Ahem...... It's not a major overhaul!
It's said to be an overhaul, but it's actually a rewrite, not a major overhaul...... Well, as the title suggests!
Also, I've read everyone's opinions in the poison building.,It's true that I'm too miscellaneous.,And the update is a hard injury! I've read them all, thank you for your corrections.
I'm working hard to save a manuscript now...... I'm trying to save 10,000 words a day! I believe it will come out soon, well, that's it! Dive!