Chapter 0029: "The Sword of the Third Young Master" Enters the Top 10!
Zheng Yijian didn't expect that the first chapter of "The Sword of the Third Young Master" would be so popular, with the number of readings exceeding 100,000 and flowers exceeding 1,000 in three hours. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. biquge。 info
"The Sword of the Third Young Master" seems to be more sought after here than in the parallel world, because no one has ever seen this style of martial arts before.
This style is too pretending ~ forced. The dialogue of the characters is short, and every time he first describes how cold and awesome the villain is~ awesome, and then he is killed by Yan Thirteen in seconds, which is really a refreshing slap in the face.
This may be called the world's earliest pretending ~ forced to slap the face!
On January 18th, "The Sword of the Third Young Master" ranked first on the list of new flowers with 1,129 new flowers in the first chapter, surpassing the number of new flowers in "Wulin Tianjiao" and "Chaotian Stick".
For a while, the comments about the newcomer's one-dragon brush ~~ votes detonated the book review areas of the top ten works.
On January 19th, fans of each of the top ten works gathered in "The Sword of the Third Young Master", and Yilong also updated the second chapter at this time.
The second chapter, as always, continues the poetic style of the beginning, the dialogue between Yan Shisan and the crow, through the hanging and bombing outfit ~ forcing the fan, detonating a new round of heated discussion.
'Yan 13 is so cool! There is also the name of the crow, tsk, the divine book, it was originally sprayed, black to pink! ’
"Can this poetic style really go on forever? No matter what, stick to it, just smash the flowers! ”
'Attention, the third young master has appeared! Yan Shisan is already so stubborn, so what kind of anti-heaven existence is the third young master he admires? ’
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In the second chapter, the Third Young Master Sword God Xie Xiaofeng finally lifted the veil of mystery in the dialogue between Yan Thirteen and the crow. But there are problems. Many martial arts authors have questioned this character.
Writer lark: "Am I right? As soon as the actor debuts, he is the first in the world? How else is this written? ”
writer fawn; "It's not for nothing that the strong man writes, in the current novel, 60% of the protagonists start as low-level disciples, and they practice and upgrade all the way, and 30% are the secret disciples of the predecessors, although the reputation on the rivers and lakes is not obvious, the actual martial arts are very high, and they encounter strong enemies along the way. The remaining 10% of the protagonists are one of the masters of fame, but they will never be the first in the world at the beginning! ”
Writer Li Taibai: "The later stage will inevitably collapse, and the post will be proof!" ”
The comments of some writers have also affected ordinary readers, how to write a novel that is the first sword in the world at the beginning?
This is also the most brilliant part of "The Sword of the Third Young Master".
Other novels, even if Li Xunhuan is only the third in the world, are covered with the old man of Tianji and Shangguan Jinhong.
Jin Yong's novel is even more, the protagonists in the book Guo Jing, Yang Guo, Zhang Wuji, even until the end of the novel, are not the first in the world!
The number one in the world in Jin Yong's novels, like Wang Chongyang and Dugu seeking defeat, all appear in word-of-mouth plots and never appear.
Even if there is a strong rebirth essay written badly in another world, the protagonist is at most the strongest person in one plane, and there is always a new realm after ascension, and the stronger one is waiting for him.
Only Xie Xiaofeng in "The Sword of the Third Young Master" and "Full Moon Scimitar", he became the protagonist as the first challenged person in the world.
It is precisely because everyone appreciates the poetic style of this novel, but is not optimistic about the development of its subsequent plot, that there are more onlookers, and everyone is waiting for when it will collapse!
"The Sword of the Third Young Master" is only more than 300,000 pages in total, so Zheng Yijian only uploads 3,000 words of chapters every day, and it is expected to be completed at the end of April and early May.
Because of Yilong's novel literary style, "The Sword of the Third Young Master" is not as slow as Shushan, and it has been uploaded for three days, and it is already close to the top ten.
January 21st is destined to be the day when the performance of "The Sword of the Third Young Master" leaps forward, because in the fourth chapter of this day, the heroine Murong Qiudi appeared.
Since the book was uploaded, when to write the collapse is the first suspense of readers, and how to describe the heroine in such a cool novel is the second suspense.
As for the death date between Yan Shisan and Xie Xiaofeng rendered by the author, comparing swords to life and death, readers don't care, nonsense, looking for a male protagonist to compete with a sword, he must be abused! Is this called suspense? Embarrassment~~
The audience is looking forward to the heroine, not straight men, and they are all looking forward to the soft girl.
It's that this book is so cool, from the style to the characters, from Yan Shisan to the crow, everyone is very cold and hanging.
In such a cool novel, whether the heroine is smart, gentle, domineering, the eldest lady's temper, or the man's wife...... None of them work, they are all out of place, and they will disrupt the tension of this story.
In the eyes of all martial arts everyone, the best choice for a novel with such tension is not to have a heroine.
Until the appearance of the role of Murong Qiudi.
In the fourth chapter, Murong Qiudi found Yan Shisan and demonstrated to him the flaws in Xie Xiaofeng's swordsmanship, and she asked Yan Shisan to kill Xie Xiaofeng!
"It's so cool, the heroine asks to kill the male protagonist as soon as she appears on the stage, which is in line with the temperament of this novel!"
"I'm dizzy, the only person who knows the flaws of the world's No. 1 swordsmanship is the No. 1 woman in the world, this setting is absolutely straight male cancer!"
"Although the reason is that the actor abandoned her seven years ago, there is no description of a resentful woman, and the whole aura is cool!"
Many readers who thought that the portrayal of the heroine would ruin this cool novel also began to vote wildly at this time.
In the early morning of January 22, the data was refreshed, and "The Sword of the Third Young Master" ranked seventh with 2,732 flowers in four days, squeezing the popular "Legend of Shushan Swordsman" to eighth.
Yilong, the two newcomers of the Tibetan Sword Mansion have both entered the quarterfinals, and the momentum is very strong, especially Yilong, who has already shown the strength to challenge the three major grandmasters.
Such a result, the happiest is the martial arts sky website, they don't want this competition to be ruled by the masters all the way to the end of the year without suspense.
January 22nd coincides with Sunday, so starting at two o'clock in the afternoon, a large number of newcomers and new works represented by "The Sword of the Third Young Master" and "Shushan" have been placed on the prominent recommendation position of the website for a week-long push.
In the next few days, Zheng Yijian started the life of coding words and manuscripts again, after all, now uploading two books at the same time is more stressful.
On the 23rd, Zheng Yijian received a call from Ling Xiaofeng, and he said excitedly: "Brother Jian, you really did it!" Who is Yilong? You must introduce me to me! His novels are so awesome! ”
Zheng Yijian said with a smile: "I am willing to lose the bet, listen to Sister Shanshan, whether it is acting, hosting, or dancing, in short, take an artist training class, and when you become an insider, I will definitely introduce you to you!" ”
Ling Xiaofeng said with a smile: "A word is a certainty, if you lose your word, Ben Sanshao's sword is merciless, hahaha......"
With the protagonist of a martial arts novel of the same name, Xiaofeng is obviously quite excited, but Zheng Yijian, who continues to save manuscripts, is much more boring.
On the 25th, Zheng Yijian unexpectedly received a call from Su Meiqi.
Zheng Yijian said with a smile: "Sister Meiqi, today is the Chinese New Year's Eve in the north, you won't call me to greet the New Year!" ”
Su Meiqi said angrily: "You also know that the New Year is approaching, I have been training recently, and you haven't called to care, and you haven't greeted you during the New Year!" ”
Zheng Yijian couldn't help blushing, he was really ashamed, he had been fighting for two new books for more than half a month, and Sister Meiqi didn't care about it. Although she is training in a closed mode, it is still very convenient to talk on the phone or online.
Zheng Yijian apologized repeatedly, and Su Meiqi turned her anger into joy and said: "Give you a chance to make amends, tomorrow there will be a large temple fair in Longwang Mountain, and the wireless high-level will allow our students to come out to play and relax, and we will see you in Longwang Mountain tomorrow!" ”
Zheng Yijian immediately agreed and hung up the phone, Zheng Yijian couldn't help muttering: Is this the first date with Sister Meiqi? It's just that it's neither Lantern Festival, nor Valentine's Day, a Chinese New Year's Eve date? It should be different!
At seven o'clock in the evening, when Zheng Yijian arrived at the foot of Longwang Mountain, the bus of the wireless training class had been parked in the parking lot.
This wireless allows students to play together at will, as well as meet family and friends, but the bus must return to the parking lot before 10 o'clock in the evening, otherwise learning points will be deducted.
According to the new regulations after the reform of the wireless training class, after the students have learned the basic knowledge for three months, different on-set internship opportunities will be arranged according to the level of learning points, so the students are very disciplined, otherwise after three months, the learning points will be deducted too much, and they will lose better development opportunities.
When Zheng Yijian and Su Meiqi went up the mountain together, they found that after more than 20 days of training, many male and female students had already traveled together. Of course, it's too early to say that they're in love at this point, but a hazy favor has already grown.
Today, Su Meiqi wore an orange-red tweed spring dress, which was a slim and long style, which made Su Meiqi, who is usually gentle, more flexible.
Longwang Mountain used to be extremely steep, but in recent years, due to tourism development, many mountain roads have been built on the mountain, and a number of stone steps lead to the top of the mountain.
Every five or six meters on both sides of the road, a red lantern hangs high on the branches, and there seems to be an advertisement for a certain liquor brand on it.
Zheng Yijian didn't have the heart to look at the lantern carefully, his mind was attracted by Su Meiqi at this time.
Under the red lantern, Su Meiqi's snow-white skin reflected a faint flush, like a delicate begonia flower.
Su Meiqi was panicked by Zheng Yijian's aggressive gaze, and she diverted the topic and said: "You haven't participated in the ring competition this month like last month, and middle school has also entered the winter vacation, what are you busy with?" ’
Zheng Yijian said with a smile: "Uncle Dilong has returned to Hong Kong, and he went to Xiaofeng's house to have dinner a few days ago, Uncle Dilong will return to Hong Kong to make a movie this time, and he has promised to take me and Xiaofeng to the set to play when the time comes,"
Zheng Yijian didn't want to tell the people around him about writing novels under a few pen names, he wanted to separate his real life from the virtual dragon, the owner of the Hidden Sword Building. I continue to live the life of a young man, a dragon, the owner of the Tibetan Sword Building, be a martial arts master who does not eat fireworks in the world in the minds of book lovers!
Zheng Yijian was still very interested in the wireless training class, and he asked, "Sister Meiqi, what do you learn every day?" Is it a memorization of lines? ”