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Brothers, Huang Shiyi is a newcomer to the writer, there must be a lot of deficiencies in the control of the content of the article, as well as the description of the characters, I saw a book friend's suggestion in the comment area pointed out very correct, which is very helpful to Shi Yi, so I specially used my spare time to read my own novel from the beginning, and found that there are really many unsatisfactory places.

Therefore, Shi Yi still decided to have a recommended position, and during this time he planned to go back and revise it, and I found that several book friends have pointed out that the current martial arts style entertainment text is old-fashioned, and the martial arts novels Xun Qin Ji and Changsheng Sword that should appear in the article have been written by other entertainment articles.

I have to say, in fact, Shi Yi was silently dissatisfied in his heart, but he couldn't find a reason to be dissatisfied, today when he was helping the family to work in the greenhouse, Shi Yi thought about it seriously, and the book friend who put forward the correct opinion was right, who wants to read the same article?

"Why should I experience it again if I can get it in other texts!"

When he saw this sentence, Shi Yi kept asking in his heart, yes! There is no new book, what am I writing about him, blindly imitating and plagiarizing? Is it just for the sake of copying? Ignore the feeling of wanting to write a novel in the first place.

Let's just finish talking at once, and I won't read a single chapter in the future, and I will emphasize this kind of problem in the future.

It's really good that there are mostly women in this novel, but Shi Yi saw several messages today, all saying that this book will be a stallion article, so Shi Yi will accurately tell everyone that this book will not breed horses, and the reason why there are many women is because the proportion of female stars in the entertainment industry far exceeds that of male stars.

And complaining that you don't want to see more girls, do you want to see the male protagonist shuttling between men every day? Do you want to do ^ base? I guess you definitely don't want to, so the line of the actress will still exist, as for the problem of the stallion, the author dares to guarantee that it is absolutely impossible, Shi Yi is not good at writing stallion literature, a man lingers among N women, and he is like a fish in water, Shi Yi doesn't like this style, so he won't try.

The last thing is to do the work of copying the public, indeed, this problem is the way that Shi Yi thought of in order to save trouble, but you don't know, in order to do a good job in this copyist, every day the author will constantly check the information on the Internet, and buy books to come and see, so, don't blame the author for not writing seriously because you are unhappy when you see it.

In fact, the author is very serious about absorbing knowledge, and he is constantly looking at other entertainment writing styles, so please forgive me.

To sum up, the author's biggest problem now is that he can't react to too many routines, the plot turns too fast and the control is unstable, and there is a sense of separation, and the expressions of those women are not very well portrayed, the writing is also a bit stiff, and the characters are seriously not vivid enough, so the author still needs to learn more, please forgive me!

Also, I'm very sorry for this week's recommendation, but Shi Yi is also glad that it is precisely because of this recommendation that more people can see the shortcomings in the book, and will kindly give relatively reliable opinions.

Spend the night sorting out the outline and thoughts, delete some unnecessary plots, and then revise them, and strive to complete the revision this evening, and keep up with the updates every day.

To be honest, until now, Shi Yi doesn't know how many chapters he owes, but it doesn't matter, when he arrives at the beginning of August, he probably won't get up from four o'clock in the morning to finish at seven o'clock in the evening like now.

Go home in a hurry to code words.,There should be most of the time.,To seriously imagine the follow-up plot.,I hope you will support a lot......