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When I was writing this book, I often thought about myself.

I'm wondering how to write it so that readers can be attracted and willing to subscribe.

Actually, I always knew that the model I wrote was really not in line with the market, but I didn't know why.

After reading the readers' comments in the past two days, plus my summary, I finally understand why I dropped the subscription.

I read a lot of books, and novels, in my eyes, are roughly divided into two kinds.

One is suitable for chasing more, and the other is suitable for reading in one breath.

It's a pity, mine is probably the latter one, which is not in line with the online text market.

There are many new readers who say that I write well.

But in fact, they all read it in one breath, and they didn't experience the pain of Huang Fengling's chasing after him before.

In this book, there are two low tide periods of reader loss, one is the plot of Huangfengling, and the other is the early stage of Baihuling.

These two places belong to the foreshadowing is extremely long, and it has to be run through the front and back, and you can only see something after reading the whole chapter.

I'm a new author, or rather a vest author, who doesn't have a readership, and the reader doesn't know my train of thought, or what I'm going to write.

So chasing more readers looking at these two plots, it's easy to abandon the pit, the new author, it's not guaranteed.

This kind of thing is only suitable for reading in one breath, not for chasing more.

However, if you want to fatten, most of them are basically abandoned, and they will not bring income to the author.

This type is not in line with the online text market.

In addition, these two plots are less funny and interactive with the apprentices, that is, there is less "water".

These places of water are the so-called "rhythms", and there are no branches in this book, and the lines from beginning to end are very clear, just one main line.

The progress of this book is very fast, there are a total of 100 episodes of Journey to the West, and I have written 28 times of more than 300,000 words, and the finished book is almost 1.5 million words.

This is the result of no water, no expenditure line, and I don't plan to write too long.

Because it's a travelogue, based on the protagonist's bizarre observations, I only plan to write a somewhat independent short story, and each story has a little moral in it.

To write more than 2 million words, you need to water, otherwise it is impossible. And don't readers like water? No, there is a lot of water in the online article, and many of the results are not bad.

I didn't take the market into account, ignoring the feelings of some readers, and I can only say sorry, I will consider it later.

I would consider popularizing the novel, with more character interaction and more water.

But now it's a bad situation, so I'm going to prevent theft.

After all, I'm already eating instant noodles and writing a book, and I still have to pay for the Internet.

It is said that anti-theft is useless, so let's try it and see the effect, but it's not all pinned on it.

But at least fight for instant noodle money, I calculated, my manuscript fee is a total of 3,000 yuan, and I can't afford to eat better.

In this way, it is said that people need talent to write books, and not everyone can write books.

I feel that this book should be the pinnacle of my writing career.

I may write books with better grades and more in line with the masses in the future, after all, people are improving.

But people also have Jiang Lang's talents.

Like this book, this type of genre that wants to open the brain, open the script, and piece by piece of private goods, I may never be able to write it again in the future.

Refresh it after 9 o'clock and a new chapter will be updated.

If it works, I will do it in the middle of the night in the future, and it won't bother everyone.

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Souls are the spirits of creatures, and after condensing the fourth piece of soul, this white bone already has a certain amount of wisdom and can make some simple movements. Because the soul was newly condensed, it seemed to have no memories of its previous life, but only felt that the man was very familiar to it.

"Quack ......"

Bai Gu couldn't speak, but with his pair of bone claws without any flesh and skin, he grabbed Xiang Yu's hand to show that he was listening.

Xiang Yu spoke softly, and he still had something to say.

It's just that, suddenly, he frowned and stared.

As if sensing something, he lowered the bone claws of the white bones.

"Susu, it seems that another guest is coming, you are okay here, I will come when I go."

With that, he finally patted the white bone's paw as a comfort, and then got up and walked out of the cave.

After leaving the White Tiger Cave and coming to the cave gate, Xiang Yu rushed to the southwest and came to the top of the White Tiger Ridge.

I saw a man standing on the top of the cliff.

This man wears a flawless phoenix crown on his head, wears a golden silk soft hedgehog armor, steps on golden boots, holds a square three-pointed two-edged gun in his hand, hangs a crescent moon bow on his waist, ape arms and bee waist, his face is like a crown of jade, and there is a god in his eyes. Strangely, he had a third eye on his forehead.

"Erlang God, it's actually you!"

Seeing the appearance of the person who came, Xiang Yu's face sank, and after a while, he couldn't help but sneer.

"It's just a defeat from a thousand years ago, what are you doing here?"

The man was just expressionless: "Come and take your Xiang Yu's life!" ”

With that, he raised the three-pointed two-edged gun in his hand and stabbed at Xiang Yu's side!

Xiang Yu sneered, didn't look at it, and as soon as his right fist came out, he went straight to the attacking spear.

In the heart of this Western Chu overlord, the other party is just a demon king, how can he resist himself?

Even if he is seriously injured and has lost his essence now, there is still a huge difference between this demon king and the demon saint.

After all, it's just an egg hitting a stone!

However,

This time, Xiang Yu miscalculated again.

The right fist that was swung out seemed to hit a heavy mountain.

Xiang Yu only felt a burst of incomparably strong strength bouncing off Erlang God's spear.

"Poof!"

The spear stabbed Xiang Yu in the chest impartially, and stabbed a huge bloody mouth straight out!

Bright red blood suddenly gushed out from his chest, and Xiang Yu, a demon saint, was infinitely powerful, and was shocked by this huge force and took several steps back!

"How, how is it possible!"

Xiang Yu covered his wounds, inexplicably surprised.

"You Erlang God, just a demon king, you haven't seen you for a thousand years, how can you cultivate such a powerful power!"

His eyes were like torches, and after carefully looking at the man opposite, he suddenly realized.

Yes, it's Sanqing, it's the ghost of Taishang Laojun!

"Taishang Laojun's vajra talisman, after taking it with water, it can give me unparalleled power in half an hour."

The three-eyed man, Erlang God said lightly, temporarily put away the three-pointed two-edged gun, and walked towards Xiang Yu step by step.

"Xiang Yu, you have done a lot of evil in the mortal world, provoked countless wars, and done great rebellious things, absorbing the soul of mankind, and not eradicating you 80 million years ago, it is a mistake of the Heavenly Court. However, I can hide from the first day of junior high school, but I can't hide from fifteen (to be continued.) )