The world is unpredictable, Fang Yun thought that the new book would be popular with everyone, but the result was not satisfactory. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

It's been three days, two chapters are updated every day, and there are more than 20,000 words, but the new book is still tepid, and the readers' response is mediocre.

The book "Peerless Sect Master" is now only more than 500 collections, and there are more than 100 comments, although it is good compared to other new books, but it is far from the hot scene of "The Counterattack of the Puppet Army" that caused a large number of readers to compete for hot opinions as soon as it was released.

Moreover, not only are the superficial results unsatisfactory, but the deeper interpretation is also not optimistic.

The latest data of the little guy's exchange points can reflect the most real situation of the book from the side.

To this day, this book has not contributed even a single exchange point to Fang Yun, that is to say, no one agrees with or likes his performance in the fantasy world, which makes him a little anxious, and he doesn't understand what he did wrong.

Other Eastern and Western clouds can not care, but care about this exchange point.

What is the purpose of the trip? What is it that has worked hard for more than six years? Isn't it just an exchange point?

If you can't get exchange points, what's the point of traversing?

Just when Fang Yun was worried about the exchange point, someone was lamenting the foresight of the editor-in-chief of the Fantasy Group.

The editor-in-charge of the fantasy group, who pays close attention to the latest progress of Fang Yun's new book, is full of admiration for the editor-in-chief, and the editor-in-chief's vision is really unique. If the novel "Peerless Sect Master" changes the routine and sets a good plot, it must already have more than a thousand collections.

Very good writing, adapt to the rules of business writing, why only so many people pay attention to it, and they are all from old books, and there are not many new readers.

Of course, it's only been three days to assert that his new book will be pounced, and he is very sure that this book will be popular, but it is difficult to say how popular it will be and how popular it will be.

Why do you always have to go your own way, why not listen to the advice of me, an old editor with rich experience in reading and reviewing articles, and try to adapt to the popular trend of online articles and replace the old-fashioned plot.

Don't learn 1,000 words, don't learn writing routines and skills, I really want to see if you have a better way to succeed.

I have seen a lot of all kinds of authors, and I believe that Fang Yun will hit the south wall and turn back one day......

"Fang Yun, why don't you write it quickly, I'm waiting for you to update!" Niu Xiaoqiang complained: "Lied to me that 'The Counterattack of the Puppet Army' was your new book, but it ended after reading only a few chapters; ”

"Do you know how painful it is to chase, that taste is too uncomfortable, I will never be fooled by you again next time, I will not enter the pit without two million words."

Niu Xiaoqiang's chatter disrupted Fang Yun's thoughts, but at the same time, his eyes lit up.

"Xiaoqiang, do you think "Peerless Sect Master" is good?" In many cases, it is not easy for the author to find the problems in the novel, but the reader can give pertinent answers.

"It must be pretty, otherwise I can keep urging you to update." Niu Xiaoqiang ran to the side of Fang Yun's seat and said with a shy face: "Why don't you show me the manuscript first?" Don't hide it, can't you trust me, can I still go to the Internet to spoil it? ”

"It's not non-negotiable." Fang Yun whetted his appetite, looked at his eager look, and said seriously: "If you want to read the content behind, you have to tell me how you really feel after reading this novel." ”

"What do you really feel like? I feel so much. ”

"About the plot, the protagonist's character, actions, and plot design, you can talk about it, and the deeper the better." Fang Yun wanted to find a breakthrough in Niu Xiaoqiang.

There are actually a few posts in the book review section that discuss the problems with the book, but they are not in-depth and practical enough, and few people can give him advice (wholeheartedly and with all their might).

Of course, roommate Xiaoqiang will share his thoughts with him, and his suggestions are more appropriate and heartfelt.

"Since you want to hear it, then I'll tell you the truth, the protagonist Wang Xuan found the treasure for the first time in the mountain after the crossing, this plot is too old-fashioned, why don't you fall off the cliff, and harvest two martial arts cheats by the way."

"Even you think this plot is very unreal?" Fang Yun asked.

Niu Xiaoqiang was dissatisfied: "What do you mean by 'even you'?" Is my reading level low? ”

"What else?" Fang Yun didn't bother with him.

"What else?" Niu Xiaoqiang grabbed his hair and thought for a while: "There are too few people in contact with the protagonist, of course, this is directly related to the fact that the number of words in the novel is too small." Wang Xuan doesn't like to explore the outside world, except for solving the problem of eating, he doesn't go out once he goes into the mountains, he likes to stay at home, which is very similar to you. ”

"That's pretty much it, you can show me the next chapters, the previous content can't be said to be boring, after all, something interesting happened, but I want to see the day when Wang Xuan starts practicing as soon as possible."

"Thank you, I'll pass on the content of the last ten chapters to you later." Fang Yundao.

"It's only ten chapters? It's really cut. Although he despised Fang Yun for slamming the door, Niu Xiaoqiang was still very happy, and couldn't help urging Fang Yun to send him the article quickly.

After listening carefully to the problems in the novel raised by Niu Xiaoqiang, Fang Yun gained a lot.

Some of the questions have been raised by book friends, while others have not been mentioned, after thinking for a while, Fang Yun found the reason why the new book did not cause much repercussions from readers, and he also had a less mature idea in his heart to solve these problems.

In general, the problem is that the plot of going into the mountains to collect spiritual fruits is too old-fashioned, and what readers desperately want to see is the appearance of the fantasy world, rather than the protagonist's hard life in the mountains.

"Little guy, can you help me change the content of the first tens of thousands of words?" Clearly knowing the root of the problem, Fang Yun made up his mind and planned to drastically modify the things that the protagonist encountered in Sweet Potato Village.

Poked the little guy lying on the bookshelf incognito, Fang Yun proposed a revision: "Press the plot of more than 30,000 words, describe it less, squeeze out two chapters, and let the protagonist leave for Qingyun City as soon as possible." ”

Considering that the plot of the protagonist Qingyun City's preparation for the exam is not too attractive and there are not many highlights, Fang Yun added a request: "The 20,000 words describing the preparation of Qingyun City are also compressed." ”

"I can do these two requests, but I can't hide the fact that you went into the mountains to pick the lewd snake fruit." The little guy analyzed: "With the lewd snake fruit, your life has been greatly improved, resulting in you not suffering enough to test your perseverance well, which makes everyone's rating of you greatly discounted, I will not modify this plot." ”

Fang Yun confessed, he didn't realize this stubble at all when he was in the Divine Continent.

After listening to the little guy's analysis, Fang Yunmao suddenly opened his eyes and figured out the reason why he didn't get an exchange point in the past three days.

This crossing cannot be compared with the last time.

Traveling to the Anti-Japanese War period, as soon as he arrived, he had a major choice in front of him - to follow the imperial army or to fight against the imperial army.

Under the nationalist mood, he did not hesitate to choose to fight against the imperial army, and this position alone may bring him an exchange point.

Moreover, "The Counterattack of the Puppet Army" has a bright rhythm and a compact plot, and in a series of confrontations with little devils, it can easily be recognized by readers. Everyone has patriotic feelings and approves of their actions.

Thinking about this, Fang Yun no longer worries about how many exchange points the Peerless Sect Master can bring to him, take your time, there will be no less.

After a while, the little guy successfully revised the article according to Fang Yun's request.

Opening the starting point background, Fang Yun replaced the published text with new chapters, hesitated, and simply uploaded four more chapters, a total of ten chapters of improved chapters, the plot developed to the eve of the protagonist Wang Xuan's participation in the Qingyun Sect's entry assessment, and the eleventh chapter The assessment officially began.

After deleting more than 10,000 words at once, Fang Yun didn't feel distressed. After the lessons of the past three days, he understood that if he wants to be recognized by readers, the key is to make something convincing, which has nothing to do with the length of the novel.

As soon as Fang Yun uploaded a new chapter, several book friends who had opened the "Update Reminder" immediately found out that they opened the "Peerless Sect Master" as soon as possible.

Chapter 7: The Snake Fruit

When I saw the name of the chapter, the reader had already guessed what the chapter would write, and the lewd snake fruit must be the two red fruits that I got before, and the word "lewd snake" was a bit unexpected by everyone, and it shouldn't be a serious fruit.

To be honest, I didn't expect this book as much as I did at the beginning, and it was just a matter of habit to read the novel for the first time. The new book has been delayed for a long time, and one loyal reader is slightly disappointed.

Reading the first paragraph absentmindedly, the protagonist Wang Xuan began to paraphrase Chen Tian's words, wanting to understand the efficacy of red fruits.

Sure enough, there's nothing to look forward to.,That's it.,After that, the protagonist will definitely ask for the name of the fruit - the lewd snake fruit.。

I had expected what this chapter would be about, and it was really boring.

Wait a minute!

How is Wang Xuan with Chen Tian?

Isn't Chen Tian the boss of Chen De's family in sweet potato village? Wang Xuan didn't have close contact with him, in the last chapter, I clearly remembered that he was arguing with Chen Erwa of Chen De's family, why did Chen Tian pop up all of a sudden?

The author is doing hair, how could he make such a low-level mistake!

The depth of love is so disappointing. He opened the book review section and wanted to scold the author and wake him up.

The publisher of the latest post in the book review section is "Dongyue Taihao", what is this? Author's book review?

Click on it first to take a look, and it's not too late to scold him after reading it.

Book Review Content:

Everyone is generally dissatisfied with the new book, I found the reason, and now the previous chapters have been modified, you can re-read, if you don't read it again, it will not affect the subsequent reading.

In order to make up for the inconvenience caused by my mistakes, and thank you for your unwavering commitment to the new book, four chapters have been updated to express my gratitude.

Seeing this book review, his anger suddenly disappeared, and he happily returned to the text, refreshed the chapters, and sure enough, four chapters were updated in a row. Re-download the first six chapters, planning to read them again, and have long forgotten the previous unhappiness.

It took him half an hour to finish the latest chapter, reading more than 30,000 words, which is a little longer than he usually takes. After careful reading, the author has indeed revised many texts as he said.

When it comes to it, it's fun!

This reader reopened the book review section and must praise the author for his professionalism!

"Yo, so many people replied, seventy-eight." Surprised, he also wrote a compliment under that post, and the total number of replies became seventy-nine.

Fang Yun refreshed the book review area every other moment, looking at the full screen of "Praise of the Author", "The Author is Awesome", and "Really Dedicated", Fang Yun laughed.

Darcy: "Luckily I didn't eat it, it's scary." ”

Sanshengzhu: "Can I tell you that I plan to take it right away?" ”

ZYP: "At the starting point, I only serve Zhao Ritian and the author."

Mo Tianxing: "Haha, after all, there is the word 'Ritian' in the name." ”

Salted Egg Hotel: "'Dayday'? I didn't see it. ”

Wrong injury: "Hao." ”

Gone with the wind: "Hao." ”

"Hao."

……

On the 60th floor, the second store of the Salted Egg Hotel: "Hao." ”

“……”

After reading the reply, Fang Yun turned off the computer, but he didn't expect Niu Xiaoqiang to suddenly go crazy, and pointed at him with his index finger trembling: "Fang Yun, you, you, you ......"

"What's wrong?" Fang Yun looked innocent.

"You pretend, pretend for me!" Niu Xiaoqiang was almost stunned: "You are too pitiful, the front foot only gave me the next ten chapters, but as soon as you turned around, you posted four completely different chapters on the Internet, and even the first six chapters were modified." ”

"After reading the sixteen chapters, I finally saw Wang Xuan participate in the assessment, and if you modify it like this, the advantage of reading ten more chapters is gone."

Fang Yun: "...... Not next time. ”

"I believe in your wickedness." Niu Xiaoqiang looked incredulous.