Chapter 27 Concentration is the essence

Liu Shuiwen originally thought that he would meet a bunch of reporters at the school gate, but he was obviously wrong. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 infoSince some people have said that he is not original, the reporter will no longer be interested in him. Waiting for him at the school gate were only Huang Bo and Sun Honglei.

"Brother Shuiwen." Sun Honglei is estimated to be used to being Huang Bo's younger brother, and he forgot to change his name. When he called out, he remembered what Liu Shuiwen had said.

"Liu Shuiwen." Huang Bo clasped his hands on his chest and asked with a smile hidden in his knife, "I heard that your essay got a full score, right?" ”

Liu Shuiwen just glanced at him, then wandered his gaze and replied lazily: "Yes, do you have any advice?" ”

"Don't dare to advise." Huang Bo smiled and said, "It's just that you don't forget to prepare your money." ”

"I'm not short of money. But you, don't forget to prepare your courage. ”

"Courage?" Huang Bo was puzzled.

"Doesn't it take courage to climb ten laps from someone else's crotch?" Liu Shuiwen's eyes were as sharp as a knife.

Huang Bo unconsciously snorted.

"Also." Liu Shuiwen continued, "It turns out that you are just a thief. ”

Thief? Huang Bo stole Liu Shuiwen's original 'Book Mountain has a diligent path, and learning the sea is endless', which is indeed an out-and-out thief.

"Hahaha, you're talking so funny." Huang Bo smiled, "You say I'm a thief, but this requires evidence, and if there is no evidence, it is tantamount to slander." Slander, you know? ”

By the time he said the last sentence, his smile had already been put away.

Liu Shuiwen straightened his waist and said without squinting: "Since this is the case, then you should prepare your courage." ”

He didn't give Wang Bo a chance to speak, and strode out of the school gate.

"Wang Bo, do you say that Liu Shuiwen, this bastard, is going to find someone to teach him a lesson." Sun Honglei looked at Liu Shuiwen's distant back, with a dog-fighting face on his face.

Huang Bo shook his head and said, "If you want to hit a person, don't use force unless you have to, this is the next step." ”

"What's the best policy?" Sun Honglei asked.

"Do you remember when Liu Shuiwen beat a girl in class 157 to school last year?"

Sun Honglei thought for a moment, and his eyes lit up: "I remember, Liu Shuiwen had a very bad temper at that time, and he beat that girl so much that he didn't dare to go back to school, but no one dared to do anything to him." ”

"That girl seems to be one of the 157 class with good academic performance, right?"

"I don't know about that." Sun Honglei only knows how to play basketball, and he doesn't care much about other things.

"No matter how well the girl studies, if she drops out of school halfway, it will have an impact on the educational credit of the class teacher of class 157, which will also lead to a decrease in the amount of his various bonuses. So, if I'm not mistaken, the head teacher of Class 157 should hate Liu Shuiwen very much. ”

"Wang Bo, you are too powerful." Wang Bo's analysis is so clear that even a fool can understand it. Sun Honglei said, "Then, what are you going to do next?" ”

"You go and help me investigate the head teacher of Class 157." There was a hint of cunning in Huang Bo's eyes, "We have to make good use of this role." ”

When Huahua Zhao Riting sent a message to Liu Shuiwen, Liu Shuiwen had already uploaded the new chapter of "Sky Sword".

"Absent?"

"Yes." Seeing that it was a message from Huahua, Liu Shuiwen hurriedly replied. If Liu Shuiwen is a thousand-mile horse, then Huahua Zhao Riting is equivalent to his Bole.

"Listening to Gucheng, your book "Sky Sword" is only 200,000 words?"

"yes, will it be too little?"

"It's too little. Can you expand on that? Zhao Riting asked.

The expansion means that Liu Shuiwen will multiply the number of words in the book.

Liu Shuiwen is also an online writer in the 21st century, even if he doesn't write well, but his writing is in the 23rd century, which is also appropriate.

It's just that it's really embarrassing for him to let him expand "Sky Excalibur". Because the Celestial Excalibur is not a book that can be expanded at will. It is Mr. Gu Long's martial arts debut, if it is "Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword", then Liu Shuiwen can water him millions of words. But this book doesn't work......

"Sky Excalibur" tells such a story:

[There are a pair of brothers A and B, who met strange people on the way to escape, learned magic skills to shake the rivers and lakes, were poisoned by someone, and the prince's staff saved their lives, so they changed careers to be bodyguards, and the prince fell in the palace, and the children entrusted A and B. But A and B are grateful to the staff, so they steal the staff's son Xiong Wei (that is, the male protagonist of the book) out in the middle of the night and throw the prince's son on the road.

Fleeing all the way, hiring a chicken girl to take care of the child, and then the four of them meet Dart Master C and temporarily live in the dart game. The chicken girl failed to tease B, felt humiliated, stabbed B to death, and hid under the bed. When A heard the noise, he rushed to see that B had been killed, and thought it was C's hand, so he duel with C. A was seriously injured and fled with the bear in his arms. A handed Xiong Wei two martial arts cheats, and told him that C was the enemy, and then jumped into the river with a stone.

After that, the male protagonist Xiong Wei practiced hard, encountered strange people, made a name, and dealt with evil. Of course, it is certain that the prince's son and him became brothers, and the prince's daughter and him became lovers. The prince's daughter's name is Xia Yun, and she was brought up outside the customs by Bing and Ding.

The end of the story is that Xiong Wei goes to the gate to find C to take revenge, and Xia Yun goes up to block the sword for C. So Xiong Wei stabbed the two of them to death with a sword, and when it was over, he felt that he hadn't handled his affairs well, and the affairs of the rivers and lakes were a hair, and after burying Xia Yun, he lay down in the pit next to him and killed himself. End of full text. 】

In the 21st century, if there were really rivers and lakes, it would be similar to the people who performed on the streets. It is not the same as Mr. Gu Long's representative words, and there is no way to speak on the same day.

This is equivalent to Mr. Gu Long's study, and it doesn't represent anything.

But......

But if it weren't for this book, maybe there would be no later Mr. Gu Long.

Mr. Gu Long was very cunning when he wrote "Celestial Sword", and he skipped it when he encountered difficult places to write, such as learning martial arts from masters. In the previous paragraph, the master still wanted to accept the male protagonist as an apprentice.,The next game has already returned from learning.,How to learn.、What to learn.,Readers don't know.,I only know that the actor's skills have risen and his status has risen;

For example, the heroine was taken captive by the Demon Sect but became friends with the people in the sect, and the specific details are unknown. Reading the book is a bizarre reading experience.

Mr. Gu Long is like a video clip, the director said that if you fast forward, you will brush up a lot, and the director said that if you slow down, you will play back in slow motion for a long time, and finally the director said that this is almost enough, and Mr. Gu Long will stab three to death with two swords, and it will be over.

But......

Although there are many slots in this novel, readers will still have great admiration for Mr. Gu Long, because with "Sky Sword", he can better compare his transcendence and sharpening of himself, so as to have the later pinnacle work "Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword".

Liu Shuiwen originally wanted to upload "The Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword" as the first book, but he was not confident enough, because once this book fails, it means that all of Mr. Gu Long's works will fail in this century.

I can only rejoice that Liu Shuiwen didn't do that. Readers in the 23rd century will not accept that style of writing overnight, but only gradually.

The reason why the Sky Divine Sword couldn't be expanded was because Liu Shuiwen wanted to follow Mr. Gu Long's steps. If he expands the Sky Excalibur, maybe he will go off track and return to his fate in the 21st century.

"Flowey, I can't expand. This book is my martial arts debut, and it's finished. If I revise it again, it will be mixed with the later cognition and mentality, which will make the book lose its original color. Then it is likely to be changed to a nondescript four-like. ”

Zhao Riting looked at the words of the Yan people, frowned and pondered for a long time.

200,000 words? That's really too little.

"And, Flowey, have you ever heard such a sentence?" He asked.

Huahua replied: "What words?" ”

"It's called: Concentration is the essence. If a book is to become a classic, to be a tool for setting off a frenzy, I think it must be a book that can withstand destruction. If I expand on the book, it will lose its intriguing power, and it will be transformed from a literal bead into an old woman's footwrap. The words are not many, but fine. The story is not about the length of the story, but about whether it is memorable. ”