Fang Yun advice while eating vegetables.
"What do you say, cast a bigger net? Okay, don't teach this. The aunt twisted the meat on the uncle's waist and said with a smile: "Don't listen to him, the girlfriends are located one by one." ”
"Why don't you listen to me? You should listen to me, and choose which one is suitable. ”
"You can bear it, right?"
Fang Yun: ......
The main purpose of calling me here is to show affection in front of me, right? Pity me, a single man.
It's not that Fang Yun hasn't thought about finding a girlfriend, this is a must.
But he is used to living alone, if there is one more person, he needs to shush from time to time, he needs to care, and he needs to spend time with her to go shopping and eat. Fang Yun could imagine how troublesome and bad it was for a lazy person like himself.
It can only be said that Fang Yun is lonely.
Time passed day by day, and in the blink of an eye, there were still two days left before Chinese New Year's Eve.
Relatives and friends get together to connect with each other and make appointments for activities during the Spring Festival. Looking at everyone's smiling faces, Fang Yun couldn't tell whether he was happy or worried.
During this period, his new book "The Counterattack of the Puppet Army" received a week-long recommendation, the collection soared more than ten times, and the exchange points also reached more than 200, which was gratifying.
This is not? As soon as this recommendation was made, a better recommendation came again.
The plot develops to the point where the Eighth Road and the puppet army attack the various strongholds and guards of the devils, and Xiao Xiong chooses to break through and meets Wang Yun and Wang Tiedan on the way to break through.
Wang Tie was shot several times and fell in a pool of blood; Wang Xiaoer was captured by the devil.
The discussion in the book review area was very intense, some questioned Wang Xiaoer for being too timid, some mourned for their bad luck, and more were posts posted by some readers who didn't want Wang Tiedan to die so early.
In general, everyone is very concerned about Wang Tiedan's safety and doesn't want him to hang up so early.
As for the protagonist Wang Xiaoer? It's just a devil who catches it, what a big deal, what's there to worry about.
Looking at so many book reviews mentioning Wang Tiedan, Fang Yun couldn't help but feel a little painful.
"Except for being stupid, I like him a lot."
"Support Wang Tiedan."
"The author must not let Wang Tiedan die."
"Wang Tiedan is good, very good and loyal."
Doesn't anyone care about the protagonist?
Fang Yun searched for a while, and finally found a post that sank to the bottom:
"Looking forward to seeing Wang Xiaoer fight his way out of the encirclement, I don't know what method he will use to deal with Xiao Xiong."
My God, Wang Tiedan's supporting role has such a high degree of attention. Why do I feel that after Wang Xiaoer's sacrifice, this book review area will explode?
When the new chapter of more than 3,000 words was released, after a while, Fang Yun checked it, but there was no response in the book review area. They must still be in shock.
After a while, Fang Yun looked at it again, no! Why is it so deserted.
Is it so receptive to readers? Fang Yun clicked on the new chapter, but it turned out that he didn't write about Wang Xiaoer's sacrifice.
This chapter is written about Wang Xiaoer and Xiaoxiong discussing the origin of China and Japan and the plot of the joint search for the traces of the devil by the Eighth Route Puppet Army, and some readers posted in the comment area:
"The joke is too old, can you have something fresh?"
"The author didn't write it completely, do you want the relationship between Pan Jinlian Wu Dalang and the devil in the full version?"
"Hahaha, I guessed that the author would use this paragraph to talk about things, and he was as witty as me."
The next chapter is the main character who makes people fall off the eyeballs and hangs up.
Why am I looking forward to it?
Illusion! Right! This must be an illusion.