After the world's first martial arts meeting, in order to find the relics left by his grandfather, Sun Wukong set off again to find the Dragon Ball, and of course, he has never been able to find the four-star Dragon Ball. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

If you find it all at once, the follow-up story won't be necessary, right, of course it can't make him so smooth.

In this chapter, Zhang Yao conforms to the needs of readers, and at the same time, he also adds a lot of scenes to Bulma according to Yexi's suggestion, and Sun Wukong, as the hero and heroine, interacts with Bulma more than in the original work.

This journey to find the Dragon Ball is over, and then it will enter the martial arts tournament, and another strong enemy, Tianjin Rice, is about to appear.

"The plot of Dragon Ball for a long time is to rotate between looking for Dragon Ball and participating in the martial arts conference, do you dare to be a little new?" When Yun Sheng heard this, her eyes immediately widened again.

Yexi didn't say anything with a smile, Zhang Yao said: "What's the problem, Wukong hasn't won the championship of the martial arts conference yet, of course he has to continue, it's better than giving up halfway, right?" ”

The martial arts conference can be said to be one of the main lines of the story.,It's the plot that runs through the whole work.,Later, the defeat of the Great Demon King of Vic was at the martial arts meeting.,Shalu game is also the model of the martial arts meeting.,Buu chapter also starts from the martial arts conference.。

It's just that there weren't so many pen and ink later, but the situation of the martial arts club is much better than the main line of finding the Dragon Ball, and in the later stories, the search for the Dragon Ball has almost become a chicken rib, although it is still very important, but it has almost become a prop for the infinite resurrection of the Z warriors.

Yun Sheng rubbed his forehead and said, "Okay, let's not talk about the next martial arts meeting, how do you plan to find Qi Longzhu this time?" It was Oolong who made a wish to ask for a pair of underwear/pants before, and this time it's about the same, right? Although it feels like a waste of Dragon Ball's abilities, it is also in line with the tone of the story. ”

Son Goku has no ambitions, and so does her friends, Bulma's original purpose in looking for Dragon Ball was just to find a handsome boyfriend, and Leping only wanted to overcome the shortcomings of being afraid of girls after knowing the existence of Dragon Ball.

In Zhang Yao's pen, Bulma's affection for Monkey King has slowly been expressed, and the simple Monkey King can't understand it for the time being, but none of this matters, Bulma has no reason to look for Dragon Balls, just helping Wukong find his grandfather's relics.

Leping is still afraid of girls, Zhang Yao hasn't changed this, and he doesn't plan to change it in the future, just let him continue like this, it can also bring a lot of jokes, and the sad Leping in the original work can at least grab some scenes, which is a highlight in itself.

"Wukong, they don't have any wishes, so let's create a wish for them, aren't they fighting the Red Silk Army now? Then just let a certain character die at their hands and then use the Dragon Ball to resurrect it. ”

"Well, this arrangement is as casual as ever."

In fact, it's not Zhang Yao's casual, it's like this in the original work, the Red Silk Army is looking for Dragon Balls everywhere in an attempt to conquer the world, because Sun Wukong spent a lot of money to invite the world's No. 1 killer Tao Baibai.

Sun Wukong was beaten and almost hung up, and Upa's father, who guarded the Holy Land, was also killed by Momobai, and this time the Dragon Ball's wish was used to resurrect Upa's father.

By the way, Wukong also climbed the Garin Tower to upgrade a level, and at the same time led out the strong enemy Crane Immortal in the back, as well as his apprentices Tianjin Rice and Dumplings.

Although Upa's father's death seems to be set up for the desire to consume Dragon Balls, the plot is also complete and coherent, and Zhang Yao has no intention of changing this, as long as he follows the line of the original book for the time being, there is no problem.

Uh, I didn't remember the plot without recalling it, but I found out that in this chapter, Bulma actually showed a little bit again, this time it was for the turtle fairy to see the brother, and the original comics didn't even hit a mosaic......

The seventh dragon ball was put in a box by Pirav that could isolate radar search, and Sun Wukong and his party went to the soothsayer to help and accepted the adjustment, and one of the opponents was invisible.

In order to break the invisibility technique, Kulin pulled off Bulma's shirt, and his chest was completely exposed, which stimulated the turtle immortal's nosebleed, and the invisibility technique was also broken after spraying the invisible man.

Speaking of which, Vegeta is really sad, and this time Bulma's whole body was seen by the turtle immortals. It's just that now, change, must change.

If it is not the reader's turn to scold the mother, Yexi will directly throw the manuscript back and let her redraw it.

roughly explained the follow-up plot arrangement, Yexi has been smiling and silent, which means that there is no problem, and Zhang Yao is also relieved, it seems that except for Bulma's dew point, there is no need for major repairs in other plots.

Su Yunsleeve said: "Zhang Yao painted Wukong as simple and cute, this character is quite different from the original Journey to the West, when I read the novel Journey to the West, I was taken aback, the image of the real Monkey King is too different from the image in the TV series." ”

"Alas, is there anything different between the Monkey King in the TV series and the Monkey King in the novel?" Xu Xiao was only surprised, she obviously hadn't read the original novel.

"How to say it, although the TV series Journey to the West is popular all over the country and has left a deep impression on people, it has actually brought people a great degree of misunderstanding, to use an analogy, the TV series Journey to the West is a children's book, and the original work is adult-oriented."

Su Yunsleeve stretched out his finger to popularize science, "The Monkey King in the original book is actually very insidious and cunning, and as a monster, he does have a description of eating people. ”

"Alas, does Sun Wukong still eat people?" Xu Xiaowei was taken aback, it was obvious that her three views had been subverted again.

To say that the Monkey King who is most in line with the image of the original book belongs to Huang Bo played in "Journey to the West" in the original time and space, although the movie itself has a lot of slots, but the Monkey King played by Huang Bo is absolutely impressed.

Zhang Yao said: "Although the original image of Sun Wukong is indeed very different from the TV series, and it is the same as what I painted, I am not just talking nonsense, but there is a factual basis, but I just magnify this point." ”

Yunshang said: "I have also read the original book, don't you want to fool us, does the Monkey King in Journey to the West still have a simple side?" ”

"Why not." Zhang Yao said: "Before making trouble in the Heavenly Palace, Sun Wukong guarded the peach orchard, and the queen mother held a peach conference on her birthday, and sent seven fairies to pick peaches, right?" ”

"yes, what's the problem?" Yunshang then asked, everyone who has watched "Journey to the West" knows this plot.

Zhang Yao continued: "The seven fairies came to pick peaches, Sun Wukong used the immobilization technique to give them a freeze, and then Sun Wukong actually picked peaches, isn't this enough to show that he is completely simple?" ”

"I'll you." Yunshang rolled her eyes again, Su Yunchong smiled silently, and Xu Xiaowei was confused, not understanding what Zhang Yao said at all.

"What if it were you?" Yexi asked with a smile, but the black fog on her body had already shrouded the entire activity room.

Zhang Yao sweated like rain, "If you change me, at least you have to get a basket." ”

"It's the same, you can pick more after taking the basket, Sun Wukong didn't even think that it must be because the Queen Mother didn't invite him, so he was confused, and he wasn't as smart as usual at all." Xu Xiaowei finally thought of the "key".

“……”

Everyone looked at her, and Xu Xiaowei was shocked again, "Alas, did I say something wrong?" ”

Zhang Yao held his forehead, he couldn't bear to debunk it, and Yexi also changed the topic, saying: "There is no problem with the plot arrangement in the back, don't worry about the main line or something, anyway, your Dragon Ball doesn't have a main line strictly speaking." ”

"How could it be, Goku has been working hard to become stronger, this is my main line."

"Speaking of which, the biggest difference between Dragon Ball and other shonen manga is this, although it looks good to go off the beaten path, but I'm a little worried about how much space it can support if it goes on like this."

Originally, the search for Dragon Balls should be regarded as the main line of the story, but if it is changed to other works, I am afraid that Goku may not be able to gather seven Dragon Balls after more than ten or twenty years of serialization, and "One Piece" has been for many years, and there is not even a shadow of a treasure.

To go on according to such a plot, Sun Wukong's identity will be swapped with Vegeta, and those royal and hot-blooded male protagonists look like a useless sling at the beginning, and then readers will find that Nima is a rich second generation, and the protagonist's family and parents are more and more hanging.

It took dozens of volumes to find a few dragon balls, and Sun Goku, who rushed from the earth to the universe, found that he was the prince of the Saiyans, and his father was the king of the Saiyans, who was killed or disappeared by Frieza in order to protect the Saiyan planet.

And then in order to overthrow Frieza's rule, Sun Wukong led his friends to fight with him, of course, the length will not be as short as the Namek Star chapter, at least dozens of volumes will be drawn, this is the plot development of mainstream hot-blooded comics.

If "Dragon Ball" appeared more than ten or twenty years later, it is unknown whether it would develop like this, anyway, Akira Toriyama didn't plan to hide it from the beginning, and the dragon had already appeared in just a few words, and there was no suspense at all.

Of course, Sun Wukong did not suddenly become a rich second generation later, although now the plot of "Dragon Ball" is Zhang Yao lost, and she also has no such plans.

As for the length, it seems that Night and Night will not interfere now, and it will not be like "JUMP" did to Akira Toriyama, so she has to be drawn endlessly, so she is still considering whether to draw all the stories.

"If you really can't hold on, then it's over, from the perspective of the work itself, it's better to end at the best time than to blindly continue the mink, right? Although the latter option can earn more. ”

Zhang Yao said and secretly glanced at Ye Xi, who was drinking tea leisurely and looked like this, without giving people any abnormal feeling, it seemed that he would not interfere.