365. Chapter 365 Full Score Essay
In a hotel where the exit has been blocked by armed police, the teachers in charge of marking the high school examination papers are working hard. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info
Language Section.
Zhang Chen took two sips of tea, rubbed his eyes, took a slight rest, and continued to correct the test paper that made him miserable.
As a university professor, it would be overkill to ask Zhang Chen to correct the test papers of high school students, if it weren't for the high subsidy fee every day, plus the school's orders must not be disobeyed, he wouldn't want to come to this ghost place where he is not even allowed to watch TV!
He was responsible for grading the most important part of the language examination paper, the essay.
The high school student's writing is immature, coupled with the limitation of the proposition, Zhang Chen felt like vomiting when he read it.
Reading an essay, I feel that it is fake and empty.
Looking at another essay, I feel that there is nothing to say.
If this had been put in his own class, Zhang Chen would have given zero points angrily!
It's a pity that this is the college entrance examination, and reason told him that he has to follow the rules.
By the afternoon, Zhang Chen's state had deteriorated to a certain extent, and the students who were corrected by him at this time generally scored low.
There is no way, as long as it is manually corrected, especially this kind of subjective question, it will always be more or less biased.
was about to finish correcting today's papers, Zhang Chen took two sips of tea and chatted with the teacher next to him who had finished correcting the papers.
"Ancient poetry dictation, this year's students have done well in the exam, and it seems that the students have worked hard."
"Hey, Huaxia students know rote memorization, and the composition is written in a mess, all kinds of fake big emptiness, and there is no connotation at all. I really don't know what happened to this group of students, why they write so badly! β
"Hey, Mr. Zhang, you can't say that. The current educational environment is like this, if you want to carry 'private goods' essays, it is estimated that it will be a zero-score essay. You can't blame students for not being able to write good essays, after all, teachers teach routine essays. β
"Yes, too...... Hey, let's stop talking, the more I talk, the more depressed I become, I'd better endure the nausea and change the composition. β
After Zhang Chen finished speaking, he took out another test paper, lazily flipped to the final composition, and read it.
"The death of the Red Rabbit Horse?"
A different from what I saw before, "talking about integrity", "integrity is the foundation of life", this college entrance examination essay uses a topic that makes people feel off-topic at a glance.
According to the standards of the college entrance examination, off-topic will be directly judged as a C-class (Class A article is the best, Class B is slightly inferior, and Class C is the worst) article.
Zhang Chen patiently looked down, and at this look, Zhang Chen's originally lazy face immediately became extremely serious.
Correcting other essays can be done in five minutes at most, but he has read this essay for twenty minutes!
After reading it, Zhang Chen patted his thigh fiercely, his eyes flashed with excitement, and he said loudly regardless of the feelings of the teacher next to him: "Good article!" What a great article! β
The teachers who knew Zhang Chen's personality couldn't help but be a little curious when they saw Zhang Chen like this.
What kind of article would make Zhang Chen, a university professor, so out of shape?
It just so happened that at this time, most of the teachers had already finished correcting the test papers, and everyone gathered around to ask Zhang Chen.
Due to the regulations of the college entrance examination, he can only touch the test papers he corrected, but Zhang Chen wanted to share such a good article with everyone, and after thinking about it, he could only take the test paper and read it aloud with great emotion.
ββ¦β¦ The red rabbit horse sighed: "The public is wrong. Lu Bu is the most untrustworthy, he killed Ding Yuan for glory, assassinated Dong Zhuo for beauty, voted for Liu Bei and seized his Xuzhou, and beheaded his marriage envoy by Yuan Shu. 'People can't stand without trust', and such dishonest people are on the same level, which is really a great shame in my life! Later, I returned to Cao Cao, and although his subordinates were fierce generals, no one could be called a hero. I am afraid that in this life I will only be humiliated by the hands of slaves, and I will die between stables. Later, Cao Cao gave me to General Guan; I have seen his martial courage in front of the Tiger Prison Pass, and I have admired his kindness and righteousness on the White Gate Tower. General Guan was also overjoyed to see me and thanked Cao Cao. When asked why this was the case, General Guan replied: "I know that this horse travels thousands of miles every day, and now I am fortunate to have it, and if he knows the whereabouts of his brother one day, he can see it in one day." So is the integrity of the people. As the saying goes: 'Birds fly far with the phoenix, and people are virtuous and of high quality.' 'How dare I not repay with death?' ββ¦β¦β
After reading the whole article in full swing, the teachers present were all like Zhang Chen, clapping their hands!
"What a good article!"
"That's right, 'integrity' can write such a profound essay on such a clichΓ© topic, this candidate is not simple!"
"This article actually combines the story of the Three Kingdoms, and it is not only profound to read, but also not boring, I suggest, give full marks!"
"I also agree with giving full marks!"
"Seconded!"
"I agree!"
All the teachers present felt that they should give full marks, but the full score essay was not something that Zhang Chen could decide, and this kind of essay had to submit the test paper to the upper end and write the reason for the application.
After thinking about it, Zhang Chen also wrote out his reason for giving full marks in a free way:
After reading this on-the-spot composition, it is surprising. One is the novelty of the story. Based on his familiarity with the stories of the Three Kingdoms, the author compiled the touching story of the Red Rabbit Horse's death for integrity, and his imagination is really rich. The second is to be ambitious. The article personifies the red rabbit horse, so that it shows the praise and disapproval of Guan Yu, Dong Zhuo, and Lu Bu in the dialogue with Boxi, and realizes the theme of "true heroes must be honest"; And with the couplet of "the bird flies away with the luan and the phoenix, and the person is accompanied by the virtuous and virtuous quality", and the sentence "the thing is like this, how can the person be worthy", it expresses the ambition of choosing the good and following the good in life, and only honesty is the vision, so that the idea of the article is on a higher level. The third is that the language is old. The whole text is skillful in the ancient vernacular, scattered and intricate, clear and clear, and the writing is flying, this kind of old-fashioned language kung fu is beyond the reach of many candidates. Suggestion, give full marks!
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In the English group, a teacher who was correcting an English essay was wiping the cold sweat on his forehead and called several teachers to help translate the English essay he had corrected at the same time.
After reading this essay, the other teachers also made very frightened expressions.
They can't read this English essay!
It's so profound, and the words are so professional!
Especially because this propositional essay is for students to look forward to the future of science and technology, and this student actually uses many terms that only scientists can understand.
In order to correct this essay, the entire English group spent a lot of energy to check the information, and finally translated it, which surprised them.
This candidate actually used just a few hundred words to write a science fiction article!
The approval of the English group is not as strict as that of the language group, and the team leader clapped on the spot and said: "It took us so long to translate the excellent article, we must give full marks!" β
All the teachers agreed......